Good twist! Looking forward to more.

Started ch 1 this morning and in short order finished the 10 currently posted chapters. I rather like the story, though find it very short. Shuffle it all together and there's enough material for 3 or 4 decent length chapters. It's a shame you chose these itty bitty little nibble-sized chapters. It just starts to pick up and wham, it ends. More than a drabble, which I won't read, but less than is interesting to settle down with. Sigh.

Maybe I'll tuck it away until there are 10 more cute little bits to read... 

And one knows how permanent temporary measures can be...

I am really enjoying the development of your story.  Having been comfortable with just the two of them together for the past several years (with visits by Hermione of course) not only is Severus' life disrupted by the awakening of Harry but the loss of their home and now the prospect of living, for however short a time, with Hermione.  This opens up all kinds of possiblities.  And I dare say changes for both Marie and Severus.  I can't see how he can keep her secluded from the history/legend of her parents any longer.  Just being in Hermione's home will have an influence.  I look forward to what is to come.  Thanks, JoAnne

This is a very intriguing story.  I'm interested to see how the relationship between Severus and Hermione develops, as well as what happens when Harry finally gets his legs under him.  More soon!