Six
Chapter 6 of 15
SS LupinIt had started off as an ordinary night for the girl and him, until he received the news that threatened to erase ten years of quiet joy.
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It had ended in Diagon Alley.
Snape had always thought it would happen outside of Hogwarts, a grand scene on the fields in front of the school, or in one of the Dark Lord’s safe houses with an invasion of Order members. Preferably with Snape already dead and gone.
But Snape was still alive, miserable and alive as his true loyalties still remained hidden after the end of the Battle, even to himself. The one wizard he had followed died by Snape’s hand, another wizard with no humanity left still expecting Snape to prostrate himself at his feet. How could have Snape continued to spy for the Order, their last defense a young boy who would have killed Snape without a second thought? All Snape had was the ability to deceive both sides until the end.
Wiping sweat and blood from his brow and donning his Death Eater’s mask, Snape stepped back into the smoke and stench of missed curses. Potter had already defeated the Dark Lord and was Merlin knows where, but small battles were still being fought by the Death Eaters who had escaped the night before. And though Snape knew it was cowardice, it would be so easy to be targeted with his mask instead of baiting other Death Eaters to incarceration. All he had to do was to be on the wrong end of an ignorant Order member’s wand…
“Expelliarmus!”
Snape whirled around, following the path of his wand until it reached its magicked destination. In the shadows of the side street Snape had just exited stood Draco Malfoy, who was griping two wands in one trembling hand. His other arm seemed to be holding some writhing mass of blankets. Could it be that the Dark Lord had still found a way to return, there within those bloodstained sheets?
“Professor Snape… Severus.”
“I brought you to the Order to keep you safe, and this is how I’m repaid? If you’re going to kill me without me being able to defend myself, please do so without stuttering my name.” As he spoke, Snape wondered if the wizards who would clean up this mess later would remember to take his body.
“I don’t want to kill you,” Draco said, clutching the blankets to his chest. “I just remembered how quick you are with your wand, and–”
“Then what do you want with me?”
“I’ve asked a lot of you, and you’ve always been able to help. But I must ask you one more thing.”
Snape held back his rising retort. “What?”
“I need you to make the Vow.”
“After the fiasco with you and your mother, I will never make an Unbreakable Vow with a Malfoy again.”
“It’s not for me,” Draco almost whined. “It’s for… this.” Draco held the bundle up to Snape.
Snape walked toward Draco and pulled back a sheet. Within the many blankets lay an infant, recently born by the looks if its pink wrinkled skin and flecks of blood still on its face. Though it seemed to be newly born, a shock of black hair was on its head.
“She’s Potter’s girl,” Draco explained.
“And the mother?” Snape asked with a sick feeling in his chest.
“Dead, most likely.” Draco shook his head. “I didn’t see much – just the baby crying – I took her and Apparated. But they’ll be after me… and Potter–”
“You know what happened to him?”
“He’s worse than dead – in a coma or something. Please, Severus. Take the child. Raise her as your own.”
“I can’t. The Weasleys–”
“No time. Just take her… make the Vow.” Draco handed Snape his wand. “She’s life when there is none.”
“Don’t wax poetic on my behalf.” Snape gripped his wand tightly. “You know the spell?”
“Yeah.” Draco offered Snape the bundle. “It’ll help if you hold her.”
Snape held himself back, almost repulsed by the idea. He approached Draco and the bundle slowly, then remembered his mask might scare it. Ripping off the mask and tossing it aside, Snape held out his other arm and took the baby in his arms. It settled into him comfortably, its eyes fluttering closed. It was a miracle it hadn’t cried.
As Draco held out his hand, Snape asked, “Where’s the Bonder?”
“She’s here.”
Snape saw some movement to his left. The air parted to reveal Hermione Granger holding a silvery cloak.
“You had no time to contact the Weasleys, but plenty to enlist her help. What motives do you have here?”
Draco muttered something Snape couldn’t catch and said, “Doesn’t matter. Hermione?”
She came forward, holding out her wand, never taking her eyes off Snape. He responded to her heated gaze with a cold one as he took hold of Draco’s hand.
“Let’s begin,” she said, touching her wand to their joined hands.
After they finished the spell, Snape looked down at the child.
“What should I name it?” he asked. Once he had spoken, he cringed at the word he had been using in his mind. “Her,” he amended.
Draco spoke up before Hermione could suggest something insipid like Ginevra James. “Marie.”
“A French name?”
“My mother – if she ever had a daughter, that’s what she would have named her. Was my grandmother’s name.”
It was better than calling her Lily Sirius or some other nonsense. “Marie,” he said. The child smiled toothlessly in her sleep.
Snape looked around, preparing to Apparate. “Nobody has seen us here.”
“I put up a few glamours. You go first, or my spell will end,” Draco said.
Snape nodded and understood Draco’s impulse to hold the child closer as he did so himself.
“Take care–” Hermione seemed to choke back anything else she wanted to say, sliding on the cloak and Disapparating.
Draco pulled up the hood of his cloak. “Be safe.”
“You too.”
The walls around them faded away to fire and dust as Snape Disapparated away.
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The smoke from Snape’s dream seemed so real that he still smelled it when he woke.
Only he was proven wrong when Marie ran into his room, coughing in between screams.
“Severus, the house is on fire!”
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Author's Note: Beta'd by Southern_Witch_69.
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55 Reviews | 5.95/10 Average
I just discover this story and I like it very much! I can't help but see it has been a while since who write it... Hope inspiration strike one day, until then I will wait I guess!!
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you! As of yet I haven't been able to continue, but I still have hope to finish, too.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you! As of yet I haven't been able to continue, but I still have hope to finish, too.
Glad to see the update. Looking forward to the next.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you very much! :-)
I loved the comment about Julie having a girl's name. LOL I've b een thinking that since I first saw it. Ahahaha
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I'm glad you did... I wanted him to have a 'distinguished' name, but to still keep the feel of him being a little boy. =]
The point is that I'm not getting this story. It seems like a slow, increasing agony for Severus. In the beginning, he had found a reluctant hapiness with a girl he 'almost' calls his own, then things become more complicated and he suffers. With each new introduced character (Harry, Julius, Ron, Millicent (oh, my!)), Snape's grip of his life is slipping ever so slightly more. He does not only have his new social interactions to deal with, he is threatened by some Dark organisation. What you set up in store for him is frankly astonishing. I sincerely hope you plan a happy ending, although I can't phanthom one just now.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Yikes... I think the one word that hit me was slow - I hope it isn't getting boring... First off, I hate angst or anything that has a character anguishing in horrible circumstances. I'm just thinking of Snape adjusting to post-war life in the Wizarding world, after being for the most part isolated for so long. It can't possibly be perfect, so this story is working with a flawed world that Snape is trying to make his own. Although, yes, Millicent is on the random side. If you have any other questions, please let me know. :-)
Well it was worth the wait. Your writing of the everyday happenings in a very crowded house is sublime.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you very much! The next chapter is being written.
Haha and wow! The laugh is for the arse comment and the wow is for being able to spell supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Glad you liked the arse bit... silly humor has to enter my fics one way or another. ;-)And I take no credit for being able to spell it; I got up to 'fragilistic' when I gave up and looked it up online. Thanks for the review!
Fun chapter! This is quite an intriguing story. I'm looking forward to more.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Yay! It was fun writing it. More is up soon; thanks for the review!
I'm really enjoying this, especially the getting along.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thanks so much - the relationship between Marie's fathers is an important part to this story, and I really want to 'get it right.'
My, my, Snape seems to be softening towards Harry - are you setting this up for some spectacular row or something? :D
I had been wondering how you would handle things once Harry was released, and must say I really like the way you have them interacting.
More, and soon please :)
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
lol, they aren't out of the woods yet - more rows are up ahead. :-) The next chapter is in the works. Thanks for reviewing!
hehehe. I'm with Severus! At least it wasn't the whole Weasley lot! Now, I wonder what's next?!
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I really couldn't write them all with poor Snape... that will have to come later. I think I will be going back to the attack on the house in the next chapter.
Snape a father figure? - the poor girl! Nice start though. I look forward to the rest of it.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
He's definitely not the best choice, but it was part of the challenge. Thanks for the review!
Hey there!
I found this story over Southern witch's fic rec, and I love it - I like your characterizations, like Severus and Maries interactions and am definitely looking forward to more! Oh, and I can SO see Hermione doing what she did - for one cause she's overjoyed about Harrys recovery and then to help Marie - even if living with Potter sucks for Severus, I think it's a real chance for Marie.
Thanks for sharing!
Fran
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I was recc'd! :-)Thank you so much for your review; the next chapter should be finished soon.
Poor Severus. I feel so bad for him, and I'm rather upset at Hermione. Nice of her to tell Severus Harry was staying there until after he'd already moved in. I'm not much of a Harry fan, and I can only imgaine how Severus must feel, to know he's going to have to live under the same roof of Harry - who he definitely isn't fond of.Again, poor Severus. I'm almost hoping he leaves...But either way, I simply can't wait to see what happens next. Please update again soon! :)
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I really am writing Hermione as a she-demon, and I hate that - but I can see her being so excited about Harry's waking up that she'd become a zealot in trying to reconcile everyone. Besides, there may have been some deception on her part, so that Snape could move there in the first place. :-)Thanks for your review; the next chapter is in the works.
Ah, what a twist. ~snicker~ Can't wait to see how things work out. :)
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I do love my plot twists... hopefully, the next chapter should be finished soon.
I love Snape's response to Rita's question about being back in the wizard world.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I love the snark, too - thanks for reviewing. =]
hahaha. the image of severus running in the grass in a grey nightshirt (my mind added grey socks and the dew) is priceless. HAhaha
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
lol, I'm glad you liked that image; I wanted a slightly a humorous contrast to Snape's escape in HBP. Thanks for reviewing!
I have my suspicions about these people. I must say that I feel so badly for them to lose their home and all the special things (like him reflecting on the loss of her first little artwork and such...). That would be what I'd hate to lose, too.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I know... my mother still bemoans the fact that she had lost/threw away some of my childhood creations :) Thanks for reviewing!
I've just finished reading all six of the chapters that are currently posted. I've enjoyed it because it reminds me of one of my favorite episodes of Masterpiece Theater, Silas Marner with Ben Kingsley as Silas. I just checked it out on IMDb and found out it was first shown in 1985, it certainly doesn't seem like I first saw it over 20 years ago.I had found the novel extremely boring when we were required to read it in 10th grade, but now it has become a favorite. Severus is a perfect Silas, and Marie has him wrapped round her finger just as Eppie had Silas. I love what I've seen of the relationship the two of them have.I'm hoping desparately that you won't turn the story into an SS/HG pairing. Not only do I hate that pairing, but it doesn't go with the story the way you've written it or the way George Eliot/Mary Anne Evans wrote it. It's a love story about a man and a child, about how that child changed the fundamental character of that man with the truly paternal love he developed for her. That's exactly what you have Marie doing for Severus.
I will be waiting for your next update.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Wow. This review was so amazing, and I had to look up Silas Marner because of it (I'm familiar with the book but didn't know much about it). I really do not know if I will write any 'pairings' in this story - characters and plot changes as I go along WIP style, but I do know that the main focus of this fic is the development of Snape's love for Marie. Thanks again for reviewing. =]
It was nice to have some background. What will happen now?
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thanks, I thought I was boring everyone to death with flashbacks... chapter 7 is being written; thanks for reviewing!
Strange ending. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I know... it was a bit abrupt, but it will be further detailed in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
Psychological suspense is what you're giving us, and I like it. Marie is very perceptive, isn't she?
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Psychological suspense? (squees at such an elaborate term for my fic) Thanks for your review. Marie is quite a perceptive character, but I imagine she's been seing Snape and Hermione interact quite a bit in her lifetime. =]
Ah, Hermione always trying to serve justly, without taking into consideration the consequences thereof. Harry really didn't need that shock and Severus shouldn't feel as if he needs to be on the defensive to save his relationship with Marie. Good thing that Marie doesn't have any of the hang-ups her two fathers have. Looks like she will be the glue to cement the future.
I like this story so far, very original. Looking forward to more.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Yes. I'm afraid Hermione might be keeping up that in the future.Thanks very much for your review - the next chapter's in queue.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this story plays out, so far i'm quite enchanted.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Aw, thanks alot! And I know this is random, but I love your username. =]
Response from lupinschewtoy (Reviewer)
Thanks. Now I just have to become inspired enough to get past the starting stage of two stories so other people can see how cute my name is. lol. Your story is still quite wonderful and I am looking forward to more chapters.
I like this beginning. I'd really like to see where you're going with this.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you for reviewing! =]
Your description of Snape's flight with Marie had me as breathless as he was. Well done job! now, I wonder what that phoenix was for.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thanks alot! As for the phoenix... I'm not telling yet. ;)