Four.
Chapter 4 of 15
SS LupinIt had started off as an ordinary night for the girl and him, until he received the news that threatened to erase ten years of quiet joy.
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The first thing Snape saw when he opened the door was a sight almost identical to the picture in the old newspaper he had saved for Marie years ago.
Potter was still lying on the bed, now propped up by pillows and sitting up. He did look somewhat different from his seventeen-year-old self, though he was still too thin in the face and his hair was just as messy. His chin was outlined with a trace of stubble on his jaw, and somehow there were faint lines on his face that Snape could see in the distance – he couldn’t take another step near Potter – creases in his forehead and around his eyes, but nothing of the sort around his mouth, which seemed unnaturally red in the glaring light of the hospital room.
He hasn’t smiled for ten years, Snape thought nastily, but the effect was ruined by a trace of shock. That man-boy sitting there had lain on that bed for a decade, not able to experience the small joys and larger stresses that was a common part of Snape’s life. He hadn’t matured, raised his perfect famous family in a perfect famous house or worked to make a living. He had only sacrificed his consciousness and helped make a life.
Snape mentally shook himself. With Marie’s hand still clutching his, he would make sure that the status quo could be maintained – minus the comforting coma that had lasted for so long.
Hermione slowly walked past him, stopping at the side of the bed. She placed a hand on his forehead and said, “Wake up, Harry. We have visitors.”
He stirred a little but didn’t open his eyes.
“Do you think he’ll grace us with his awakening soon?”
Hermione took her hand back and crossed her arms. “It was only yesterday when he woke up for the first time. He could slip back into unconsciousness at any moment!”
He should not have woken up at all. “Remember who created the cure that brought him back to consciousness.”
“Shhh.” Marie tugged Snape’s sleeve and pointed at the bed.
Potter was awake, and the lone mediwitch in the corner sat up from her chair to begin to test the wizard.
“Won’t take long,” the mediwitch said as she waved her wand over Potter and took notes with a levitating quill and parchment.
“Where’s Madame Pomfrey?” Potter asked once the mediwitch had left them with some time for privacy.
Hermione began to smooth the sheets on Potter’s bed. “She’s at Hogwarts,” she said.
Snape looked at them with shock. It couldn’t be. “He doesn’t know?”
Potter’s head swiveled in Snape’s direction. He scowled at his former professor, saying, “What is he doing here?”
“He… saved you,” Hermione said with a nervous edge to her voice.
“Why is he here?” Harry insisted.
“I brought Marie here, and he doesn’t know what has happened to him. Who she is?”
“He was only awake for a little while last night – we were so happy to just to have him here–”
“You had no right to risk our coming out of hiding when he knows nothing of the past ten years!”
“I was only trying to–”
“Stop talking about me like I’m not here!”
Snape turned to Marie and Hermione to Potter, who had spoken in unison with his daughter. Potter looked at the girl as if seeing her for the first time. Then again, this is the first time, Snape thought as Harry sent a confused smile to Marie. Snape had a sudden impulse to stand in front of her and protect her from that smile.
Hermione sighed. “I’m sorry, Harry. It’s just that we have so much to tell you. So much has changed.”
Potter, now looking at Marie with curiosity, said, “Then can you tell me where we are? This doesn’t look like the hospital wing.”
“No, we’re at St. Mungo’s.”
“So I take it we won?” Potter said as though he was injured in a Quidditch match.
Hermione nodded. “Yes, we won. Voldemort is dead.”
Potter smiled again. “Brilliant. Then what has changed?”
“I’ve changed,” Marie spoke up. She looked at Snape and whispered, “Can I tell him?”
“I believe you are quite capable of doing so. But may you?” Perhaps this reminder of proper grammar would be the last fatherly lesson he could teach her.
“May I tell him?” Marie asked, impatience in her voice.
“Yes.” A heartbeat. “You may.”
Marie beamed and slowly made her way to the bed, her exuberance fading with each step. She stood next to Hermione and took hold of the woman’s hand.
“You’re my sleeping daddy,” Marie said.
Potter looked at the girl and then at Hermione as if to receive a confirmation of the fact.
“I’m… your father? You’re my daughter?” Potter stammered. He reached for his glasses on the night table, which Snape suspected had been cleaned, shined, and God knows what else for Potter’s eventual use in the past decade.
“Yeah. My father is Harry James Potter, born on the thirty-first of July in the year 1980. He is the Boy Who Lived to Defeat Voldemort on June thirteenth, 1998. Upon killing the Dark Wizard with wandless magic still unknown to most wizards today, Harry was put into a coma from the force of his spell. He left no surviving relatives.” Marie paused for breath after reciting the passage in Encyclopedia Magica she had read so many times.
“But they were wrong because I’m alive. My name is Marie Potter. I don’t have a middle name ‘coz Hermione thought that you should make up one for me. I was born on June fifteenth, and my daddies are you and Severus. My mum was Ginevra Molly Weasley, and–”
Snape stared at Marie, astonished with all the talking she was doing. She must have been saving this speech for years.
“Your mother was? What happened to Ginny? And Ron?” Potter looked frantic with his glasses that were now too small for his pale face and the blankets that seemed to swallow him up in white folds. He looked at Hermione again.
But Marie was still eager to answer another question. “I’ve never met Ron before, but Hermione talks about him all the time. He’s my godfather. And my mum is with your mum and dad. In heaven.”
Potter’s eyes seemed to go dead for a moment. “Um… thanks for coming by to see me, but I think I need to – er – rest again. It was nice meeting you, Marie.”
Marie frowned. “Okay… but can I see you soon?”
Potter stared at his hands. “Sure. But I don’t feel well right now.”
Marie nodded. “Kiss me goodbye?” she asked hopefully.
Potter faced her and leaned as far as he could. Marie closed the distance and received an unsure peck on the cheek.
“Goodbye, Marie.”
“Goodbye, Daddy.”
Marie ran back to Snape and held out her hand. Taking it into his own, Snape turned on his heel and led Marie out of the room in triumph.
The last thing he saw before he had turned was the lost face of a boy re-awakening to a world of men and an equally lost woman who would have to help the boy find his way.
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Author's Note: Beta'd by Southern_Witch_69.
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55 Reviews | 5.95/10 Average
I just discover this story and I like it very much! I can't help but see it has been a while since who write it... Hope inspiration strike one day, until then I will wait I guess!!
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you! As of yet I haven't been able to continue, but I still have hope to finish, too.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you! As of yet I haven't been able to continue, but I still have hope to finish, too.
Glad to see the update. Looking forward to the next.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you very much! :-)
I loved the comment about Julie having a girl's name. LOL I've b een thinking that since I first saw it. Ahahaha
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I'm glad you did... I wanted him to have a 'distinguished' name, but to still keep the feel of him being a little boy. =]
The point is that I'm not getting this story. It seems like a slow, increasing agony for Severus. In the beginning, he had found a reluctant hapiness with a girl he 'almost' calls his own, then things become more complicated and he suffers. With each new introduced character (Harry, Julius, Ron, Millicent (oh, my!)), Snape's grip of his life is slipping ever so slightly more. He does not only have his new social interactions to deal with, he is threatened by some Dark organisation. What you set up in store for him is frankly astonishing. I sincerely hope you plan a happy ending, although I can't phanthom one just now.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Yikes... I think the one word that hit me was slow - I hope it isn't getting boring... First off, I hate angst or anything that has a character anguishing in horrible circumstances. I'm just thinking of Snape adjusting to post-war life in the Wizarding world, after being for the most part isolated for so long. It can't possibly be perfect, so this story is working with a flawed world that Snape is trying to make his own. Although, yes, Millicent is on the random side. If you have any other questions, please let me know. :-)
Well it was worth the wait. Your writing of the everyday happenings in a very crowded house is sublime.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you very much! The next chapter is being written.
Haha and wow! The laugh is for the arse comment and the wow is for being able to spell supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Glad you liked the arse bit... silly humor has to enter my fics one way or another. ;-)And I take no credit for being able to spell it; I got up to 'fragilistic' when I gave up and looked it up online. Thanks for the review!
Fun chapter! This is quite an intriguing story. I'm looking forward to more.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Yay! It was fun writing it. More is up soon; thanks for the review!
I'm really enjoying this, especially the getting along.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thanks so much - the relationship between Marie's fathers is an important part to this story, and I really want to 'get it right.'
My, my, Snape seems to be softening towards Harry - are you setting this up for some spectacular row or something? :D
I had been wondering how you would handle things once Harry was released, and must say I really like the way you have them interacting.
More, and soon please :)
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
lol, they aren't out of the woods yet - more rows are up ahead. :-) The next chapter is in the works. Thanks for reviewing!
hehehe. I'm with Severus! At least it wasn't the whole Weasley lot! Now, I wonder what's next?!
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I really couldn't write them all with poor Snape... that will have to come later. I think I will be going back to the attack on the house in the next chapter.
Snape a father figure? - the poor girl! Nice start though. I look forward to the rest of it.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
He's definitely not the best choice, but it was part of the challenge. Thanks for the review!
Hey there!
I found this story over Southern witch's fic rec, and I love it - I like your characterizations, like Severus and Maries interactions and am definitely looking forward to more! Oh, and I can SO see Hermione doing what she did - for one cause she's overjoyed about Harrys recovery and then to help Marie - even if living with Potter sucks for Severus, I think it's a real chance for Marie.
Thanks for sharing!
Fran
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I was recc'd! :-)Thank you so much for your review; the next chapter should be finished soon.
Poor Severus. I feel so bad for him, and I'm rather upset at Hermione. Nice of her to tell Severus Harry was staying there until after he'd already moved in. I'm not much of a Harry fan, and I can only imgaine how Severus must feel, to know he's going to have to live under the same roof of Harry - who he definitely isn't fond of.Again, poor Severus. I'm almost hoping he leaves...But either way, I simply can't wait to see what happens next. Please update again soon! :)
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I really am writing Hermione as a she-demon, and I hate that - but I can see her being so excited about Harry's waking up that she'd become a zealot in trying to reconcile everyone. Besides, there may have been some deception on her part, so that Snape could move there in the first place. :-)Thanks for your review; the next chapter is in the works.
Ah, what a twist. ~snicker~ Can't wait to see how things work out. :)
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I do love my plot twists... hopefully, the next chapter should be finished soon.
I love Snape's response to Rita's question about being back in the wizard world.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I love the snark, too - thanks for reviewing. =]
hahaha. the image of severus running in the grass in a grey nightshirt (my mind added grey socks and the dew) is priceless. HAhaha
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
lol, I'm glad you liked that image; I wanted a slightly a humorous contrast to Snape's escape in HBP. Thanks for reviewing!
I have my suspicions about these people. I must say that I feel so badly for them to lose their home and all the special things (like him reflecting on the loss of her first little artwork and such...). That would be what I'd hate to lose, too.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I know... my mother still bemoans the fact that she had lost/threw away some of my childhood creations :) Thanks for reviewing!
I've just finished reading all six of the chapters that are currently posted. I've enjoyed it because it reminds me of one of my favorite episodes of Masterpiece Theater, Silas Marner with Ben Kingsley as Silas. I just checked it out on IMDb and found out it was first shown in 1985, it certainly doesn't seem like I first saw it over 20 years ago.I had found the novel extremely boring when we were required to read it in 10th grade, but now it has become a favorite. Severus is a perfect Silas, and Marie has him wrapped round her finger just as Eppie had Silas. I love what I've seen of the relationship the two of them have.I'm hoping desparately that you won't turn the story into an SS/HG pairing. Not only do I hate that pairing, but it doesn't go with the story the way you've written it or the way George Eliot/Mary Anne Evans wrote it. It's a love story about a man and a child, about how that child changed the fundamental character of that man with the truly paternal love he developed for her. That's exactly what you have Marie doing for Severus.
I will be waiting for your next update.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Wow. This review was so amazing, and I had to look up Silas Marner because of it (I'm familiar with the book but didn't know much about it). I really do not know if I will write any 'pairings' in this story - characters and plot changes as I go along WIP style, but I do know that the main focus of this fic is the development of Snape's love for Marie. Thanks again for reviewing. =]
It was nice to have some background. What will happen now?
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thanks, I thought I was boring everyone to death with flashbacks... chapter 7 is being written; thanks for reviewing!
Strange ending. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I know... it was a bit abrupt, but it will be further detailed in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
Psychological suspense is what you're giving us, and I like it. Marie is very perceptive, isn't she?
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Psychological suspense? (squees at such an elaborate term for my fic) Thanks for your review. Marie is quite a perceptive character, but I imagine she's been seing Snape and Hermione interact quite a bit in her lifetime. =]
Ah, Hermione always trying to serve justly, without taking into consideration the consequences thereof. Harry really didn't need that shock and Severus shouldn't feel as if he needs to be on the defensive to save his relationship with Marie. Good thing that Marie doesn't have any of the hang-ups her two fathers have. Looks like she will be the glue to cement the future.
I like this story so far, very original. Looking forward to more.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Yes. I'm afraid Hermione might be keeping up that in the future.Thanks very much for your review - the next chapter's in queue.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this story plays out, so far i'm quite enchanted.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Aw, thanks alot! And I know this is random, but I love your username. =]
Response from lupinschewtoy (Reviewer)
Thanks. Now I just have to become inspired enough to get past the starting stage of two stories so other people can see how cute my name is. lol. Your story is still quite wonderful and I am looking forward to more chapters.
I like this beginning. I'd really like to see where you're going with this.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you for reviewing! =]
Your description of Snape's flight with Marie had me as breathless as he was. Well done job! now, I wonder what that phoenix was for.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thanks alot! As for the phoenix... I'm not telling yet. ;)