Thirteen.
Chapter 13 of 15
SS LupinIt had started off as an ordinary night for the girl and him, until he received the news that threatened to erase ten years of quiet joy.
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After finishing his lukewarm tea, Snape had asked Hermione where Marie and he would sleep.
She had shown him through the hallway leading from the kitchen, rounded a corner and climbed a curving staircase. Snape, still walking behind her, had noticed the fine trim on the witch’s robes she wore – and the curves accentuated by them. Coughing (a side effect of the smoke inhalation, no doubt), he had turned to his right and looked at the many magical paintings lining the walls.
“Do you like them?”
The autumn leaves in the last landscape had blown across the canvas in a painted breeze. “They are… charming.”
Hermione had smiled, holding on to the banister at the top of the stairs. “I painted them.”
“All of them?”
“I started out with one of those paint by numbers kits. They were easy enough to do, and I needed something other than N.E.W.T.s to keep me busy after Julie was born. Then I decided – why not do my own? God, I’m rambling again… This is your room.”
Snape had opened the door and saw that this room was much larger than the one in the cottage. “Hermione.”
“Yes?” She had looked amused.
“This house…” He had stepped out of the room.
“I saved my Sickles and Knuts.” She had pointed to the room across the corridor. “This is Marie’s room.”
“Do you sleep here?” he had asked, gesturing to the room on his right.
“That’s Harry’s room. I’m at the end of the hall.”
“And your son?” There hadn’t been any more unclaimed doors in the hallway.
“He sleeps in the bedroom we have downstairs. Was the only one he took a liking to when we moved here… I’ll leave you to unpack then.” Snape had entered his room and restored his possessions to their original size.
Now he sat on the bed he would have to call his own for only a short amount of time. He started to organize the things littering the floor, but his eyes began to droop, and he was already on the bed…
Snape fell into a dreamless sleep.
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He only woke when Marie shouted for him to do so.
“What is it, girl?” He sat up gingerly, the pain in his lower legs returning.
“It’s nighttime. You’ve been asleep for too long.”
“How kind of you to shout as if we were in another fire.”
Seeing the hurt look in her eyes, Snape cupped her chin. “I didn’t mean it that way… Forget I said it.”
She took Snape’s hand from her face and held it. “It was my fault, wasn’t it? Why our house is gone?”
Snape shook his head. “Of course not. The fire was an accident.”
“No, it wasn’t; I saw those wizards, too.”
It was pointless to try to protect her from the truth. “If the fire was intentional, it wasn’t your fault. There are quite a few people who wouldn’t mind seeing me dead.”
Marie’s eyes widened, but before she could ask anything about his last few words, he said, “Was there another reason for you waking me?”
“Yeah. We have guests!”
At least someone is excited about this event. “Who’s here?”
“Uncle Ron and his family.”
That was too vague a term, either referring to his wife and children or the entire passel of redheads. He hoped for the former. “And I suppose I’m expected to greet them?”
Marie nodded enthusiastically.
I won’t be able to go to sleep again now. “Only if you honestly tell me how many peanut butter biscuits you had earlier.”
“Three.” He rolled his eyes. “Okay, fine. Eight.”
He quirked his eyebrow.
“I was hungry!”
“Not if you only had eight.”
“Daddy has bigger hands than me – he could take three at a time out of the tin!”
Hurrah for Potter. “Since you answered, I suppose we must go.”
He stood, and the two walked hand in hand to the sitting room.
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Hermione sat in the middle of the couch, Julius and Potter sitting awkwardly on either side of her. Snape’s hopes were a reality, with Weasley and his wife seated in the loveseat to the side of the couch, their three children fidgeting in the other chairs that Snape hadn’t noticed in the room before. All of them had stopped speaking upon Snape’s entrance.
“Hi, Severus. We were worried about–”
“I’m alright.”
“Okay.” Hermione looked at the people in the room. “I don’t think I need to make introductions.”
“I’ve told our children about my former Head of House.” Weasley’s wife did look familiar, and Snape remembered Hermione’s telling him the news two years after the war had ended. Her face looked rounder now, and her homely appearance from her teenage years had softened into a more kind and pleasant one. She was almost pretty now.
“Miss Bulstrode.”
She smiled gently. “It’s Mrs. Weasley now, but you can call me by my first name.”
“Millicent. Mr. Weasley.” He nodded to both of them. Weasley inclined his head in return.
“Oh, I forgot about chairs.” She conjured only one as the youngest child left her chair to wedge herself in between her parents.
“This is our youngest, Quiessa,” Weasley said, putting his arm around the girl. “Then we have Ginevra Ann and Arthur, our firstborn.”
Snape noticed that only the boy had red hair, the girls carrying their mother’s dark brown hair. He sat in the chair recently vacated so that Marie could sit in the newly conjured chair next to him. Hermione glared at Snape, but he paid her no mind. He didn’t know those children and preferred to be a buffer between them and Marie. That and he didn’t want to sit too close to Potter.
“Would anyone like some tea?” Hermione asked.
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Author's Note: This chapter was beta'd by the amazing Southern_Witch_69.
I try not to make my author's notes too long, but I just wanted to say that I might not be able to write another chapter for another two weeks because of RL and such, and that I apologize for being so slow with my mini-chapters when I post them normally.
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55 Reviews | 5.95/10 Average
I just discover this story and I like it very much! I can't help but see it has been a while since who write it... Hope inspiration strike one day, until then I will wait I guess!!
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you! As of yet I haven't been able to continue, but I still have hope to finish, too.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you! As of yet I haven't been able to continue, but I still have hope to finish, too.
Glad to see the update. Looking forward to the next.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you very much! :-)
I loved the comment about Julie having a girl's name. LOL I've b een thinking that since I first saw it. Ahahaha
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I'm glad you did... I wanted him to have a 'distinguished' name, but to still keep the feel of him being a little boy. =]
The point is that I'm not getting this story. It seems like a slow, increasing agony for Severus. In the beginning, he had found a reluctant hapiness with a girl he 'almost' calls his own, then things become more complicated and he suffers. With each new introduced character (Harry, Julius, Ron, Millicent (oh, my!)), Snape's grip of his life is slipping ever so slightly more. He does not only have his new social interactions to deal with, he is threatened by some Dark organisation. What you set up in store for him is frankly astonishing. I sincerely hope you plan a happy ending, although I can't phanthom one just now.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Yikes... I think the one word that hit me was slow - I hope it isn't getting boring... First off, I hate angst or anything that has a character anguishing in horrible circumstances. I'm just thinking of Snape adjusting to post-war life in the Wizarding world, after being for the most part isolated for so long. It can't possibly be perfect, so this story is working with a flawed world that Snape is trying to make his own. Although, yes, Millicent is on the random side. If you have any other questions, please let me know. :-)
Well it was worth the wait. Your writing of the everyday happenings in a very crowded house is sublime.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you very much! The next chapter is being written.
Haha and wow! The laugh is for the arse comment and the wow is for being able to spell supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Glad you liked the arse bit... silly humor has to enter my fics one way or another. ;-)And I take no credit for being able to spell it; I got up to 'fragilistic' when I gave up and looked it up online. Thanks for the review!
Fun chapter! This is quite an intriguing story. I'm looking forward to more.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Yay! It was fun writing it. More is up soon; thanks for the review!
I'm really enjoying this, especially the getting along.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thanks so much - the relationship between Marie's fathers is an important part to this story, and I really want to 'get it right.'
My, my, Snape seems to be softening towards Harry - are you setting this up for some spectacular row or something? :D
I had been wondering how you would handle things once Harry was released, and must say I really like the way you have them interacting.
More, and soon please :)
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
lol, they aren't out of the woods yet - more rows are up ahead. :-) The next chapter is in the works. Thanks for reviewing!
hehehe. I'm with Severus! At least it wasn't the whole Weasley lot! Now, I wonder what's next?!
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I really couldn't write them all with poor Snape... that will have to come later. I think I will be going back to the attack on the house in the next chapter.
Snape a father figure? - the poor girl! Nice start though. I look forward to the rest of it.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
He's definitely not the best choice, but it was part of the challenge. Thanks for the review!
Hey there!
I found this story over Southern witch's fic rec, and I love it - I like your characterizations, like Severus and Maries interactions and am definitely looking forward to more! Oh, and I can SO see Hermione doing what she did - for one cause she's overjoyed about Harrys recovery and then to help Marie - even if living with Potter sucks for Severus, I think it's a real chance for Marie.
Thanks for sharing!
Fran
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I was recc'd! :-)Thank you so much for your review; the next chapter should be finished soon.
Poor Severus. I feel so bad for him, and I'm rather upset at Hermione. Nice of her to tell Severus Harry was staying there until after he'd already moved in. I'm not much of a Harry fan, and I can only imgaine how Severus must feel, to know he's going to have to live under the same roof of Harry - who he definitely isn't fond of.Again, poor Severus. I'm almost hoping he leaves...But either way, I simply can't wait to see what happens next. Please update again soon! :)
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I really am writing Hermione as a she-demon, and I hate that - but I can see her being so excited about Harry's waking up that she'd become a zealot in trying to reconcile everyone. Besides, there may have been some deception on her part, so that Snape could move there in the first place. :-)Thanks for your review; the next chapter is in the works.
Ah, what a twist. ~snicker~ Can't wait to see how things work out. :)
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I do love my plot twists... hopefully, the next chapter should be finished soon.
I love Snape's response to Rita's question about being back in the wizard world.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I love the snark, too - thanks for reviewing. =]
hahaha. the image of severus running in the grass in a grey nightshirt (my mind added grey socks and the dew) is priceless. HAhaha
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
lol, I'm glad you liked that image; I wanted a slightly a humorous contrast to Snape's escape in HBP. Thanks for reviewing!
I have my suspicions about these people. I must say that I feel so badly for them to lose their home and all the special things (like him reflecting on the loss of her first little artwork and such...). That would be what I'd hate to lose, too.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I know... my mother still bemoans the fact that she had lost/threw away some of my childhood creations :) Thanks for reviewing!
I've just finished reading all six of the chapters that are currently posted. I've enjoyed it because it reminds me of one of my favorite episodes of Masterpiece Theater, Silas Marner with Ben Kingsley as Silas. I just checked it out on IMDb and found out it was first shown in 1985, it certainly doesn't seem like I first saw it over 20 years ago.I had found the novel extremely boring when we were required to read it in 10th grade, but now it has become a favorite. Severus is a perfect Silas, and Marie has him wrapped round her finger just as Eppie had Silas. I love what I've seen of the relationship the two of them have.I'm hoping desparately that you won't turn the story into an SS/HG pairing. Not only do I hate that pairing, but it doesn't go with the story the way you've written it or the way George Eliot/Mary Anne Evans wrote it. It's a love story about a man and a child, about how that child changed the fundamental character of that man with the truly paternal love he developed for her. That's exactly what you have Marie doing for Severus.
I will be waiting for your next update.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Wow. This review was so amazing, and I had to look up Silas Marner because of it (I'm familiar with the book but didn't know much about it). I really do not know if I will write any 'pairings' in this story - characters and plot changes as I go along WIP style, but I do know that the main focus of this fic is the development of Snape's love for Marie. Thanks again for reviewing. =]
It was nice to have some background. What will happen now?
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thanks, I thought I was boring everyone to death with flashbacks... chapter 7 is being written; thanks for reviewing!
Strange ending. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
I know... it was a bit abrupt, but it will be further detailed in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
Psychological suspense is what you're giving us, and I like it. Marie is very perceptive, isn't she?
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Psychological suspense? (squees at such an elaborate term for my fic) Thanks for your review. Marie is quite a perceptive character, but I imagine she's been seing Snape and Hermione interact quite a bit in her lifetime. =]
Ah, Hermione always trying to serve justly, without taking into consideration the consequences thereof. Harry really didn't need that shock and Severus shouldn't feel as if he needs to be on the defensive to save his relationship with Marie. Good thing that Marie doesn't have any of the hang-ups her two fathers have. Looks like she will be the glue to cement the future.
I like this story so far, very original. Looking forward to more.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Yes. I'm afraid Hermione might be keeping up that in the future.Thanks very much for your review - the next chapter's in queue.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this story plays out, so far i'm quite enchanted.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Aw, thanks alot! And I know this is random, but I love your username. =]
Response from lupinschewtoy (Reviewer)
Thanks. Now I just have to become inspired enough to get past the starting stage of two stories so other people can see how cute my name is. lol. Your story is still quite wonderful and I am looking forward to more chapters.
I like this beginning. I'd really like to see where you're going with this.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thank you for reviewing! =]
Your description of Snape's flight with Marie had me as breathless as he was. Well done job! now, I wonder what that phoenix was for.
Response from SS Lupin (Author of Recovery)
Thanks alot! As for the phoenix... I'm not telling yet. ;)