I am glad that you have continued this here - but there is just enough to tittilate, not enough to answer my initial questions (from the earlier installment at ashwinder)! Please do finish with the nextpart you were referrin to - Unhappily Ever After - or if it has been written,pleaselet me know where??!!  xikum @ hotmail. com  

I left a review for this either on the old Ash or the short-lived SycophantHex.
I voted for a sequel. Where is the sequel?

GGGRRRRR!  Evil Harry really pisses me off!  Crippled war hero or not, I just want to knock his ass outta that chair and scream at him, " What the fuck is wrong with you! Grow up you backstabbing Git! Get on with you life and make something happen yourself, don't sit back and just veg.  Shit happens!"  Whew, I feel a little better. I know its just a fic but.....anywho. I love it and can't wait for more. Of course I have a few song ideas to go with some chappies, do I get a sneak peak?? Please?  Or I just might pester you for them. Kinda like obnoxious children in the back seat, "Are we there yet, ... are we there yet, ...are we there yet?"No seriously, Love your work and wait for more

sequel!

I think this one may be the best of the three (not that I don't really like the other 2 mind you)  I've said before that I don't really care for DarkHarry, but you've explained his emotions wonderfully. I can perfectly understand his thinking. Not that I like it, but I get it. haha  You've got a lot of talent and I have to say that I'd definitely read a sequel to this. I'll be looking for more of your work.

Let's hope he next one is happier for Severus.

please!! sequal!!!  I really want Hermione and Severus to work this out

I don't like evil Harry, so I'll look out for a sequel to this one. The writing is excellent, it really makes up for evil!Harry.

Hello!I just read your three stories now, and I really must beg for another... This was very depressing and I want a happy ending!!!! Please? Even if it takes some more stories to reach the happy ending...xoxo

Oh but you have to continue this... the setup is just too good.  This is beyond a doubt one of the creepiest Harry's around.  So bitter and really sad.  What does he really think will happen next?  Hermione is going to find out -- they always find out -- then is she just going to let him get away with it?  I think not.  I am guessing the one who overheard Harry in the cellar was Dobby?  Interesting, interesting.  Can't wait for more.  Thanks for posting.  JoAnne

No!!! make Hermione and Severus forgive each other and make something terrible happen to Harry!!! Make Harry DIE a very very painful death... hehehe

(i seem to ask you to do that, or something similar after each installment)

its just that i hate potter and your story brings out all my latent homoicidal tendancies. of course they only exist to get revenge for Severus and Hermione...

love your story and i realise that perhaps it is fruitless to ask for a happy ending, especially after noting what the thing is called, but i do so anyway...lol

-Karla

Absolutely brilliant!! This answers many questions the first two stories created in my mind.... Oh, and yes! I do want a sequel. I have a few ideas of my own of what may possibly happen afterwards, now that Severus has been released from his debt. Author's Response: This is high praise indeed coming from you! Thank you! There is more to come but it may be a while before it gets posted! Thank you for taking the time to let me know what you thought!

Heartbreaking, awful, and leaves you coming back for more time and time again.

I think we definitely need to see at least one more story -- I realize that in real life, this might very well be where the story ends since happy endings are in rather short supply. However, this is fiction -- and Harry simply cannot be allowed to get away with this, suffering war-hero or no.  I don't know that it's possible for Hermione and Severus to mend their relationship and become a couple again -- as I think I mentioned in a review somewhere of "My Happy Ending", it's almost impossible to put a relationship back together successfully once a heart has been broken as badly as Hermione's has been (I should know).  However, Hermione and Severus deserve to get revenge on Harry for such a malicious betrayal.

Please finish this - kill off Harry if you must - or whatever it is inside him - just get Hermione and Severus back together again!

Definitely not my kind of Harry, so yeah, I'd vote for a chapter 2 to see wtf is going on. I suppose I'll have to go read the prequel to this now, as I hadn't before. I'd always bypassed it, not wanting to read the angst. From what I gather here, Snape didn't cheat on Hermione? Simply told her he did? Hmmm. I hate that she was so easily duped. Was she the one who was listening to Harry talk to himself before he Disapparated? Hopefully, she went back and heard the exchange between them.

Sequal evil Harry must be stopped

I was in such a hurry to leave an answer that I missed tha part where you ask for a vote: of course I want a sequel, something which will ties up loose ends. I like open endings, but not too open.

You're really horrible for giving us just bits of this nightmare, without any inkling of how it will go: truly horrible until the end, or will Hermione and Severus be able to salvage something of their relationship? Waht about Harry? The worse is we come back to your writings...

Hermione needs to discover the truth.Harry has orchestrated the enire nightmare!

ERM...more please?