Weirdly enough this actually seems to fit Lav-Lavs' personality, and Ron's too. Though I have a little doubt about whether Harry would knowingly give Lavender entry to Grimmauld Place, but I guess you never know. I hope this is going to be a long story, it has a great beginning sequence to it for an adult type and length story.

Hello!Well, I kind of like the Hermione captured stories, so... Anyway, it seems different to me, maybe because Lavender is also involved.I hope you update soon!!!xoxo

Please keep writing I hate it when a story starts out good and doesn't get finished. I'm a big Snape/Hermione fan myself even though when the seventh Harry Potter book comes out iknow i'll be let down,but i can dream.Some of the Snape/Hermione fanfics have been getting alittle old,hopefully if you keep this one up it'll break the cicycle.

I like this beginning. I'm quite adicted to captured!Hermione stories, and I'm looking forward to read more soon (soon being the operational word)

I'm quite pleased to see that your story has been accepted. You had nothing to worry about, my dear. There is the small matter of you placing an 'e' at the end of my name, however. Madam - not madame. I will have the next chapter to you by Monday.

oooooooooooooooooooooooh this is such a wonderful start!

Great start! Looking forward to reading more of this!

Great start! I like the potential for conflict between Lavender and Hermione. Its so raw. And I love the sense of menace in the ending...

Poor Hermione!! Grr, I just want to strangle Lavender she is totally evil and yum I love Draco, Harry is a lucky boy!

good work. waiting for more. p

NOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooo!

ok thats out of my system, on to the review:

What a cow Lavender is, seriously I really don't like her or Ron at all (and Harry either but thats a hole other kettle of fish!) for all the torment they have put poor Hermione through! And now they take her away from her loved one, I really don't like it at all!

Poor Severus, don't worry sevvie hunny, everything will be ok (*thinks to self* it better be ok, pleased chained let it be ok!!!!)

and a final thing to add- update soon darl

-KarlaMarie 

Oh he is gone! What will she tell Ron and what will he believe? And I'm still not sure I'm over the Snape/Lavender part...

Short but excellent chapter!!  Lavender is one scheming biotch.  If Ron believes everything she says verbatim after all he's shared with Hermione then he needs to be put on the rack, emotions running high be damned.  I look forward to an update soon.

I've had just about all I can possibly tolerate from that sleazy, manipulative, duplicitous, backstabbing little trollop called Lavender Brown! Why a girl like that wasn't sorted into Slytherin is beyond me. While I didn't think that she deserved to be brutalized by the Lestranges for her behavior (which I notice didn't happen), I definitely think that the little tart needs to get her comeuppance and be put in her place!! Poor Hermione...I only hope that the blowback caused by Lavender's lies doesn't hurt her too badly, and that she and Severus can eventually be reunited.