i hope snape does not have sex with that whore  Lavender.

I like your story. Now I need to know what Severus will do to Lavender. I hope he won't shag her. Maybe I'm too much of a HGSS shipper...

Oh my gosh, this is so good so far! Please update soon. I love it.

Fabulous. I love where this is going. Til' the next update. ~Izzy

Finally, I was starting to get woried.This is the kind of story I like. Is Severious really that snarky throuth it all?Ihope so thanks for the story I was getting kind of bored with the rest.

I like it and I want more!!!! Please!!!

I'm enjoying the story as it is, but I have one question/comment, and I certainly hope you do not take this as a flame.

Suddenly, between her thighs felt extremely hot. ‘God, I’m a freak,’ she thought to herself.

In a situation where Hermione is a captive, has undergone a pretty traumatic meeting with the LeStranges and sees Lavender bloodied up and hurt, would she really be turned on by thinking about having (forced) sex, even if it's a threesome and with Snape?

The chapter read well, and I liked it, until that last sentence of the story, and it was a bit of a smack in the face, at least for me. Quite unappropriate, given the circumstances in the fic. It's just a personal opinion, and I understand many won't agree with me here, and I hope it won't stop you from writing the rest of the chapters. I will be reading them.

He seems a hell of a lot more interested in Hermione than Lav-Lav (You know we in the uk call our toilet's Lav's ROFLMAO), perhaps because as a slightly more sexually experienced person Lav is not as easy to coerce in that manner. Where as Hermione is inexperienced and therefore he will be able to imprint his own needs and desires onto her, also as a Potions Master she has at least 3 potions ingredients he can 'harvest'. Also she is little Miss Uber Intelligent and a strong link back to Harry, if that is his intention to either turn her to the dark or use her as leverage against the light I don't believe you could have picked a more perfect character than Hermione. You know I absolutely love the possibilities with this story, I can't wait for you to write more, well done. Fia.

Interesting. I'm not sure where this is going. Snape seems in a "in for a penny, in for a pound" mood, thinking as he is now viewed as evil personified, he might as well act it. But is he really?As for her tactlessness with Hermione and Ron, I have this urge to let the Lestranges have a little more time with Lavender.Please, update soon.

Interesting twist... I wonder what comes next... is Snape really serious??

<i>Suddenly, between her thighs felt extremely hot. ‘God, I’m a freak,’ she thought to herself.</i>Oh, wow, this is really hot. I guess that makes me a freak too. I love threesomes. Though I generally prefer boy boy girl (Lucius yummmm) but with Snape involved, I'm not going to complain. *fans self* Really love where you're going--the dynamic is so rich. And your Snape is so masterful!!!!!!

Mmmm yes you are a freak! Cant wait for the next chapter! AND oh my the three of them O.o Well I guess ill have to see how that goes XD

In a whisper, he said, “I’ll have you chained to bedposts and screaming my name, begging me to take you, to hurt you, before this night is through.”

<<<why wont Severus say that to me!!!

but by george that it a hot line, got me all flustered now... mmmm bedposts...

update soon! 

-karlamarie 

I think you have a great start to this story.  I find myself waiting impatiently for the next chapter!So far, this is my favorite line:“I’ll have you chained to bedposts and screaming my name, begging me to take you, to hurt you, before this night is through.” Definitely the stuff of fantasies! :::fanning self:::

mmm...captured by snape...why does this sound like it could be a fantasy of several of your readers???

great plot! 

bedchambers for three? Do you intend to make things interesting?

ooooh lick

It sounds good so far. I hope you update soon. ~Izzy

oh...it sounds like a truly wonderful story. i saw it rec'd on aylno and just had to stop by. i cant wait for the next chapter..

..i hope snape ends up good...just a personal likingssl/ashley

can't wait to read the rest of the story.......pretty good start i must say.

Good start - can't wait to see where you go with this

Like the potential of this story.  Already so many plots.  Looking forward to more chapters for this story.

Hey, good start.  Got a link here from WIKKT.  Love to see what's next.

I LIKE IT:), Curious to know what happens next, please continue when you can.

Weirdly enough this actually seems to fit Lav-Lavs' personality, and Ron's too. Though I have a little doubt about whether Harry would knowingly give Lavender entry to Grimmauld Place, but I guess you never know. I hope this is going to be a long story, it has a great beginning sequence to it for an adult type and length story.