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Daughter of the Snake
kyasky35 Reviews | 5.63/10 (35 Ratings, 0 Likes, 32 Favorites )
PostHBP: spoilers. Hermione, an Auror, makes one drunken mistake and finds herself on a new path towards love, adventure, and the discovery of her true heritage. Eventual HG/SS with some HG/HP
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kyasky
Member Since 2006 | 1 Story | Favorited by 3 | 1 Review Written | 37 Review Responses
Hi, I'm 18, I live in New York, and I adore the HG/SS ship. I've written a few stories before (mostly HG/DM) and two are up on fanfiction.net, but as I've matured my tastes have matured as well from young bad-ass slytherin to older, manlier bad-ass slytherin. Anyway, now I'm writing HG/SS, so check out my story Daughter of the Snake!
Reviews for Daughter of the Snake
more more more!!!! pretty please???
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Hey, thanks for reading first off! Second, there is more, but it's on ff.net. I can't seem to hold down a steady beta and ff.net doesn't care as much as petulant poetess, so I've just been posting there. Check it out!
Response from togspled (Reviewer)
got a link??
This is cute - I Like where it's going!
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks for reading it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! If you'd like to read more then you should check it out on Fanfiction.net. I've stopped posting here because I've been through a few betas and I can't find a reliable one, so I've pretty much given up. Since ff.net has no requirement that your work be properly proof-read, I've been posting there and I think there're nine chapters up right now.
harry and hermione can never go back to the way it was before the friendship is ruined. ginny has a right to know what her boyfriend and best friend did. just because they made the mistake as they say it is still wrong and they are making it worst by not telling. it is up to ginny to say if she wants harry still and still wants to be friends with hermione.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Haha, are you on fanfiction.net too? I responded to you there too, but I'll say it again. First of all, thank you for reading and reviewing. Second of all, you're right: Harry and Hermione did something stupid and covered it up with something even stupider. They're going to pay for it eventually :)
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
and for hermione to tell harry it was not ginny's bussines. if my boyfriend who i was going to marry did that with his friend and she told him that it was none of my bussines i would slap the bitch. i have the perfect for ginny to say to hermione hermione how would have like it if you and severus where getting married and one of his slept with him and told him to not tell you. you would be hurt just like me. and yes am on fanfiction.net.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks, I'll keep that in mind! I'm still not exactly sure how I plan on having Ginny react, but it definitely won't be pretty. But, and here's a spoiler, as unrealistic as it may be, I am gonna have them resolve things, just because I'm a total sucker for happy endings.
I love this story and I'm dying for more HG/SS interaction, I hope you update soon!
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! I don't know how soon the next chapter will be because I've had an unfortunate fit of writer's block over the last few months and I haven't written anything worth posting. I think that things will pick up more in the new year because I'll be finished with college applications and my senior english and history research papers, so I should have more time to write. Until then, thanks for reviewing and look out for the next chapter!
thank you for the new chapter. it was good. waiting for more. p
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks for reviewing, I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!
Excellent beginning to what promises to be a very intriguing story. I look forward to reading more!
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks, I hope I can stay up to your expectations.
Nice chapter
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I liked this chapter alot! :) I want everyone to find out that Harry got her pregnant hehe I think he should be made to pay lol
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Yeah, I promise you a fair bit of drama regarded that particular detail in the future :PThanks for reviewing, I'm glad that you're enjoying the story thus far!
That's an evil preview! I really like this so far, please update soon!~Sarah
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks for reviewing, I'm really glad you like my story!
yuck. Moody's mad-eye gives me the willies. Can he "see" who the father of Hermione's child is? I sure hope not!
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Aw, I love Moody, hehe. I don't know if I should give things away or not, but I find the likelihood of Moody's eye being that all-seeing unlikely.Thanks for the review!!!!
oh. my. gosh. the muggle and wizarding worlds demand more!please write more for us! We love your work!
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks, I'm really happy you're enjoying it! The next chapter should be up in a little while, I just have to finish writing it firstm :)Thanks for reviewing!
WOW, good story. I could do with longer chapters, but then I rather read than do anything so don't go by me.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Sorry about the shortness, I would prefer longer chapters too, but I don't like forcing ideas. Hopefully I can continue updating frequently to try and make up for the shortness .Thanks for reviewing!
Fleur and Bill must've had a gigantic wedding..
And Severus is very strong to fight off the exhaustion off so many obliviates!
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Well, not everyone at the ceremony would have known about Severus being the murderer. It would've been on a mostly need-to-know basis. All of the Weasley's, Harry, Hermione, the members of the Order of the Phoenix, and some teachers. A sizable amount, but most of them could have been done with a single spell cast on multiple persons at the same time.Thanks for reviewing!
I take it that within the realm of this story that you have decided to have Fleur with Charlie, instead of with Bill as it is in JKR's world??Aside from that, Really, you should put up a warning for us dedicated SS/HG fans that there will be totally squickiness involving Harry Potter ... Ewwwww.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
No, Fleur's with Bill, I just made a mistake which I'm about to correct.There's a mention in he summary of some HG/HP. And it's not like it's graphic (which would gross me out too). Anywho, there's no more intimateness between them in the future of this fic, rest assured.
good chapter.
thank you.
Harry is going to have a hard time later when the baby arrives. He'll want to protect baby and mommy and ginny will find out.
oh boy everyone is going to be crushed. waiting for more.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
It won't turn out exactly like that, but you're not too far off the mark. Thanks for reviewing!
I have enjoyed what you have written so far and am intriuged on how this will morph into SS/HG. Thank you for writing and I hope you update soon
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Actually, their paths will cross for the first time in the next chapter, so the SS/HG will start to shape up over the course of the story.Thanks for reviewing!
I am really loving this story :) who is meant to be the snake in this story Harry? or is Hermione the daughter of someone else? heheh Idon't expect you to give me all your plot bunnies...well maybe a couple :)
oh Fleur is with Bill not charlie :D
cannot wait for an update well done on a great story
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thnanks for the clarification; my bad. I'll fix that straight away. And no, I won't reveal my beloved plot bunnies :) but they will come out as the story progresses.
I'm liking this quite well so far! I was a bit puzzled by "Charlie and Fleur's daughter", though....
Party on!
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Oohh, hah, I haven't read HBP in quite some time, but all of these confused reviews made me remember that it's Bill and Fleur. Corrections shall be made!Thanks for reviewing!
Response from Gardengirl (Reviewer)
Cheers, then! I wondered if you'd chosen to go non-canon.
Looking forward to more soon! I was, in fact, pondering this very fic this afternoon....
I'm liking this sotry a lot. Nice job.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it, so keep your eye out for the next chapter!
Fleur and Charlies baby?
Next chapter preview looks promising..
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
I figured they'd have a kid by now, what with being in love and all. And considering how oddly fertile the Weasleys can be.
Thanks for reviewing!
Response from Antagonist Len (Reviewer)
So she's married to Charlie in your story?
Interesting story.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
oh my this is getting excellent. waiting for more. hurry up. thank you for a new story to read.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks, I'm really glad you like it. I'm trying to space out the updates a bit to give myself more time to work on the chapters, but there should be a new chapter in a little while.
Oh no! I don't like stories where Hermione gets pregnant with another man's baby. It's been done so many time...oh dear. I'll try and continue to read this, but I'm not sure I'll be able to. I'm sorry I'm being so very, very stupid over something like a pregnancy.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
I'll try not to take this as criticism. Don't make yourself read something you don't like; it's not fair to you and I'd rather not force myself upon people who don't like my ideas. I personally had never read a story where she had another man's baby, but whatever. The point is read if you want.
Response from Melissa_Snape (Reviewer)
It wasn't criticism. I like your writing, and I like this story. And I never said I didn't like your ideas either - I just said that this concept is familiar. I'm sure you're going to take your story your own way and not follow the same path that other authors have taken. If you want stories where Hermione has had another man's baby (or babies) then I would happily supply some links. I'm not putting you or your story down - I was attempting to say(perhaps badly) that although I don't normally enjoy stories such as these, I like this one enough to read it. I'm sorry if I gave the impression of anything else. ~
Ooooooooooooh. *gasps* NO!! *blinks* now that was something I was... not... expecting. *Thinks* What will she do?? So many questions *twitch* :P Another great chapter. x
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
I'm glad I shocked you; I try not to be too predictable. There will be some answers next chapter, so watch out for it. And, of course, thanks for reviewing!
That's not a very usual take on the HGSS ship, I'm looking forward to read more.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Yeah, their relationship will definitely be complicated, once it starts up of course. Which will probably take a while. Thanks for reviewing!