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Daughter of the Snake
kyasky35 Reviews | 5.63/10 (35 Ratings, 0 Likes, 32 Favorites )
PostHBP: spoilers. Hermione, an Auror, makes one drunken mistake and finds herself on a new path towards love, adventure, and the discovery of her true heritage. Eventual HG/SS with some HG/HP
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kyasky
Member Since 2006 | 1 Story | Favorited by 3 | 1 Review Written | 37 Review Responses
Hi, I'm 18, I live in New York, and I adore the HG/SS ship. I've written a few stories before (mostly HG/DM) and two are up on fanfiction.net, but as I've matured my tastes have matured as well from young bad-ass slytherin to older, manlier bad-ass slytherin. Anyway, now I'm writing HG/SS, so check out my story Daughter of the Snake!
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Thanks,Just started reading your story. Very interesting. I hope you can continue.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks, I'm glad you like it so far. The updates won't be all that timely because I've been pretty busy with applying to college. But I'm trying!
You write well and the plot is really interesting.
But it's sad to see it ruined by canon mistakes. In the end of HBP it was quite clear that there was a price on Snape's head and the whole wizarding community knowing about him murdering Dumbledore.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Yes, I know, but I actually started out the idea for this story about two years before HBP, and originally it took place at Hogwarts in Hermione's seventh year with a live Dumbledore, so when I changed everything and at least attempted at keeping it HBP-compliant, I had to stretch the truth a bit. I hope you'll forgive me my twisting of the truth, but that was the best excuse that I could think of, especially since I really liked the idea of making the murder of Dumbledore a part of the story without making Snape an outlaw, for various obvious reasons, so I hope you'll allow me this one error.
Thanks for reviewing!
Response from Antagonist Len (Reviewer)
You might want to add AU in the warnings then.
Extremely interesting beginning! You have no idea how happy you made me that you didn't go into detail about Hermione and Harry having sex. I'm a die-hard SS/HG shipper, and reading anything else doesn't interest me. But I'm holding you to your word that this will eventually be SS/HG. Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next. I think what interest me most is finding out how Hermione's mistake with Harry leads her to Severus...Perhaps because they're trying to track down Death Eaters and Severus is one? Is this HPB compliant? I'm sure we'll find out soon - so please, update again as soon as possible!
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks for the review! I don't generally write sex scenes, but I might end up doing one HG/SS scene. This is HBP compliant, just with a special twist that will be explained through the story. It won't completely make sense for several more chapters, but it will come to light! Anyway, I'm happy your enjoying it and I plan to update soon!
Ooooooooh. How intruging. Ooooooooooooh. Hehehee *evil grin* Liking it A LOT.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thank you so much for your support! I'm really glad you like it!
I loved this opening, and I absolutely loved the preview. I'm a hopeless sucker for the TBC with a preview.
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks! I'm glad you like previews because I hope to have one in every chapter.
ooooohhhh!!! more more more! please....*puppy eyes*
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks for reviewing and I'm happy you like it! I just submitted the next chapter and it is currently 5th in the queue, so it should be up soon!
Wow. That was great And, well, they certainly have grown up. Marvelous story, :).
I can't wait 'til the next chapter. Nice writing, very nicely done.
~Julia~
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and keep reading to see just how grown up they are.
Great story so far would love to know what happens next!
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks, I'm glad you like it! There are more chapters posted on fanfiction.net because I lost my beta and I write so erratically that it didn't seem worth it to get a new one. I have not updated on ff.net recently, but I do plan to continue the story once my schedule opens up a bit. Thanks for reading!
*snicker* ok from personal experience, having thrown up from day one to the day of birth, Hermione has more than one little surprise i'm assuming, cause there's no way she'd already gained that much weight with the tossing of cookies, lol.I like this story quite a lot and when I saw it on Ff.net and the note you had that it was here with more chapters, I couldn't wait and hurried over to read more. Keep it up and hope to see an update for chapter six soon..Mar
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Yeah, I don't really know anything about pregnancy, lol, so I'm sort of guessing as I go along. I've been trying to find information on the internet, but it's so scattered that it's been a little tricky. I saw somewhere that morning sickness is only supposed to last for about three or four months, so I've been going with that, but who knows.Anyway, thanks for he positive feedback, I'm really glad you like the story! I hope to have the next chapter up in a couple of weeks: right now I'm rereading what I've written so that it's all fresh in my mind for the next part of the story. Thanks for your patience!
When are we gonna see the next chapter posted to this? I'm re-reading it over and over again and can't wait. It's a great plot and I love how it's progressing. More, more!
Response from kyasky (Author of Daughter of the Snake)
Thanks, I'm really glad you like the story so far! Right now I'm actually rereading what I've already written, so I think I'll be able to finish and post the next chapter in a couple of weeks. Thanks for being so patient with me!