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The Mermaid and The Prince
whimbley160 Reviews | 159 Ratings, 1 Like, 97 Favorites )
Severus and Hermione discover a lost and injured merbaby and must return it to its rightful family, but along the way they run into a "fishy" situation.
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Reviews for The Mermaid and The Prince
I loved Dumbledore in this one. It was funny when he tranformed Severus into a merman - Like the story and cannot wait to read chapter 3.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
LOL!
That was one of my favorite parts.
Thank you!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
LOL!
That was one of my favorite parts.
Thank you!
Cute story - interesting plot. I have never read a fanfict like this so cudos to the author for thinking of it. Good first chapter.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it!
I was SO glad to finally read more of this, I am absolutely drooling for more now!!! AWESOME!!!~J~
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Hee!
Thank you! There will be a few more chapters to go.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Hee!
Thank you! There will be a few more chapters to go.
Wow. I wasn't expecting that. Definitely well done. I'm so excited to see the update. I can't wait for more!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Oh good! I like when I surprise people. I'm so glad you liked it.
:)
OMG public sex (sort of)! LOL
Clever idea for that Dark wizard to be a Transfigured centaur.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
LOL!
I'm glad you liked it!
Thank you!
Thank you so much for the update, what a brilliant chapter:-)) I loved it, especially that they are safely married and the fluff was wonderfull! Will this be the end of the story for now, or will there be more chapters.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
I'm so glad you liked it!
It's not the end yet. There will be a few more chapters to go.
A twist, but not an impossible "where did that come from?" twist. It actually makes sense.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you!
I'm glad you liked it.
I'm sensing a theme with Ron and unconsciousness. Not that it's a bad thing...
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
LOL!
Well, it is fun to write.
I love the fact that Severus still has his mer-friends - the guys all teasing him, all of them now newly married. I'm hoping Severus and Hermione visit their friends often. Glad you updated!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you!
Well, I think Severus deserves to have some friends. He's been lonely for so long. This is a start to a new life for him.
Haha... they got married! That is just awesome.
And I love the window scene, with Molossus and Cranaus acting it out. It makes me think of all the times my friends have done something similar, teasing each other about flirts and crushes.
Great job!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you!
That scene was a lot of fun to write.
I'm so glad you liked it!