In Which Discoveries Are Made
Chapter 1 of 12
whimbleySeverus and Hermione discover a lost and injured merbaby and must return it to its rightful family, but along the way they run into a "fishy" situation.
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Thanks to ancientgirl and bekbek01 for all your encouragement and help! And special thanks to my wonderful beta, June.
Chapter 1 - In which discoveries are made
Snape glared down at the three sitting along the lake’s edge. They had completed their Hogwarts education almost four years ago. Why he had to be cursed by their lingering presence, he didn’t know. Still, the Headmaster had requested his co-operation in the matter. He watched now as the Bossy Know-It-All began lecturing her friends about something.
“I told you, Ronald, we are gathering the bog-myrtle in order to complete the potion for our final project. We need this to graduate from University.”
“Hermione,” Ron whined. “It’s just that I don’t see why we couldn’t have gotten it in Diagon Alley.”
“Come off it, Ron,” Harry growled in frustration. “Even I remember what Professor Barnestoodle said about it. It has to be freshly picked bog-myrtle gathered on the seventh day after a full moon.”
“Honestly,” Hermione sniffed.
From his vantage point, Snape sighed. He really didn’t know how Weasley had managed to get into University. He knew the boy had plans to continue on to Auror Training School as well. He was sure the boy wouldn’t have gotten in, if not for the fact of his participation in the downfall of Voldemort.
Even then, during the final battle, the fool had managed to fumble his way into another Death Eater while under the Jelly Legs Jinx. This had caused the Death Eater to fall right into the path of Voldemort’s Avada Kedavra aimed at Harry, thus giving Harry the chance he needed to catch Voldemort off-guard and defeat him once and for all. Snape knew this because he was right there beside Voldemort when it all happened. Voldemort never suspected him as being anything but loyal. In truth, Severus had been doing his job, working for Dumbledore all along. And Dumbledore, who was still very much alive, cleared his name at the Wizengamot soon thereafter.
Snape had lived rather quietly these past few years at Hogwarts. That is, until this.
Dumbledore had requested his guidance for the Golden Trio in their final year at University. “Your assistance is greatly needed in their final potions project,” was what Dumbledore had said.
Severus had agreed but only begrudgingly. While he had shown the trio where the bog-myrtle was, he had not told them how to pick it. Too long a stem, and the potion would boil over. Too short, and the brewer would get a rather nasty surprise as he was turned into a newt. Snape really hoped it would be the last of these.
The Gryffindors had just returned to their bog-myrtle when the shadow of a large bird flew over them.
Startled by its sudden presence, Snape looked up only in time to see it drop something from its mouth. That something was making a horrible shrieking noise and plopped quite loudly into the shallow water near the lake’s edge.
“What was that?” Harry yelled as he pulled out his wand.
Hermione rushed over to the small creature wailing and shrieking in the shallow water. Though the shrieking was nearly unbearable, it had a familiar sound to it that drove Hermione instinctively. She let out a gasp when she saw what it was.
“DON’T TOUCH IT!” Snape bellowed as he hurried down from his perch on the rocks above. “You have no idea what it is. There could be dark magic…” he started to say but broke off.
Hermione was now knee-high in the water, holding what appeared to be a shrieking and crying baby. Snape blinked, but upon closer inspection, realized the creature had a tail – a fish tail.
“It’s a baby,” Hermione said, clutching it to her. “A merbaby,” she finished as she followed his eyes to the tail.
“Bloody Hell!” bellowed Ron as he too stumbled down the rocks, less than gracefully, and saw the baby in Hermione’s arms. He then quickly put his hands over his ears. “Make it stop, Hermione! Make it stop!”
Feeling frustrated, Hermione shouted back, “It’s hurt, Ronald. You’d shriek, too. Harry, go and fetch Hagrid, quickly!”
“I’m off!” Harry shouted over the din and made a quick retreat to Hagrid’s cabin not too far away.
“Bring it here,” said Snape, collecting himself after a few minutes.
Hermione dutifully brought it over to him. Snape carefully and quietly set to healing some of the wounds left from the bird. She watched mesmerized as the wounds magically began to heal while Snape whispered spells that sounded like a lullaby.
There was a great booming bark as Hagrid, Fang and Harry reached the group.
“What’s goin’ on?” asked Hagrid. “Whatcha got there, Hermione?”
“Oh, Hagrid,” said Hermione. “It’s a baby, a merbaby. And it’s been injured.”
Hagrid approached them quickly and took a good look at the babe. “Looks like someone has done much o’ the healing already. Who did this work?”
“It was Professor Snape,” said Hermione, nodding in Severus’s direction.
“Well, he did a good job, then. There’s not much more to be done abou’ this,” said Hagrid.
“Not much more? What do you mean, not much more?” asked Hermione shrilly.
“Yeah, what do we do with it now?” asked Ron.
“Put it back,” said Hagrid with a shrug.
“Put it back!” Hermione said incredulously.
“Yeah, tha's all. It’ll find its own way home,” said Hagrid.
Hermoine looked in desperation at the men surrounding her. “Put it back? A baby? You can’t be serious,” she said in frustration.
"It will go back to its own kind, Miss Granger," said Snape. "Release it."
Hermione looked at the small merbaby sobbing in her arms. “Release it back into the water so some other bird or worse can make off with it? I think not,” she sniffed.
Severus narrowed his eyes. The girl – he corrected himself as he appraised her figure – no, the woman had already grown attached to the thing. Women seemed prone to this. Still, she was intelligent. Perhaps appealing to her reason would work.
“Miss Granger,” he said smoothly. “The merpeople are not known for their kindness. They would not take well to a witch or wizard in their midst. Releasing the child would be the best thing.”
Hermione frowned at him, seeming to have made a decision. “Lac lactis Appareo,” she said with a wave of her wand, and a baby bottle appeared. “Hagrid, it does drink milk, doesn’t it?”
“Can’t say as I know much about the young’uns, Hermione. ‘Tis worth a try,” said Hagrid.
Hermione gently pushed the nipple into the baby’s mouth, and the shrieking stopped. The baby began to suckle hungrily.
“I’d say that was a yes then,” said Harry. “Hagrid, isn’t Dumbledore friends with the merpeople? Couldn’t he help?”
“Good question,” said Ron. “Want me to go and fetch him?”
“Yes, please, Ron,” said Hermione.
“If you insist on this, Miss Granger,” Snape interjected, “might I suggest you lower the child a bit more into the water?”
Hermione glanced down at the babe in her arms.
“It would be more accustomed to the water than not,” he said quietly.
Hermione gently lowered herself and the merbaby deeper into the water, and it did indeed seem happier.
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Mermaid and The Prince
160 Reviews | 7.21/10 Average
Ohh! This was fun! I hope this will get finished one day.
i was so impressed by the previous chapter where u so successfully moved the story along by having hgss stumble upon dmhp in the room of requirement. hope you will remain joyous regardless of your health prognosis. Jesus loves you! i also had a couple of scares, myself!
a very very merry tale!
I think you should do a spin off of this fic as if they stayed and they became merpeople and had a merbaby. That would be an interesting birth. Lol. How did serafina's mom give birth to her?
I'm excited to see this story back. It's always been one of my favs. Suprising twist with a centaur of all things being the villian. I hope we get to see Hermione and Severus go back to visit their Mer-friends. It was good to see so much acceptance for those two.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! I'm so glad this is one of your favorites! I'm hoping to get back to work on this story soon!
LOL, nice chapter! Love the trident-wand knocking Ron out, too funny! And then Hermione and Severus breaking down the door in their "knocking"... Just brilliant!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Yay! Thank you!
Ooh, poor Severus and Hermione - thwarted by Hagrid! Oh well, for their own good I guess. ;)
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Well, Hagrid's timing was either very good or very bad, depending on how you look at it. Severus certainly wasn't happy. LOL!
The Merfolk really do whant Severus and Hermione to stay don't they? Now, does Severus know what will happen if they mate in this form (or does he even care)?
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Yes, the merfolk really do like having them around. Severus's mind was very clouded and overwhelmed by the merman instincts taking over him. The idea of staying there was appealing to him, and in the end his instincts took over the rest.
Interesting that Hermione and Severus are now married because they completed the mating ceremony. That sort of explains the mermen at the window (not that they're not a voyeuristic lot anyway). ;) Can't wait to see Ron's reaction.Cleverly done with having Bane the centaur as the "dark wizard."
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! I thought Hermione and Severus deserved some happiness. And Bane always seemed rather shifty to me. He's got the beginnings of the perfect villain.
Sweet reunion. Can just imagine Severus being hugged and not let go - poor guy! Devious Murcus trying to get them to remain merfolk forever, we'll just have to wait and read what happens next.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!
Nice little side-story of Harry and Draco. Too funny on Dumbledore turning them into Hippogriffs!Interesting that Dumbledore never mentioned to Severus and Hermione that if they mate in mer-form they'd be stuck like that forever, so that possibly explains further on Phillippe...
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Awww... I love Draco and Harry. I think it explains so much of the tension between them. And Dumbledore seems to have forgotten that important piece of information about mating in mer-form. Maybe it's just old age.
Hmm, interesting on Phillippe being a former Hogwarts student - strange with the book. Does that have something to do with the Grindylows and the Dark Wizard?Sweet of Severus with the black pearls for his "girls."
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
That book is probably going to come back up again in this story. And that was very sweet of Severus.
This is so neat. I love that Bane's the evil one.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! I'm so glad that you like it!
Interesting the Phillippe's a servant of Dumbledore's and the Grindylow are serving a dark master, but what nefarious plan have they for the merbaby?Aw, poor Severus wanting children...perhaps he'll get his wish.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Severus might just get that wish, if he follows his heart.
Hmmm, poor Severus and his "scale" issue... Very subtle in their interest in one another.Is the "talking fish" Dumbledore? - the meddler!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Severus was very curious about how his new body functioned. He didn't think he'd stay that way for as long as he did.And, Dumbledore is definitely involved with that talking fish!
“We are not lost!” Severus said grumpily. “Maybe, just a little off-course.”
Hmm, if you say so...
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Even wizards don't like to admit when they are lost. :)
“Hey, want to go see a Quidditch game?” They walked off together, Hermione and the merbaby temporarily forgotten.Typical guys oggling her boobs as if they've never seen boobs before and then easily distracted yet again by Quidditch! Too funny!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Hee! Glad you liked it!
Cute, maternal instinct kicks in for Hermione and all the men seem a bit agog about it.
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
They weren't sure what to do, were they?
Welcome back! :) xoxoxooxx
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you! It's good to be back!
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more, dammit!~LotmI have a whole bunch of to sic on you, if you don't comply!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Sorry, sorry, sorry!!!
The latest chapter is up now. I hope you enjoy!
And can I just grovel at your feet and tell you how much I enjoyed "The Song"
*grovels*
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
--No groveling! (Especially not when you should be writing, *harrumphf*...)
*hug*
~Lotm
I love your creativity and passion you have shown in this story. I also loved The Incredible Mr. Limpet. Keep up with the good work!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you so much!
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Havent I read this chapter b4...? mmmm well you better put the next one up real quick for confusing me in such a manner....
please...lol
-karlamarie
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Yes, you're eyes arent' deceiving you. You've read this one before. I took it down to make a few changes to the rating and other things and then re-posted it.I'm at work on the next chapter. I had a few health set backs, but, I'm at work once again. Glad you're still enjoying the story!
Brilliant, please give us the next chapter soon!!!
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Thank you!I'm working on it!
I'm sure I've already read this... kind of confused now...
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
Yes, you have read this one before. Sorry for the confusion. I made a few changes to the ratings and other things and had to re-post it.I am at work on the next chapter. I've had a few health set backs, but am at work again.I hope you continue reading!
Ok, I know I've read this chapter before....Sev and hermione need nookie! LOL....Can't wait for moremarti
Response from whimbley (Author of The Mermaid and The Prince)
LOL!Yes, you've read it before. Sorry about the confusion. I took it down to make a few changes and had to re-post it. Working on Sev and Herione nookie as we speak.:)