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Wicked Game
shalimar1981177 Reviews | 5.59/10 (177 Ratings, 0 Likes, 165 Favorites )
After the events in the Department of Mysteries, Hermione finds it hard to cope and receives help from someone unexpected. When a friendship of a sort develops, will it survive the events of the Lightning-Struck Tower? Will an ancient ritual help the Light win the war or will it destroy everything? An HG/SS romance. Not DH compliant.
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shalimar1981
Member Since 2006 | 8 Stories | Favorited by 38 | 31 Reviews Written | 173 Review Responses
I am an almost 30 year old single mom of five year old precocious Mini-Shal and our cat called 'Katze' (cat in English, lol). In between full-time jobs at a temping agency, babysitters getting Izzy to and from Kindergarten and lots family and financial problems and housework of course, I am once again working on fanfics after a long hiatus to keep sane.
Though I have been writing fanfiction for various fandoms for the past fourteen years none of them made it on the Net because of a series of misfortunes involving six more or less functioning computers.
I haven't been a Harry Potter fan either until March 2006 when after watching Goblet of Fire I was so confused I just had to read the books. My best friend HoneyB was very mean throughout and didn't want to tell me any spoilers thus getting her revenge when I didn't want to listen to her enthusing about Harry Potter all those years. ;)
The HG/SS pairing struck me as very sick at first because as hot as Alan Rickman is, he is over sixty years old! But resistance was futile and I was won over by one of the silliest and most funny parodies I have read so far which was incidently my first HP fanfic and is sadly enough only available in German. Though for anyone fluent in that language I can heartily recommend to Google Coldmirror and her parody of the first movie 'HP und ein Stein'.
So since then I have been happily writing away whenever I have the time and get seriously annoyed when yet another plot bunny bites me in the leg and doesn't want to fit into my current story! %)
Reviews for Wicked Game
I love that you provided the Greek for the quote as well as the explaination. You see a lot of Latin around this site but I haven't seen any Greek before so thanks. You're doing a great job.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Yeah, the quote just struck while writing and I simply couldn't leave out the Greek.
Thanks for your nice review and keep reading!
bye,
Shal
You are a tease. I wonder what Hermione is hiding?
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
I've become addicted to cliffies. What can I say?
Rest assured the next chapter will be up soon. Then you'll find out.
bye,
Shal
Hurry up with the next chapter, will you? I know I'm incredibly privileged in that I'll get to read it before anyone else *grin*, but I'm curious. Good chapter, this one!
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
lol
I'm doing my best, honestly! And you'll get the next one in no time!
Thanks for reviewing although you didn't need to.
*hugs litc*
bye,
Shal
Great story so far. I like this Snape by the way. :) I'm looking forward to more.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Thanks for your review!
I'm glad you like my Snape so far as well as the story.
Keep tuned, the next chapter is in the queue.
bye,
Shal
Where did this go???
I admit I cannot spot any of the quotes you put in there! I'm pathetic!! Gah! But other than my annoyance at my failure to spot those quotes, the chapter is bloody brilliant, incredibly interesting, and has an evil cliffhanger...once again. Keep in mind my annoyance at myself has nothing to do with you or your wonderful chapter. I just feel like dunce for not seeing them. I'll have to look again. I love this chapter! Update soon!
Cheers,
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Don't worry about those quotes!
I mostly only include those that absolutely fit into the plot and those are mostly very obscure ones that probably only such movie buffs like me know. Look it over again and if you still can't find them, I can send via mail if you want.
Thanks for the nice review and the next chapter will be up soon (and it won't even have a cliffie!).
bye,
Shal
I'm really enjoying Hermione's suspicious and smart-alec nature in this story, and wildly curious as to what Snape is up to. Keep those chapters coming!
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Well, with someone like Snape she has to be on her guard! What can Snape be up to...?
The next chapter is coming soon, don't worry!
bye,
Shal
Catchy story :-)
What can Snape be up to? He's acting very oddly.
Btw, I think it's homo stultus, since homo is nominative masculine, and stultus is part of the o-declination, but Latin's been awhile as well.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
I'm glad you like it!
Yeah, Snape's acting very unusually...
You're right! I checked again and figured it out, it's supposed to be Homo stultus. Already changed. Thanks!
My latin has been a while as well. My old teacher wouldn't like that at all.
Thanks!
Shal
i just love the info about fencing re:hg/ss. thoroughly enjoying this story. thanks so much!
No you cannot end a chapter this way. Update soon.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Oh, don't be that way!
I'm a victim of Cliffitis and I can't seem to stop!
But next chapter will have no cliffie, I promise!
And the next chapter will be up soon. But since you gave me five stars, I gather you liked the chapter nevertheless?
bye,
Shal
Wow!!!
I am so proud of you, you are making what you like most - writing!!!
Go on! Now, it's the best time for that!!!
Bravo!!!
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Thanks for your review!
Next chapter will be up before you leave on your holiday!
bye,
Shal
Finally she let it all out. It's no good to keep it pent up too long. Of course, having an audience is a bit humiliating. LOL! Faboulus chapter, I think you really have them in character so far.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Whew!
I was very worried about keeping them both in character and tell my story as well. It's very difficult.
Yes, it seems she let it all out, and it had to be in front of Snape of all people! But did she really let it all out?
Hmm... Curious what you make of that.
Thanks for your review!
bye,
Shal
I just read all of you chapters for this story and I must say you are doing fantastic. It is funny and entertaining I can't wait for the next few chapters. Please keep writing and don't stop till you finish.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
I'm really glad you took the time to read all of my chapters, that you reviewed, and also that you like the story so far.
I'm doing my best. If there's anything that should confuse you or find a mistake feel free to tell me, however, because I want to make this story as good as possible.
I hope you will like the next few chapters as well. They will be up in about a week.
bye,
Shal
'Bout bloody time you updated!!! I was getting worried! Again, another very brilliant chapter and now I await the next chapter with great anticipation!!! I know which quote is from The Hunt for Red October! Ron's comment about how Hermione can't go to the loo without a plan! I love that movie! Can't wait to find out what awaits Hermione in the "third room on the right in the attic after dinner"!! I hope the next chapter will be up soon! Will this eventually be SS/HG? Update soon! Cheers,
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
You must be my most faithful fan online!
Your reviews really make my day!
Had some RL trouble as well as difficulties posting this time round but the second chapter is finally up!
50 points for guessing the quote!
I love that movie, too. I'll continue to insert quotes - simply because I can't resist. Wonder if you guess the next ones, too?
Well, what do you think is in for Hermione?
I'll just say that it's not the usual - I haven't read it anywhere before, so...
And yes, it'll be an HG/SS romance - eventually. But they'll have to get through a lot first, I'm afraid. As much as I like romance myself, it simply didn't work in this story to get to it sooner rather than later. But they'll be tempted of course...
Do you have any scenes from HPB you'd like included? I'm asking around because, er, I still need some...
Rest assured the next chapter is coming soon. It is already with my beta.
bye,
Shal
Response from DeathSong (Reviewer)
About the HBP scene...I think Slughorn's Christmas Party scene would be good. This is my idea: You have Snape and Hermione there and maybe there could be some sexual tension or something. What you think? Let me know:
slytherinpride@myway.com
Yeah! 50 points to Slytherin!! I look forward to the quotes, we'll see how many I can get right. Hehehe.
About the 'third door on the right in the attic after dinner"...I am think she and Snape are going to talk. That's a wild guess. I'm not really sure.
I'm flattered that my reviews make your day. Makes me feel good! Thanks!
Your most faithful fan online? Oh, wow. Thanks...that makes my day!!!
Well, I look forward to the next chapter with much anticipation!
Cheers,
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
This is bloody brilliant, shalimar1981! I positively love it and am dying for the next chapter! I hope you will update extremely soon! I also hope there will be more of our dear professor in the coming chapters! Keep up the good work, oh, and UPDATE SOON!!! Cheers,
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Wow!
Thank you for your praise!
The next chapter is already with my beta and should get posted soon.
I hope you'll like it because our dear Professor is making a more lengthy appearance there...
bye,
Shal
Response from DeathSong (Reviewer)
Good! I am very pleased that he'll be making a more lengthy appearance! It'll be brilliant, I know it! Cheers,
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
What a fantastic beginning! I'm glad you've decided to start posting your fics, because if what you've written is any indication, you have a great deal to offer the fandom. And Hermione's sense of boredom was so tangible, it made me want to sigh, lol. Can't wait for an update!
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Thanks for your cheering and for your laudatio on my writing but my baby is nudging me in the ribs to admit that I had some help with that.
My two best friends read it over and gave me some ideas before I sent the first chapter to my beta who did an awsome job transforming a lump of coal into a diamond - if I can call it that.
And poor Hermione! What I'm putting her through! All those books and she not allowed to read them!
She certainly has run through all of her options of useful occupation very quickly!
Update is coming soon. The next chapter is already with my beta.
bye,
Shal
I am enjoying so far. Snape knows what she did and being the fact that she is of age..she should be able to join the order. I think Snape may try to persuade her to attempt more difficult potions.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Well...
I'll be da$%&%
Sorry, just very agitated.
Hermione joining the Order... I have to admit that I didn't think of that. Of countless other things vastly more complicated but not that. You certainly opened my eyes for a very obvious solution which opens up many opportunities!
I'll be sure to incorporate your thoughts into one of the next chapters if that's ok with you!
Thank you very much!
I'm glad you like it!
bye,
Shal
Fantastic start! I'll be eagerly awaiting next chapter.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Thanks for your review!
I'll update as soon as I get back the next chapter from my beta. So keep on look-out!
bye,
Shal
As the President said to David Levinson (Jeff Goldblum) in the movie "Independence Day" - after he had rescued the world ...:
"Not bad!"
I am very proud of you!!!
Trekkie_27
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Well, I'm glad you like it!
Thanks for the cheers!
XXX & OOO
Shal
I think it's a really good start. I'm really feeling Hermione's tension and frustration, you've conveyed that well.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Hi!
I'm glad you like the story so far. I did my best to convey how the tension is building. It will need an outlet soon.
Thanks for your review and keep reading. The next chapter should be out in a week or so.
bye
Shal
A good start, I'm looking forward to reading frequent updates on this (hinthint)If the title is from the song, I do hope that last line isn't a foreshadowing, I like a happy ending
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Hi!
Thanks for your review! As to frequent updates, I'm doing my best but my muse is a bit reluctant at the moment. The second chapter however is already with my beta, so it should be coming next week or so.
Well, the song is a bit sad but I kept hearing it everwhere when I started the story and it is echoing some things that are still to come, but the story does not follow it completely and I'm totally ignoring the last line.
I'm liking this beginning very much. The scene is being lain out for mystery, intrigue and maybe a little angst. The effect that confinement is having on Hermione is well documented here and after all, all those lovely books that she can't read? It must be like chinese Water torture to our resident Know-It-All. She is very restricted and it must be total murder for her. I'm curious as to how it will develop and now require you to poke your muse with a large stirring rod and offer it a pound of Lemon sherbets to produce the next chapter, Please???? Blessings
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
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Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Hi!
I'm so glad you like the story so far! Oh, mystery and intrigue is correct for I will try to bring in some of my theories about HBP into the story, but I'm afraid there will be more than only a bit of angst coming, too.
I was a little worried if I managed to convey her feeling of oppression and helplessness and how Hermione is dealing with that. The tension is building up day by day and she has to let off steam someday soon.
Consider the muse poked (or rather my beta, for she has the second chapter already ) and if everything goes according to plan the next chapter should be out in a week or so.
Hmm, Lemon sherbets...
this is a good start. i like this version of hermione--studious, but not obsessive and wily, but not so much that i want to slap her. i like the byplay with her and Snape. keep writing! i'm glad you posted this
as for the title....i read a romance novel called 'wicked games' once, but i'm guessing that's not it.
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Hi!
Well, I'm glad that you like my Hermione! In the books she sometimes got on my nerves, too, but they are from Harry's perspective and he tends to see things in black and white. I'm something of a bookworm (and know-it-all I admit ), too, so I know what it's like. No one has just one occupation though and I wanted to convey that.
Well, as for her and Snape I won't spoil anything yet. More is coming though.
No, the title isn't from a romance novel although I do read them sometimes.
Wonderful story. I hope it's not abandoned :-)
Response from shalimar1981 (Author of Wicked Game)
Thanks for your review! I'm glad you like it so far.
The story isn't abandoned. The muse has just run away for a bit and meddled with RL/HG instead and there was that mad Round Robin called "A funny thing happened on the way to the Victory Photo" and that HGSS exchange fic... You can tell I've been very busy recently, so 'Wicked' fell under the table for a bit. But now I've got all that behind me *hides the two RLHG WIPs* I'll be able to get to work on 'Wicked' again.
The next chapter is about half-way done, and the following ones are far along as well. For progress reports check out my Lj under shalimar1981.livejournal.com. :)
Till soon,
Shal
Yay! You updated my favorite fanfic! Woot! Love it, can't wait for more!