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My Happy Ending
Shanastay19 Reviews | 6.32/10 (19 Ratings, 0 Likes, 10 Favorites )
Things seldom turn out the way you hope or expect. All is not well in the House of Snape. One-shot songfic inspired by Avril Lavigne's "My Happy Ending." Nominated for Best Infidelity & Break-up at The Sorting Hat: Harry Potter Thematic Fanfiction Awards.
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I only have 2 words that come to mind, and I hope you pardon the vulgarity, but, "Holy shit!"Nice unexpected twist. Well done.
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
Thank you so much. That was exactly the reaction I was going for! I hope to have more posted soon. Thank you again!-Shana
I like it. A sequel would be great. Maybe Severus sends hermione a pensieve with his memories of the conversation with Potter *the wizarding debt one and the post break up one* I'd love to see what hermione does to harry, wheelchair or no wheelchair. but I can see why harry would be bitter. he and ron are wounded with no hopes of being healed or cured. I understand why he'd hate hermione for being happy. he'd probably be like that with any guy she was with. well. not sure when this was published, but it'sreally great.marti
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
Check out Slipped Away and Tear Away! Up and ready for reading! Thank you for reviewing!
Ok, WOW! I actually didn't see it coming that Harry was behind it. I'm not usually a fan of dark(ish) Harry, but this was very nicely done and now I'm definitely off to read the sequel(s) Good job!
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
Glad you liked it! Thank you for reviewing!
Oh, Oh, OH!! Yes indeed!You are wrong, so very very wrong.....but I Likey...and just to make everyone else jealous out there, I had dibbs on this fic before it was posted, ya see Shanastay is very close to me, I would think about 25 meters or so through the walls! Hee Hee Hee! I know there will be a campanion fic and more *rubs hads togather excitedly* mmmwwwwaaaaahhhhhhhaaaaa and I'll get first dibbs on those too!! I can't wait!!Please Please Please post it sssooooonnnn!! BTW I just love the evil Harry twist, It is quite refreshing, perhaps a little bleed over from killing old Voldie, moldie butt?? LOL Anywho, more please.
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
I'll work on it tomorrow when I'm off work. Speaking of which... I need to get going!
oh, please do write a sequel~!!!! it's so sad.... Snape must love her very much *sniff*sniff*
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
We shall see my dear. Thank you for dropping a review. I appreciate it!
I always hated Harry, I hate him so much more now I am going to find him and kill him... bastard!
Poor Hermione, poor Severus
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
Wow. I wasn't expecting such a strong response, but I'm glad you liked the fic! Look for a companion fic and sequel coming soon. Thank you for reviewing!
I absolutely cannot believe Harry did that!!! I am willing to get on my knees and beg...no, plead for a sequel! What must be done to see this happens? (Perhaps for Severus to go after her????) I will do whatever groveling it takes. ~The Mistress
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
A companion piece is in progress telling Severus' side of things. Still debating the sequel... Thank you SO much for reviewing!
Response from themistresssnape (Reviewer)
I'm lulled with the companion piece, but I am still willing to grovel at your feet, kiss the ground you walk on, clean your Quidditch broom, do your Potions essays, hex the hell out of anyone you'd like for that sequel! :)~The Mistress
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
Holy Merlin's thong! Wow. With that kind of incentive how could I possibly NOT do a follow-up? It may take a little while (just started a new real-life job) but it will be coming soon!
Definitly need a sequel! *beginschanting* Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
With this kind of response how could I say no? First to get posted tho is a companion piece to this. THEN I'll be off to write the sequel.
Very sick, sad and wrong. I'd read a sequel if you write one, because I can see so many ways for this story to go, but I'm not sure I want to ask you to write one. It's awful what Harry did; I can see JKR killing him before letting him become so bitter and just plain mean.
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
It's strange how trauma affects different people. No one can predict how they will react when it happens to them. And I agree with you. I think JKR would kill him off before lettinghim slide that far. Thank you for reviewing and keep your eyes peeled for the companion piece. A sequel is still being debated but from the response I've gotten will probably happen.
It can work as a one shot, but it would also work as something longer. Of course I'd want Hermione to find out what a total prat Harry really is and find out the truth.
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
Well, it looks like the masses have won out. A follow-up will be coming. *runs off to find things to fill in the massive plot holes the one-shot created* Thank you for reviewing! I LOVE feedback!
I think that this is a great start, but it has something missing - at least 3 chapters, if not a little more. Best get that rectified asap.
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
A follow-up will be coming very soon. As soon as I can get my hands on some free time (like this weekend). Thank you for taking the time to tell me what you thought!
Noooooooooo!!! my poor poor sevvie! good story but I wish Hermione and Sevvie stayed together
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
I guess you'll just have to tune in to the sequel to find out if Harry gets found out! Stay tuned and thanks for stopping by to review!
I hate your Harry ! If you have a sequel planned, I hope you plan to have him pay as well.
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
And how, my dear, do you think he should pay? I am accepting input as to what an appropriate punishment would be. Thank you for taking the time to tell me what you thought!
Response from septentrion (Reviewer)
I think one fitting punishment would be he never has Hermione (she's not ready to move on so quickly, then she notices something not right with Harry, or even he lets slip something that makes her feel he may have known what Severus was going to do but didn't tell her in advance) and that Harry's misdeed is made public thus making him an outcast in wizarding world even with his friends. Just an idea, pick what suits you
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
Let's just say you might have hit on some ideas I'm kicking around. I'm not revealing anything yet! You'll just have to wait and see what I post!
I have to admit that this story hits a bit too close to home for me. A number of years ago, I went through something almost exactly identical to what Hermione is experiencing right down to the enraged confrontation (via e-mail in my case, since the man in question was out of the country at the time) -- the only difference being that I was not married to him, something for which I'm grateful. I understand only too well how it feels to discover that the person whom you thought you loved was really little more than a combination of his lies and your own imagination..to realize that this person did not value you simply for who you are, but only what you could do for him...and that this person neither feels any remorse for having shamelessly manipulated you, nor any regret over the agony that he has caused you. I'm rather glad that in the end, it was Harry and not Severus who turned out to be the true villain of the piece. A sequel -- perhaps one written from Severus's point of view -- would be interesting, but I doubt that you could realistically find a way to restore Hermione's happy ending. When someone wounds you as deeply as Severus has wounded Hermione -- even if it was against his will -- the scars often go too deep for that relationship to ever really be healed.
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
You've hit on my own plans. I'm not saying if I'm going to get them back together, but there IS a companion fic in the works for Severus' POV of the events and a follow-up sequel in the works as well. I'm taking votes as to if/how Harry should pay for his deception. Thank you SO much for sharing with us. I realize how hard it often is to open up about such things. I've been "traumatized" more than a few times myself and only recently got out of a relationship where the person turned out to be something completely other than the face he showed me. Keep your eyes peeled for the other upcoming fics! *hugs* Shana
Yes, we definitely need a contination! That evil S*B can't be allowed to permanently break up our SS/HG!
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
We shall see where my rather demanding muse decides to lead us. He's currently a bit teed off at me for where I went with this one. Thank you for stopping in and taking the time to tell me what you thought!
Oh my. Sequel DEFINITELY needed!!!!!!! Well done!
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I was hoping this one-shot would receive a positive reception. I have several other not-related ones in the works. Should have them up soon. As for a sequel... I have to find appropriate musical inspiration first. I'm taking suggestions!
Well if you are taking votes I would say yes to a continuation. Thinking of what Hermione would do to Harry once it was figured out. And the way you have painted Harry I don't think he would be prepared for her reaction. He is conceited enought to think he knows what she would do, but he hasn't taken into account that she has been with the ultimate Slytherin for five years. And look what kind of revenge they could wreck on Harry together! Just a thought. JoAnne
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
That has some serious potential. I'm toying with the idea of picking it up where I dropped this off. We shall see what my psychotic imagination cooks up! Thank you SO much for dropping me a review! They are the hot cattle prods that keep me writing...
Absolutely maniacally evil... I love it!! True, it does pose a few questions. My imagination is just going wild over 'Evil Harry'. A few theories have surfaced.
Sequel? Definitely interested. If you're taking votes, I vote yes, and please think of exploring more Evil Harry.
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
Bwahahahahaha! Glad you enjoyed that. I heard that song and just had this whole scene pop into my head of Hermione losing it at Severus and it mutated into Harry being the "mastermind" behind "Unhappily Ever After." Hey, that sounds like an excellent name for a sequel! Will have to see if I can find appropriate musical inspiration to go with. As always, thank you for leaving a review! You know how much us lowly fanfic authors thrive on feedback.
you better write one..oh i loved it, i want another one! This was goood and new!
Response from Shanastay (Author of My Happy Ending)
I just HAD to toy with the "evil Harry" theme. I haven't seen it done much and wanted to see if I could put my own spin on it. Thank you for taking the time out to drop me a review! I appreciate it!