Lovely Viktor/Hermione, which is always welcome! Thank you.

this is a great story. like your friend I truly enjoy this ship as well, but it is difficult to find multi-chapter well written stories. Thank you for this!

I enjoy Viktor/Hermione stories and this was very sweet.  I'm glad that they are together and that Ron and Harry accept him.

I'm sorry it's been so long since I replied but I just got the chance to read and review. I loved the chapter and I felt so overly happy seeing them come together like that in the end. You may not be a VK/HrG shipper but I must say you definatly know how to write it.Brit

That was a beautiful story.  I loved your in depth exploration of the emotions involved and I'm a sucker for happy endings.  Wonderful writing.

I loved this story! The only thing wrong with it was that it was too short! I am typically Hermione/Snape, so I know many of your stories. Thanks for doing a great Viktor story too. After Snape, he is my fav for Hermione (my apologies to the Hermione/Ron shippers!).

I enjoyed your story and have started to follow some other Viktor/Hermione stories.  I am still a Snape/Hermione shipper at heart, but my next choice would be Viktor.  I liked the way you showed his personality, loyalty, maturity, patience, and love.  I thought you also did a good job showing Hermione's ambivelance.  Although I have not written many reviews, I am a great fan of your tales.  I am not an author so I am not sure I am giving you the feedback you are looking for.And my personal rant:  Why Rowling would pair Ron with Hermione boggles my mind.  Looking back on couples from high school, the smart girls who married football players ended up divorced.  Viktor is athletic and smart. 

Yay, Sun!  Too lovely, and although I'm not usually aboard the Great Ship HG/VK, I certainly enjoyed this little excursion!  I see her with Viktor after the war, based on this fic, simply because it's nice to think of happily after after too!  **hugs**

This was a great chapter and the perfect ending to this story. I like the open-ending. Her first time was very realistic to me!  Brava!

Poor Viktor. I have to admit, I'd rather see Hermione with Viktor than Ron. He just seems more her type. Since this is a HG/VK story, I will hang onto the hope that her feelings will strengthen with time.

"She smiled at the tall erection," huh? That made me smile. LOL I like this chapter. Pity that their vacation was so short!

I sort of wish they were closer together as well. But distance can make the heart grow fonder.

I like this side of Viktor, very sweet and gentlemanly. I have a greater respect for him now. ;)

I was sure I had already written my review for this chapter, but I didn't. Bad Lore... Hermione smiled as Viktor washed dishes the Muggle way, getting most of his shirt and trousers wet in the process. Simple, but still so cute. He accepts to do this simple things for her just because he knows about her parents being Muggles and all that. You know I loved that part with the kiss in the swing, I was squeeing like a mad fan-girl when you first showed it to me. It was sweet, romantic and he was a perfect gentleman, first when he asked if he could kiss her and later when he refused to touch her until things were settled between them. He was very clever with the way he managed things. Ron was finally treating her better. *Snort*  He fancied her and wanted her to be his girl… sort of. He hadn’t made any declarations, but it was obvious that he assumed her to be his. That was very presumptuous from Ron if you ask me. Sometimes I feel he takes things for granted and that he doesn't have to make an effort fot her since she's his, and if she easily forgets about Lavender it will be worst. I wish that if Rowling decides to keep them together, at least Hermione gives Ron a lesson, and makes things difficult for him.“Thanks, Mum,” Hermione said, feeling as if things were clearer to her suddenly. I liked so much the conversation between Hermione and her mom because usually her parents are simply ignored. Well, Hermione seems to do that a bit in the books also... However, she's just a teen, and she needs to talk to her mother as much as any other girl her age. Being with Ron seemed to be what everyone expected: Harry and the Weasleys anyway. Too much had happened between them, what with the things he’d done and said to her. I kept on murmuring 'on bloody time' when I read that part. I really, really hope canon Hermione thinks the same, at least to treat Ron the way I told you before. “Thinking of you being in danger… I do not like it,” he admitted. “Vhat if I fail you?” Awww, that melted my heart, his need to protect her and not fail her. He's a keeper, definitely, and if Hermione dumps him at some point I'd certainly give him love. In that instant, Hermione realized that she’d made the best decision of her life when she’d decided to choose Viktor. It felt even better that she’d done so before seeing Ron revert back to his immature behavior. I cheered like the fan-girl I am when I read that part. You know my reasons well enough. Wasn’t it about time they explored a little more? Shouldn’t she show him what she was feeling? Shouldn’t she allow him to do the same? But of course it is. As I have already told you I know you will do it sweet and perfect for her, so it will be fine. She's about to turn eighteen, so I guess she's ready, and to be honest, she hasn't stopped to have feelings for him. I love this fic so much, I'll just copy it and paste it in book seven in order to make it canon for me. Thanks for writing it, Sun.

"Shouldn’t she show him what she was feeling? Shouldn’t she allow him to do the same?" 

Hell yes she should! With all due respect to your busy RL, remember your following, Sun, your fans!!!!!

OOOoooo hooo hooooo !!!  Right , RONALD, it's rather late for that!  That's so .. male, isn't it. It's like dogs peeing on fire hydrants!  Interested to see what Viktor vill do in retaliation!  The gloves are off - let the battle begin!

Arrgggghhhh.... c'mon Sun, don't DO this to us !  Ve are not amused!

Poor Viktor indeed, being so far apart and not able to do anything to change things.  Love your story, Sun, and vill do my best not to steal Viktor away ... yet!

*Vill consider taking him away from Hermy-own-ninny!!!* That most romantic evening and broomride !!! 

I haff to agree with Cocoachristy in that Hermy-own-ninny certainly had every right to feel special, and more so because Viktor was the one pursuing her! With Ron being so ... vat iz vord ... oblivious to her interest in him, it's only right that she should feel alive at Viktor's attentions! ;o)

Vell, eye think that Viktor has been quite the gentleman!  Smart boy to take it slow!

I'm so glad that she's chosen Viktor, he's so romantic.  I wonder what their mission is?  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Sounds like the next chapter is going to be pretty interesting. Or at least the part when they get back to Hermione's home. I don't blame her I'd be grining like a fool too and I wouldn't be suprised if Harry lets Vitya in on the whole "treasure hunt" thing. Can't wait for more!Brit

Wonderful, wonderful!

You know, I don't feel sorry for Ron, not even for five seconds. He messed up his chances with Hermione, and now he's paying his mistake. I think that when feelings are broken in that way you can just go and put the pieces together to feel the same again. Ron. She turned around to see him gazing at them through narrowed eyes. I couldn't refrain myself from thinking about the look he gives Harry in GoF when his name is out of the goblet. He looked rather nasty IMO. I bet that's the same look he gave Viktor and Hermione. She’d thought it was to make her jealous at first, which had worked, but then, she thought that maybe he simply liked what Lavender did for him. I agree completely, he kept his relationship with Lavender for a very long time. And sneaking in empty classrooms, I bet they even had a good grope. More than ever, Hermione wished that she’d carried on a bit more with Viktor. More than ever? Does that mean she had wished it before? Interesting... He was too far away to be serious competition, but if he visited her, she would see that Weasley was not for her. On bloody time, Viktor. I really hope to see this happening in canon. When Hermione gazed at Viktor, she saw the amusement in his eyes. Always a gentleman my sweet Viktor, he would have never reacted the way Ron did, even when the Weasel kissed Hermione in front of him. Well, it's just that Viktor is not a teen anymore, he's already a man, and a very confident one I might add. Gorgeous chapter, hon. I'm sorry it took me too long for writing the review, but you know I read it only minutes after it was posted. As I've already told you, from this point everything is fair game, no canon to bother with. I'm waiting so much for the next ones.