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Distance Between Us

1: The Way He Feels

2: The Way She Feels

3: Some Time Together

4: Time Apart

5: Learning the Truth

6: Being Honest

7: Working Things Out

8: Coming Together

Distance Between Us

Southern_Witch_69

68 Reviews   |   68 Ratings, 0 Likes, 48 Favorites )

Romance post-HBP/HBP compliant Hogwarts Castle 16,877 Words 8 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Viktor Krum

Viktor leaves Hogwarts with one witch on his mind. How does he feel? What are his intentions for the future?

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: The Way He Feels

Chapter 2: The Way She Feels

Chapter 3: Some Time Together

Chapter 4: Time Apart

Chapter 5: Learning the Truth

Chapter 6: Being Honest

Chapter 7: Working Things Out

Chapter 8: Coming Together


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Southern_Witch_69

Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.

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Reviews for Distance Between Us

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10/10

notsosaintly

I like the way you left it open.  The Voldemort thing aside, I can see Hermione and Viktor having a peaceful and loving life together. 

And, yay!  I finished a story!  Gosh, I feel so accomplished.  And satisfied.  I love ship hopping. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

Thanks for reading! *Appreciates!*I like it open, too. Gives people their own ideas. I'm inclined to agree with you (though they may part, leaving her open for Snape to slide in).Evil!SW

10/10

notsosaintly

Explore... have a good time... let the feelings run rampant...

Bugger Ron. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

*Nods a whole bunch*It'll be fun. :)

Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)

What?  To bugger Ron?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

Yes, we'll ask Firenze to do it, see. :)

Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)

Oooh... hot and sweaty centaur sex.  Well, that's a heck of a lot better than asking Hagrid to do it. 

I wonder how centaurs do it.  I mean do they ... those National Geographic shows are coming to mind.  I think we'll let Firenze and Ron go at it, but we won't watch.  Better that way.  Sort of like Snagrid.  Let 'em do it, but no peeking. 

10/10

notsosaintly

Well, at least Viktor saw that as Ron's jealousy and not something Hermione intentionally did.  It's always nice to date an older man.  (And not a Gryffindor.)

Well, now.  What's after this is all after HBP.  I'm looking forward to reading more!  

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

:) Glad you like it. I didn't lengthen it much more after that.

10/10

notsosaintly

Lack ... of ... communication.  Argh! 

*snicker* 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

Reading again? Yeehaw! It gets better. Really. LOL

Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)

I felt the need to read something for fun.  I'm on the next chapter already, but got waylaid.  (Story of my life.)

8/10

my little secret

I don't feel sorry for Ron.  He's a dolt.  LOL.Good chapter!  ~ jackie

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

Teehee. Thank you!

10/10

MagicAlly

Viktor vs Ron . . . erm . . . no contest really.  (Well at least I hope not).  Really looking forwards to the next chapter.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

snerk!

10/10

BeckiSoup

wow. i really love this story. victor's ready for battle for hermione? ron doesn't stand a chance, does he? i can't wait to see your next chapter!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

No, Ron certainly doesn't. :)

10/10

LeoAngeldust

I hate to say it but had I been there (or been Viktor) I would have been laughing outright at Ron's akwardness and Hermione's response to it. Espeically since Viktor is familiar with her parents. That just totally made my day after reading yet another sad novel. Can't wait for more, Brit

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

Thanks for commenting. I appreciate it.

10/10

cocoachristy

Great chapter. Hermione faces her feelings for both wizards. Now, she just has to determine which one she wants the most...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

thanks, doll

10/10

Amethystique

This is a real treat to read! The letter format and the conflicting POV make for a compelling read.  I could feel Viktors pain in this last chapter.  I enjoyed the trip to France and the romantic flight round the Eiffel Tower. Quite tooth achingly sweet in some parts but it's all good reading in my book!  I'm  eagerly anticipating the next chapter. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

Thanks for reading! It's much more fluffier than anything I've ever written. LOL! More up shortly.

10/10

cocoachristy

Awww, poor Viktor! He jumped to conclusions and didn't even ask Hermione! But, she seems mature enough to know how to handle it. Hope it works out!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

She'll come clean about some things in the next chapter.

10/10

Lorraine Bluestar

I have to confess I shed a tear for Viktor... ok, more than one tear. First his fear about losing her, then his pain and his broken heart. He’d tried his hand at seeing other women, but nobody had lips like Hermione’s or had eyes that lit up so expressively while reading. What he’d found in one hour with another couldn’t even compare with a minute of being with Hermione. One of the things I love very much about Viktor (or the image I have of him) is that he does things only when he means them, and that he doesn't do things by halves. When he told Hermione about his feeligs he really meant it and he won't change his mind so easily. And the way he kissed her and told her he still loves her... that was so beautiful. I think I will never thank you enough for this gorgeous fic. You're great, hon.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

You are very welcome, my dear. I'm simply happy that you like it. He won't give up on her just yet. Next chapter, she comes round and admits some things.

10/10

MagicAlly

This is heartbreaking, I hope they are together soon.  Wonerful story and I think I like this ship, especially the way  you write it.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

Thank you. I have the next chapter ready for uploading. Sort of. My beta still has it, but I'll post tonight.

10/10

LeoAngeldust

Heartwrnching! First you want to shed tears for Viktor's aching hear then you want to shed tears for Hermione... Can't wait for more. Brit

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

More up in just a bit. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate that. Cheers.

8/10

my little secret

Awww.... poor, crazy kids!  LOL.  Good chapter... looking forward to more!  ~ jackie

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

Thanks! I'll have more up shortly. Cheers!

10/10

Lorraine Bluestar

Poor Viktor, I can imagine how sad he feels about Hermione's decision, but he has to understand the situations. But he has a point, and through his pov he has very strong and legitimate reasons.I think there's something else to consider, her bond to Harry and Ron is too strong because, IMO, due to the kind of friendship they share, there are more important to each other than anything. The relationship of Harry with the Weasleys has been discussed thoroughly, but what about Hermione's relationship with Harry and the Weasleys? She lied to her parents in order to join the Weasleys, and she seems to spend more time with them than with her own family. He's right, it's different and her feelings are not the same, but there's a fact that he's not acknowledging, she's only sixteen. He's not doing it on purpose, he's measuring with his own feelings, which is quite normal, and he can't expect her to promise him undying love at sixteen. I love when Viktor knows what he wants by eighteen, and loves only Hermione because she's the one for him, but you can't expect the same from her. On the bright side, it was so cute that Hermione keeps clippings about him and worries about his safety while playing Quidditch, nice detail. Thanks for the update, and thanks for writing this pairing. Now I have to go and write some HG/SS because dear Severus is in risk of descending to a second place. Can I just have a tie?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

Poor Severus. He and I just had some drinks. He asked, "What are you and Lorraine doing? Making me second best to Krum? Hmph!"I felt badly for the bloke. LOL Things will be getting better for these two soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I truly appreciate the feedback. You've tagged Viktor spot on.

9/10

Ladykrum

Wow what a wonderful story. I going to keep on reading the next few chapters.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

Thanks for reading!

10/10

LeoAngeldust

Give me a minute to make my gut unclench...I agree with Viktor, it seems that Hermione's memories of Viktor have faded and god just thinking about the idea makes my heart ache. Perhaps Viktor will be doing something to refresh her memory?Brit

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)

I'll  reconcile them in two chapters.... sort of. All will be well soon. Thanks for reading.

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