Time Apart
Chapter 4 of 8
Southern_Witch_69Viktor and Hermione exchange letters and make plans. Have things changed? Will they get better or worse?
ReviewedDisclaimer: I've swiped a few characters that belong to J.K.R. I promise to send them home soon.
I'd like to thank CocoaChristy for giving this a read through.
Viktor,
Things are going well, and yes, I agree with you. I wish that we'd had more time to spend with each other in Paris. I've not told anyone here about our holidayvacation, and I hid the society page in the paper that mentioned seeing us walking through the streets. Luckily, the reporter didn't know my name. The picture was unmistakable though. I just don't think that the news would be well received at the moment, what with all of us supposedly being cautious with the war on. They'd think I'd been traipsing about carelessly. Anyway, I clipped the article and the picture and saved them with all of the other clippings that I have of you. I confess that I did put it under my pillow for the night, but I didn't want Ginny or Ron to see it.
Harry has finally made it here, and he's in a right foul mood. He's yelling a great deal and acts like Ron and I are to blame for most of his problems. Well, maybe I'm exaggerating a little. I know he's going through a lot, but I just wish he'd realize that we are on his side and will be with him until the end, doing what we must to help him.
I read that your team won yesterday in a great victory over your staunchest rivals. Caught the Snitch in the first eight minutes according to the reporter, eh?. That's great, Viktor. I do worry about you, though, and they said that you tried some new stunt, diving and circling and diving again. Do be careful on that broomstick. I know. You don't have to say it. You know what you're doing, and I should leave flying to the professionals.
I can still worry, can't I? It just shows that I care. Anyway, I read something fascinating in a new book that one of Ron's brothers left lying about. It's on a new broom that they are working on and want to have ready for the next Quidditch World Cup. I've duplicated it and attached it for your reading pleasure.
You may have already read it. If so, sorry! If not, enjoy. I'll have to go. Mrs. Weasley needs our help getting a few infested areas of the house cleaned up.
Love from,
Hermione
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Hermione,
The information you sent to me was very interesting. I admit that I did hear something about it, but I did not know the details, so sending it was the right thing to do.
Do not worry about me, my love. I have been flying since I could balance myself on a broom and feel as if I am part of the air when I fly. I will be all right. And, really, you should not always believe what you read. I am sure it wasn't that fantastic. I was just following the Snitch.
I have heard something terrible. I have heard that Harry Potter is telling lies about what he saw that night at the Triwizard Tournament. It was said that he is now lying about being attacked by dementors. What is going on, Hermione?
I do not believe that Harry would say or do this if it isn't true. I do not know him too well, but I like him and believe he has seen what he says. I cannot understand why people support him one day and turn away from him the next. If I could help you, I would.
I am sorry that I cannot say more, but my time is limited. Practice has been tripled for the next two weeks.
Love,
Viktor
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Viktor,
I am so happy that you believe in what Harry says. He's not lying. It's our Minister of Magic, Cornelius Fudge. He doesn't want to back Harry because he doesn't want the public to panic, and if the truth be known, I think he's trying to use this as a reason to make Dumbledore look bad. It seems that some people will believe anything that's written.
Like what that Skeeter woman did to us last year with her articles. She made you doubt my relationship with Harry with her foul lies. Well, now, other people like her are doing the same with Harry.
Something good happened, however, as he's been acquitted of any crimes and will be keeping his wand and going to school after all. There was a Squib that was nearby, and she saw what happened with Harry, his Patronus, and his cousin when the dementors went there. I am so glad that there was a witness. She at least felt them and knew what they were, foul creatures! I wanted to write sooner to tell you, but things have been going on here, not giving me much time.
You'll be happy to know, I hope, that I have been chosen as a Prefect this year. I am quite honored, but I had secretly hoped that I would be picked. What surprised me is that Ron has been picked as the other Prefect for our year. I would have thought that Harry would have gotten that honor. Oh, well, maybe it's just as well, what with all this other rubbish going on.
I must go and make sure that all of my things are together. We will be leaving for school soon. Viktor, I just wanted to let you know that this year won't be the same without you. Good luck in your coming game.
Love from,
Hermione
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Hermione,
I have not had time to reply to your last letter until now. I hope that my owl can find you before midnight so that I will not have missed your birthday. If this is too late, please forgive me. We have had many practices, and when we are done, I am usually only able to shower, eat, and sleep.
This was the first afternoon that I've had off in a long time where I could choose to do anything that I wished, so I went into town and bought this. When I saw the color of the Quill's feather, I had to think of you, for it matches the dress that you wore on our first date last year.
I love you, Hermione, and I wear small button that you bought me in Paris on my clothes for each game. It has been bringing me luck.
Happy birthday, number sixteen.
Love Always,
Viktor
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Viktor,
I love it! I'm sorry that I can't write more. It's quite late, and your owl demands a return now. It reached me in time.
Love,
Hermione
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Hermione,
My parents have decided to invite you and your family to our home for Christmas. We would like to show you our small town and show you how great Bulgaria can be.
I hope you like snow. There is a lot of it here, but we have much to occupy us. Maybe you can show me how to ski like Muggles do, and I will show you how a wizard plays in the snow. I am quite good at making ice art. I remember you saying that you do this skiing sport with your parents often. I hope I can show you a better time than they can.
Love always,
Viktor
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Viktor,
My parents agree that a skiing holiday would be nice. I look forward to seeing you again. I guess I'll just tell everyone that I'm going skiing with my folks. It wouldn't be a lie, now would it?
Always,
Hermione
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Hermione,
As I said in my last letter, I will use Portkeys to come to England and escort your family back here. It's unfortunate that you country does not allow for anyone to enter using flying carpets. We have one here that we use at times, and it would have been perfect. I think your parents would have enjoyed it. Unless they feel about flying as you do.
{~_~}
Laugh.
You know you want to.
I am so looking forward to being with you again.
Love always,
Viktor
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Viktor,
I am so very sorry, but we will not be able to go on holiday to visit your family. Something big has happened here with Harry and Ron's family. Ron's father, Mr. Weasley, was attacked by a snake and has been hospitalized. Dumbledore thinks that it would be good for me to go and spend time with them. They need all the support that they can get.
Everyone else is taking the Hogwarts Express, but I'll be using the Knight Bus to get to them. I cannot convey how sorry I am. I know you'll be disappointed, but you'll have to understand that I can't let them down. And, besides, my Head of House came to talk to me and explained that I might put my parents and your family in danger by going off on holiday like that.
I mean to say that if Arthur Weasley has been hurt, who knows what or whom it will happen to next? I couldn't bear any harm coming to you because of me. Please forgive me.
Sincerely,
Hermione
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Hermione,
I am greatly disappointed that you will not come to see me after the plans we've made. Have you so little faith in my ability to care for you and your family? My family would do anything to see that you are kept safe. They know how much I love you.
This hurts me. I cannot lie to you and say it does not. Some things do bother me. You keep our letters a secret. You fear that others will know about our trip to France. You did not want to say that you were coming to visit me for Christmas.
Are you ashamed of me?
Viktor
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Viktor,
No, please don't think that way. I swear that I'm not. I just thought that it would be easier on you and me if nobody knew about it. Ron, well, he's always been a bit touchy about me going on that date with you...not that he likes me at all, mind. No, it's more like a protective thing I suppose. The Weasley twins and Harry would likely tease me mercilessly. Ron's mum would have to chide them nonstop to keep things peaceful here. People at school would all be talking about me and asking questions.
I've never been really good with that sort of thing. I am sorry if I've hurt you. You are very important to me, and I will make it up to you when I can. Send your parents my regrets and best wishes for the season. One day things will be different. I can feel it.
Always,
Hermione
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Viktor read the last letter slowly for a second time. Things already did feel as if they were different. He would have gone to her immediately had she asked it of him, but she had not, wanting to help her two friends and their family instead. It was very disappointing to him. His love and memory had not faded, but with time, it seemed that hers had.
Southern's Notes: I didn't want to bore you with all the OotP details all over again. Sorry about that, but I think this is a good place to stop for now. Poor Viktor. Hermione couldn't invite him to headquarters because it's a secret place. I'm sure he'll understand that one day... soon. I'll have another installment up tomorrow evening. It will also have some letter exchanging, but also a bit of something else. Muahahaha!
Christy's Notes: That just goes to show how things can get misconstrued in writing. I think that because he couldn't see her face and hear the tone of her voice, he believed she is loosing her feelings for him. Poor Viktor, indeed!
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68 Reviews | 6.93/10 Average
Lovely Viktor/Hermione, which is always welcome! Thank you.
this is a great story. like your friend I truly enjoy this ship as well, but it is difficult to find multi-chapter well written stories. Thank you for this!
I enjoy Viktor/Hermione stories and this was very sweet. I'm glad that they are together and that Ron and Harry accept him.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
Thank you!
I'm sorry it's been so long since I replied but I just got the chance to read and review. I loved the chapter and I felt so overly happy seeing them come together like that in the end. You may not be a VK/HrG shipper but I must say you definatly know how to write it.Brit
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
Not a problem at all. I'm so happy that you enjoyed this. :)
That was a beautiful story. I loved your in depth exploration of the emotions involved and I'm a sucker for happy endings. Wonderful writing.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
Thanks, Ally. :)
I loved this story! The only thing wrong with it was that it was too short! I am typically Hermione/Snape, so I know many of your stories. Thanks for doing a great Viktor story too. After Snape, he is my fav for Hermione (my apologies to the Hermione/Ron shippers!).
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
You're very welcome. Thanks for reading. I'd o ther projects goin g, so I cut it a little short. Sorry about that. :)
I enjoyed your story and have started to follow some other Viktor/Hermione stories. I am still a Snape/Hermione shipper at heart, but my next choice would be Viktor. I liked the way you showed his personality, loyalty, maturity, patience, and love. I thought you also did a good job showing Hermione's ambivelance. Although I have not written many reviews, I am a great fan of your tales. I am not an author so I am not sure I am giving you the feedback you are looking for.And my personal rant: Why Rowling would pair Ron with Hermione boggles my mind. Looking back on couples from high school, the smart girls who married football players ended up divorced. Viktor is athletic and smart.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
I'm still an hg/ss, too. As far as Ron / Hermione... blah. No, say it ain't so! LOL
Yay, Sun! Too lovely, and although I'm not usually aboard the Great Ship HG/VK, I certainly enjoyed this little excursion! I see her with Viktor after the war, based on this fic, simply because it's nice to think of happily after after too! **hugs**
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
Thanks, sweetie!
This was a great chapter and the perfect ending to this story. I like the open-ending. Her first time was very realistic to me! Brava!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
Thanks, mate!
Poor Viktor. I have to admit, I'd rather see Hermione with Viktor than Ron. He just seems more her type. Since this is a HG/VK story, I will hang onto the hope that her feelings will strengthen with time.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
Same here.... damn Ron! lol
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
IMHO, Ron just gets in the bloody way,
"She smiled at the tall erection," huh? That made me smile. LOL I like this chapter. Pity that their vacation was so short!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
bwahahahahha
I sort of wish they were closer together as well. But distance can make the heart grow fonder.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
Nod. That's so true.
I like this side of Viktor, very sweet and gentlemanly. I have a greater respect for him now. ;)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
Thank you. It's how I see him. :)
I was sure I had already written my review for this chapter, but I didn't. Bad Lore... Hermione smiled as Viktor washed dishes the Muggle way, getting most of his shirt and trousers wet in the process. Simple, but still so cute. He accepts to do this simple things for her just because he knows about her parents being Muggles and all that. You know I loved that part with the kiss in the swing, I was squeeing like a mad fan-girl when you first showed it to me. It was sweet, romantic and he was a perfect gentleman, first when he asked if he could kiss her and later when he refused to touch her until things were settled between them. He was very clever with the way he managed things. Ron was finally treating her better. *Snort* He fancied her and wanted her to be his girl… sort of. He hadn’t made any declarations, but it was obvious that he assumed her to be his. That was very presumptuous from Ron if you ask me. Sometimes I feel he takes things for granted and that he doesn't have to make an effort fot her since she's his, and if she easily forgets about Lavender it will be worst. I wish that if Rowling decides to keep them together, at least Hermione gives Ron a lesson, and makes things difficult for him.“Thanks, Mum,” Hermione said, feeling as if things were clearer to her suddenly. I liked so much the conversation between Hermione and her mom because usually her parents are simply ignored. Well, Hermione seems to do that a bit in the books also... However, she's just a teen, and she needs to talk to her mother as much as any other girl her age. Being with Ron seemed to be what everyone expected: Harry and the Weasleys anyway. Too much had happened between them, what with the things he’d done and said to her. I kept on murmuring 'on bloody time' when I read that part. I really, really hope canon Hermione thinks the same, at least to treat Ron the way I told you before. “Thinking of you being in danger… I do not like it,” he admitted. “Vhat if I fail you?” Awww, that melted my heart, his need to protect her and not fail her. He's a keeper, definitely, and if Hermione dumps him at some point I'd certainly give him love. In that instant, Hermione realized that she’d made the best decision of her life when she’d decided to choose Viktor. It felt even better that she’d done so before seeing Ron revert back to his immature behavior. I cheered like the fan-girl I am when I read that part. You know my reasons well enough. Wasn’t it about time they explored a little more? Shouldn’t she show him what she was feeling? Shouldn’t she allow him to do the same? But of course it is. As I have already told you I know you will do it sweet and perfect for her, so it will be fine. She's about to turn eighteen, so I guess she's ready, and to be honest, she hasn't stopped to have feelings for him. I love this fic so much, I'll just copy it and paste it in book seven in order to make it canon for me. Thanks for writing it, Sun.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
LOL. It's great that you liked it so much. Thank you, doll. I'm so happy that you did.
"Shouldn’t she show him what she was feeling? Shouldn’t she allow him to do the same?"
Hell yes she should! With all due respect to your busy RL, remember your following, Sun, your fans!!!!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
LOL Thank you
OOOoooo hooo hooooo !!! Right , RONALD, it's rather late for that! That's so .. male, isn't it. It's like dogs peeing on fire hydrants! Interested to see what Viktor vill do in retaliation! The gloves are off - let the battle begin!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
Grin. Naughty, naughty
Arrgggghhhh.... c'mon Sun, don't DO this to us ! Ve are not amused!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
Ve luff Viktor, don't ve?
Poor Viktor indeed, being so far apart and not able to do anything to change things. Love your story, Sun, and vill do my best not to steal Viktor away ... yet!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
You're a doll, you know.
*Vill consider taking him away from Hermy-own-ninny!!!* That most romantic evening and broomride !!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
Thank you! :)
I haff to agree with Cocoachristy in that Hermy-own-ninny certainly had every right to feel special, and more so because Viktor was the one pursuing her! With Ron being so ... vat iz vord ... oblivious to her interest in him, it's only right that she should feel alive at Viktor's attentions! ;o)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
:) Thank you!
Vell, eye think that Viktor has been quite the gentleman! Smart boy to take it slow!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
Vu are right! :)
I'm so glad that she's chosen Viktor, he's so romantic. I wonder what their mission is? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
I wouldn't have it any other way (in this story anyway lol).
Sounds like the next chapter is going to be pretty interesting. Or at least the part when they get back to Hermione's home. I don't blame her I'd be grining like a fool too and I wouldn't be suprised if Harry lets Vitya in on the whole "treasure hunt" thing. Can't wait for more!Brit
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
Teehee! Thanks for reading.
You know, I don't feel sorry for Ron, not even for five seconds. He messed up his chances with Hermione, and now he's paying his mistake. I think that when feelings are broken in that way you can just go and put the pieces together to feel the same again. Ron. She turned around to see him gazing at them through narrowed eyes. I couldn't refrain myself from thinking about the look he gives Harry in GoF when his name is out of the goblet. He looked rather nasty IMO. I bet that's the same look he gave Viktor and Hermione. She’d thought it was to make her jealous at first, which had worked, but then, she thought that maybe he simply liked what Lavender did for him. I agree completely, he kept his relationship with Lavender for a very long time. And sneaking in empty classrooms, I bet they even had a good grope. More than ever, Hermione wished that she’d carried on a bit more with Viktor. More than ever? Does that mean she had wished it before? Interesting... He was too far away to be serious competition, but if he visited her, she would see that Weasley was not for her. On bloody time, Viktor. I really hope to see this happening in canon. When Hermione gazed at Viktor, she saw the amusement in his eyes. Always a gentleman my sweet Viktor, he would have never reacted the way Ron did, even when the Weasel kissed Hermione in front of him. Well, it's just that Viktor is not a teen anymore, he's already a man, and a very confident one I might add. Gorgeous chapter, hon. I'm sorry it took me too long for writing the review, but you know I read it only minutes after it was posted. As I've already told you, from this point everything is fair game, no canon to bother with. I'm waiting so much for the next ones.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Distance Between Us)
~sends hugs and kisses~ :)