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Burn Down The Mission
TeddyRadiator57 Reviews | 4.96/10 (57 Ratings, 0 Likes, 13 Favorites )
Seven years into Hermione Granger's tenure as Headmistress of Hogwarts, the castle will reveal a secret that changes everything she ever knew about it, the role of Head of Hogwarts, and herself. Written for LiveJournal's Summer 2014 SSHG_Promptfest.
Warning - this is not a story for snowflakes. Proceed at your own risk. You have been warned.
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Just a small town girl who loves HG/SS fanfiction. You can always find me at LiveJournal: http://teddyradiator.livejournal.com/ where I 'live' on the net.
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This story made me cry so much the first time I read it. It completely broke my heart
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
<3 {{{Hugs}}}
Response from Evalyn (Reviewer)
TeddyRadiator, you are probably my favorite author on different platforms for this fanfic genre, several of your stories seem to outshine the rest for me. Burn Down The Mission, was extremely well written and well thought out, which would not allow me to put it down. the awful situation the two find themselves in affected me for days after reading it, but that is a true testament to the writer, so thank you for sharing your gift online.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so very much for your kind words. I really needed to read them this morning. We lost our cat last night, and it's been a very bad night for us. Checking my emails and finding this beautiful note from you was such a balm on my heart. Thank you for taking the time to write me such an encouraging and supportive comment. <3
Sadness I read a sorry before and your comments said the longer the story the more likely for a happier ending... fooled again. 🙁
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I am sorry to disappoint you. :(
I saw it coming. Respectfully, I am concerned with this interpretation of Severus Snape. It was a well written story, if a little rushed, but I'm not sure I can reconcile SS as duplicitous as you've written him. With that said, I respect your interpretation of his character. I will cautiously read your other stories. Best of luck!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you for your review. I have given my reply a great deal of thought, as I don't wish it to appear rushed.
I write all my Snapes as ambiguous, intriguing, complex and yes, duplicitous as I want. Please keep that in mind as you "cautiously" proceed. If you're looking for one particular Snape to cleave to, I wish you well and hope that someday you find the exact characterization that suits you, whether it be amongst my stories or elsewhere on TPP. Best of luck.
Response from astrophilandstella (Reviewer)
By your biting remark, it seems I've offended you. As I said, it was a well written story and I respect your interpretation. One would hope you could be equally respectful of those who take the time to review and praise your work. Your well wishes are appreciated and returned. Cheers.
I'm only 7 months late in discovering this story. Ambiguity, that's a good word. Just how desperately did he want out of the mirror? Would he have said or done anything to secure his freedom? He could have explained his suspicions and reservations to Hermione, but he held his tongue. Maybe he hoped; had faith, that Hermione could accomplish the impossible. Reflecting back, [yeah, I just wrote that,] it might be that what Hermione saw in the mirror was the reverse of his true intentions. A most excellent story; it hurts my poor brain to contemplate all its possibilities.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much. I don't think I've ever had a story that made me question my own motives so much. Even to this day, I cannot say for certain even I know what really happened. But I truly thank you for understanding what I was trying to do here.
I appreciate the dark ending, and the power and darkness of the curse. It's a nice contrast to other stories (which I do love) where the happy endings suggest any magic is surmountable, reversible. Also love the way the plot shows the ambiguity of Snape's feelings and his selfishness. The ending made the characterizations so much more complex.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so very much. I can't tell you how happy you have made me! You hit every point I wanted to make, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it, in spite of the (not so happy) ending. I also love happily ever afters, but this story didn't have one, and I've been thrilled at the level of understanding I have received from most of the readers here.
Was. Not. Expecting. That. My emotions are rather reeling at the moment. Was it a good ending? Bad? Neither? Both, perhaps? When the Mirror of Erised appeared in the first book, I found it vaguely disturbing, though I never understood exactly why. Not until now, anyway. Reminds me rather of the Robert Frost poem, "Nothing gold can stay". But... somehow, this ending does seem fitting, in a dark manner. I, too, was/am a reader of King's "Dark Tower" series - my second husband was a fan and introduced me. That, too, had such an ending. I think leaving the ultimate question of parity unanswered actually does, in fact, answer it. Life is not fair. Happy endings usually happen in storybooks, romance novels and movies. The lot of the rest of us is far more mundane - yet, strangely, all the richer for it. Thank you.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments. It means the world to me that you have taken this story exactly as I meant it - that life isn't fair. The Dark Tower Series has haunted me for awhile now. I read it years ago and HATED it - simply loathed it. Right after I wrote this for the fest, my Muse started prodding me to read it again, and I fell totally in love with it, and I knew my Muse was telling me that I shouldn't feel like every story has to have a happy ending for happy endings' sake - that the story has to tell itself. I can't tell you how uplifted I am from your words. Ka is indeed a wheel, and that's really the moral of this story. Thank you, thank you.
Ah, alas. Well...I thought it was too tight and harsh a magic to break in their favor. But thank you for writing it anyway. I like to think of a future in which they are together.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Believe me, I never write them in anything other than happy ever after, but unfortunately this was the story I was given, and the ending it had. Thank you for reading.
This was beautifully written, and it hurt my heart.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you for reading!
Wow! I feel so sad for her, doubtful that he loves her. ... When Dumbles kept saying dig for it... i thought it was, dig up severus' grave for the 'Ashes' So when he dies she is still stuck in that mirror... until she can trick someone.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you for reading!
I should add, you know better than to mark this as 'Romance'. In this ship it's generally known that a Romance genre means HEA - or at least, a somewhat uplifting ending. This story should have a Trajedy warning. An author's note before the Epilogue is all well and good, but had this been marked Trajedy (and not had the Romance genre), I would have known to skip it since I avoid these types of stories. That wasn't clear in that author's note.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Yikes. Good story telling, as usual, but Snape's treachery against a woman he claims to love doesn't jive with this new fair and upright Severus that becomes a beloved Headmaster. I just can't reconcile it. It would have made sense only if he wasn't in love with her or had any genuine affection for her. That he would *deliberately* switch places with the woman he loves, be so monstrously selfish, begs a HUGE willing suspension of disbelief that that same man would go on to be some amazing paragon of goodness. Sorry Teddy, I don't buy it.
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Response from maria (Reviewer)
Typical of fandom authors these days. You answer reviews that positively GUSH, but anything that gives criticism (whether you feel it's constructive or not), you deliberately ignore. And it's not just mine that you ignored. Disappointing from you. And I stand by my review - having him be both capable of monstrous betrayal AND sudden amazing awesomeness is ridiculous, unless he has DID.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Severus Snape is a complex man who lived in a mirror for decades. It changed him in ways nobody knew. Publicly, he regained his status as an educator. Privately, he lived with the guilt of a cowardly choice. Believe it or not, lots of humans are like this. No one is all good or all evil. His ability to be seen as a great headmaster, combined with his secret guilt and shame - I can totally see it. I don’t understand why you are so angry about this, and cannot accept that this is my view of the character, but I cannot help you there.
You have your opinion of the story; I stand by my story. We will have to agree to disagree. Whether you are disappointed in me or not is immaterial. What did you want me to do? Change the story to meet your view of it? No. The story stands. I worked very hard on it, and I’m proud of it and feel I have a right to be so. Thank you for reading.
Oh wow, wow oh wow.I read this in one sitting glad, I did. Your writing is awesome Teddy.I went from the pinnacle of hope to crying in despair in a matter of sentences.I know I've asked this before but do you write professionally? I would buy your book(s).
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much! I do write professionally, and have just had a short story published in a small anthology from House of Erotica publishing called Complete Control. It is available on Amazon. I am also finishing my full length novel, which will be available near the end of the year. I really appreciate your amazing comments. Thank you a million times!
Hmmm. I'm all right with the fact that they've changed places. After all, Hermione's had a fairly good run (what other hills does she have to climb, after becoming Headmistress of Hogwarts), and she's not entirely dead yet. And Severus seems to have used his position as her successor to expiate the sins of his first term, and to do wonderful things for the school. What bothers me is Severus's perfidity. He's purposely hidden from her the fact that she can only save him at the cost of her own imprisonment, and he's not been honest about how painful that imprisonment really is. That seems, to me, to go against Severus's ideas of honor. And where is Aberforth, after? You'd think he'd at least feel sympathy for Hermione! But it's a beautifully written story, regardless of what I think of the ending. (As I get older, I increasingly find unhappy endings a cheap way of appearing to be a serious artist. But that's just me.) Congratulations on a thought-provoking ending.
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Response from amr (Reviewer)
There doesn't actually seem to *be* an author's response. Unless I'm missing something. Or if the lack of a response was somehow the point.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I didn't write this story lightly; I put a lot of thought into describing a complex character whose motives were opaque. Frankly, it has not been a story that appealed to everyone. But I am a fanfic writer blessed with many supportive followers. I don't feel the need to write unhappy endings just to bolster my cred, and to tell the truth, it felt insulting to be lumped in with anyone who would pull such a "cheap" ploy.
Response from amr (Reviewer)
That was rather insulting--I'm so sorry. I *really* didn't mean your story struck me as cheap; I was just musing about my own prejudice against unhappy endings, and the possibility of your reading it that way didn't occur to me. (I should not write meandering reviews late at night.) But you are a fabulous writer, and I love your stuff, although I review less than I should. I was just troubled that the punctiliously honorable Severus we all love would have condemned Hermione, a woman whom he cared for and who was trying desperately to save him, to mirror hell to save himself. But you dealt with his ambivalence and darkness beautifully, and conveyed his years of expiatory service to the school and the community so forcefully that when I reread it, you almost convinced me. Please forgive me. AMR
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I appreciate your honesty, and of course I completely accept your apology. Thank you for clearing up the misunderstanding and for your comments.
Oh my, oh my my my. What a beautiful chapter in a beautiful story. You are simply brilliant my lovely Teddyradiator!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Oh, thank you so very much! I really appreciate your lovely words.
So did not see that coming. My heart breaks, but it is mending. You write beautifully. It is just brilliant. I think there are too many happy stories in the world and one with a not-so-comfortable ending is needed now and again. Life is never like the story books and we would do well to remember that. Although I do wonder what would have happened if he'd placed the sword or a basilisk fang in front of the mirror for her use and they both attacked the mirror at the same time from opposite sides. What then? My heart won't let the stray thought rest;healing hurts. Cheers and great job so many levels.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much for your amazing comments. I will be totally honest and admit that thought never crossed my mind, but it probably should have crossed Hermione's. Wow. You have given me a lot of food for thought. Perhaps one day I will rewrite the ending and give this a try - you never know, it quite possibly would have worked! But I am very happy that regardless of the ending, you enjoyed it and it moved you. And thank you for being my Hermione. Perhaps if she had been thinking more with her head and not with her heart, this would have been the perfect solution. Thank you so much for that amazing solution. Now MY heart won't let that stray thought rest.
All I can say is .
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I'm very sorry. I looked exactly like that when I was writing it.
Well beside the fact that Severus Snape is apparently still alive, what will happen to Hermione that she will lose the job as Headmaster? That would make me crazy if I was Hermione. I hope it happens on good terms. Talk about someone walking over your grave! I'd need some wizarding xanex.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Yes, so do I.
The Book, The order of their names, Dumbledore's insistence, Bella's curse and Hermione's need to solve every puzzle. I could see a tragedy in the making and you nailed it. Completely owned it. So very beautiful and so very, very soul devouring. Well done. Take a bow, my friend. You certainly deserve it. Thank you for being brave enough...
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you very much. I really, really appreciate that.
I discovered this story only this evening while looking for something else. I'm so thrilled you've written it! Excellent work! More, please!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you!
Excellent and harrowing tale. I thought of a way of setting Hermione free, though; would have had some trouble sleeping otherwise. And no, I'm not saying.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Fair enough! Neither was my Muse.
awww hell!!! now i need a drink!! will they ever meet?teddy do did too good of job lol thanks.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you!
Sad but brilliant, Teddy and reminded me of The Lady of Shalott by Tennyson. I once had to write an essay on it and was fascinated with the mirror imagery. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece even with the poignant ending. I suppose the writing was on the wall when she discovered that he came after her in the role call of headmasters.Great stuff and trying not to be impatient but looking forward already to your next work.Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.PS. going to London soon to see Richard Armitage in The Crucible......Hubba,hubba.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Ooh, Richard Armitage - he's dead sexy! Awesome! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. A lot of people weren't too happy with it, but it seems to have found an understanding place here at TPP. I'm not sure what's on the cards next. I'm desperately trying to finish my original novel, and that seems to be taking up the majority of my writing time. We'll see.
Noooo! Lol that was not a ending I was expecting. As usual im never disappointed by your stories !
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much! I hoped many would understand that this was the only ending this story had, as hard as it was to write.
Life doesn't always have happy endings - really enjoyed this and shed a few tears
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much. I am so glad you enjoyed it. It was not easy to write this ending, but I truly do appreciate it when readers understand that basic fact: life doesn't always have happy endings. I promise my next fic will have one! ;)