Three
Chapter 3 of 6
TeddyRadiatorSeven years into Hermione Granger's tenure as Headmistress of Hogwarts, the castle will reveal a secret that changes everything she ever knew about it, the role of Head of Hogwarts, and herself. Written for LiveJournal's Summer 2014 SSHG_Promptfest.
Warning - this is not a story for snowflakes. Proceed at your own risk. You have been warned.
ReviewedStill in shock she might be, but Hermione was not sufficiently addled that she did not know Dark Magic when she saw it. She cast spell after spell over the mirror, but it revealed nothing more than the wizard reflected in it. He suffered her diagnostics with only a hint of impatience. "Who created you?" she demanded, casting the Veritas spell commonly used on inanimate objects.
He seemed pleased and confused at once. "Well, well. Hermione Granger...that little Muggleborn girl with her hand in the air, So you're Headmistress now. What happened, did Minerva die in the battle as well? Candidates a bit thin on the ground?"
Her desire to understand what she was seeing fought a brief skirmish with the temptation to tell him to stuff it. "Minerva retired seven years ago and is in excellent health, thank you very much. But you...you died! I was there." She cursed herself silently. Even now, this wizard could reduce her to a babbling fourth-year. "Two different Death Eaters testified they'd burned your body."
Snape imperiously crossed his arms over his chest. "And you took the word of Death Eaters? How trusting you are." He snorted. "Did anyone bother to check if the ashes were actually mine?"
That derailed her. She had been told the ashes were Snape's remains, but ...
Snape gave her the I-thought-so sneer she had grown to hate in her six years under his tutelage. "And you were supposed to be the bright one."
"Oh, yeah?" she challenged, feeling at once irritated and excited. "I'm not the one trapped in a mirror, wonder boy." She paused, a thrill racing through her. "Although it has done wonders for your looks. You haven't aged a day."
"What do you mean?" He walked closer, as if the mirror were a window he could look through. He peered at her carefully, as if truly seeing her for the first time. "How old are you?" he demanded.
"Didn't anyone ever tell you it's rude to ask a witch her age?" she shot back, but her heart was clipping along in a most un-aggravated way. Bickering with Snape was probably the most exhilarating thing she had done in twenty years. "If you must know, I'm forty-five this coming September."
Snape stared at her, his dark eyes huge with shock. He looked poleaxed. "Forty-five?" he whispered, his eyes drinking in the sight of her. "Aberforth, why didn't you tell me?"
Hermione turned to the older man. "Tell him what?"
"That so much time had passed," Snape answered, his face twisted with confusion and something much harder to define. The excitement died in her breast. His eyes met hers, stripped of his usual brittle coldness. They were large and dark and achingly vulnerable. They made him look even younger. In a low, small voice, he whispered, "Has it really been so long?"
They both turned to Aberforth, who sighed heavily. He grabbed the third whisky-filled glass and placed it on the table, where it reflected in the mirror. "Sit down, both of you. This will take a while."
Hermione sent her Patronus to inform Dave and her house-elf Toidle she would be gone from the castle for the rest of the evening, and made herself as comfortable as possible on the ratty old chair. In spite of his obvious discomfort at her scrutiny, she could not take her eyes off the man in the mirror. She was still not one hundred-percent convinced this was the actual Severus Snape (Never trust anything if you can't see where it keeps its brain) but her gut told her she was in the presence of her former professor.
It disturbed her that, while time had stood still for him, he bore so little resemblance to the man she held in her memory. His teeth were just as crooked, his hair just as unkempt, his complexion just as sallow as she remembered. His clothing was of the finest quality, a deep black wool robe with his trademark buttons marching in an orderly line from throat to hem. The style had been quite fashionable in the years following the war but it now looked dated, like an old photograph. It was rather rumpled, and looked damp in places, especially around his neck. There was a bandage around his throat that looked freshly applied.
He was slim and wiry, and still carried himself very stiffly, as if he distained being touched by the world. With the twenty-twenty vision of maturity, Hermione realised it was all a trick. These weren't merely physical ticks and idiosyncrasies wrapped up in a never-changing costume. They were props to hide behind.
Where she had only seen and remembered defiance and anger, she now saw fear and a sorrow that went deep, down to the bone. It had always been there; she just had not known what she was looking at. He was still severe-looking, even ugly, but knowing him as she now did, she could not help but combine the individual, unattractive ingredients and find the completed product altogether ... fascinating. He looked like a creature out of time, a statue in a show window, or a very old Muggle photograph...both untouchable and heartbreakingly real.
She stared at him so hard he grew skittish, so she looked away to give them both some breathing room. That seemed to relax him a little, and he took a sip from the glass of whisky reflected in the mirror, grimacing at its appalling taste. Hermione quickly looked back to the one on the table; it had not moved.
"Yeah, he can use the objects reflected in the mirror," Aberforth said, as if she had voiced some challenge about it. "If I place books there, he can read 'em. If I place food or drink, he can consume 'em."
"How did you come to be in ... possession of this mirror, Mr. Dumbledore?" Hermione asked.
Aberforth filled his own glass, and sat down heavily on an old ladderback chair. "Ariana found him. It was during the battle, and I just happened to come up here and saw her. She was frightened and obviously upset. Somethin' going on in that Room at Hogwarts."
He nodded toward the portrait's door. "I went in, and the Fiendfyre had just about gutted it. You could barely see for the smoke. I heard... somethin'. That's when I found him."
Hermione shook her head in amazement. "We were there as well. Vince Crabbe started the fire. It eventually killed him. We barely made it out in time ourselves." She turned to Severus, who was obviously not enjoying being spoken about as if he were not in the room. As he listened to the conversation with wary, hooded eyes, she asked, "Who did this to you, Professor?"
He was quiet for a moment. "I don't know. I remember being attacked by the snake. I remember you and Potter, and giving him some memories. Then I must have lost consciousness, because the next thing I knew I was in here, and the mirror was surrounded by fire."
"Do you remember everything else? Your life before that night?"
It seemed to be on the tip of his tongue to reply with a remark that would leave the air sizzling with emotion, but he stopped himself. "I remember everything, Headmistress," he answered, using his honeyed voice to convey all that his words could not.
Hermione regarded him thoughtfully. Just as time had given her better insight into her former professor's personality, it had also eroded his ability to obfuscate undetected. He was telling a version of the truth, but not all of it.
She turned back to Aberforth. "So you saved him from being destroyed. What I don't understand is why you didn't let anyone know?"
"Wasn't my secret to tell."
"But─"
"Why should I? So the Ministry, in their wisdom, could vilify the boy in a trial that would have put a three-ring circus to shame?" The look he gave her would have made milk curdle. "Do you think they would have passed up an opportunity to make a spectacle of him? There's many a wizard would have paid to see them destroy this mirror with him in it. They would have sold tickets and claimed it was for war reparation."
Hermione opened her mouth to protest, then thought better of it. In the days that followed the final battle, passions were running high and wild. It wasn't outside the realm of reason that the Ministry would have found Severus Snape a particularly useful scapegoat on which to hang their grief and thirst for vengeance against Voldemort and his Death Eaters.
"You...you could have brought him to Hogwarts," she replied lamely.
Aberforth snorted in derision. "Oh, yes. That's the perfect place for him! And let my brother start influencin' you all on how to take care of him? Severus would've ended up like some sort of exhibit, paraded out every year like a freak at a fun-fair! How long would he have lasted? There's a lot of rocks at Hogwarts and a lot of orphans looking to blame someone."
Snape scoffed, "Don't be so sodding melodramatic, Aberforth. You know that doesn't work."
Hermione looked at Snape. "What doesn't work?"
For the first time, he did not bother to hide his discomfort. "When I first realised my ... situation, I agreed with Aberforth. While my life has never been very pleasant, I had some small degree of autonomy. I was mobile, at least." He looked around at his environment. "I am trapped in a mirror, Headmistress Granger. I cannot live and I cannot die, and most of all, I cannot escape. I surmised that death was preferable to this half-life."
The words were spoken dispassionately, but Hermione's heart ached for him. "You thought by breaking the mirror, you could free yourself. One way or another."
He nodded in acknowledgement. "Since I had no idea what would happen, I decided to take back whatever control I could. Anything was preferable to this...even death. So, at my insistence, Aberforth tried to break the mirror."
"What happened?"
"Nothin'," Aberforth answered morosely. "I tried every spell I knew. I hit it with everything I could get my hands on. They all just deflected off the damn thing. I even tossed it down the stairs. It just bounced."
"And I'm afraid all I got was a bloody nose and a bruised arse for his troubles," Snape interjected ruefully. "Aberforth brought me every book he could find that might shed some light on how to break the spell, but I found nothing. This is where I am, and apparently, this is where I will remain."
Something did not add up. Oh, a lot of things did not add up, but the most telling was Snape himself. When he spoke those words, there was no bitterness, no sadness, no defiance, no resignation, either. If anything, he seemed accepting of his fate...almost serene. The prospect of eternity locked in a mirror held no more pain for him. Hermione did not know whether to admire or pity him.
In any case, Hogwarts wouldn't be headed by a mirror. "You may well accept your situation, Professor, but I don't." Hermione stood. "I have the wealth of Hogwarts' extensive library behind me, and now that I'm Head, I have even more resources. We'll find a way."
Aberforth looked sad but resigned. "I knew the moment you found out, you'd start bossin' him around." He looked at Snape beseechingly. "It's your life, Severus. Say the word, and you'll not move from this room, no matter what Miss High and Mighty says."
"Mr. Dumbledore, I don't think..."
"You're safe here. Don't you know what will happen when the Wizarding world finds out about you? You can't believe she can protect you."
"Now you listen to me, Aberforth Dumbledore," Hermione said, her temper boiling into anger. "The last person who underestimated my ability to protect a secret found the word 'SNEAK' written across her face in purple zits, and twenty-eight years later she's still trying to get rid of them. I don't need you, nor anyone else, to tell me how sensitive this is."
Snape was watching her carefully. His neutral expression revealed very little, but Hermione wanted to believe she saw hope in his dark eyes. When Aberforth tried to respond, she held up her hand.
"I have reasons of my own for wanting to free Professor Snape, and I'm not going to let anyone harm or harass him in the process. Your help in the matter is preferable than going forward without it."
For a moment, the room was silent. Then Snape said, "Aberforth, would you please give me a moment alone with Headmistress Granger?"
The old man shot Hermione a warning look, but finally turned and left the room. The door shut softly behind him, and they both waited until they heard Aberforth's heavy tread lumbering down the stairs.
Alone, Hermione turned back to her former Professor, who was studying her intently.
"I have only one thing to ask you, Professor," she began, and was a little surprised when he chuckled. His features did not soften with mirth like most; if anything he seemed harder, more inflexible. He appraised her coolly.
"Just the one? You have grown up, Miss Granger," he replied.
"Don't be an arse," she shot back. "I need to know: do you want to be free? Is that why Mr. Dumbledore is so reluctant? Have you expressed the desire to remain where you are?"
He rolled his eyes impatiently. "What a ridiculous question! Of course I want to be free!" he growled, with a tint of resentment in his voice. "Aberforth is a good enough host. He saved my life. He made me welcome here, and I've been as content as a wizard trapped in a mirror can be.
"Had fate been different, perhaps I would be an exhibition piece in Hogwarts. Perhaps I would have gone mad from the isolation and loneliness. He saved me from that as well."
Hermione felt her face flush. This time Snape's features did soften. "He's also a very solitary man with no one but goats for company. I've been a captive audience for twenty years. Not that I have any right to complain," he added. "All things considered, it could have been worse."
He met her eyes with his. "Even trapped here, I am aware of my environs. As Aberforth hinted, I can eat and drink, and interact with the reflections behind me. I also feel the changes in temperature." He looked away pointedly. "I'm the one Aberforth heard in the Room of Requirement. I was screaming for help... the reflection of the flames, you see ..."
Hermione's hands flew to her face in surprise. "Oh, dear gods, it must have been awful."
He regarded her with a singular quirk of his brow. "You have a most un-Gryffindorish gift for understatement."
She found herself smiling at him, and wonder of wonders, he smirked back. "So, Headmistress Granger, where do we go from here? Admittedly there is little I can do to stop you, but I think I at least deserve to know your intentions for the outcome."
"I am going to make sure you are the next Headmaster of Hogwarts."
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57 Reviews | 4.96/10 Average
This story made me cry so much the first time I read it. It completely broke my heart
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
<3 {{{Hugs}}}
Response from Evalyn (Reviewer)
TeddyRadiator, you are probably my favorite author on different platforms for this fanfic genre, several of your stories seem to outshine the rest for me. Burn Down The Mission, was extremely well written and well thought out, which would not allow me to put it down. the awful situation the two find themselves in affected me for days after reading it, but that is a true testament to the writer, so thank you for sharing your gift online.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so very much for your kind words. I really needed to read them this morning. We lost our cat last night, and it's been a very bad night for us. Checking my emails and finding this beautiful note from you was such a balm on my heart. Thank you for taking the time to write me such an encouraging and supportive comment. <3
Sadness I read a sorry before and your comments said the longer the story the more likely for a happier ending... fooled again. 🙁
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I am sorry to disappoint you. :(
I saw it coming. Respectfully, I am concerned with this interpretation of Severus Snape. It was a well written story, if a little rushed, but I'm not sure I can reconcile SS as duplicitous as you've written him. With that said, I respect your interpretation of his character. I will cautiously read your other stories. Best of luck!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you for your review. I have given my reply a great deal of thought, as I don't wish it to appear rushed.
I write all my Snapes as ambiguous, intriguing, complex and yes, duplicitous as I want. Please keep that in mind as you "cautiously" proceed. If you're looking for one particular Snape to cleave to, I wish you well and hope that someday you find the exact characterization that suits you, whether it be amongst my stories or elsewhere on TPP. Best of luck.
Response from astrophilandstella (Reviewer)
By your biting remark, it seems I've offended you. As I said, it was a well written story and I respect your interpretation. One would hope you could be equally respectful of those who take the time to review and praise your work. Your well wishes are appreciated and returned. Cheers.
I'm only 7 months late in discovering this story. Ambiguity, that's a good word. Just how desperately did he want out of the mirror? Would he have said or done anything to secure his freedom? He could have explained his suspicions and reservations to Hermione, but he held his tongue. Maybe he hoped; had faith, that Hermione could accomplish the impossible. Reflecting back, [yeah, I just wrote that,] it might be that what Hermione saw in the mirror was the reverse of his true intentions. A most excellent story; it hurts my poor brain to contemplate all its possibilities.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much. I don't think I've ever had a story that made me question my own motives so much. Even to this day, I cannot say for certain even I know what really happened. But I truly thank you for understanding what I was trying to do here.
I appreciate the dark ending, and the power and darkness of the curse. It's a nice contrast to other stories (which I do love) where the happy endings suggest any magic is surmountable, reversible. Also love the way the plot shows the ambiguity of Snape's feelings and his selfishness. The ending made the characterizations so much more complex.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so very much. I can't tell you how happy you have made me! You hit every point I wanted to make, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it, in spite of the (not so happy) ending. I also love happily ever afters, but this story didn't have one, and I've been thrilled at the level of understanding I have received from most of the readers here.
Was. Not. Expecting. That. My emotions are rather reeling at the moment. Was it a good ending? Bad? Neither? Both, perhaps? When the Mirror of Erised appeared in the first book, I found it vaguely disturbing, though I never understood exactly why. Not until now, anyway. Reminds me rather of the Robert Frost poem, "Nothing gold can stay". But... somehow, this ending does seem fitting, in a dark manner. I, too, was/am a reader of King's "Dark Tower" series - my second husband was a fan and introduced me. That, too, had such an ending. I think leaving the ultimate question of parity unanswered actually does, in fact, answer it. Life is not fair. Happy endings usually happen in storybooks, romance novels and movies. The lot of the rest of us is far more mundane - yet, strangely, all the richer for it. Thank you.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments. It means the world to me that you have taken this story exactly as I meant it - that life isn't fair. The Dark Tower Series has haunted me for awhile now. I read it years ago and HATED it - simply loathed it. Right after I wrote this for the fest, my Muse started prodding me to read it again, and I fell totally in love with it, and I knew my Muse was telling me that I shouldn't feel like every story has to have a happy ending for happy endings' sake - that the story has to tell itself. I can't tell you how uplifted I am from your words. Ka is indeed a wheel, and that's really the moral of this story. Thank you, thank you.
Ah, alas. Well...I thought it was too tight and harsh a magic to break in their favor. But thank you for writing it anyway. I like to think of a future in which they are together.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Believe me, I never write them in anything other than happy ever after, but unfortunately this was the story I was given, and the ending it had. Thank you for reading.
This was beautifully written, and it hurt my heart.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you for reading!
Wow! I feel so sad for her, doubtful that he loves her. ... When Dumbles kept saying dig for it... i thought it was, dig up severus' grave for the 'Ashes' So when he dies she is still stuck in that mirror... until she can trick someone.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you for reading!
I should add, you know better than to mark this as 'Romance'. In this ship it's generally known that a Romance genre means HEA - or at least, a somewhat uplifting ending. This story should have a Trajedy warning. An author's note before the Epilogue is all well and good, but had this been marked Trajedy (and not had the Romance genre), I would have known to skip it since I avoid these types of stories. That wasn't clear in that author's note.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Yikes. Good story telling, as usual, but Snape's treachery against a woman he claims to love doesn't jive with this new fair and upright Severus that becomes a beloved Headmaster. I just can't reconcile it. It would have made sense only if he wasn't in love with her or had any genuine affection for her. That he would *deliberately* switch places with the woman he loves, be so monstrously selfish, begs a HUGE willing suspension of disbelief that that same man would go on to be some amazing paragon of goodness. Sorry Teddy, I don't buy it.
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Response from maria (Reviewer)
Typical of fandom authors these days. You answer reviews that positively GUSH, but anything that gives criticism (whether you feel it's constructive or not), you deliberately ignore. And it's not just mine that you ignored. Disappointing from you. And I stand by my review - having him be both capable of monstrous betrayal AND sudden amazing awesomeness is ridiculous, unless he has DID.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Severus Snape is a complex man who lived in a mirror for decades. It changed him in ways nobody knew. Publicly, he regained his status as an educator. Privately, he lived with the guilt of a cowardly choice. Believe it or not, lots of humans are like this. No one is all good or all evil. His ability to be seen as a great headmaster, combined with his secret guilt and shame - I can totally see it. I don’t understand why you are so angry about this, and cannot accept that this is my view of the character, but I cannot help you there.
You have your opinion of the story; I stand by my story. We will have to agree to disagree. Whether you are disappointed in me or not is immaterial. What did you want me to do? Change the story to meet your view of it? No. The story stands. I worked very hard on it, and I’m proud of it and feel I have a right to be so. Thank you for reading.
Oh wow, wow oh wow.I read this in one sitting glad, I did. Your writing is awesome Teddy.I went from the pinnacle of hope to crying in despair in a matter of sentences.I know I've asked this before but do you write professionally? I would buy your book(s).
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much! I do write professionally, and have just had a short story published in a small anthology from House of Erotica publishing called Complete Control. It is available on Amazon. I am also finishing my full length novel, which will be available near the end of the year. I really appreciate your amazing comments. Thank you a million times!
Hmmm. I'm all right with the fact that they've changed places. After all, Hermione's had a fairly good run (what other hills does she have to climb, after becoming Headmistress of Hogwarts), and she's not entirely dead yet. And Severus seems to have used his position as her successor to expiate the sins of his first term, and to do wonderful things for the school. What bothers me is Severus's perfidity. He's purposely hidden from her the fact that she can only save him at the cost of her own imprisonment, and he's not been honest about how painful that imprisonment really is. That seems, to me, to go against Severus's ideas of honor. And where is Aberforth, after? You'd think he'd at least feel sympathy for Hermione! But it's a beautifully written story, regardless of what I think of the ending. (As I get older, I increasingly find unhappy endings a cheap way of appearing to be a serious artist. But that's just me.) Congratulations on a thought-provoking ending.
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Response from amr (Reviewer)
There doesn't actually seem to *be* an author's response. Unless I'm missing something. Or if the lack of a response was somehow the point.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I didn't write this story lightly; I put a lot of thought into describing a complex character whose motives were opaque. Frankly, it has not been a story that appealed to everyone. But I am a fanfic writer blessed with many supportive followers. I don't feel the need to write unhappy endings just to bolster my cred, and to tell the truth, it felt insulting to be lumped in with anyone who would pull such a "cheap" ploy.
Response from amr (Reviewer)
That was rather insulting--I'm so sorry. I *really* didn't mean your story struck me as cheap; I was just musing about my own prejudice against unhappy endings, and the possibility of your reading it that way didn't occur to me. (I should not write meandering reviews late at night.) But you are a fabulous writer, and I love your stuff, although I review less than I should. I was just troubled that the punctiliously honorable Severus we all love would have condemned Hermione, a woman whom he cared for and who was trying desperately to save him, to mirror hell to save himself. But you dealt with his ambivalence and darkness beautifully, and conveyed his years of expiatory service to the school and the community so forcefully that when I reread it, you almost convinced me. Please forgive me. AMR
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I appreciate your honesty, and of course I completely accept your apology. Thank you for clearing up the misunderstanding and for your comments.
Oh my, oh my my my. What a beautiful chapter in a beautiful story. You are simply brilliant my lovely Teddyradiator!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Oh, thank you so very much! I really appreciate your lovely words.
So did not see that coming. My heart breaks, but it is mending. You write beautifully. It is just brilliant. I think there are too many happy stories in the world and one with a not-so-comfortable ending is needed now and again. Life is never like the story books and we would do well to remember that. Although I do wonder what would have happened if he'd placed the sword or a basilisk fang in front of the mirror for her use and they both attacked the mirror at the same time from opposite sides. What then? My heart won't let the stray thought rest;healing hurts. Cheers and great job so many levels.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much for your amazing comments. I will be totally honest and admit that thought never crossed my mind, but it probably should have crossed Hermione's. Wow. You have given me a lot of food for thought. Perhaps one day I will rewrite the ending and give this a try - you never know, it quite possibly would have worked! But I am very happy that regardless of the ending, you enjoyed it and it moved you. And thank you for being my Hermione. Perhaps if she had been thinking more with her head and not with her heart, this would have been the perfect solution. Thank you so much for that amazing solution. Now MY heart won't let that stray thought rest.
All I can say is .
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I'm very sorry. I looked exactly like that when I was writing it.
Well beside the fact that Severus Snape is apparently still alive, what will happen to Hermione that she will lose the job as Headmaster? That would make me crazy if I was Hermione. I hope it happens on good terms. Talk about someone walking over your grave! I'd need some wizarding xanex.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Yes, so do I.
The Book, The order of their names, Dumbledore's insistence, Bella's curse and Hermione's need to solve every puzzle. I could see a tragedy in the making and you nailed it. Completely owned it. So very beautiful and so very, very soul devouring. Well done. Take a bow, my friend. You certainly deserve it. Thank you for being brave enough...
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you very much. I really, really appreciate that.
I discovered this story only this evening while looking for something else. I'm so thrilled you've written it! Excellent work! More, please!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you!
Excellent and harrowing tale. I thought of a way of setting Hermione free, though; would have had some trouble sleeping otherwise. And no, I'm not saying.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Fair enough! Neither was my Muse.
awww hell!!! now i need a drink!! will they ever meet?teddy do did too good of job lol thanks.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you!
Sad but brilliant, Teddy and reminded me of The Lady of Shalott by Tennyson. I once had to write an essay on it and was fascinated with the mirror imagery. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece even with the poignant ending. I suppose the writing was on the wall when she discovered that he came after her in the role call of headmasters.Great stuff and trying not to be impatient but looking forward already to your next work.Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.PS. going to London soon to see Richard Armitage in The Crucible......Hubba,hubba.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Ooh, Richard Armitage - he's dead sexy! Awesome! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. A lot of people weren't too happy with it, but it seems to have found an understanding place here at TPP. I'm not sure what's on the cards next. I'm desperately trying to finish my original novel, and that seems to be taking up the majority of my writing time. We'll see.
Noooo! Lol that was not a ending I was expecting. As usual im never disappointed by your stories !
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much! I hoped many would understand that this was the only ending this story had, as hard as it was to write.
Life doesn't always have happy endings - really enjoyed this and shed a few tears
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much. I am so glad you enjoyed it. It was not easy to write this ending, but I truly do appreciate it when readers understand that basic fact: life doesn't always have happy endings. I promise my next fic will have one! ;)