Two
Chapter 2 of 6
TeddyRadiatorSeven years into Hermione Granger's tenure as Headmistress of Hogwarts, the castle will reveal a secret that changes everything she ever knew about it, the role of Head of Hogwarts, and herself. Written for LiveJournal's Summer 2014 SSHG_Promptfest.
Warning - this is not a story for snowflakes. Proceed at your own risk. You have been warned.
ReviewedAgain, thanks and a big bowl of Magic Cookie Bar Ice Cream to Stgulik, who is the best beta/editor there is. I own none of these characters; Harry Potter characters are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No profit is being made, and no copyright infringement is intended.
"Hermione, my dear! What a nice surprise!"
"Nice my apple," Hermione said, with a laugh. "I can see the wheels turning, Minerva. You're all smiles and 'what a nice surprise!' but you're really trying to figure a way to rig your Floo network so it will always be engaged when I try to contact you."
"Oh, I'm sure I'll find a way eventually." Professor McGonagall's ember-wreathed face smiled. "To be honest, I'm surprised I don't hear from you more often. Knowing how much Albus and Phineas love to meddle, I felt sure you'd be calling on me every other day to find out how to shut them up."
"Well, I ... now that you mentioned it, how do you shut them up?"
Minerva laughed. "You know very well you can't. You'll eventually learn to tune them out. Now," she continued, making herself comfortable. "What brings you to my hearth this fine day?"
Moments later, she was no longer laughing. As Hermione told her about the Book of Heads and her conversations with the two portraits, Minerva grew pensive. "Hermione, are you sure about Severus' name?"
"Absolutely," Hermione said emphatically. "Didn't you notice..."
"It's just that, while I was there, Severus' name wasn't. In the book, I mean." Minerva's voice was hushed, but excited. "Don't you see, Hermione? I think this means that Severus is alive after all!"
Hermione rocked back. "How is it that he was nowhere to be seen until yesterday?"
"When was the last time you checked the Book?"
"Well, I ..." Hermione frowned. She felt rather foolish admitting she'd never had the courage to look.
"It doesn't really matter, you know. The real rub is that it's there now." Minerva looked contemplative. "Wherever he is, perhaps he's lost. And you're going to find him."
~o0o~
When Hermione had first come to Hogwarts as a child, it had all seemed so simple: incantations, spells, wand-waving, potions making. Hogwarts had been mother and father; it had given her everything she needed, and now she felt this deeply intense obligation to the castle. It needed Snape, and it was her duty to find him. She owed the castle that much.
Perhaps this was why so few Heads married; Hogwarts gave them everything they needed to feel loved and cherished. Had her poor, doomed Professor felt any of that support and love while he made his lonely way through the last year of his life? She truly hoped so, for his sake.
She spent the next several days looking into every possible lead on Severus Snape she could find. Together and separately, they didn't add up to much. It was one thing to suspect he was alive, but no magic spell or charm or incantation could find a trace of him, living or otherwise. Even more frustrating was trying to speak to someone about him. The subject of Professor Snape was still very touchy. Many, like the Bloody Baron, would not answer any question that carried the merest hint of Snape.
Making her way down the stairs, Hermione stopped at the gargoyle standing guard at the entrance to her study. When Hermione had first become head, she had watched in bemusement as Minerva's gargoyle Bertram stepped down from his perch, and her new guard stiffly saluted the old sentry before ceremoniously taking his place. His name, he had announced with a dignified bow, was Dave. Over the years, Hermione had grown to like him very much.
"Dave," she announced, "I'm going for a little walk around the castle. If anyone needs me, send word with Toidle."
The stone monster nodded with a scrape of granite. "Yes, Headmistress," he rumbled, his voice as deep and heavy as the rock that had once encased him, before some long-ago magical sculptor chiseled him out of it.
Hermione took several steps, then turned back. "Dave, does each Head have their own unique guard?"
"I have stood here before."
Surprised, Hermione pressed, "For whom?"
The stone warrior raised his lichen-stubbled chin. "For the one who was and was not. The dark and the vanquished one. The one who came before his time, and was taken before his hour. The forsaken one, the shamed one. I could not protect him from himself." He bowed his head low. "They say he disgraced his post, that he deserted the castle in its hour of need. I do not believe that."
Hermione's heart clipped along a little faster. "You were Professor Snape's guard?"
"I was, Headmistress, aye. He was a wizard of honour," the gargoyle added. "And I was proud to have been chosen by my brothers to serve him."
"How many gargoyles─ I mean, how many of your brothers guard the castle?"
His hard face creased into a frown of concentration. "My brothers numbered six hundred and seventy-one before the Great Battle. We number four hundred and eighty-three today."
For a moment, they stood together, in silent tribute for his slain brothers. It had appalled Hermione to know that Hogwarts lost more magical creatures in that final battle than actual Wizarding folk.
"I'm sorry so many of your brothers perished."
Dave regarded her with his stony stare. "We are the still warriors. We serve the castle. We defend it." There was pride and sadness in his tone. "How much more glorious it is to die in battle as hard, broken rubble, than to grow smooth and feature-less, worn away by time and the elements?"
Hermione stopped herself from reaching up and stroking his rough cheek. Impulsively, she asked, "If Headmaster Snape was still alive, Dave, would you be happy?"
Impassively, the gargoyle looked straight ahead. "If he lives, should I rejoice or mourn? I should do both, for he was neither alive nor dead when he was my master here."
Shaken, Hermione managed a nod and left Dave at his post.
Dig, Dumbledore had said. Dig where? There was only one place in Hogwarts Hermione knew of where questions had been asked, and answered, but sadly, it no longer had the capability to help anyone.
~o0o~
As she stood before the wall that had once opened on to the Room of Requirement, Hermione cursed under her breath. For years, the best Wizarding consultants throughout the world had tried to reset the room, but the Fiendfyre that had engulfed it on that final night of the battle still raged within, over twenty years on. How many times had she herself stood here while great wizards and witches had depleted their magic, holding the conflagration at bay while others threw spell after spell, trying to staunch the unquenchable flames? The Room was strong enough and sentient enough to contain the magic within, but sadly it was unable to halt its own destruction.
With a heavy sigh, Hermione pressed her forehead against the wall. Even though it was agreed that the Room's magic held it in a separate dimension, she could feel the heat emanating from the other side of the wall. "I need you to heal," she said quietly. "I bet you could find Severus Snape for me."
From the other side, there was a soft, purring hum. Almost immediately the heat dispersed, and the ponderous magic that formed the massive door groaned as the Room of Requirement opened of its own accord for the first time in twenty-eight years.
~o0o~
Hardly daring to breathe, Hermione stepped into the vast room. Mountains of discarded furniture, dressers, bureaus, old books, brooms, robes...everything any student in Hogwarts' thousand-year history needed to hide, stash for later and forget; anything no longer in use or necessary for the running of the school but too serviceable to throw away; outdated and unwanted school books and robes and desks and equipment of every shape, size and function...it was all there. Amassed in great piles, stacked so high they disappeared into the dark ceiling, or haphazardly tossed into teetering mounds of mundane flotsam. The Room, it seemed, catered to all tastes and disciplines.
She walked down one of the narrow clearances, which branched out in a myriad of different directions, like tributaries of a river. Even as she walked, she couldn't stop testing the air for the tell-tale stink of smoke, but all she could smell were dust motes, the sickly-sweet smell of old parchment, the must of fabric and upholstery, stale chemical smells and dander. It was supernaturally quiet, like being in a graveyard.
Winding her way deeper into the endless room, she stopped, and tears came to her eyes. There, in a little clearing, were hammocks, and lanterns and the detritus that all students leave behind. Here and there she thought she recognised a discarded jumper or pair of trainers.
Dumbledore's Army. The last defense of Hogwarts, the scourge of the Carrows. They had made their stand here, aided by house-elves and the rest of the faculty. "And by Professor Snape," she said aloud, her voice whispering through the empty space like a lonely ghost. Snape had surely known about this little band of vigilantes, relentlessly eroding the undercarriage of his authority. "And they still hated you. Were you a brilliant actor, or did you become the monster they needed to hate?"
A sudden creaking noise made Hermione jump, and she put a shaking hand to her galloping heart so it wouldn't leap out of her chest and run screaming from the room. "Who's there?" she demanded, wand at the ready. She caught movement out of the corner of her eye, and glanced up toward the tall portrait that hung on a nearby wall. A solemn young woman waved at her from the canvas, her eyes intelligent and sad. "I know you!" cried Hermione. "You're Albus Dumbledore's sister ... A-Ariana?"
Ariana nodded and beckoned to Hermione. As she approached, the portrait swung open, and she peered into a long, very dark corridor.
Her Lumos flared in the enclosed space, revealing old tree roots poking from the ceiling, and cobwebs whose owners she had rather not meet. The dirt floor beneath her feet was soft; here and there the heels of her shoes sank into it and she had to carefully unmire herself. It was damp and chilly in the passage, and try as she could, Hermione could not see to the end. For all she knew, it had caved in years ago.
A gruff, dry voice made her jump. "Well, what are you waiting for? You might as well come on up." It sounded peevish, grudging, as if she had interrupted its owner in the middle of something important. "I figured you'd eventually show up, but I wasn't counting on it being so soon. You Gryffindors don't waste any time, do ya?"
Hermione peered upward into the stern, unsmiling face. "Mister Dumbledore!"
Aberforth Dumbledore held out his hand, as meaty and raw as a Sunday roast, and after a second's hesitation, she took it. "Aye, and who else would it be? The Queen of Sheba?"
He gracelessly hauled her down a set of rickety stairs, into a dingy little sitting room. Almost thirty years on, Aberforth's quarters looked every bit as drab and lonely as they had the night she and Harry and Ron stumbled in, on the run from the world.
A wooden table sat against the wall, and beyond it, a narrow bed with a faded, matted quilt. Three or four chairs of no particular style encircled the room. Off to one side, facing the bed, was a full length, rectangular mirror on a stand, its back to her. Across from it, a battered sink surrounded by grey, uneven cabinets. It was the living quarters of a man who had long since ceased caring what anyone thought about him.
"Take a seat," Aberforth commanded, pointing to a chair that might have once been maroon. It was sepia-toned now, sagging in the middle and slick with goat hair. As Hermione carefully perched as little of herself on the chair as she could without falling off, Aberforth grabbed three grease-smeared glasses, poured some unidentifiable reddish-amber liquid into them, then passed one to her. "Yer health, Headmistress," he barked, and saluted her with his glass.
"And yours," she replied, and raised the glass to her lips. The fumes alone made her eyes water, but she gamely took a sip. Instantly she regretted it. It was gutrot whisky, newly distilled, and so harsh it peeled the skin from her throat and made her nostrils feel as if they were melting.
Aberforth laughed as she struggled to keep from gagging. "It needs a few years maturin', but when you get my age you don't count your chickens," he said, and took another deep drink. "Think of this as what you might call the 'angel's share'."
For a moment they regarded one another. Aberforth seemed better at it than she was. The first time she had met him, Hermione thought he looked just like his brother, Albus. Now, with the benefit of twenty more candles on her own birthday cake, she realised nothing was further from the truth. Albus had always been slender, capricious and sly; Aberforth was stocky and tough as old boot leather. He looked like a Hagrid in training, but with none of Hagrid's sweet, innocent nature.
"You look well," she finally said. He laughed, a bitter, rattling sound that said everything about the man.
"Compared to what? I'm an old wizard, girl. Just marking time before I pop m'clogs. Seems you've grown up a bit since the last time you darkened my doors, though."
"Oh, you remember me? You see, I'm..."
"I remember you. I said I was old, not senile."
Another silence stretched on. Hermione had questions, but Aberforth Dumbledore had never been one to invite inquiry.
He took another drink. "How'd you do it?"
"Do what?"
He gave her a side-long, gimlet stare. "You know exactly what I mean. How did you heal the room?"
Taken aback, Hermione answered, "I didn't. It must have healed itself."
His look told her plainly that he did not believe her. "When Ariana found the room was alive again, I knew you'd done it. Only the Head has that kind of power over Hogwarts."
"So why didn't Minerva do it?" she challenged.
He snorted. "Maybe she didn't have any reason to."
"You sound about as cryptic as your brother."
"No need to insult me, girl."
Hermione took another tortuous sip of whisky, and sat back a little more. Aberforth's silences were starting to grow on her. She glanced up to see him watching her so intently she had to stop herself from flinching. "Well, go ahead," he rasped. "Say what you have to say. I'm no idle school mistress who can while away her days sitting around. I've a business to run. Out with it."
Startled by his sudden vehemence, Hermione shot back, "Why do you think I have anything to say?"
"You came here, didn't you? Don't tell me you didn't know where the tunnel led."
"Of course I knew, but I..."
"How did you find out?" He stood up and towered over her, swaying slightly. "Who sent you? That shitsack brother of mine?"
Hermione rose to her feet. While she wasn't exactly afraid of him, she wasn't prepared to take any more nonsense from him than his brother. "I don't know what you're talking about, Mr. Dumbledore. No one sent me. I was looking for..."
"I know what you were looking for, and you can tell Albus that he won't find it here!" His wand was in his hand. "Tell him the damage is done, and nothing can fix it."
"Fix what?" Her heart pounding, Hermione faced the older man, her own wand out. "Mr. Dumbledore, I don't know why you think I'm here, but it has nothing to do with Albus."
"Everything has to do with him!" he shouted. "Meddling old fool, getting everyone to do his dirty work! Hasn't he done enough? Get out, Headmistress, and don't come back. There's nothing for you here."
He looked so wild-eyed and angry Hermione was almost afraid for him. Pleadingly, she explained, "I haven't come on Albus' behalf, Mr. Dumbledore. I was looking for some information on Severus Snape."
If she thought she had upset him before, it was nothing to the rage that overcame him at the mention of Snape's name. He grabbed her arm and pushed her toward the portrait. "Right. I've had enough of you, missy!" he roared and the portrait door swung open so quickly it banged against the adjacent wall. "Get out of my pub, Headmistress, and if I ever see you here again..."
"Aberforth! Stop. I've heard enough. She doesn't know."
Hermione gasped so loudly it came out as a sob. "What's going on?" She met Aberforth's defiant glare, but there was uncertainty in his eyes as well. "Who said that? Who's here?"
"I should think that would be obvious, Headmistress. I am here." The voice rang out with the power and authority that had captivated her from the first day she had ever heard it.
Frantically looking around the room, Hermione cried, "Where are you?"
The voice, which she still heard in her dreams, seemed to curl around her. "Aberforth, please. As I am unable to do the honours myself, I still require your assistance."
Even though she had never heard him speak with such gentleness or pleading, there was no further doubt in Hermione's mind. No one on this earth with the exception of one wizard had a voice like that: dark like treacle, silky as sable. It could make the most mundane subject sound alluring, it could crackle like thunder when raised in anger. It was magical and harmonic as the deepest, darkest ocean, and as intimate as a caress. Hermione's own voice shook as she insisted, "I know that's the ghost of Severus Snape, Mr. Dumbledore. Please let me see him."
To her surprise, the disembodied voice replied rather sourly, "I assure you, Headmistress, were I truly a ghost, I would need no assistance in making myself visible. However, in the circumstances ..."
He trailed off, and with a soft growl of frustration, Aberforth walked over to the mirror standing in the corner. He turned it slowly, as if it were very fragile, until it was facing Hermione. She gaped in shock.
Standing in the mirror, where her reflection should be, was Severus Snape.
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This story made me cry so much the first time I read it. It completely broke my heart
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
<3 {{{Hugs}}}
Response from Evalyn (Reviewer)
TeddyRadiator, you are probably my favorite author on different platforms for this fanfic genre, several of your stories seem to outshine the rest for me. Burn Down The Mission, was extremely well written and well thought out, which would not allow me to put it down. the awful situation the two find themselves in affected me for days after reading it, but that is a true testament to the writer, so thank you for sharing your gift online.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so very much for your kind words. I really needed to read them this morning. We lost our cat last night, and it's been a very bad night for us. Checking my emails and finding this beautiful note from you was such a balm on my heart. Thank you for taking the time to write me such an encouraging and supportive comment. <3
Sadness I read a sorry before and your comments said the longer the story the more likely for a happier ending... fooled again. 🙁
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I am sorry to disappoint you. :(
I saw it coming. Respectfully, I am concerned with this interpretation of Severus Snape. It was a well written story, if a little rushed, but I'm not sure I can reconcile SS as duplicitous as you've written him. With that said, I respect your interpretation of his character. I will cautiously read your other stories. Best of luck!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you for your review. I have given my reply a great deal of thought, as I don't wish it to appear rushed.
I write all my Snapes as ambiguous, intriguing, complex and yes, duplicitous as I want. Please keep that in mind as you "cautiously" proceed. If you're looking for one particular Snape to cleave to, I wish you well and hope that someday you find the exact characterization that suits you, whether it be amongst my stories or elsewhere on TPP. Best of luck.
Response from astrophilandstella (Reviewer)
By your biting remark, it seems I've offended you. As I said, it was a well written story and I respect your interpretation. One would hope you could be equally respectful of those who take the time to review and praise your work. Your well wishes are appreciated and returned. Cheers.
I'm only 7 months late in discovering this story. Ambiguity, that's a good word. Just how desperately did he want out of the mirror? Would he have said or done anything to secure his freedom? He could have explained his suspicions and reservations to Hermione, but he held his tongue. Maybe he hoped; had faith, that Hermione could accomplish the impossible. Reflecting back, [yeah, I just wrote that,] it might be that what Hermione saw in the mirror was the reverse of his true intentions. A most excellent story; it hurts my poor brain to contemplate all its possibilities.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much. I don't think I've ever had a story that made me question my own motives so much. Even to this day, I cannot say for certain even I know what really happened. But I truly thank you for understanding what I was trying to do here.
I appreciate the dark ending, and the power and darkness of the curse. It's a nice contrast to other stories (which I do love) where the happy endings suggest any magic is surmountable, reversible. Also love the way the plot shows the ambiguity of Snape's feelings and his selfishness. The ending made the characterizations so much more complex.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so very much. I can't tell you how happy you have made me! You hit every point I wanted to make, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it, in spite of the (not so happy) ending. I also love happily ever afters, but this story didn't have one, and I've been thrilled at the level of understanding I have received from most of the readers here.
Was. Not. Expecting. That. My emotions are rather reeling at the moment. Was it a good ending? Bad? Neither? Both, perhaps? When the Mirror of Erised appeared in the first book, I found it vaguely disturbing, though I never understood exactly why. Not until now, anyway. Reminds me rather of the Robert Frost poem, "Nothing gold can stay". But... somehow, this ending does seem fitting, in a dark manner. I, too, was/am a reader of King's "Dark Tower" series - my second husband was a fan and introduced me. That, too, had such an ending. I think leaving the ultimate question of parity unanswered actually does, in fact, answer it. Life is not fair. Happy endings usually happen in storybooks, romance novels and movies. The lot of the rest of us is far more mundane - yet, strangely, all the richer for it. Thank you.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments. It means the world to me that you have taken this story exactly as I meant it - that life isn't fair. The Dark Tower Series has haunted me for awhile now. I read it years ago and HATED it - simply loathed it. Right after I wrote this for the fest, my Muse started prodding me to read it again, and I fell totally in love with it, and I knew my Muse was telling me that I shouldn't feel like every story has to have a happy ending for happy endings' sake - that the story has to tell itself. I can't tell you how uplifted I am from your words. Ka is indeed a wheel, and that's really the moral of this story. Thank you, thank you.
Ah, alas. Well...I thought it was too tight and harsh a magic to break in their favor. But thank you for writing it anyway. I like to think of a future in which they are together.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Believe me, I never write them in anything other than happy ever after, but unfortunately this was the story I was given, and the ending it had. Thank you for reading.
This was beautifully written, and it hurt my heart.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you for reading!
Wow! I feel so sad for her, doubtful that he loves her. ... When Dumbles kept saying dig for it... i thought it was, dig up severus' grave for the 'Ashes' So when he dies she is still stuck in that mirror... until she can trick someone.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you for reading!
I should add, you know better than to mark this as 'Romance'. In this ship it's generally known that a Romance genre means HEA - or at least, a somewhat uplifting ending. This story should have a Trajedy warning. An author's note before the Epilogue is all well and good, but had this been marked Trajedy (and not had the Romance genre), I would have known to skip it since I avoid these types of stories. That wasn't clear in that author's note.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Yikes. Good story telling, as usual, but Snape's treachery against a woman he claims to love doesn't jive with this new fair and upright Severus that becomes a beloved Headmaster. I just can't reconcile it. It would have made sense only if he wasn't in love with her or had any genuine affection for her. That he would *deliberately* switch places with the woman he loves, be so monstrously selfish, begs a HUGE willing suspension of disbelief that that same man would go on to be some amazing paragon of goodness. Sorry Teddy, I don't buy it.
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Response from maria (Reviewer)
Typical of fandom authors these days. You answer reviews that positively GUSH, but anything that gives criticism (whether you feel it's constructive or not), you deliberately ignore. And it's not just mine that you ignored. Disappointing from you. And I stand by my review - having him be both capable of monstrous betrayal AND sudden amazing awesomeness is ridiculous, unless he has DID.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Severus Snape is a complex man who lived in a mirror for decades. It changed him in ways nobody knew. Publicly, he regained his status as an educator. Privately, he lived with the guilt of a cowardly choice. Believe it or not, lots of humans are like this. No one is all good or all evil. His ability to be seen as a great headmaster, combined with his secret guilt and shame - I can totally see it. I don’t understand why you are so angry about this, and cannot accept that this is my view of the character, but I cannot help you there.
You have your opinion of the story; I stand by my story. We will have to agree to disagree. Whether you are disappointed in me or not is immaterial. What did you want me to do? Change the story to meet your view of it? No. The story stands. I worked very hard on it, and I’m proud of it and feel I have a right to be so. Thank you for reading.
Oh wow, wow oh wow.I read this in one sitting glad, I did. Your writing is awesome Teddy.I went from the pinnacle of hope to crying in despair in a matter of sentences.I know I've asked this before but do you write professionally? I would buy your book(s).
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much! I do write professionally, and have just had a short story published in a small anthology from House of Erotica publishing called Complete Control. It is available on Amazon. I am also finishing my full length novel, which will be available near the end of the year. I really appreciate your amazing comments. Thank you a million times!
Hmmm. I'm all right with the fact that they've changed places. After all, Hermione's had a fairly good run (what other hills does she have to climb, after becoming Headmistress of Hogwarts), and she's not entirely dead yet. And Severus seems to have used his position as her successor to expiate the sins of his first term, and to do wonderful things for the school. What bothers me is Severus's perfidity. He's purposely hidden from her the fact that she can only save him at the cost of her own imprisonment, and he's not been honest about how painful that imprisonment really is. That seems, to me, to go against Severus's ideas of honor. And where is Aberforth, after? You'd think he'd at least feel sympathy for Hermione! But it's a beautifully written story, regardless of what I think of the ending. (As I get older, I increasingly find unhappy endings a cheap way of appearing to be a serious artist. But that's just me.) Congratulations on a thought-provoking ending.
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Response from amr (Reviewer)
There doesn't actually seem to *be* an author's response. Unless I'm missing something. Or if the lack of a response was somehow the point.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I didn't write this story lightly; I put a lot of thought into describing a complex character whose motives were opaque. Frankly, it has not been a story that appealed to everyone. But I am a fanfic writer blessed with many supportive followers. I don't feel the need to write unhappy endings just to bolster my cred, and to tell the truth, it felt insulting to be lumped in with anyone who would pull such a "cheap" ploy.
Response from amr (Reviewer)
That was rather insulting--I'm so sorry. I *really* didn't mean your story struck me as cheap; I was just musing about my own prejudice against unhappy endings, and the possibility of your reading it that way didn't occur to me. (I should not write meandering reviews late at night.) But you are a fabulous writer, and I love your stuff, although I review less than I should. I was just troubled that the punctiliously honorable Severus we all love would have condemned Hermione, a woman whom he cared for and who was trying desperately to save him, to mirror hell to save himself. But you dealt with his ambivalence and darkness beautifully, and conveyed his years of expiatory service to the school and the community so forcefully that when I reread it, you almost convinced me. Please forgive me. AMR
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I appreciate your honesty, and of course I completely accept your apology. Thank you for clearing up the misunderstanding and for your comments.
Oh my, oh my my my. What a beautiful chapter in a beautiful story. You are simply brilliant my lovely Teddyradiator!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Oh, thank you so very much! I really appreciate your lovely words.
So did not see that coming. My heart breaks, but it is mending. You write beautifully. It is just brilliant. I think there are too many happy stories in the world and one with a not-so-comfortable ending is needed now and again. Life is never like the story books and we would do well to remember that. Although I do wonder what would have happened if he'd placed the sword or a basilisk fang in front of the mirror for her use and they both attacked the mirror at the same time from opposite sides. What then? My heart won't let the stray thought rest;healing hurts. Cheers and great job so many levels.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much for your amazing comments. I will be totally honest and admit that thought never crossed my mind, but it probably should have crossed Hermione's. Wow. You have given me a lot of food for thought. Perhaps one day I will rewrite the ending and give this a try - you never know, it quite possibly would have worked! But I am very happy that regardless of the ending, you enjoyed it and it moved you. And thank you for being my Hermione. Perhaps if she had been thinking more with her head and not with her heart, this would have been the perfect solution. Thank you so much for that amazing solution. Now MY heart won't let that stray thought rest.
All I can say is .
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I'm very sorry. I looked exactly like that when I was writing it.
Well beside the fact that Severus Snape is apparently still alive, what will happen to Hermione that she will lose the job as Headmaster? That would make me crazy if I was Hermione. I hope it happens on good terms. Talk about someone walking over your grave! I'd need some wizarding xanex.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Yes, so do I.
The Book, The order of their names, Dumbledore's insistence, Bella's curse and Hermione's need to solve every puzzle. I could see a tragedy in the making and you nailed it. Completely owned it. So very beautiful and so very, very soul devouring. Well done. Take a bow, my friend. You certainly deserve it. Thank you for being brave enough...
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you very much. I really, really appreciate that.
I discovered this story only this evening while looking for something else. I'm so thrilled you've written it! Excellent work! More, please!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you!
Excellent and harrowing tale. I thought of a way of setting Hermione free, though; would have had some trouble sleeping otherwise. And no, I'm not saying.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Fair enough! Neither was my Muse.
awww hell!!! now i need a drink!! will they ever meet?teddy do did too good of job lol thanks.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you!
Sad but brilliant, Teddy and reminded me of The Lady of Shalott by Tennyson. I once had to write an essay on it and was fascinated with the mirror imagery. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece even with the poignant ending. I suppose the writing was on the wall when she discovered that he came after her in the role call of headmasters.Great stuff and trying not to be impatient but looking forward already to your next work.Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.PS. going to London soon to see Richard Armitage in The Crucible......Hubba,hubba.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Ooh, Richard Armitage - he's dead sexy! Awesome! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. A lot of people weren't too happy with it, but it seems to have found an understanding place here at TPP. I'm not sure what's on the cards next. I'm desperately trying to finish my original novel, and that seems to be taking up the majority of my writing time. We'll see.
Noooo! Lol that was not a ending I was expecting. As usual im never disappointed by your stories !
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much! I hoped many would understand that this was the only ending this story had, as hard as it was to write.
Life doesn't always have happy endings - really enjoyed this and shed a few tears
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much. I am so glad you enjoyed it. It was not easy to write this ending, but I truly do appreciate it when readers understand that basic fact: life doesn't always have happy endings. I promise my next fic will have one! ;)