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Burn Down The Mission
TeddyRadiator57 Reviews | 4.96/10 (57 Ratings, 0 Likes, 13 Favorites )
Seven years into Hermione Granger's tenure as Headmistress of Hogwarts, the castle will reveal a secret that changes everything she ever knew about it, the role of Head of Hogwarts, and herself. Written for LiveJournal's Summer 2014 SSHG_Promptfest.
Warning - this is not a story for snowflakes. Proceed at your own risk. You have been warned.
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Just a small town girl who loves HG/SS fanfiction. You can always find me at LiveJournal: http://teddyradiator.livejournal.com/ where I 'live' on the net.
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So blood magic, I suppose it was to be expected if Death Eaters were involved.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
:)
Oh my gosh I did not see that comingi kept hopingbut am devasted for them
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Yes. I was pretty upset myself.
I think I hate you right now... Or hate myself more for continuing to read even after the warning.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I'm very sorry. It was the only ending, as far as I was given.
Wonderful story! But I have to say that I hate you a little! But I choose to blame Stephen king for this ending ;). Now you have to write a new story with a hea. Thanks for sharing!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you. Please don't blame Mr. King! I wrote the story before I re-read that awesome quote at the end of the chapter. I do feel it was the only ending. As for another, we shall see!
Great premise, great prose.I am well jealous.Looking forward to reading more.Cheers
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you!
Wonderful chapter, I am loving this story very much.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much!
Is that Griffindorish enough for him.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
:)
I loved the way Hermione healed the Room of Requirement . Now on to the small matter of, how the hell Severus got traped in a bloody mirror for twenty eight years, and why no one has thought to look for him untill now .
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Well, he was dead.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
As he said himself nobody bothered to test the ashes.
Very well done. And that ending, wow, talk about bittersweet. This is the kind of story that will forever stay in the mind. Kudos!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it. I really appreciate your kind comments.
Oh my gosh!!! I absolutely LOVED it!!!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much! <3 <3 <3
Wonderful story, thank you! May I ask why Severus is so conflicted about Sybil (I am not particularly good in reading between the lines ...)
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
It was a little nudge to the fact that it was her prophecy that he overheard which set up all was to follow. Also, there is sort of a fanon trope that Sybil fancied Severus, so naturally he'd not really want to talk about Sybil too much! ;) Please don't ever hesitate to ask if something doesn't make sense. I can be terribly cryptic at times (especially if I'm not sure what I'm writing about!) :)
So many questions, Iwil just have to read on untill they are all answered.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
I hope your questions will be answered! ;)
Oh you good girl....but you didn't give me one chapter ...you gave me two. You are spoiling me but...I'm worth it. Now how is she going to get him out of the mirror...or her in? I don't know but I am very eager to find out. Trying to see the Perseids meteor shower tonight but Bertha has made the sky very cloudy. Bitch. Best wishes, Love Ali xxx.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Hey, I love to spoil my friends! ;) Have fun!! ;)
I absolutely love it! Very interesting premise I don't think I've read anything like it before.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you! I hope you will continue to enjoy it.
Excellent as usual! I cant wait for the next chapter.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you!
This is outstanding... more please and hurry
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you - only two chapters to go!
"Baited breath" has always made me think of a can of worms for fishbait that had been left behind; its denizens dying and emitting a foul stench, a dog happening upon the scene merrily enjoying a snack, then going home to the master or mistress with dead-worm scented breath. Now I know it is no such thing, but a way to express being "hooked" into something. Suffice to say, dear TR, such is now the case with this fabulous tale! And here I had given up reading WIPs! In all seriousness, a true gem of a foundation that I firmly believe may just be your opus, TR. Loving what I've read thus far - Snape in a mirror, but NOT dead or a mere reflection?!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
LOL Oh, dear, I've never thought of that phrase in quite that way, but I think I will from now on!! I'm thrilled to pieces you are enjoying this story. I hope you will continue to enjoy it!
Hi Teddy.....fantastic that I now have some more brilliant summer reading courtesy of you and Ms Rowling. This one is starting off differently and I am enjoying it very much. I didn't see that ending coming so keep surprising me. Watching the grandkids before heading up to Lake District for the weekend. Their mum has headed up to Edinburgh to be with her sister for the Festival. Lucky sods. Digressing......I know...... but have you read Jo's 2 Robert Galbraith books yet. I'm on the second one and they are not half bad. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
The fact that you have lumped me in with Ms Rowling/Mr Galbraith is so very flattering! Have a wonderful weekend; I'll put up another chapter just for you!
I started reading because I really like your other stories. But now I am 100% hooked! I cannot wait for your next chapter. WOW!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you so much! I hope you will continue to enjoy the story.
I am very excited for the next chapter!
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you! It's a completed story, so I will update regularly. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
I am loving this! Can´t wait for un update. Captivating as alwys. Thank´s for sharing
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you! I hope you enjoy it!
Great start! Very interesting can't wait to read more.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you! I hope you will continue to enjoy it!
Interesting, I look forward to read more
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you!
I've probably reviewed this once before but had to again. So sad at the ending but still a wonderful story. Well done.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Thank you very much! I really appreciate your comments.
This was most heart breaking story I have read in a long time, and cried as much as I did. I'm not going to say I liked the ending, that would be a lie. I wish it could of been different. The sadest thing isn't that someone died, it's that they both lived out a life of pain and never got a chance to truly be together. That one has to watch the other die one day and be cursed to forever live with the pain. And even if Hermione does one day get released, it will be too late, for her lover will be gone. I'm not saying that you should change your story but it's needs a much clearer warning. So your story is well written but I have to say, I didn't really like it.
Response from TeddyRadiator (Author of Burn Down The Mission)
Well, that happens sometimes. But no, the story will not be changed. I put all the warnings on it I could. I even gave you a warning near the end. I can't do any more than that.