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Potions Under Duress Falling
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Falling

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter Two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

7: Chapter Seven

8: Chapter Eight

9: Chapter Eight and a half

Falling

anoesis

93 Reviews   |   93 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )

Romance Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 19,908 Words 9 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Original Character Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

The Department of Mysteries has its own set of entrance criteria, but as Hermione is about to discover, it's not slaying a dragon. It's not even wrestling a troll. It's something far, far worse.

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Chapters (9)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Chapter 9: Chapter Eight and a half


About anoesis

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anoesis

Member Since 2012  |  5 Stories  |  Favorited by 51  |  574 Reviews Written  |  184 Review Responses

Not much of my fic is archived here, but I've proved that I do like to review!




If you're interested in reading more, head to http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3393203/anoesis or check the links on my LiveJournal page.

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Reviews for Falling

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10/10

mick42

They both got what they wanted, a quite a bit more.

0/10

tenoh27

Sweet and lovely, thank you very much!

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Thank you - I'm glad you liked it :)

0/10

moor

I loved how gentle and intuitive you made them! And thank you for keeping Hermione's Gryf!courage and determination. :)

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Thank you! Characterisation is very important to me, so it's lovely to hear that you enjoyed this :)

10/10

Phyllidia

What a lovely little story.  And now I am ready for the rest.  You know, what they get up to in the DOM, what happened with all the Newtonian liquids, what did Harry & Ron think about the two of them, did she ever figure out which potion her parents were talking about, did the pigeon get its revenge on her......

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Lol, I would love to tell you that story, but I just don't know it yet! Let me know if you find out about the pigeon though!

Thank you so much for reading and for leaving so many lovely reviews :)

10/10

Phyllidia

Ah, so he had to be able to trust as well.  And there was a kiss.  *sigh*

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Ah, kisses *big sigh*

10/10

Phyllidia

Wonderful chapter.  Thanks.

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

No, thank you, my lovely!

10/10

Phyllidia

Hmm I am hoping this means that Severus achieved his goal by gaining her trust.  :)

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Ooh, so close!

10/10

Phyllidia

Lovely chapter!

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Thank you

10/10

Phyllidia

Soooo Hermione is a Snape fangirl too huh? Interesting...

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

It's just a few press cuttings... and that interview... a couple of articles...

10/10

Phyllidia

Hmm, wondering if Severus is supposed to make a friend.  He could do worse.  Lovely story, thanks!

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Ooh, very close for such an early chapter! Glad you enjoyed it this far :)

0/10

Phyllidia

Ah the seed has been planted! Lovely story.

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Thank you

0/10

Phyllidia

Interesting first chapter.  Looking forward to the rest.

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Thank you for reading... and all the reviews I can see ahead :)

0/10

Javoher

What a lovely, light-hearted story!!  Bonus points for inventing a clever machine with a mind of its own, and moving stairs with a sense of humor. And kudos also to Teddyradiator for a smart prompt. I find myself asking "what happened next?"  But even if you don't have a sequel in mind, please know I've put this in my favorites and will return to it many times. Thank you!

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

I've never managed to write a sequel in my life, but I do feel that the Device needs a bit more time on screen. Who knows, maybe something will come to me?

Thank you very much :)

10/10

braye27

I have really loved reading your story.  It's clever and sweet and very satisfying.  Five stars are not nearly enough!  And this final chapter leaves ample opportunity for a follow up... if you should ever want to... and here is a bouquet for a job well done.Beth

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

I'm ashamed it's taken me so long to reply to your reviews :) I'm absolutely thrilled to pieces that you enjoyed this story  Thank you very, very much

10/10

braye27

Ah ha... Severus' task was not to gain someone else's trust, but to learn to trust someone else.  Totally Brilliant!!!  I take my hat off to you, anoesis.  You are a very clever author!Beth

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

You, my dear, are a flatterer. I love it!

It's not much of a plot twist as plot twists go, but I thought it might work :)

10/10

braye27

OH!  This chapter was even better than the last!!!  I do hope that Severus won't castigate himself for reacting to Hermione's "invitation."  Please, please, please let them come together as willing partners.Thanks for another wonderful chapter.Beth

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

You really do write the nicest reviews :)

10/10

braye27

This chapter is charming.  I'm so happy that Hermione's fear of falling was the catalyst to each of them finding what they most needed... the ability to trust that there was at least one other person each of them could count on.Beth

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Yes, yes! This, exactly this!

10/10

braye27

Oh, yes.  I love the direction their thoughts are taking them.  *sigh*Beth

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

10/10

braye27

"You've not seen Hermione's stash of press cuttings, Malcolm. I'd be more than happy to have him round for Christmas."Yay!!!  Hermione has a scrapbook of Severus.  *grins*  Beth

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Well, who could resist?

10/10

braye27

This keeps getting better and better.  I do hope, when all is said and done, that Severus and Hermione find more good things than they could have ever imagined.  I love this story!!!Beth

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Thank you so much! I hope you still felt this way by the end :)

10/10

braye27

I am dying to know what Severus' task is.  I wonder if Hermione will be able to help him if he helps her?  And why doesn't Harry want to talk to Snape about his mother?  Hummmm... there's a story in there somewhere.Beth

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

I think there might be a story there too...

10/10

expected aberrance

So close and yet so far! Poor Hermione. Looking forward to the next chapter :-) 

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Thank you

10/10

mick42

Severus is always a gentleman {DAMN IT }he would never take advantage of Hermione while she was high from such an experience.   

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

I know, darn it! Still, I'm sure such reticence can't last forever...

10/10

just harry

She did it she was flying.  Now what will she do with the feelings she is getting for Severus,  and he for her, that could prove to be very exciting &  interesting.  Looking forward to th next chapter.

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Ah, the feelings! I hope you liked what happened next... I'm answering these in order and daren't read ahead...

Thank you for your review

10/10

cenicienta

Awwww man, that is so unfair. So close and so far! Great scene, almost can feel the air. Love the bird persecution and a caring Severus.

So happy for the update, you made my night!

Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)

Glad you liked the chapter - even if that poor pigeon didn't...

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