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Falling
anoesis93 Reviews | 6.63/10 (93 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )
The Department of Mysteries has its own set of entrance criteria, but as Hermione is about to discover, it's not slaying a dragon. It's not even wrestling a troll. It's something far, far worse.
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Reviews for Falling
They both got what they wanted, a quite a bit more.
Sweet and lovely, thank you very much!
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you - I'm glad you liked it :)
I loved how gentle and intuitive you made them! And thank you for keeping Hermione's Gryf!courage and determination. :)
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you! Characterisation is very important to me, so it's lovely to hear that you enjoyed this :)
What a lovely little story. And now I am ready for the rest. You know, what they get up to in the DOM, what happened with all the Newtonian liquids, what did Harry & Ron think about the two of them, did she ever figure out which potion her parents were talking about, did the pigeon get its revenge on her......
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Lol, I would love to tell you that story, but I just don't know it yet! Let me know if you find out about the pigeon though!
Thank you so much for reading and for leaving so many lovely reviews :)
Ah, so he had to be able to trust as well. And there was a kiss. *sigh*
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Ah, kisses *big sigh*
Wonderful chapter. Thanks.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
No, thank you, my lovely!
Hmm I am hoping this means that Severus achieved his goal by gaining her trust. :)
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Ooh, so close!
Soooo Hermione is a Snape fangirl too huh? Interesting...
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
It's just a few press cuttings... and that interview... a couple of articles...
Hmm, wondering if Severus is supposed to make a friend. He could do worse. Lovely story, thanks!
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Ooh, very close for such an early chapter! Glad you enjoyed it this far :)
Ah the seed has been planted! Lovely story.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you
Interesting first chapter. Looking forward to the rest.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you for reading... and all the reviews I can see ahead :)
What a lovely, light-hearted story!! Bonus points for inventing a clever machine with a mind of its own, and moving stairs with a sense of humor. And kudos also to Teddyradiator for a smart prompt. I find myself asking "what happened next?" But even if you don't have a sequel in mind, please know I've put this in my favorites and will return to it many times. Thank you!
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
I've never managed to write a sequel in my life, but I do feel that the Device needs a bit more time on screen. Who knows, maybe something will come to me?
Thank you very much :)
I have really loved reading your story. It's clever and sweet and very satisfying. Five stars are not nearly enough! And this final chapter leaves ample opportunity for a follow up... if you should ever want to... and here is a bouquet for a job well done.Beth
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
I'm ashamed it's taken me so long to reply to your reviews :) I'm absolutely thrilled to pieces that you enjoyed this story Thank you very, very much
Ah ha... Severus' task was not to gain someone else's trust, but to learn to trust someone else. Totally Brilliant!!! I take my hat off to you, anoesis. You are a very clever author!Beth
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
You, my dear, are a flatterer. I love it!
It's not much of a plot twist as plot twists go, but I thought it might work :)
OH! This chapter was even better than the last!!! I do hope that Severus won't castigate himself for reacting to Hermione's "invitation." Please, please, please let them come together as willing partners.Thanks for another wonderful chapter.Beth
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
You really do write the nicest reviews :)
This chapter is charming. I'm so happy that Hermione's fear of falling was the catalyst to each of them finding what they most needed... the ability to trust that there was at least one other person each of them could count on.Beth
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Yes, yes! This, exactly this!
Oh, yes. I love the direction their thoughts are taking them. *sigh*Beth
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
"You've not seen Hermione's stash of press cuttings, Malcolm. I'd be more than happy to have him round for Christmas."Yay!!! Hermione has a scrapbook of Severus. *grins* Beth
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Well, who could resist?
This keeps getting better and better. I do hope, when all is said and done, that Severus and Hermione find more good things than they could have ever imagined. I love this story!!!Beth
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you so much! I hope you still felt this way by the end :)
I am dying to know what Severus' task is. I wonder if Hermione will be able to help him if he helps her? And why doesn't Harry want to talk to Snape about his mother? Hummmm... there's a story in there somewhere.Beth
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
I think there might be a story there too...
So close and yet so far! Poor Hermione. Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you
Severus is always a gentleman {DAMN IT }he would never take advantage of Hermione while she was high from such an experience.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
I know, darn it! Still, I'm sure such reticence can't last forever...
She did it she was flying. Now what will she do with the feelings she is getting for Severus, and he for her, that could prove to be very exciting & interesting. Looking forward to th next chapter.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Ah, the feelings! I hope you liked what happened next... I'm answering these in order and daren't read ahead...
Thank you for your review
Awwww man, that is so unfair. So close and so far! Great scene, almost can feel the air. Love the bird persecution and a caring Severus.
So happy for the update, you made my night!
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Glad you liked the chapter - even if that poor pigeon didn't...