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Falling
anoesis93 Reviews | 6.63/10 (93 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )
The Department of Mysteries has its own set of entrance criteria, but as Hermione is about to discover, it's not slaying a dragon. It's not even wrestling a troll. It's something far, far worse.
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Reviews for Falling
You don't play fair. Stop teasing us!
Thanks for the great start to my long weekend.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
I take a worrying amount of pleasure in teasing my readers Hopefully I'll be forgiven in the end...
I feel almost like Hermione does, hanging from the cliff where you've left me. Oh, how I'd like to read more soon!I really do like the idea of this plot, and am looking forward to how Severus will benefit from it - on the work front, as well as on the personal.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
I can't really take any credit for the plot - it simply strolled into my head as soon as I saw Teddy's prompt - but I'm very glad you liked it
I think I've guessed what his paper says. Something to do with trust? Maybe he thinks someone needs to trust him where really he needs to trust them? Either way it is a lovely story. Your characterization is spot on and just enough conflict to slowly tighten the tension. I think I'm "falling" for your plot. :)
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
You worked it out! And thank you for such a lovely review
What a sweet chapter I loved it. Two Lonely people reaching out to each other. Well Done.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you very much!
Simply beautiful, thank you! I could truly imagine myself flying over those trees, you described that feeling so compellingly.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you so much - flying is something I've always dreamed of, so it was fun to be able to explore it this way. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it
Ah, and they both take a big step closer to tackling their ministry-set tasks. I suspect that his is not merely talking about lily, but coming to terms with her death/getting over her. I can't wait to see where this story goes, please update soon!
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Far, far too late for me to reply, seeing as you have already read the final chapter, but thank you for all your lovely comments throughout
Absolutely loved the update, thank you so much.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you! Please come back for more
Hey! Nice really... I love the course this story is taking! Please keep sharing! Thanks
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you! This story is written in full and is now just winding its way through the queue. More should be with you soon
Now that's some nice tension.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you very much. I do love a bit of tension, me!
How exciting! But I still don't know what word is Severus task, make friends? That is two words... care? He care a LOT in his life... it has to be something he hasn't done, know how or have, right?
Well, getting very interesting and looking forward to read more soon!
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Ah, Snape's task... well, I couldn't really spoil the surprise and tell you, could I? Not much longer to wait, mind!
Absolutely loved the update. I hope HErmione will be around to "bother" Severus for years to come:-))
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you so much! She'll at least be around to bother him for the next few chapters...
Always heard the best way to have a woman become attracted to you was to engage in an exciting activity together. Does Severus even know that he is trying to gain Hermiones attraction? Hmmmmm, looks like fun.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Well he's certainly going about it the right way although I think he'd be shocked if someone told him!
Oh yes, I think Hermione very much wants to come with him. *wink wink, nudge nudge*This is a very captivating story. It is so easy to imagine Hermione wrapped in the safety of Snape - she always was a very trusting person. Now we must only hope that Snape does not have to be alone for the rest of his life. :)Also: Snape smoking is just so spot on!
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
For some reason, I do see Snape as a smoker! And he's one of those awful people who would make it seem cool...
Thank you for reading!
The whole chapter was very informative on their interaction but the last line was the most revealing part. I wonder what he is really ask her. Update soon I really really want to know her answer.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
The next chapter is in the queue! Thank you for reviewing
Lovely and interesting first chapter (and I can see 3 more squeee!) keep sharing!
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
I hope you liked the later chapters! And the ones still to come...
It seems Hermione has control issues, she trusts no one but herself, hopefully Severus can change that.
I loved the conversation with the parents.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Oh, he'll help... Thank you for all your reviews!
Maybe the DoM will kill two birds with one stone.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
There's nothing quite like the ability to multitask.
Perhaps Severus' task is to talk to Harry about Lilly, as that is what he has been trying to do. Hermione needs to have the same faith in the broom that she has in her wand, they were both just bits of wood, until someone put magic into them.
I loved the way Harry spoke so soothingly to his broom, very sweet.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Those are some good guesses...
Ah, Harry's wand! Just so you know, he called her Matilda...
Uh oh, Hermione's in luuuurve! So how long before they figure it out together and shag in mid flight? Lol. Cute story so far, can't wait to hear more!
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
That is the question, isn't it?
I love this story, it kept making me smile. Kudos anoesis.DBB
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you very much! Hopefully there are more smiles to come
My oh my, I do love the Grangers and the easy way they talk and tease each other. Great hopes for Severus and sure happy and thrilled for Hermione, must be nice to have those arms catching you when falling... or not!
Thanks for sharing and waiting with anticipation for the update.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you! I loved the Grangers so much that I get them back in a later chapter, too!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing - the next chapter's in the queue!
I'm loving this story so far, I like that they are all still friends, Ron is too often cast as a bit of a bad guy! I loved the conversation with her parents, it made me chuckle!
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Parents, eh? Who'd have em?
Thank you very much - I hope you enjoy the rest!
This is VERY cool so far! I love your description of Snape's return to teaching and Hermione's attempts at trusting. Looking forward to much more.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you very much :) We're nearly half way through, so there's a good few chapters left to go
I really liked the way that you are showing Severus & Hermione as real people who have doughts and fears as we all do. Great chapter.
Response from anoesis (Author of Falling)
Thank you so much! Much as I love writing them, I always worry about getting the characters right, so it's good to hear that you're enjoying them this way :)