Eleven
Chapter 11 of 11
neelixHermione is down on her luck and has to apply for a job with her old Potions tutor. She gets (and observes) far more than she bargained for.
ReviewedELEVEN
Two Months Later
Severus Snape, Potions Master and recently appointed Deputy Headmaster of Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry was standing at the end of the potions bench in his lab. He was stirring a cauldron of clear liquid, but paused now and again to breathe deeply and bite his lower lip. He appeared to be under some duress, as sweat dripped down his cheek from his hairline. He dropped the stirring rod from his hand and gripped the side of the bench tightly.
From her kneeling position in from of him, Hermione had his hard cock deeply in her mouth, and she ran her tongue over the tip, enjoying finally her most treasured memory and fantasy. It had taken a significant amount of persuading on her part, but withdrawing back to her own house for a few days had finally pushed him over the edge.
'Up, now!' Severus grabbed her by the shoulders, spun her around and pushed her head down towards the bench. He lifted the skirts of her robes and, thanks to forward planning, found that she wore no underwear. He crouched between her parted thighs and licked at her pussy, finding her clit with his finger as he inserted his tongue deeply inside her. Hermione pushed herself back towards his face and was rewarded with a sharp slap on one of her buttocks. It was disconcertingly arousing, so she pushed back again for another slap.
'You are more depraved than I imagined, Hermione Granger,' Severus hissed as he pulled himself up. He positioned the shining head of his cock at her pussy and pulled her backwards by her hips, impaling her onto him and making her scream out in surprise.
'And we all know you have a vivid imagination, Severus Snape,' she panted and he thrust. 'I saw you, remember?'
This earned her a sharper, harder slap that later would turn her buttock bright red, but she almost came when he did it. Maybe she really was depraved? She had certainly never been as horny in her life.
'Fuck, Severus, I'm coming,' she moaned. He lifted her legs from the ground and held her in place as he thrust, and he didn't stop until both of them cried out their orgasms and slid to the floor of the lab in a tangled, contented heap. Hermione shifted until her head was in his lap, and she kissed the now soft head of his cock before making him more presentable.
'Thank you very much,' he said with a chuckle.
'You are more than welcome,' she replied. Severus ran his fingers through her silky curls, and Hermione closed her eyes in contentment.
'I love you, witch,' he said quietly.
Hermione didn't move but a soft smile graced her lips. He had implied as much many times in the last two months but had never been able to say the words until now.
'I know. I love you, too.'
***
Six Months Later
Hermione closed the top of the last box and waved her wand at it. Once it was small enough, she slipped it inside her trusty beaded bag and handed the bag to Winky.
'That's the last of it, Winky. Thank you for your help.' Hermione couldn't help but smile as Winky gave her a low bow and then disappeared with a slight pop. She had become more and more fond of the House Elf over the past few months, but then she knew it was because Winky now saw her and Severus equally. Winky adored Severus, and Hermione had recently discovered why.
After the war, when Severus was recuperating and finding his feet within the wizarding world again, he had needed a House Elf to assist him each day with domestic and occasionally more personal tasks. Severus had chosen Winky personally, because, he told Hermione, she was as damaged by the war as he was. He had understood Winky, how her loyalty had created her own downfall and how it felt to be rejected by those she loved the most. Best of all, he had insisted that if he was to be her new Master she would give up the Butterbeer. It was that simple order that created the bond between them, and Severus was as devoted to Winky as she was to him.
Severus stepped into the now empty room and slid his arms around her.
'You're sure this is what you want?' He nuzzled her neck and kissed her, sending shivers down her spine.
'Definitely. You?' She hugged him tightly, feeling his heart beating through the fabric of his shirt.
'Hell, yes.' He squeezed her close.
'Let's go.' Hermione took Severus by the hand and left her Muggle house for her new home in the Dungeons.
One Year Later
The bedchamber was in half-darkness. The sconces on the wall sputtered lightly, reflecting off the dark green satin bedcovers. On the bed, Hermione lay on her front and naked from the waist down. Her ankles were tied with black ribbons to the bedposts, and Severus was reddening her buttocks with a black, flat paddle. Hermione moaned as he slapped her again, making her bottom shake. He was naked, sweating from the sight of her spread-eagled on his bed. He cock was hard, but he didn't touch her. Not yet. They had played this game before, and the rules, he had decided, were that she would come first. And she would have to beg him for her orgasm.
Hermione shuddered at the last hit of the paddle on her bare arse, and she couldn't take any more.
'Severus, please,' she cried out. 'I want you, please, please...'
'Are you begging, Hermione?' he asked her, moving his mouth to her ear. He ran his fingertips lightly over the redness of her cheeks, feeling her shiver at his touch.
'Yes! Yes, I'm begging... Gods, Severus, just give it to me...'
Severus slipped his finger between her cheeks and then downwards towards her wetness. She was dripping in readiness, and he felt his cock jerk in anticipation, but he would have to wait. He clicked his fingers and a large dildo appeared in his hand. It was not as thick or as long as his cock, but it was hard as a rock and he knew how to make her scream with it. With frustrating slowness, he unfastened her ribbons and turned her onto her back. She watched him, biting her lip as he moved up her body, teasing her folds with the tip of the dildo but going nowhere near her clit. She arched her body upwards, and he stopped.
'Not yet,' he said sharply. One of the other rules was that she didn't help herself to orgasm. She had to remain still. She found it so hard, he knew. But it was important. She was always so in control, she had to relax and let him take the lead now and then.
'Sorry,' she said quietly. Hermione knew the rules too.
Severus sighed and kissed the tips of her fingers lightly. 'My witch,' he said. 'You will get what you need.' He moved over her and rested the dildo between her folds. The tip touched her clitoris, and Hermione moaned. She desperately wanted to rub herself against it, but she kept still, knowing he would take it away if she moved. Severus unfastened the buttons of her tight corset and allowed her creamy breasts to spill forwards, and he captured a dark, pink nipple in his mouth and sucked. Hermione cried out in pleasure as he sucked one nipple and tweaked the other between his fingers, and she couldn't stop herself from squirming slightly beneath him.
'Gods, Severus, I can't wait, please, make me come!'
'You only had to ask,' he said with a slow, languid smile. Sliding his hand downwards he gripped the dildo and whispered the magic words. It began to vibrate, and he slid it between Hermione's folds and into her needy pussy. Moving downwards, he licked at her pulsing clit, thrusting in and out with the now vibrating dildo as she began to buck under him. With a scream, she came, and he removed the dildo and replaced it with his tongue, lapping up her orgasm greedily, loving the musky smell and taste of her. This was what he wanted, what he needed. He had been waiting for her all of his life, and he was never letting her go,
***
Hermione fell back against the bed, her orgasm still pulsing through her slightly as Severus drank from her, his tongue flicking lightly at her clit now and then. She felt so exhausted she couldn't summon any energy to move, but she knew she wasn't done yet. He would allow her a minute or so respite but then...
'On your knees, witch' he growled at her.
Hermione did as she was told, flipping over and pushing herself up onto her knees, presenting her still smarting buttocks to him. He slapped her with his hand, warming the flesh as it trembled beneath his sure touch, and parted her cheeks. She moaned as he slipped his finger into her pussy, then withdrew and placed it at her anus. He massaged gently, then inserted his fingertip and slid his finger into her. Hermione groaned with newfound pleasure and pushed back slightly. He whispered another spell, and she felt a frisson of pleasure ripple through her as he lubricated her sphincter in readiness for him. She could feel his thighs against hers and she knew he was ready for it by the way he was shaking. His orgasm would be fierce, it always was when they did it like this, but Hermione loved it and relished how she made him feel. He had never been this animalistic with the other witches, never this creative or intense. She groaned as he removed his finger and replaced it with the tip of his cock. He felt hot and heavy against her and he splayed open her buttocks with his firm fingers, digging in to her flesh tightly. He thrust himself slowly into her, and Hermione relaxed around him, welcoming his taut girth within her with a gasp of pleasure and pain. He filled her and made her whole, and she had never felt so complete.
'Fuck, witch. Fuck,' he hissed, and with a grunt of pleasure he started to thrust, slowly as first but then with more urgency. Hermione moved her hand and found the still vibrating dildo beside her. She slid it into to her already aching pussy, letting its length slide hard against Severus, and she heard him shout out at the feel of it. She was totally immersed in sensation, but she whispered a spell to hold the dildo in place and moved her deft fingers to her engorged clit. Severus started to move faster, and Hermione couldn't contain herself. She came with a low moan, pushed her body hard to meet his pounding thrusts, and she felt Severus slap her arse cheeks hard. He shouted out incoherently, his body twisting and bucking against her, and he came, gripping her buttocks still and digging his hands deeply into her flesh to hold her still as he emptied himself within her clenched walls. He shuddered against her and the both fell forward onto the bed, spent.
At some point they fell asleep, knowing that next time their lovemaking would be gentle and tender and something completely different.
***
Two Years Later
Ron Weasley sat in his usual booth of the Leaky Cauldron with a large Firewhisky in his hand. The Daily Prophet lay before open, a double-paged spread glaring out at him. He tried not to look, but he had already read it three times and he couldn't tear his eyes away from a picture of the new Mr and Mrs Severus Snape smiling up at him. It was the first time he had seen Snape smiling, but he figured it was because he was caressing Hermione's arse in the picture. His hand moved possessively over and over her satin-clad curves, and Ron, who had looked closely to confirm what he thought, knew that she wasn't wearing any knickers.
'Bastard,' he said for the umpteenth time.
'Fucking bastard.'
***
In a small hut on a beach in Thailand, Hermione Granger was on her honeymoon. Her husband was currently kissing her inner thighs.
She didn't once think about Ron Weasley.
The End
A/N: Many Thanks to Hechicera for her wonderful prompt:
'Snape, in his mid-forties to early fifties, brews Polyjuice with Hermione's clandestinely acquired hair snippets (or whatever), and pays an escort agency to send call girls dosed with this potion to act out his secret fantasies. Unbeknownst to him, she herself shows up one day in place of one of the prostitutes. Feel free to make this as filthy as you like.'
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Latest 25 Reviews for 49 and Never Been Kissed
107 Reviews | 7.6/10 Average
damnnn it was hot hahahaha
Perfect, dearest neelix! Absolutely perfect! You are the best.
Response from neelix (Author of 49 and Never Been Kissed)
Thank you for all of your lovely reviews, they really make me smile x
Going much better than I had expected. I really don't remember the details. I wonder if I have early signs of dementia. Seriously.
I wrote much more the first time I read this but I seem to remember that it all works out OK in the end so I will suffice it to say; Hermione, you're a stupid little know-it-all, and I hope you're pleased with yourself. Do grow up you silly girl. Let the man see his whore in peace.
Poor wittle boo boo Snape. He's all hot and bothered for his Hermione and doesn't even know she would be thrilled if he would only give her a small smile and a, "Have a nice weekend". I'm sure it would take only a small amount of relatively nice behavior and a couple of stimulating intellectual discussions and she would be more than happy for him to teach her how he likes it. Hopefully, that will be happening soon, for all of our sakes.
It was stupid for her to marry the ginger twat. Any of us could have told her that but she was too young to hear us and I'm sure there was a lot of pressure put on her to go through with it. I'm just glad Severus Snape is a man who believes in second chances. His came at an awfully high price but he was grateful for it non-the-less. Now he's paying it forward. I could just kiss him for that! Hee Hee. But, I'm guessing Hermione gets to have the first kiss sooner or later in this adventure.
I read this a long time ago but remember enjoying very much so it's time to give it another go! I have terrible memory so while I remember the general gist of the story, I dont' remember details so everything old is new again for me. So far, so good!
What a yummy read! Thanks!
Very good!
Aww I liked this chappie
Hehehehehehe
Steamy
Caught in a pickle, eh proffesor? Hehe
WOW! That was amazing! Thanks for writing!!!
Lol nice prompts you were given! Loved threw story, the naughty bits were awesome, though I am surprised he knew it was hermione during the switch. I guess the nose knows, huh?
Response from neelix (Author of 49 and Never Been Kissed)
It was Amortentia. That was explained in the story I think. I don't know if you can amend your review? It should say the, not threw. Thanks for reading.
I had to quickly review to point out mistakes I've found. Her "main" of hair should be "mane," and i forget where it was, but a "lose" should have been "loose". ;) Hope I'm not offending by pointing them out. I love the story so far!!
Response from neelix (Author of 49 and Never Been Kissed)
Thank you. I'll amend them later. Posted in haste!
This was so much fun to read!
Thank you for sharing, I love that you made Hermione just as kinky as Severus. ;)
As always Neelix you write to please!! And please you did, love the Amortentia descriptions. I can almost smell Severus myself!! I want to thank you Neelix,you and Teddy's fan fiction writing is what really drew me into this fandom!!! Always will be a devoted fan~dee
Absolutely smutgloriously delicious!!!! What else can I say? It's a new word I made up just for you. It was exactly the kind of story I was looking for tonight.
Response from neelix (Author of 49 and Never Been Kissed)
Bless you :) Thank you for reading my little smutglorious fic and inventing new words for me!
Response from neelix (Author of 49 and Never Been Kissed)
Bless you :) Thank you for reading my little smutglorious fic and inventing new words for me!
That was totally awesome! I forgive Hermione and am so happy for them. I knew you were a skilled story teller and would anticipate my worries then soothe them as the crisis worked itself out into a wonderful climax. The Amortentia was the ingredient that made all the other concerns unimportant. They were made for each other. That's all that really matters in the end. And what a wonderfully sexy Severus he is too. I love the way he stuck up for her. Ron is such a stupid little speckled toad. He must have a death wish to want to pick a fight with Severus Snape. I didn't review the last couple of chapters because I didn't want to stop the flow of the story. I really like the way Severus treated Winky when he told her she was a good elf even though he had a terrible hangover. He was even more lovable than ever after that. Everything went great with Rosie. I'm very glad she cared about Severus' happiness and not just the money. And the waiting to kiss the girl he loved and who loved him was wonderful, romantic and sexy. Well done gentle author. That's why you write the stories and I just read them.
Very nice chapter! I'm thawing. I guess Hermione doesn't have to be perfect. She is only a witch after all. But I still hope he doesn't ever know she spied on him because she suspected he was still an evil death eater. He can find out she spied on him. That will probably be pretty hot. But I don't want him to know she doesn't trust him. Snape is hotter than ever. He feels bad for what he did, but she hasn't admitted that she was wrong to assume the worst of him after he'd been so nice to her. They obviously belong together. I'm sure you'll work it out.
"Lloooosseee!" That witless, inane girl. At first I thought Severus was playing the "Lucy" character, but now it's turned out to be Hermione! One minute he has a total personality change from Bastard Extraordinaire to Mister Nicy-Nice after she practically destroys his potions store and "Little Miss Know-It-All" doesn't give it a second thought as she goes tripping along like Little Red Ridding Hood on a lark.
And then now, NOW, she has the nerve, the unmitigated, self important, pompous, impertinent and faithless nerve to suspect Severus Snape of actually trying to revive Voldemort's reign of terror simply because he wanted to keep a secret from her, because he had personal business he didn't choose to share with her? AND THEN, she has the rudest, most shameless, insulting, intrusive, arrogant gall to spy on her boss--to spy on Severus Fucking Snape as if it was her God given right and duty? How dare she! Who does she think she is anyway?
I could have tolerated insatiable curiosity leading to ill-mannered snooping, but her assuming the worst of him and making it her business to make sure he wasn't up to something dastardly like when she was 11 years old, ruined what could have been a totally erotic adult encounter. She just proved everything bad he had ever thought about her is true. Now she couldn't pay me to fuck her if I was Severus Snape. Imagine how hurt his feelings will be if he finds out she spied on him because she didn't trust him. He expected her to be nosy. But this is betrayal. I hope he never finds out.
All of that said, I haven't read the entire story and you may work this out so I won't feel so betrayed on his behalf. Please know that this is not a criticism of your storytelling prowess. You are on my favorite authors list. I'm just angry at Hermione right now. I really want them to become a couple, but she's been mean spirited after he did her a favor. I hope she is extremely ashamed of herself so I can like her again. Please don't be offended at my over the top hissy-fit. It's one of my most grievous faults. I'm impulsively over emotional and I have the tendency to either hate something or love something but am seldom lukewarm about anything. This is why I must muster all of my self discipline and never ever allow myself to start tweeting. I would be totally fired, sued, locked up by some secret service agency who might take me seriously and then murdered in my bed by the end of the 1st day.
I'm poised in anticipation! It feels like a smutty "I Love Lucy" episode. You know he is going to get so caught. (I don't know if you are old enough to know about that old show. Sometimes I had to close my eyes because I couldn't stand it when I knew Ricky was about to find out what she'd done. I was a kid and hated it when she would predictably get herself in a fix, kind of like this one, every episode, only exceedingly more G rated.)
My goodness that was a serious about face. He went from total bastard to normally polite and even forgivingly nice in 60! I'd be wondering if I had gone through some kind of portal to an alternate universe in the explosion, if I were Hermione right now. He sure mended his ways quickly. Wouldn't a normal person be suspicious? On Snape's side; I'd be worried about making the polyjuice if I were him, unless he harbors a secret desire to get caught. Nothing gets past her observation. He also has to know she won't stop wondering who would want polyjuice. Unless he wants her to catch him, he'd better keep his brewing to Moaning Myrtle's bathroom during Hermione's off hours and tell her the customer canceled the order. If he was Slytherin enough, he should have just frankly told her he supplies it to the local whore house for their high end customers and gets paid quite nicely for it. It's a perfectly believable cover story. The man is painfully out of practice.
Seriously though, would that be illegal? As long as it's legal she'd probably just be disgusted and let it go. If it's not she'd probably feel like she needed to address the issue, sooner or later. All he'd have to do is say he won't do it anymore if it upsets her but that she will have to make up the difference from her pay. That's the Snapishly Slytherine thing to do.
Poor Snapy-poo. He's as lonely as Hermione. Worse than Hermione, even. Hermione got taken out to dinner and he had to pay for a blow job. Does he realize how isolating it is for her to just brew all day and not even get to eat in the Great Hall? He probably hasn't even thought about it. Well, now he has too much time on his hands because she has brewed all his potions for him. I wonder why he's piling so much work on her. Maybe he thinks she likes it. Maybe he's afraid that is she gets bored she'll leave. Maybe he's afraid to talk to her so he keeps her too busy to have to make conversation. He's a right mess! Still, it was nice of him to give her that job. Is his sexual attraction to her a new thing or has he been thinking about her this way for a while? Won't she be surprised!