Ten
Chapter 10 of 11
neelixHermione is down on her luck and has to apply for a job with her old Potions tutor. She gets (and observes) far more than she bargained for.
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Hermione looked up into Severus' face and raised her hand to his cheek. She gently stroked the smooth, warm skin and tried to convey the depth of her feeling in her gaze. He had to know how much she loved him, and how very much she longed for him.
'How did you know it was me? I was just going to take Rosie's place,' she whispered.
He was stood firmly against her, and the edge of the Potions bench was pushing against the cheeks of her bum. He felt warm, and firm and male. She was desperate for more of him.
'That's what you want, is it Hermione? To be treated like a cheap whore?' Severus became stern and started to pull away, but Hermione threaded her fingers through his and pulled him back.
'Of course not. You didn't answer my question,' she said softly, taking his other hand and lifting it to her mouth. She turned his hand palm upwards and licked the pulsing vein at his wrist, and at his sharp intake of breath she looked up and caught his eye. His eyes were burning into her, and she suddenly felt powerful.
'I would be a fool not to recognise you by now. You are vanilla and patchouli, peppermint and musk.' He sighed and wrapped his arms around her, pulling her close. 'You were always meant for me.'
'Amortentia?' she asked, pulling away to look into his face. 'You are musk and sandalwood, parchment and ink. It took me a long time to find you, Severus Snape.' She smiled up at him and was immediately rewarded with a lop-sided smile.
'How did you know? About Rosie and our arrangement?' Severus had to good grace to look embarrassed, but Hermione wasn't about to lose the ground she had already gained.
'I placed a tracking spell on your Polyjuice potion. I didn't mean to spy on you, Severus, but when I saw what you needed the potion for...' Hermione drifted off at the look of shock on Severus' face.
'You saw? Forgive me, Hermione. I would never have used you so if I had thought there was even the slightest chance that you..., that we would...'
Hermione pulled him closer and ran her hands through his hair, distracting him and sending interesting sensations to his nether regions.
'I watched until I realised I was jealous. I wanted to be that Hermione, which is why Winky and I diverted you and Rosie tonight. I just want you to myself, Severus.'
'Be very careful what you wish for, Hermione,' said Severus, his voice rough and deep. 'If we go down this path you have so cleverly crafted, I shall not be as foolish as Weasley. I shall never let you go.' He ran a smooth finger over Hermione lower lip, and she sighed and pressed herself closer against him.
'Will you kiss me, Severus?' she breathed softly.
Severus looked at Hermione curiously and threaded his fingers through her hair. 'My mother always said I should never kiss a girl unless I was sure I loved her and that she loved me back.'
Hermione giggled softly. 'I hope you didn't take her advice.'
Severus paused and lifted an eyebrow.
'Oh, my. You mean you have never... even with all of your Saturday night liaisons? Not one kiss? Ever?'
'I followed my mother's advice. Not one kiss, ever.' Severus looked at her solemnly but there was a hint of amusement in his eye.
'And now?' Hermione bit her lip, unconsciously making it even plumper and more inviting than it had been before.
'Now I am still taking my mother's advice.'
Severus bent his head lower, and she felt a soft huff of breath on her moist lips before his mouth brushed against hers briefly. The merest hint of a kiss broke the dam of pent up emotion and passion that had simmered between them, and Hermione pressed her lips firmly against his with a gentle moan. Her tongue probed against his mouth until he parted his lips, and suddenly they were kissing with abandon.
Severus tasted Hermione's kiss like a thirsty man drinking water, and her answering murmurs of pleasure made him almost shake with the feel of her in his arms. Everything he had ever dreamed was real and happening and even more wonderful and fantastic than he had imagined. She wanted him, loved him, and he was hers, right now in this moment and forever afterwards. He could hardly breathe; his chest felt like he might explode with love and pent up desire for her, and his erection was straining against her thigh uncomfortably. Reluctantly, he slowed their intense kisses, not resisting when she released his moist lips but returned again and again for gentler, exploring kisses and nips with her teeth. Their breathing was laboured, and from the flush on Hermione's cheeks he could see she was feeling the same as he. Her eyes met his and he saw the heat that burned there, and the begging question that she didn't need to ask.
'Not here, witch. Not now.' He pulled away and took her hand in his. 'Come.'
Hermione didn't resist as Severus led her towards his rooms, and she was positively ecstatic when he paused and pushed her up against the wall of the lab to kiss her again forcefully, pushing her arms above her head and letting his mouth fall to the creamy arch of her throat. He laved her skin with his tongue and kissed his way back up to her mouth, where his kisses left her sodden with lust and her legs like jelly against him.
'Gods, Hermione, what are you doing to me?' his whispered hoarsely, his gaze passionate and determined.
'I love you, Severus,' she said, the words unbidden but needing to be said all the same.
Severus' gaze softened slightly, and he took her hand and squeezed it in response before resuming their journey. This time he didn't stop until he reached his bedchamber, and he didn't give Hermione any time to draw breath. They were in each others' arms in an instant, and Hermione reached for the buttons of his jacket while he pulled her blouse from the confines of her ridiculously impractical denim jeans. His hands flattened against her lower back and he deftly flicked at her bra strap, smiling against her passionate kisses as he lifted both blouse and bra over her head swiftly. Hermione giggled and pushed his jacket over his shoulders, letting it fall heavily as she pulled his shirt over his head. They stopped then and stared at each other, the calm before the storm that was to come. Tentatively Hermione reached for his fly, and together they removed each others' trousers until they were just in their underwear. Severus cupped Hermione's breasts in his hands, running his thumbs firmly over her tightening nipples and kissing her, softly at first and then with more urgency and she stepped closer and slipped her fingers into the waistband of his black silk boxer shorts. She slid her hands down until she found him, and he moaned into her kisses as she released his cock and let his underwear drop to his ankles. Kicking them away, he wrapped his arms around Hermione and lifted her off her feet, carrying her the short distance to his bed where he laid her on top of the covers.
Hermione's hair was splayed onto his pillow like a chestnut halo, and she held her arms open to him as he lay down beside her. Caressing her face, he dropped his mouth to her inviting breasts and pulled her tight bud of a nipple between his lips, sucking slowly and running his tongue around until it was darker and more puckered. She was almost writhing beneath him, trying to caress all of his body with her hands; her kisses peppering his neck and his jaw as he moved his face to her other breast. This time as he sucked, he let his hand trace a slow, teasing path over the soft swell of her belly and let his fingertip tease itself along the silky smooth fabric of her knickers. He felt the dampness between her crotch and slipped his finger under the fabric, teasing her wet folds apart until he stroked tantalisingly against her clit. Hermione moaned and threaded her hands through the lengths of his hair, pulling his face to hers where she kissed him passionately, slipping her tongue firmly and finding his. Severus moved his fingers gently but firmly in sure strokes, knowing by the clenching of her body that it would not take long, and he was soon rewarded as she cried out and arched her back, her orgasm shuddering through her. He slid his finger into her slick wetness and groaned. The witch was tight and hot, and he needed to be inside her. Hermione started to grind against his hand and he nuzzled her neck, whispering into her ear.
'Fuck me, Hermione.'
Hermione needed no encouragement. Her orgasm had been thrilling but not enough. The brief but tantalising glimpse she had seen of his cock had made her shiver with anticipation and she had been so close to coming when he was sucking her breasts she had clenched her inner muscles to delay things for as long as she could. His sure fingers had been the end of her, but now she wanted to feel him fully. She pushed Severus back against the pillows and slid her body over his, allowing her wet knickers to brush the tip of his cock as she moved into position. She took his nipple between her fingers and rubbed gently and bent to kiss him tenderly, letting her tongue run over first his upper then his lower lip. Moving lower, she kissed his jaw and then down his throat, planting soft butterfly light kisses over his scar and then downwards. His chest was firm and lean, pale apart from the smattering of black chest hair. His nipples were pale pink, and she used her tongue to lick and caress them into puckered, darker pink peaks. Spreading her legs, she lifted herself from him and he pushed her knickers down and off with his toe. Hermione giggled until he captured her breasts in his hands and pushed them together so he could pay equal attention to her own still sensitive nipples.
'God, Severus, it's too much,' she gasped.
'You have much to learn, witch,' he said, a hint of promise in his voice.
She slid her wet folds over his cock, eliciting a gasp of surprise and pleasure from him. She teased him a little more, and the reached for his firm shaft, positioning him at her entrance and staring at his face. She paused as he looked up into her face, his eyes burning as he caressed her curves and ran his hands over her buttocks.
'Don't tease, Hermione. I have wanted this for so long,' he whispered. Hermione felt her heart swell, and her pussy throb, and she gave him what they both wanted. Slowly she inched herself onto his cock, and they gasped in unison as he filled her. Hermione felt a frisson of lust and sat back slightly, allowing the head of his cock to rest against the front of her pubis. The sensation was intense, and she began to rock, slowly at first but then, as Severus gripped her hip with one hand and tweaked at her left nipple with the other, she increased her pace, revelling in the feel of him as she pistoned him in and out. Beads of sweat appeared on Severus' brow and Hermione knew he was close to orgasm as he cock started to go even harder inside her. She slipped her hand between them and squeezed the base of his cock, something she had learned to prolong the male orgasm. Severus' eyes widened in surprise and he grinned at her, flipping her over suddenly and thrusting himself back inside her firmly.
'Touch yourself; I want to see you come apart on my cock. You just love it, don't you witch?'
'Gods, yes I fucking do,' she cried as he rammed himself into her over and over. Hermione's fingers found her clit and she started to stroke herself quickly, the feel of his cock spurring her on, the look on his face as he watched himself thrusting in and out of her wetness.
'Fuck, Hermione. Come for me, come for me,' Severus chanted. His eyes closed as he lost himself in sensation, and Hermione had no choice but to do exactly as he said. Her orgasm rippled through her, stronger and longer than the first, and her legs shuddered as she cried out her pleasure. Severus lifted a leg and hooked it onto his shoulder, and moved his hips in a circular motion. Hermione kept her fingers on her clit and he couldn't take his eyes off where their bodies were joined, until with a groan, he lifted both of her legs and held her ankles and thrust deeply.
'Fuck!' He cried, throwing his head back in the ecstasy of his climax. His teeth clenched as he thrust twice more, and then collapsed, spent, on top of her.
***
There was low candle light dancing over the walls, and the smell of sex in the air. Two pale bodies lay sleeping in the middle of a large, plain bed, bedcovers half covering them, their legs entwined. The woman in the bed moved in her sleep, and the man pulled her back against his chest and cupped her bare breasts, waking her. His hand drifted down under the covers, and the woman began to moan.
Winky nodded in satisfaction and Apparated silently back to the kitchens.
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Latest 25 Reviews for 49 and Never Been Kissed
107 Reviews | 7.6/10 Average
damnnn it was hot hahahaha
Perfect, dearest neelix! Absolutely perfect! You are the best.
Response from neelix (Author of 49 and Never Been Kissed)
Thank you for all of your lovely reviews, they really make me smile x
Going much better than I had expected. I really don't remember the details. I wonder if I have early signs of dementia. Seriously.
I wrote much more the first time I read this but I seem to remember that it all works out OK in the end so I will suffice it to say; Hermione, you're a stupid little know-it-all, and I hope you're pleased with yourself. Do grow up you silly girl. Let the man see his whore in peace.
Poor wittle boo boo Snape. He's all hot and bothered for his Hermione and doesn't even know she would be thrilled if he would only give her a small smile and a, "Have a nice weekend". I'm sure it would take only a small amount of relatively nice behavior and a couple of stimulating intellectual discussions and she would be more than happy for him to teach her how he likes it. Hopefully, that will be happening soon, for all of our sakes.
It was stupid for her to marry the ginger twat. Any of us could have told her that but she was too young to hear us and I'm sure there was a lot of pressure put on her to go through with it. I'm just glad Severus Snape is a man who believes in second chances. His came at an awfully high price but he was grateful for it non-the-less. Now he's paying it forward. I could just kiss him for that! Hee Hee. But, I'm guessing Hermione gets to have the first kiss sooner or later in this adventure.
I read this a long time ago but remember enjoying very much so it's time to give it another go! I have terrible memory so while I remember the general gist of the story, I dont' remember details so everything old is new again for me. So far, so good!
What a yummy read! Thanks!
Very good!
Aww I liked this chappie
Hehehehehehe
Steamy
Caught in a pickle, eh proffesor? Hehe
WOW! That was amazing! Thanks for writing!!!
Lol nice prompts you were given! Loved threw story, the naughty bits were awesome, though I am surprised he knew it was hermione during the switch. I guess the nose knows, huh?
Response from neelix (Author of 49 and Never Been Kissed)
It was Amortentia. That was explained in the story I think. I don't know if you can amend your review? It should say the, not threw. Thanks for reading.
I had to quickly review to point out mistakes I've found. Her "main" of hair should be "mane," and i forget where it was, but a "lose" should have been "loose". ;) Hope I'm not offending by pointing them out. I love the story so far!!
Response from neelix (Author of 49 and Never Been Kissed)
Thank you. I'll amend them later. Posted in haste!
This was so much fun to read!
Thank you for sharing, I love that you made Hermione just as kinky as Severus. ;)
As always Neelix you write to please!! And please you did, love the Amortentia descriptions. I can almost smell Severus myself!! I want to thank you Neelix,you and Teddy's fan fiction writing is what really drew me into this fandom!!! Always will be a devoted fan~dee
Absolutely smutgloriously delicious!!!! What else can I say? It's a new word I made up just for you. It was exactly the kind of story I was looking for tonight.
Response from neelix (Author of 49 and Never Been Kissed)
Bless you :) Thank you for reading my little smutglorious fic and inventing new words for me!
Response from neelix (Author of 49 and Never Been Kissed)
Bless you :) Thank you for reading my little smutglorious fic and inventing new words for me!
That was totally awesome! I forgive Hermione and am so happy for them. I knew you were a skilled story teller and would anticipate my worries then soothe them as the crisis worked itself out into a wonderful climax. The Amortentia was the ingredient that made all the other concerns unimportant. They were made for each other. That's all that really matters in the end. And what a wonderfully sexy Severus he is too. I love the way he stuck up for her. Ron is such a stupid little speckled toad. He must have a death wish to want to pick a fight with Severus Snape. I didn't review the last couple of chapters because I didn't want to stop the flow of the story. I really like the way Severus treated Winky when he told her she was a good elf even though he had a terrible hangover. He was even more lovable than ever after that. Everything went great with Rosie. I'm very glad she cared about Severus' happiness and not just the money. And the waiting to kiss the girl he loved and who loved him was wonderful, romantic and sexy. Well done gentle author. That's why you write the stories and I just read them.
Very nice chapter! I'm thawing. I guess Hermione doesn't have to be perfect. She is only a witch after all. But I still hope he doesn't ever know she spied on him because she suspected he was still an evil death eater. He can find out she spied on him. That will probably be pretty hot. But I don't want him to know she doesn't trust him. Snape is hotter than ever. He feels bad for what he did, but she hasn't admitted that she was wrong to assume the worst of him after he'd been so nice to her. They obviously belong together. I'm sure you'll work it out.
"Lloooosseee!" That witless, inane girl. At first I thought Severus was playing the "Lucy" character, but now it's turned out to be Hermione! One minute he has a total personality change from Bastard Extraordinaire to Mister Nicy-Nice after she practically destroys his potions store and "Little Miss Know-It-All" doesn't give it a second thought as she goes tripping along like Little Red Ridding Hood on a lark.
And then now, NOW, she has the nerve, the unmitigated, self important, pompous, impertinent and faithless nerve to suspect Severus Snape of actually trying to revive Voldemort's reign of terror simply because he wanted to keep a secret from her, because he had personal business he didn't choose to share with her? AND THEN, she has the rudest, most shameless, insulting, intrusive, arrogant gall to spy on her boss--to spy on Severus Fucking Snape as if it was her God given right and duty? How dare she! Who does she think she is anyway?
I could have tolerated insatiable curiosity leading to ill-mannered snooping, but her assuming the worst of him and making it her business to make sure he wasn't up to something dastardly like when she was 11 years old, ruined what could have been a totally erotic adult encounter. She just proved everything bad he had ever thought about her is true. Now she couldn't pay me to fuck her if I was Severus Snape. Imagine how hurt his feelings will be if he finds out she spied on him because she didn't trust him. He expected her to be nosy. But this is betrayal. I hope he never finds out.
All of that said, I haven't read the entire story and you may work this out so I won't feel so betrayed on his behalf. Please know that this is not a criticism of your storytelling prowess. You are on my favorite authors list. I'm just angry at Hermione right now. I really want them to become a couple, but she's been mean spirited after he did her a favor. I hope she is extremely ashamed of herself so I can like her again. Please don't be offended at my over the top hissy-fit. It's one of my most grievous faults. I'm impulsively over emotional and I have the tendency to either hate something or love something but am seldom lukewarm about anything. This is why I must muster all of my self discipline and never ever allow myself to start tweeting. I would be totally fired, sued, locked up by some secret service agency who might take me seriously and then murdered in my bed by the end of the 1st day.
I'm poised in anticipation! It feels like a smutty "I Love Lucy" episode. You know he is going to get so caught. (I don't know if you are old enough to know about that old show. Sometimes I had to close my eyes because I couldn't stand it when I knew Ricky was about to find out what she'd done. I was a kid and hated it when she would predictably get herself in a fix, kind of like this one, every episode, only exceedingly more G rated.)
My goodness that was a serious about face. He went from total bastard to normally polite and even forgivingly nice in 60! I'd be wondering if I had gone through some kind of portal to an alternate universe in the explosion, if I were Hermione right now. He sure mended his ways quickly. Wouldn't a normal person be suspicious? On Snape's side; I'd be worried about making the polyjuice if I were him, unless he harbors a secret desire to get caught. Nothing gets past her observation. He also has to know she won't stop wondering who would want polyjuice. Unless he wants her to catch him, he'd better keep his brewing to Moaning Myrtle's bathroom during Hermione's off hours and tell her the customer canceled the order. If he was Slytherin enough, he should have just frankly told her he supplies it to the local whore house for their high end customers and gets paid quite nicely for it. It's a perfectly believable cover story. The man is painfully out of practice.
Seriously though, would that be illegal? As long as it's legal she'd probably just be disgusted and let it go. If it's not she'd probably feel like she needed to address the issue, sooner or later. All he'd have to do is say he won't do it anymore if it upsets her but that she will have to make up the difference from her pay. That's the Snapishly Slytherine thing to do.
Poor Snapy-poo. He's as lonely as Hermione. Worse than Hermione, even. Hermione got taken out to dinner and he had to pay for a blow job. Does he realize how isolating it is for her to just brew all day and not even get to eat in the Great Hall? He probably hasn't even thought about it. Well, now he has too much time on his hands because she has brewed all his potions for him. I wonder why he's piling so much work on her. Maybe he thinks she likes it. Maybe he's afraid that is she gets bored she'll leave. Maybe he's afraid to talk to her so he keeps her too busy to have to make conversation. He's a right mess! Still, it was nice of him to give her that job. Is his sexual attraction to her a new thing or has he been thinking about her this way for a while? Won't she be surprised!