New Chapter for Angels With Broken Wings
Angels With Broken Wings
felinefelixfelicis101 Reviews | 5.87/10 (101 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
The war may have ended, but for some of its heroes there doesn't seem to be a happily ever after.
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Oh no! But, Hermione is the right one to have on your side.
Oh, poor guy. But, now he can put survivied a tiny needlestick to his extensive resume.
It had such potentional but it felt so rushed. It wasn't bad, but it definitely could have used a bit more depth. : /
The plot thickens, I do so love thickend plot. looking forward to the next update.
Short , but sweet. Thank you
The mind clicks into gear, as soon as she has something worthwhile to do.
I am finding Hermiones attitude a little diffcult to understand.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
She's a bit emotionally fragile from recent events, and jumps to some pessimistic conclusions. She's expecting Snape to be a good host and make dinner the first night, at which point they can discuss her taking a turn cooking in the future, but he doesn't do so and then asks for supper in bed, so she assumes that he assumed she'd behave like a house elf and gets insulted rather than the truth which is that his health is worse than she thought.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
Thank you, I understand your POV now.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
She's a bit emotionally fragile from recent events, and jumps to some pessimistic conclusions. She's expecting Snape to be a good host and make dinner the first night, at which point they can discuss her taking a turn cooking in the future, but he doesn't do so and then asks for supper in bed, so she assumes that he assumed she'd behave like a house elf and gets insulted rather than the truth which is that his health is worse than she thought.
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
Thank you, I understand your POV now.
Moving quickly, I hope someone is sill around to find Rons behaviour abhorrent, and have a little chat with him.
Please DON'T kill Ron off, let him live , in misery.
I have enjoyed this so far. A challenge to make Severus' life better while getting her own back on track without dealing with underhanded Weasley tactics. I look forward to your next installment.
Thank you for sharing~Elou
As always totally happy to see a new update. I am equally happy that Severus, no matter how much he actually don't want to, sees the reason for Hermione to do her research on his problem:-))
Hermione really is trying! I hope she succeeds in helping Severus feel better physically.
Great story. It is really starting to get interesting. Looking forward to more.
Bossy as always. *grin* I like the idea of Snape being afraid of needles. It just goes to show he's human. ^_^
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
Human and suffering some PTSD! I can't imagine being comfortable with anything piecing your skin after nearly getting killed by a snakebite.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
Human and suffering some PTSD! I can't imagine being comfortable with anything piecing your skin after nearly getting killed by a snakebite.
I hope she can help him.
I wish her thoughts weren't so uncharitable about our sickly Severus, but I hope they'll reach an accord.
I was glad that he knew who drove her to run away. I'm saddened by the weak Snape, but I hope that Hermione can help him while he helps her.
totally trilledt to see the update, thank you so much.
Hermione's made herself at home quite easily. And I don't think Severus will be protesting much!
It's hard to say who's more wretched here! This can only mean that they're good for each other. Not that I'm expecting they recognise it any time soon.
Nice chapter!
You know, the fact that Severus is too far gone to care that Hermione just showed up on his doorstep and she is too broken to mind staying with him is utterly sad... Hopefully they can heal each other.
Severus is being much nicer to Hermione than I would have ever expected.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
His spirit is too broken to care. Were he not in constant pain he might have the energy to be his asshole self, but as it is that takes too much effort.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
His spirit is too broken to care. Were he not in constant pain he might have the energy to be his asshole self, but as it is that takes too much effort.
Thank you so much for a new update, I really liked Severus reaction, for a man who has been through and seen as much as him, it was very belivable and good.
Interesting start, I will stick with it to see how creatively Ronald is killed. *giggle* Or do you have fate worse than death for him?
Than you for sharing~Elou
I usually don't read stories in which Hermione allows a man to hit her, but I'll give this one a chance since you are unafraid to have a character get an abortion. Good for you; that took courage. I am pro-choice, personally. (with a wonderful child, by the way)
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
I wouldn't call it "letting"... She sure as hell defends herself, and ultimately probably ends up winning most of the fights. To quote Marie in Aristocats, a lady doesn't start fights but she can finish them! And (spoiler) she leaves in the next chapter when she finds out that the birth control accident wasn't an accident after all.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
I wouldn't call it "letting"... She sure as hell defends herself, and ultimately probably ends up winning most of the fights. To quote Marie in Aristocats, a lady doesn't start fights but she can finish them! And (spoiler) she leaves in the next chapter when she finds out that the birth control accident wasn't an accident after all.