Experiments
Chapter 8 of 9
felinefelixfelicisSeverus's test results come back and they're not what either of them expected.
ReviewedWhen Severus woke the next morning, it was to find a breakfast tray and a vial of pain potion floating by his bed. He downed the potion and thoughtfully munched on his toast while he mulled over recent events.
Having the girl there really had been a blessing, after all. It meant regular meals and some improvement in his health. The dehumidifier and Blood-Replenishing Potion had both noticeably improved his condition. Strokes of genius, really. He certainly wouldn't have thought of them himself. And irritating as she had been as a student, Severus appreciated her quick mind and work ethic. She said she thought herself on the right track to finding the source of his ailment, and he believed her. He wouldn't have felt comfortable saying as much to her, but she might well be the best possible person to have there helping him.
But why was she there? She had come seeking use of a Floo after some unpleasant event between her and Weasley, but she'd stayed after learning that he did not have one, and several days later she was still there. Why was an attractive and talented young witch not only willingly staying in his house, but spending all her time trying to help him? Him, of all people. He wasn't exactly attractive and there was no denying that he was an unpleasant person. He didn't understand it at all.
Hermione was adding stain to a fourth slide when the charmed stairs to the laboratory creaked into motion again.
"Professor! You're up and about!"
"Anything else obvious you'd like to point out?" He paused a moment. "I seem to be having one of my better days." He limped over to the bench where her cauldrons sat and peered into them. "What have you found?"
She scrambled to join him. "I've run every test for toxins that I know and several that I found in your library. They've all come up negative. All the ingredients seemed fresh, but I could have been mistaken…"
"Doubtful. I have been careful about maintaining my stores."
She nodded, still looking nervous. "There was one thing…"
"Do tell."
"Your blood doesn't look quite right under a microscope. I don't pretend to be an expert on the composition of blood, but the cell types don't seem to be in the usual proportion. I've prepared several slides now to make sure it wasn't a fluke. They're all the same."
He looked curious. "Let me take a look." He peered through the microscope, and indeed something wasn't quite normal. "That isn't typical. You are correct. But if nothing showed up as toxins, then it must be something originating from my own body."
"Oh my God." Hermione was frozen wide-eyed. "I think… What if… Why didn't I consider that before?" She turned and sprinted up the moving stairs. Above him Severus could hear her pounding up the stairs to the second floor.
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Well, while not 100% at least he has regained his vigor and most of his mobility.
Poor Severus. Unknown ailment and now he gets Hermione's retreating back as she sprints for books before sharing her theory.
See, that wasn't too bad? At least he got through that.
Poor Severus getting subjected to the way her mind works. Hopefully she can find something to help him.
ah nothing like assembling anything. At least she has a starting point to help him.
Ah, yes, Hermione and her search for more knowledge. Thank goodness she reads and can help.
Well, she's starting to get an idea of what life is like for the recovering Severus. Wonder how much he'll let her in?
Poor Severus, so broken and so desperate for contact with others and help that he'd ask Miss Know It All. And just her luck, isn't it? Or is it fate?
Well, that is an interesting twist by Hermione there. Good on her for realizing that she and Ron aren't long term compatible. And poor Severus, ignored after all that he did.
Im sorry that you lost your way with this one, it was very good, but you need to go where your muse sends you. Focus on the storylines that you feel have something to offer. If the inspiration is there, the stories (and the readers) will come. :D
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
Yeah, this was a good idea but I knew from the start where it was going to go so it kind of drew itself straight in that direction instead of exploring before stumbling onto a conclusion. I should try not to post stories that I already know how they'll end.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
Yeah, this was a good idea but I knew from the start where it was going to go so it kind of drew itself straight in that direction instead of exploring before stumbling onto a conclusion. I should try not to post stories that I already know how they'll end.
I'm glad they found a happy ending. I would have liked to have known a little more, but hey, as long as they made it there, that is what is important.
Well, what did she give him? and which autoimmune condition did he have? Are they partners or something more? It was a good story, but you ended it so abruptly that it kind of fell flat, sorry to say.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
The specific autoimmune condition I invented for him does not match any documented Muggle one that I found doing research, but it is consistent with what was said about Arthur's healing process after HIS encounter with Nagini, and, considering that it had a magical origin (and he went much longer without treatment than Arthur did), it makes sense that it would not have developed exactly like any of the Muggle conditions and he would be hit more severely than Arthur was.They're experimenting with different combinations of drugs for quite some time, it doesn't make sense to list them all. Nor do I know enough about this branch of medicine to predict which specific drugs would work best on his condition.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
The specific autoimmune condition I invented for him does not match any documented Muggle one that I found doing research, but it is consistent with what was said about Arthur's healing process after HIS encounter with Nagini, and, considering that it had a magical origin (and he went much longer without treatment than Arthur did), it makes sense that it would not have developed exactly like any of the Muggle conditions and he would be hit more severely than Arthur was.They're experimenting with different combinations of drugs for quite some time, it doesn't make sense to list them all. Nor do I know enough about this branch of medicine to predict which specific drugs would work best on his condition.
I normally adore your work. But this ending..... Fell flat.I was so excited to see an update. Then i read it, and "Oh.."balloon deflated..hate to say it.. but it was an Awful last chapter..You didn't resolve anything.It had such great potential to be a great fic...
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
Problem: Severus is very sick. Solution: Hermione tracks down the problem and he immediately starts getting better.Problem: Hermione has lost everything. Solution: By stumbling across Severus, she finds something to do that makes her feel useful in the short term and that eventually results in work to do in the long term that she enjoys.Initial problems which caused the events of the story resolved.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
Problem: Severus is very sick. Solution: Hermione tracks down the problem and he immediately starts getting better.Problem: Hermione has lost everything. Solution: By stumbling across Severus, she finds something to do that makes her feel useful in the short term and that eventually results in work to do in the long term that she enjoys.Initial problems which caused the events of the story resolved.
I hope he's cooperating because he trusts her and not because he is just too weak to do anything else, LOL.
Having all of this busy work is surely good for Hermione to take her mind off of her recent issues with Ron. I do hope she can help Severus.
Well, if you have a researching Hermione on your side, things are looking up.
Oh, Hermione, give the guy a break. He has an awesome library. :)
This seems mutually beneficial. How can they go wrong?
Oh, this can't be good.
LOL. Even the toughest men can pale before a needle. :)
Now she gets it. It'll be good for her to have something to do.
She'll work out he's actually quite weak soon and feel like a right heel.
Opportunities for both to help each other now. :0
Not happy campers, then. :0
Great story! Thank you!!