Dawning Comprehension
Chapter 4 of 9
felinefelixfelicisSeverus has a bad day. Hermione starts to feel a little sorry for him.
ReviewedThe next morning dawned cold, damp, and stormy. Severus woke feeling so stiff and achy, he could barely breathe, let alone move. He fumbled for his wand to Accio potions, blankets, and a hot water bottle, but only managed to knock it off the nightstand and onto the floor. Bugger. He couldn't reach it there, not as stiff as he was.
Hermione was not in the best of moods. The weather didn't help any with her cramps, the house was so quiet that the stormy weather felt depressing rather than cozy, and once again there was no sign that any cooking had taken place. It seemed she would have to play house-elf to him if she wanted food.
"Breakfast is in the kitchen." She turned and walked away from his room briskly. Damned if she'd be waiting on him again! But as she left he called her back.
"Hermione, wait a minute." She wouldn't have stopped if she hadn't been so surprised to hear him use her given name. "Could you please see if there are any more vials of dark purple potion? If they're not in the suite bathroom, check the pantry and the lab."
There was no dark purple potion, not in any sort of container in any of the places. It didn't escape her notice that he nearly whimpered when she told him, or that he was paler than usual. "It's medicine, isn't it?" she guessed. "What is it? How are you feeling? Maybe there's something to do to relieve your symptoms while I brew you more of it."
"Essence of Willow Pain Elixir."
She noticed that his breathing was shallow.
"Everything hurts. Moving feels like ripping open cuts. I ache all over, every inch of me. I would have Summoned blankets and a hot water bottle, but I dropped my wand and I can't reach it."
She retrieved his wand and Summoned the items.
She had missed brewing while living in a tiny flat with no place to do it. It was a calming activity, and for the first time since the end of the war, she felt needed. Nor was she still mad at her new housemate. He was genuinely unwell, and he needed her assistance. He probably hated needing it, but he did, and she was able to help and that felt good.
"When did this start?" She handed him a vial of the fresh batch of potion. "There must be something to be done for it besides just managing the pain."
He gulped it down with some relief. "While recovering from the snakebite. The pains aren't new. Everywhere I've been injured in the past hurts now."
"I'll do some research. In the meantime, is there any pattern you've noticed to how bad the pain is? Is it worse after spending time in a certain position? Does the weather have any effect? What about different foods?"
"Still at it with the questions, I see. Yes, damp weather makes it worse."
"Have you seen a Healer about it? What did they say?"
"I have no Floo connection, and I'm not about to attempt travel when I'm not feeling well." He had taken on an expression like a sulky little boy. She ignored it.
"Hold still a moment." She cast a diagnostic spell and surveyed the rainbow of colors glowing across his skin. "I've never used that before, but it looks like it worked. Do those red spots correspond to where it hurts?"
He looked down. "Yes."
"Well, according to what I've read about this spell, it looks to me like something is attacking all the scar tissue in your body. That sounds vaguely familiar. There has to be something about it in the literature." She lifted the spell, already distracted by the prospect of research. "I'm off to run an errand, and then I'll be in the library doing research if you need anything."
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Well, while not 100% at least he has regained his vigor and most of his mobility.
Poor Severus. Unknown ailment and now he gets Hermione's retreating back as she sprints for books before sharing her theory.
See, that wasn't too bad? At least he got through that.
Poor Severus getting subjected to the way her mind works. Hopefully she can find something to help him.
ah nothing like assembling anything. At least she has a starting point to help him.
Ah, yes, Hermione and her search for more knowledge. Thank goodness she reads and can help.
Well, she's starting to get an idea of what life is like for the recovering Severus. Wonder how much he'll let her in?
Poor Severus, so broken and so desperate for contact with others and help that he'd ask Miss Know It All. And just her luck, isn't it? Or is it fate?
Well, that is an interesting twist by Hermione there. Good on her for realizing that she and Ron aren't long term compatible. And poor Severus, ignored after all that he did.
Im sorry that you lost your way with this one, it was very good, but you need to go where your muse sends you. Focus on the storylines that you feel have something to offer. If the inspiration is there, the stories (and the readers) will come. :D
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
Yeah, this was a good idea but I knew from the start where it was going to go so it kind of drew itself straight in that direction instead of exploring before stumbling onto a conclusion. I should try not to post stories that I already know how they'll end.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
Yeah, this was a good idea but I knew from the start where it was going to go so it kind of drew itself straight in that direction instead of exploring before stumbling onto a conclusion. I should try not to post stories that I already know how they'll end.
I'm glad they found a happy ending. I would have liked to have known a little more, but hey, as long as they made it there, that is what is important.
Well, what did she give him? and which autoimmune condition did he have? Are they partners or something more? It was a good story, but you ended it so abruptly that it kind of fell flat, sorry to say.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
The specific autoimmune condition I invented for him does not match any documented Muggle one that I found doing research, but it is consistent with what was said about Arthur's healing process after HIS encounter with Nagini, and, considering that it had a magical origin (and he went much longer without treatment than Arthur did), it makes sense that it would not have developed exactly like any of the Muggle conditions and he would be hit more severely than Arthur was.They're experimenting with different combinations of drugs for quite some time, it doesn't make sense to list them all. Nor do I know enough about this branch of medicine to predict which specific drugs would work best on his condition.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
The specific autoimmune condition I invented for him does not match any documented Muggle one that I found doing research, but it is consistent with what was said about Arthur's healing process after HIS encounter with Nagini, and, considering that it had a magical origin (and he went much longer without treatment than Arthur did), it makes sense that it would not have developed exactly like any of the Muggle conditions and he would be hit more severely than Arthur was.They're experimenting with different combinations of drugs for quite some time, it doesn't make sense to list them all. Nor do I know enough about this branch of medicine to predict which specific drugs would work best on his condition.
I normally adore your work. But this ending..... Fell flat.I was so excited to see an update. Then i read it, and "Oh.."balloon deflated..hate to say it.. but it was an Awful last chapter..You didn't resolve anything.It had such great potential to be a great fic...
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
Problem: Severus is very sick. Solution: Hermione tracks down the problem and he immediately starts getting better.Problem: Hermione has lost everything. Solution: By stumbling across Severus, she finds something to do that makes her feel useful in the short term and that eventually results in work to do in the long term that she enjoys.Initial problems which caused the events of the story resolved.
Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)
Problem: Severus is very sick. Solution: Hermione tracks down the problem and he immediately starts getting better.Problem: Hermione has lost everything. Solution: By stumbling across Severus, she finds something to do that makes her feel useful in the short term and that eventually results in work to do in the long term that she enjoys.Initial problems which caused the events of the story resolved.
I hope he's cooperating because he trusts her and not because he is just too weak to do anything else, LOL.
Having all of this busy work is surely good for Hermione to take her mind off of her recent issues with Ron. I do hope she can help Severus.
Well, if you have a researching Hermione on your side, things are looking up.
Oh, Hermione, give the guy a break. He has an awesome library. :)
This seems mutually beneficial. How can they go wrong?
Oh, this can't be good.
LOL. Even the toughest men can pale before a needle. :)
Now she gets it. It'll be good for her to have something to do.
She'll work out he's actually quite weak soon and feel like a right heel.
Opportunities for both to help each other now. :0
Not happy campers, then. :0
Great story! Thank you!!