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Angels With Broken Wings Chapter 6: Another Weakness
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Angels With Broken Wings

1: The Things That Get Overlooked

2: A New Friendship

3: Mixing Messages

4: Dawning Comprehension

5: Starting Point

6: Another Weakness

7: Easier Than He Thought

8: Experiments

9: A Happy Ending After All

Another Weakness

Angels With Broken Wings

Chapter 6 of 9

felinefelixfelicis

Severus takes the news surprisingly peacefully.

Drama Friendship Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 5,203 Words 9 Chapters Complete
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To his surprise, Severus felt slightly better after an afternoon with the contraption running. It wasn't a huge difference, but he definitely felt less stiff than when he woke up.

Hermione brought in two trays this time, pulling up a chair to join him. They ate quietly for a minute before Hermione brought up what was on her mind.

"I have two guesses on what's wrong. Something is attacking all your scar tissue, and it's probably either snake venom or an environmental toxin. The venom shouldn't still be in your system, but since we don't really know much about Nagini it could be."

"So what's the next step in your research?"

"A blood test would be the most productive." She noticed that he paled slightly. "Are… are you scared of needles?"

He ignored the question. "Do you really think that's necessary?"

"Yes. Absolutely. There is something in your bloodstream that shouldn't be. We need to know what it is so that we can get rid of it." He opened his mouth as if to protest, but she shot him a look. "Unless of course you'd rather stay like this." He shut his mouth again, looking almost sulky. "That's what I thought. We'll do it when your potion wears off in a couple of hours. I'm perfectly capable of doing it myself – I learned a lot of basic medical things helping after the battle – but we can get a Healer if you'd rather."

"No… You'll do fine I'm sure." He hated the idea, but she'd already seen him weak, so that was better than a stranger, wasn't it? And damn it, he was scared of needles. They reminded him a little too much of snake fangs these days. He wished he could take a Calming Draught beforehand, but no, potions in his system could mess up the results of the blood test. Blast it all to hell!

Hermione was speaking again and he forced himself to listen. Gryffindor though she was, the girl had a knack for coming up with good ideas. Not that he'd admit it, of course.

"Your lab is rather well-stocked, so I shouldn't need to go and get anything before doing the blood test. But while we're waiting for that pain potion to wear off, I'd like to run a few more diagnostics on you, if that's alright. It can't hurt to have a little more information."

He nodded a little stiffly. "Very well."

With a wave of her wand, a quill and parchment appeared in the air by his bed, scribbling down figures. Hermione frowned at it.

"That's not good," she said, more to herself than to him. "I suppose it's to be expected of course…" She trailed off, then paused a moment and addressed him. "I don't like the looks of your blood pressure. I think I saw some Blood Replenishing Potion downstairs. Let's get some of that into you and see if we can't improve it."

True to her word, Hermione was back within minutes with a vial for him. "Here, take this. It's the last vial, but I'm going to make up a fresh batch while we wait for the pain potion to wear off. Until then, I'll be in the lab if you need me."

Author's Note: While this story is not done yet, please take the time to click here to tell me which story you'd like to see me post next. Thanks!

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Latest 25 Reviews for Angels With Broken Wings

101 Reviews  |  5.87/10 Average

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phoenix

Well, while not 100% at least he has regained his vigor and most of his mobility.

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phoenix

Poor Severus. Unknown ailment and now he gets Hermione's retreating back as she sprints for books before sharing her theory.

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phoenix

See, that wasn't too bad? At least he got through that.

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phoenix

Poor Severus getting subjected to the way her mind works. Hopefully she can find something to help him.

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phoenix

ah nothing like assembling anything. At least she has a starting point to help him.

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phoenix

Ah, yes, Hermione and her search for more knowledge. Thank goodness she reads and can help.

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phoenix

Well, she's starting to get an idea of what life is like for the recovering Severus. Wonder how much he'll let her in?

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phoenix

Poor Severus, so broken and so desperate for contact with others and help that he'd ask Miss Know It All. And just her luck, isn't it? Or is it fate?

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phoenix

Well, that is an interesting twist by Hermione there. Good on her for realizing that she and Ron aren't long term compatible. And poor Severus, ignored after all that he did.

10/10

rosered

Im sorry that you lost your way with this one, it was very good, but you need to go where your muse sends you.  Focus on the storylines that you feel have something to offer.  If the inspiration is there, the stories (and the readers) will come.  :D

Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)

Yeah, this was a good idea but I knew from the start where it was going to go so it kind of drew itself straight in that direction instead of exploring before stumbling onto a conclusion. I should try not to post stories that I already know how they'll end.

Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)

Yeah, this was a good idea but I knew from the start where it was going to go so it kind of drew itself straight in that direction instead of exploring before stumbling onto a conclusion. I should try not to post stories that I already know how they'll end.

9/10

HBAR

I'm glad they found a happy ending.  I would have liked to have known a little more, but hey, as long as they made it there, that is what is important.

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orm irian

Well, what did she give him? and which autoimmune condition did he have? Are they partners or something more? It was a good story, but you ended it so abruptly that it kind of fell flat, sorry to say.

Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)

The specific autoimmune condition I invented for him does not match any documented Muggle one that I found doing research, but it is consistent with what was said about Arthur's healing process after HIS encounter with Nagini, and, considering that it had a magical origin (and he went much longer without treatment than Arthur did), it makes sense that it would not have developed exactly like any of the Muggle conditions and he would be hit more severely than Arthur was.They're experimenting with different combinations of drugs for quite some time, it doesn't make sense to list them all. Nor do I know enough about this branch of medicine to predict which specific drugs would work best on his condition.

Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)

The specific autoimmune condition I invented for him does not match any documented Muggle one that I found doing research, but it is consistent with what was said about Arthur's healing process after HIS encounter with Nagini, and, considering that it had a magical origin (and he went much longer without treatment than Arthur did), it makes sense that it would not have developed exactly like any of the Muggle conditions and he would be hit more severely than Arthur was.They're experimenting with different combinations of drugs for quite some time, it doesn't make sense to list them all. Nor do I know enough about this branch of medicine to predict which specific drugs would work best on his condition.

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chyara

I normally adore your work.  But this ending..... Fell flat.I was so excited to see an update.  Then i read it, and "Oh.."balloon deflated..hate to say it.. but it was an Awful last chapter..You didn't resolve anything.It had such great potential to be a great fic...

Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)

Problem: Severus is very sick. Solution: Hermione tracks down the problem and he immediately starts getting better.Problem: Hermione has lost everything. Solution: By stumbling across Severus, she finds something to do that makes her feel useful in the short term and that eventually results in work to do in the long term that she enjoys.Initial problems which caused the events of the story resolved.

Response from felinefelixfelicis (Author of Angels With Broken Wings)

Problem: Severus is very sick. Solution: Hermione tracks down the problem and he immediately starts getting better.Problem: Hermione has lost everything. Solution: By stumbling across Severus, she finds something to do that makes her feel useful in the short term and that eventually results in work to do in the long term that she enjoys.Initial problems which caused the events of the story resolved.

10/10

HBAR

I hope he's cooperating because he trusts her and not because he is just too weak to do anything else, LOL.

10/10

HBAR

Having all of this busy work is surely good for Hermione to take her mind off of her recent issues with Ron.  I do hope she can help Severus.

10/10

HBAR

Well, if you have a researching Hermione on your side, things are looking up.

10/10

HBAR

Oh, Hermione, give the guy a break.  He has an awesome library. :)

10/10

HBAR

This seems mutually beneficial.  How can they go wrong?

10/10

HBAR

Oh, this can't be good.

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sunny33

LOL.  Even the toughest men can pale before a needle. :)

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sunny33

Now she gets it.  It'll be good for her to have something to do.

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sunny33

She'll work out he's actually quite weak soon and feel like a right heel.

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sunny33

Opportunities for both to help each other now. :0

10/10

sunny33

Not happy campers, then. :0

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Severus49

Great story! Thank you!!

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