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Potions Under Duress Bat Out of Hell
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Bat Out of Hell

1: Bat Out of Hell

2: Hot Summer Night

3: Heaven Can Wait

4: All Revved Up with no Place to Go

5: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

6: For Crying Out Loud

7: Paradise by the Dashboard Light

Bat Out of Hell

bleddyn

129 Reviews   |   129 Ratings, 0 Likes, 24 Favorites )

Humor Romance Action/Adventure post-DH/DH compliant Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 47,753 Words 7 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Ten years after the Battle of Hogwarts, Snape agrees to help the Muggle Law Enforcement Liaison Unit. What has he let himself in for?

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Chapters (7)

Chapter 1: Bat Out of Hell

Chapter 2: Hot Summer Night

Chapter 3: Heaven Can Wait

Chapter 4: All Revved Up with no Place to Go

Chapter 5: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

Chapter 6: For Crying Out Loud

Chapter 7: Paradise by the Dashboard Light


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bleddyn

Member Since 2012  |  2 Stories  |  Favorited by 68  |  15 Reviews Written  |  152 Review Responses

Thirty-something Welsh woman with a job, two kids, a dog and increasingly neglected housework due to my new-found obsession with the world of HP fanfic. Dusting just slipped even lower down my list of priorities ...  

Oh, and "bleddyn" is a Welsh name meaning "little wolf", in case you were wondering!

Reviews for Bat Out of Hell

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10/10

profrogue

I absolutely adored this story!  I'm glad to see you have a sequel in the works - I'm looking forward to it!  Thank  you!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it!

0/10

snapesbeatrice

Super-great job on your first SS/HG fanfic! I look forward to many more.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thank you so much. I will do my best to oblige!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thank you so much. I will do my best to oblige!

9/10

jaden

Enjoyed your story very much!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks!

10/10

snapesbeatrice

Don't recall having read any of your stories before, and that's a shame because I'm really enjoying Bat Out of Hell. The premise is fun and you have a delightful writing style. Thank you for sharing your tale.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

And thank you for leaving such a lovely review!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

And thank you for leaving such a lovely review!

10/10

MsTree

Well, here's another one to go on my Favorites list. Think he'll ever tell her the truth? ^_^

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Well, you'll just have to wait and see....

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Well, you'll just have to wait and see....

10/10

hidden

I love it! Can't wait for the sequel.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

I'll try not to keep you waiting too long!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

I'll try not to keep you waiting too long!

10/10

siage

Loved it!!!! Really glad you kept the angst short. Wish the rest was longer. Guess I'll have to wait for the sequel. Soon I hope?  Thanks for writing!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks for reviewing! The sequel is brewing away at the back of my brain at the moment....

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks for reviewing! The sequel is brewing away at the back of my brain at the moment....

10/10

melusin

Brava! Ardderchog.Totally fab story.Also, hemp oil. Gazillion brownie points.Much loveMel

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Diolch! Ah yes, the hemp oil. I came across that while I was researching something else, and it seemed to fit rather well! So glad you enjoyed the story.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Diolch! Ah yes, the hemp oil. I came across that while I was researching something else, and it seemed to fit rather well! So glad you enjoyed the story.

0/10

Minerva

The End?!? This is a wonderful story, but it wouldn´t do at all to have the start a relationship with a lie. Sooner or later Hermione is going to do some research on that spell . Or Mrs. Markov invitetes them once more and Ceri tells Hermione about the tea cup and Dr. Singer´s reaction ...

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

It's not exactly a lie, merely a ... delay. He just doesn't want to rush her. All along he's let her decide how far and how fast she wants to let their relationship go. I'm fairly sure, though, that he'll feel the need to be honest soon. Or she'll put two and two together. She has a tendency to do that! 

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

It's not exactly a lie, merely a ... delay. He just doesn't want to rush her. All along he's let her decide how far and how fast she wants to let their relationship go. I'm fairly sure, though, that he'll feel the need to be honest soon. Or she'll put two and two together. She has a tendency to do that! 

10/10

Amathya

Thank you, this was a wonderful story!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks!

10/10

Olivain

Wonderful! I was slightly disappointed he didn't tell her about the Vocant Amoris at the end, but I suppose I can't fault him for it. I shall hold close to my heart the hope that perhaps you will write an epilogue (or a sequel!) sometime in the future. Great job!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

I'm planning the sequel already!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

I'm planning the sequel already!

10/10

Severus49

Very, very sweet story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks, and thank you for reviewing!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks, and thank you for reviewing!

0/10

Who

This chapter is paradise indeed! You made my day when I found that it had posted. And since I had to deal with government minions myself (why haven't I had unemployment benefits paid for 9 weeks, and how can you say "We will review your paperwork 'as soon as possible' " when 'soon' passed several weeks ago?) I really needed a bit of a boost. And you, dear Wolfie, came up trumps for me!You are both a wonderful story teller and a good writer. What a happy combination of skills to have. Thank you for sharing this with us. Although, you did make me nervous for a minute when I pictured Hermione and Severus just abandoning the Jag in the lay-by, doors ajar. Hopefully an oblivious muggle doesn't pull in and hit it. If you choose to do sequels or spin-offs from this, could we have the story of Severus and the gypsy ponies? *Makes cute begging yearling colt eyes**Even more effective than puppy-dog eyes.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

I'm delighted I was able to make your day a bit better! And don't worry about the Jag - it's perfectly adequately protected!There will definitely be a sequel. I hadn't thought about elaborating on the story of Severus and the colts, but now you mention it....

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

I'm delighted I was able to make your day a bit better! And don't worry about the Jag - it's perfectly adequately protected!There will definitely be a sequel. I hadn't thought about elaborating on the story of Severus and the colts, but now you mention it....

10/10

azulkan2

Great story.  

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks!

10/10

KingPig

I **LOVE** this story! You are such a talented writer; the scenes were so vivid and witty and just... awesome!!! Loved the lemony-goodness too! Loved it all!!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thank you so much - I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thank you so much - I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

TeaOli

*holds breath**cheers**squees really, really loudly**fans self**sputters**searches for something intelligible than "umf" to say*Erm, now you must write that sequel, woman!!!!The love for this story is deeper than the Mariana Trench!!! If I could give it more than 5 stars, I would.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thank you! And yes, there will definitely be a sequel!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thank you! And yes, there will definitely be a sequel!

10/10

sunny33

We had a Morris Minor called Blossom in the 1980s. :)

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

They often had names didn't they? Thanks for your comments - I'm delighted you're following my story as I get so much pleasure from yours!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

They often had names didn't they? Thanks for your comments - I'm delighted you're following my story as I get so much pleasure from yours!

10/10

sunny33

Wonder what will happen when they wake... ;)

10/10

sunny33

Sweet dreams indeed. :)

10/10

sunny33

"What do you wash it in?"

"The lake."

LOL :)

0/10

Persevero

I love this - witty and intriguing.  Plus a bit of fast-car-worship...  Another member of the Jaguar Appreciation Society here!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Welcome! Thanks for the lovely review as well!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Welcome! Thanks for the lovely review as well!

10/10

TeaOli

Perfection on top of perfection!! This keeps getting better with every chapter. I adore the way you have our two heroes interacting!! And you writing is so snappy and witty and altogether engaging, intriguing and clever.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

You can't see me now, but I'm blushing!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

You can't see me now, but I'm blushing!

10/10

HollyDales

I'm afraid that I'm one of those bad people who rarely write reviews (I also only read what really appeals) As someone who is old enough to have been around when Meatloaf first released Bat out of hell, I'm enjoying this very much indeed. I like the mature Hermione and relaxed Snape. Please do update as regularly as your muse and work allows. 

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks so much for reviewing - I really do appreciate each and every person who takes the time to do so. Glad you're enjoying the story!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks so much for reviewing - I really do appreciate each and every person who takes the time to do so. Glad you're enjoying the story!

0/10

aliciana

Hi...I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. It is incredibly sexy, humourous, well written and original. I've had to say all that cos you're going to hate me now. My husband owns said Jaguar XKR in Racing Green no less. You can feel sorry for me though as I drive a Renault Scenic. Mind you his other car is a Skoda....nah only kidding it's a Range Rover. But like the Potions Master he is a Mancunian lad...self-made....a real charmer to boot and 6'5" tall so he does need big cars. Anyway only complaint..... well two really......need more and longer chapters.....this is so good.Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx. 

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Ooh, you cow! Only joking! Fancy swapping him for a Welshman with a pick-up truck? I love the fact that the reviews thread for this chapter is developing into the Jaguar Appreciation Society! Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying the story. Three more chapters to go!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Ooh, you cow! Only joking! Fancy swapping him for a Welshman with a pick-up truck? I love the fact that the reviews thread for this chapter is developing into the Jaguar Appreciation Society! Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying the story. Three more chapters to go!

10/10

siage

Love this story. Thanks for the update!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

You're welcome! Thanks for reviewing.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

You're welcome! Thanks for reviewing.

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