The Petulant Poetess
  • Stories
  • Browse By
    • Category
    • Character
    • Genre
    • Author
  • Info
      Useful Info
    • General Information
    • Message Board
    • Membership & Story Ratings
    • Submission Rules
    • Important Links
    • Support The Petulant Poetess
    • Writers' Resources
    • Punctuation Guide
    • Writing Fan Fiction
    • Harry Potter Resources
    • Dictionaries
    • Beta Resources
  • Create an Account
    • Create an Account
    • Sign In
Potions Under Duress Bat Out of Hell
Chapters Menu
Download PDF Version

New Chapter for Bat Out of Hell

Bat Out of Hell

1: Bat Out of Hell

2: Hot Summer Night

3: Heaven Can Wait

4: All Revved Up with no Place to Go

5: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

6: For Crying Out Loud

7: Paradise by the Dashboard Light

Bat Out of Hell

bleddyn

129 Reviews   |   129 Ratings, 0 Likes, 24 Favorites )

Humor Romance Action/Adventure post-DH/DH compliant Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 47,753 Words 7 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Ten years after the Battle of Hogwarts, Snape agrees to help the Muggle Law Enforcement Liaison Unit. What has he let himself in for?

Start Reading

Chapters (7)

Chapter 1: Bat Out of Hell

Chapter 2: Hot Summer Night

Chapter 3: Heaven Can Wait

Chapter 4: All Revved Up with no Place to Go

Chapter 5: Two Out of Three Ain't Bad

Chapter 6: For Crying Out Loud

Chapter 7: Paradise by the Dashboard Light


About bleddyn

Validated
Author

bleddyn

Member Since 2012  |  2 Stories  |  Favorited by 68  |  15 Reviews Written  |  152 Review Responses

Thirty-something Welsh woman with a job, two kids, a dog and increasingly neglected housework due to my new-found obsession with the world of HP fanfic. Dusting just slipped even lower down my list of priorities ...  

Oh, and "bleddyn" is a Welsh name meaning "little wolf", in case you were wondering!

Reviews for Bat Out of Hell

Displaying Review 51 - 75 of 129 in total
← Previous 1 2 3 4 5 6 Next →
10/10

siage

Oh my, that was really hot and I get the feeling things are just warming up. Looking forward to more!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Glad you enjoyed it!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Glad you enjoyed it!

0/10

dawncc

Whilst looking at yr Bio to see what else you had written was amazed to read that this is your first fanfic.  Confidently writtten with believable characterisation and superb banter.Very glad to read in responses that future chapters are written or at least planned out.  This is a story I'm looking forward to reading to the end :)

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

What a lovely review - thank you so much! 

9/10

cmwinters

Their dry, innuendo-fueled banter is hysterical.  I've laughed out loud several times.  Hahah giving the Slytherins career advice to ride dragons because of what it does to their thighs!  BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! *dies*

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Glad you're enjoyng reading - I'm having great fun writing!

10/10

ClayPotter

I really enjoyed this first chapter. Sounds like you are keeping them pretty much in character as I would imagine they'd be after all this time... Snape more mellow and Hermione more self confident but not arrogant about it.Well written and fun. I can hardly wait for more.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks so much for the lovely review!

10/10

bournespeed

Great start, looks like we're in for one hell of a ride.  Looking forward to more 

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks for that - I hope the rest meets your expectations!

10/10

MsTree

Very enjoyable first chapter. The duel was, in my opinion, the highlight of the whole thing. Can't wait to see where you go with this. ^_^

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Glad you liked the duel. Hermione flooring Snape was actually based on a real-life incident!

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

That's an intriguing beginning. Severus and Hermione seem very well matched. I look forward to reading more.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks for the review!

10/10

TeaOli

This is such a fun chapter. I love the duel, the banter and especially your authorial voice. (Your Snape ain't bad, either.) I'm on the edge of me seat waiting for more!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

It was great fun to write as well! I'm rather fond of my Snape....

0/10

linlawless

I am loving this so far!  Can't wait for more! :)

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thank you! And don't worry - the next chapter's in the queue!

Response from linlawless (Reviewer)

Excellent!  (But what about the chapter after that? )

0/10

gurlimargrethe

interesting start, it will e fun to follow this. Well written.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks! I hope you enjoy the rest of it as well.

0/10

Severus49

"the lake". *Snort!* It looks like Hermione and Severus are pretty well matched! I can't wait to see what kind of mischief they're going to get into!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Oh yes, I can guarantee she'll give as good as she gets! Thanks for the review!

0/10

orm irian

Oh, excellent! What an engaging first chapter! The situation you've set up, the duel and their banter was all just so well done.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thank you so much, and have a virtual gold star for being my first reviewer! Hope you continue to enjoy the story.

0/10

Beth52

This story is great.Please update soon.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks! Next chapter's in the queue!

10/10

Aldara

:D That was a lovely story, just the right mix of adventure and romance! And great characterizations, as well! :)

10/10

KingPig

Aaah, evil cliffie!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Sorry! I had to end it there, you know!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Sorry! I had to end it there, you know!

10/10

Wine witch

Wonderful story, thank you so much!

10/10

Lizt

I have never left a review, and I have never loved a piece of fanfic so much. You really are a fabulous writer - great style, great pacing, great characterizations. Hermione in this story is Anna Devane for me (showing my Americanism here? Although Anna is British) Google her if you must - a soap opera heroine maybe, but a truly unique one who proved that chicks can kick ass. I LOVE that your Hermione has shown the same. I also love that Severus didn't tell her about Vocant Amoris - yet. I've just discovered the SS/HG world and while there's some good stuff, I'm happy to see this take - adult, practical, sexy as hell, but no angst or overdone romance. Can't wait for the sequel - please tell me it's still happening! I've reread this story far more times than I should admit. And while the Snapey goodness in this story still trumps all others, I now admit to having had some impure thoughts about Charlie and his thighs as well ...

10/10

onecoppercent

Loved this story! Can't wait to read more of your work! *nudge nudge*

0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

Well, I liked it. I wish the naughty bits at the end weren't missing but oh well. You'll have to write the continuation of this since I already demanded you write more stories since two simply is not enough. Lol. Thanks for sharing your work with us all!

0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

Haha, this chapter made me giggle several places. You just need to write more stories so I can keep giggling! Two us not nearly enough!

0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

Best line in this chapter? "The lake." Lol

0/10

James Root

I find it quiet amusing how many fanfictions mention the word Schadenfreude! I've never noticed this before because I'm german (this explains my english...) I think I've read around 30 english HP fanfictions that mention the fact that we have a word for taking pleasure from another's misfortune:)

0/10

Bentwaters

I don't know why I haven't read this before, but I am SO extremely glad I have now. It's definitely an instant favorite. I've enjoyed every word of it and will be back time and again to reread and slip into their lovely little covert world. Just love, love, love it! Thanks so much for gifting us all with it!

10/10

beckysue12121

Great story! Awsome job!  I read it all the way through, and thoroughly enjoyed it.

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

orlando switch

This was such a wonderful Bond meets Harry Potter. Clever, funny and well written. I really hope you'll write more about our Mr and Mrs Spy. They are such a wonderful team.. and you do realise there are extended versions of Bat out of hell with bonus tracks, do you?

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

There's also Bat Out of Hell II, including the track "Good Girls Go to Heaven (Bad Girls Go Everywhere)". Now there's a thought....

Response from orlando switch (Reviewer)

No mention of bad boys? * looks innocently* Hope your sequel will manifest itself soon, I don't know how much time it usually needs to simmer (stewed plotbunny, yay!)

Response from bleddyn (Author of Bat Out of Hell)

There's also Bat Out of Hell II, including the track "Good Girls Go to Heaven (Bad Girls Go Everywhere)". Now there's a thought....

Response from orlando switch (Reviewer)

No mention of bad boys? * looks innocently* Hope your sequel will manifest itself soon, I don't know how much time it usually needs to simmer (stewed plotbunny, yay!)

Displaying Review 51 - 75 of 129 in total
← Previous 1 2 3 4 5 6 Next →

The Petulant Poetess

A moderated archive, hosting stories by authors who enjoy dabbling in the wonderful world of Harry Potter fanfiction.

More About The Petulant Poetess

© Copyrights. All rights reserved. ThePetulantPoetess.com

Explore

  • All Stories
  • by Author
  • by Category
  • by Character
  • by Genre

Links

  • General Information
  • Terms and Conditions
  • Message Board
  • Writers' Resources
  • Submission Rules