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The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness
Fishy40 Reviews | 5.48/10 (40 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
This is my interpretation of who Minerva McGonagall is and how her life's experiences shaped her; taking place between her last two years as a student of Hogwarts to the end of the second wizarding war.
Chapter one - Minerva McGonagall is in her sixth year and practices dueling with a fifth year Tom Riddle with unexpected results. She finds support from her Head of House, Albus Dumbledore.
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Fishy
Member Since 2011 | 2 Stories | Favorited by 0 | 811 Reviews Written | 820 Review Responses
Middle aged, single mother, published author of nonfiction, avid HP fan, reformed pessimist and closet romantic. I live in a swamp.
Favorite HP categoriees - Hogwarts Castle, Weasley's Wheezes and anything not revolving around glorifying the darkness.
Favorite characters: Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall, Alastor Moody, Hermione Granger, Rubeus Hagrid, Horace Slughorn, Aberforth Dumbledore, Molly and Arthur Weasley, Ronald and Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood, Tonks.
According to this Hogwarts Sorting Hat Personality Test I have been sorted thus: Gryffindor
98% Gryffindor
92% Hufflepuff
81% Ravenclaw
51% Slytherin
I've been informed that my patronus is a wolverine, which is such a relief as I thought for sure it was a toad.
Currently recovering from surgery.
http://www.personalitylab.org/tests/ccq_hogwarts.htm
Reviews for The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness
What is Slughorn hiding? Complaints from other students about this sort of thing I would guess. Poor Minerva. I hope Albus can help her heal. Its so disheartening when the adults who are supposed to protect children let them down. Great writing.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Woo Hoo! *grins* My first review! *does a happy dance* So exciting!Okay - Sluggy, all that will be disclosed in time and you could be right... *grins* Aye, very disheartening when adults let kids down, very much so... very hard on the kids, and sometimes harder on the adults who can do nothing, or try but fail... have faith in Dumbledore though... can't go wrong there.Thank you tons for your review!
Very well Written Fishy. Your right it is not exactally my cup of tea BUT- you do do an exceptional Job capturing the who's why' where's and what fores that drive the story forward .
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Why thank you Iron - *grins* thanks for dropping me a review and for reading.
For some reason, I thought I'd already reviewed this chapter, but I didn't! I really enjoyed seeing Minerva in a leadership role with her peers here. I liked seeing her lay down the law; we got a glimpse of the witch she grew to become.I particularly like Alastor's thoughts at the end, though. It made him feel more of a sympathetic character when we could get past his whining and stupid teenage behavior! Thanks for giving us a glimpse of him there!I hope we will have another chapter soonish!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Ah, well I'm glad you can appreciate Alastor's position, even if he is being an obnoxious, teen-aged boy at this stage in the story. Glad you enjoyed Minerva in this chapter - I think she does a pretty good job projecting her leadership, and honestly can't imagine her ever being a follower, or at least, quiet - in any case. Glad you enjoyed my interpretation.I hope to get another chapter out soon as well... I miss these guys.
How wonderful to find this update!It's easy to see older Minerva in your young Minerva. Tough, no nonsense, doesn't take crap from anybody. You'd think Williams would have known better than to think she'd put up with his attitude, but I think she has a fan for life in Darwin Clandallin. Perhaps Alastor will learn to think about consequences now, but somehow I think he's going to need another lesson. A little thought should give him a pretty good idea of what she is leaving out, and even why, (OK, maybe not why -- Alastor isn't exactly introspective), but he seems determined to be jealous of Dumbledore, even after she tells him Dumbledore kept her from getting expelled.I'm looking forward to more Albus/Minerva interaction in the next chapter!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
YAY! So glad you liked the chapter and my interpretation of these characters. Alastor has become one of my favorite characters and I am loving the development he's taking in Lioness - as well as Dumbledore and Minerva - I will admit, its tricky to write Minerva in a way that shows the older Minerva while still allowing for younger issues to surface - what ever those issues or traits are, incorporating them into a teen age Minerva has been tricky - so I'm thrilled to hear when someone else enjoys my attempts.Aye, Alastor's jelousy is growing and might be influential later on - we shall see! And yes, he's not so introspective but he has some ideas - he's not as logical yet as he will become later in his Auror career, but that would be expected I think, being younger and less experienced.Working on the next chapter - so tickled that you keep reading and reviewing! YAY!
Yay for an update! What a nice little surprise in my inbox today. Uh oh, sounds like Alastor is getting very jealous of Minerva's time spent with Albus. I think he resents Minerva confiding in Albus and shutting him out of the information loop, though I am on Minerva's side on this. I don't think it would do any good to let Alastor know what really happened with Riddle. And I'm super pleased that Minerva gave Alaastor a proper dressing down about hsi comments regarding Albus and minerva. He had that one coming to him.Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Jealousy? Ya think? *grins* Dumbledore is a hard act to follow... I feel sorry for Alastor here, I really do.Oh yes - Minerva was irate with Alastor about his comments at breakfast - and would have given it to him right after Albus walked to the High Table, however... Alastor ran off before she could - and it fit this chapter - so I stuck it in there.Really glad you liked it! And so thankful you're so patient with the slow queue! YAY!
lovely chapter,until now a secret in each chapter
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Now you have me confused - there is a secret in each chapter - or was until this one?Really thrilled you enjoyed the chapter!
I wonder what Slughorn is hiding/knowing? later he was not a fan of Tom's but here he has not seen through him, that is the way it is with charming sychopants.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Slughorn is easily influenced by people who posess powerful skills and talents - Tom has that in spades, and is highly charismatic and influential - and at this time, Tom is in his fifth year - not as far along as I'd expect that segment where Tom asked about the horcruxes - I'd think.But, I think we'll learn much more from Sluggy in Lioness.
I love the glimpses you've given us of the fair but stern taskmistress we know Minerva will eventually become.And poor Alastor--he hasn't much of a chance up against your lioness, has he?Looking forward to seeing where this is headed!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Ahhh - yes, I do feel a bit sorry for Alastor here - but then again, Minerva is doing half of this for his benefit - after all. Yeah? You feel Minerva cracking that whip? Yeah - I have to think that even young Minerva would be a hard arse, no BS, Lioness in the making - I can't see her taking much garbage... and she's already taken a wee bit of garbage earlier in the story?Really glad you liked it - and thank you so very much for helping make this happen - remember, Lioness wouldn't be here without you! *loves her Squibby*
I offer my sincerest apologies for my lack of reviewing promptly. Real life has thrown me several nasty curve balls and it's been a chore to do much of anything because of a lack of motivation and time.I really enjoyed this chapter. I am soooo very glad that Alastor was able to crunch Tom's nose. He deserves a lot worse, if you ask me. I'd like to have seen him beaten to a pulp, but then that's my protective nature kicking in. lol But he had it coming to him for sure.I hope you're steadily working on the next chapter of the story and I promise to review it promptly when I get the alert!Keep up the great work!!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Fourty seven lashes with a wet noodle! If you are negligent of reviewing - then I am certainly negligent in writing! And besides, I don't remember any contracts we drew up mandating you reviewing anything, you silly! And so, you have nothing to apologize for! I loved your review - and I too loved that Alastor crunched Tom's nose - no worries, I share your desires on Tom getting pulverized.I have recently gotten the bug to get back into Lioness - I'll readily admit I hit a road block - wheelbarrel of reasons for that - but regardless - the next chapter is in the works. Thank you so much for stopping by!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Fourty seven lashes with a wet noodle! If you are negligent of reviewing - then I am certainly negligent in writing! And besides, I don't remember any contracts we drew up mandating you reviewing anything, you silly! And so, you have nothing to apologize for! I loved your review - and I too loved that Alastor crunched Tom's nose - no worries, I share your desires on Tom getting pulverized.I have recently gotten the bug to get back into Lioness - I'll readily admit I hit a road block - wheelbarrel of reasons for that - but regardless - the next chapter is in the works. Thank you so much for stopping by!
Great beginning. I was immediately drawn into the story, and easily visualized the scene and the characters. More importantly, I want to know what happens next!Dippet and Slughorn have clearly been charmed by Tom, and are being willfully blind on his behalf -- how could they listen to Ogg's testimony and not even be a little bit sympathetic toward Minerva? But it's Tom, so not only does he get away with it, but he is seen as the victim! Dumbledore seems to be much more objective, and appears to be looking at the evidence rather than just defending Minerva. It appears that they don't have much of a personal relationship at this point, (or Minerva wouldn't wonder if she has anyone in her corner) but this will no doubt provide the impetus for beginning one. I can't wait to see how Minerva emerges from this.I liked your use of Ogg and Merrythought to provide depth and support. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Awesome! Thank you! I just sent chapter two off to my betas for the second edit and then it will be sent into TPP! Hopefully, added soon!Glad you enjoyed my interpretation of the characters! I rather like them, well, most of them. *winks*
As I don't think it would be quite fair for me to guess the RaM-nod (or nods), I'll just say that I smiled at them!Of all the things that struck me in this chapter, one that stood out particularly on this reading was a parallel that, for some reason, I hadn't originally noticed on first reading. In many ways, Dippet's treatment of Riddle mirrors Dumbledore's later treatment of Sirius Black and Remus Lupin. Granted, Black was "privileged," but he was disowned, but Lupin, who would have paid most heavily for a prank that Sirius had planned, was disadvantaged. Whatever the true story was behind either attack, each Headmaster was concerned to protect students who had in-built disadvantages. There are, of course, larger differences between the two victims here -- McGonagall and Snape -- but in each case, the Headmaster of the time considered the actual damage to be minimal, and -- though Dippet was very mistaken with regard to Minerva -- each was seen as having contributed to the situation in which they found themselves.The similarities and differences in the two cases could be really interesting to discuss. Once more, I really like your Merrythought. Can't say I'm any more fond of Dippet, but I do understand him better, and I can appreciate Merrythought's affection for him.I'm glad to see you're still writing this story!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
No that wouldn't be fair! But our Hufflepuff buddy, Stefdarlin, got it, so 10 points to Hufflepuff, I'm proud to say.
You know, I never thought about that connection, between Dippet and Riddle and Dumbledore and Black/Potter, but its a good analogy ... and something I can see happening - leadership is difficult in the best of cases and nobody ever makes all the right decisions, no matter how good their intentions are, and that is what I was trying to convey.
I'm glad that you got a better feeling about Dippet, as that is what I was trying to relay with this chapter, about WHY he made the decision he made, and his mindset, even if I disagree with it.
I'm glad you still like my Glalatea - she's become rather dear to me as well.
I too, am happy to be writing again, and I do love getting all your reviews! It makes me grin to know someone else is interested in these crazy yarns that spool around in my noggin.
Hmmm, I like your portrayal of Merrythought in this. I really like her. And I hate the way Dippet is downplaying how he should have punished Tom. What is even more infuriating is his consideration of severly punishing poor Alastor for something far less offensive. O_o Also, I am not sure if this is your nod, but I found this sentence made me think of Resolving a Misunderstanding: “How may Gibber serve Master Dumbledore’s Miss?” he asked tentatively, rolling his feet and standing upon his toes in anticipation. Minerva found him utterly adorable but didn’t want to insult the elf by doting on him. She couldn’t help but grin.I always loved how Wilspy referred to Minerva with Albus, lol. And it was so endearing. I hope Alastor and Slughorn are all right. I am wondering how Horace's potion got away from him, poor bloke.I am looking forward to more.=o)
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Stef, what is your professed house? You got it! *nods* Bullseye - it was a quote from Wilspy ... I can't help it, I seem to do it without even realizing ... taking tidbits from Squibstress or MMADfan .. so I have to give credit where its due. (you might have guessed, but I'm a bit of a raving fan of theirs)
Ah ... Horace's potion didn't get away from him ... it was an errant student who blew up his potion ... it happens ... ever take high school chemistry? (Horace was trying to get to the student before he added the wrong ingredient - thus, he got the worst of it)
Its a wonder more schools are not burned down, though some of the more exciting experiments are no longer allowed. I will never forget setting a huge balloon of hydrogen on fire once in the chemistry department in college ... I have a wee fascination for fire ... Oops!
Ahhh ... I'm glad you appreciate all the issues the teachers/heads have to deal with in the school ... even if you don't agree with their methods, but they do have to weigh a lot out - and if you at least got that much (even if you don't appreciate Dippet's resolution or even his justification) I am glad because that was my intention - to show that dealing out judgment is complicated.
(Dippet is one of the more challenging characters to write, for me - I am trying to tie up a lot of ideas into him, which is probably not fair to the poor fella, but I have some stereotype personas to work with - such as the left-over Victorian era mindset, as well as loyalty, which I hope I've shown he has, as well as some personal bias and perhaps a bit of over confidence in his wisdom, which as we all know, leads to pride, and pride is always a problem - over all I like him but, I don't intend for him to be a simple character - which makes him harder to write - but challenges are fun! )
Do you too like Merrythought? YAY! I have to admit, I like her lots!
Response from Stefdarlin (Reviewer)
I am a Hufflepuff, proud and true. =o) I also admit I love MMADfan. I miss her. I haven't spoken to her in a while. She has beta'd several things for me, and I wrote a story for her for the CR Christmas exchange one year. I have been on a sort of hiatus and have just recently been getting back into the fandom. My writing wasn't on hiatus, because I kept doing that, just no posting. Life has been crazy.I can see what you are saying about Dippet. He does seem complex. For a moment I thought he and Merrythought might be together, and for some reason, that excited me,lol.Sigh. Oh, well.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hufflepuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loves me some BADGERS! *does a dance* Badger Badger!!! Hufflepuff is actually my favorite house, but I was sorted Gryffie ... remember that pride issue I mentioned? Yeah ... that's me - so I couldn't be more thrilled to give the Badgers 10 fat points! WOO HOO!
Badger badger!! All hail Proff Sprout and the Bumblebee House! I love Hufflepuff!
Just drop MMADfan a line, she's around and I'm sure she understands life. We all have one, after all.
Merrythought and Dippet together? Well they are, I mean they've been close friends for half a century, and, though I didn't explain this fully in the story, but Dippet was Head of Hufflepuff and Deputy Head when Merrythought was a student, remember how he was telling her that she was his favorite student? Kind of similar to what Minerva is to Albus, at the moment? And while Merrythought went on with the aurors, she came back to teaching - so they are together in a way, just not romantically. Sorry ... they both be married to other people. But they are both badgers and have a long history of friendship.
I love the interaction between Merrythought and Dippet here--it feels authentic: a long-term friendship that includes both affection and annoyance.It really is infuriating that Dippet doesn't take what happened more seriously--it's depressingly realistic.And I think Albus will be quite pleased with how Gibber cared for his protegee!Nice chapter!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Thank you kindly.
I much agree about Dippet here ... its believable and often seen that people who think they are doing the best for all involved, really aren't, and are often blinded by some very serious abuses going on right under their noses.
Glad you got that feeling about Merrythought and Dippet - that is exactly what I was trying to convey.
We shall have to see what Albus thinks about Gibber! Or if he even notices.
Yeah! They won. Excellent game and a perfect explanation as to why the adult Minerva enthuses so much over the sport. Now someone please get that poor boy a better broom!BTW I'm expecting Augusta (the later Longbottom) to be in the student body; will we meet her? A few others come to my mind, too.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
No plans at all for Augusta - hate to dissapoint you. I feel I've already bitten off quite a bit to gnaw on, with all the canon side characters and the OC's I've got lined up - my "resources" file for Lioness is already over 60 some pages of background info on obscure characters - eegads!Yes - Darwin is desperatly hoping to somehow, aquire a decent broom - or better yet - upgrade all the Gryffindor House brooms - for one reason or another the house brooms are deplorable.Thanks so much for reviewing! Wheee!
Response from Bettina (Reviewer)
WOW, you do a thorough bookkeeping, then. I use a spreadsheet, and yes, data accumulates in breathtaking speed, so I can sympathise.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Out of curiosity, I read up on Augusta - what an exciting woman! I can see why she inspires you! Thanks for bringing her to my attention - like I said, I have no plans for her ATM, however, she's one of those kinds of characters that I enjoy knowing more about - a real lion heart. Bravery is awesome!
The way you portray Minerva and Albus make them beautifully real. I'm also curious how Moody is going to personally develop through this story. He's so young and different than his older self, but that's how we all started out before life took us. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Thank you so much! The next chapter is in the works, but due to traveling during the holidays, it may take some time. Thank you so much for reading and responding with your review. I hope you enjoy reading about my interpretation of these characters as much as I enjoy writing them.