McGonagalls and Quidditch
The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness
Chapter 5 of 9
FishyChapter five - Professors Dumbledore and Merrythought meet up with some of Minerva's relatives at a Quidditch match. Albus is troubled by rumors of war erupting in Muggle Europe.
These characters belong to J.K. Rowling. I appreciate the opportunity to borrow them from time to time. My deepest thanks to the very generous and gracious MMADfan and Squibstress for their inspiration, advice, patience and time. In this semi-AU, Professor Merrythought is, at this time, the Charms instructor.
Chapter 5: McGonagalls and Quidditch
Marcus McGonagall stepped out of the Three Broomsticks holding the hand of a young girl and led her carefully through a busy street and toward the steep hill leading up to Hogwarts castle. He glanced down at his strawberry-blond companion and grinned.
"Are yeh excited?" He asked. She responded with a bright-eyed, enthusiastic nod of her head and shivered. The wind was brisk, and the temperature was only a degree or two above freezing. The streets were just starting to form ice patches as the ground was quite wet from a recent rain. Marcus maneuvered around a chatting couple who were also making their way up the hill and pulled his wand out of a pocket inside his overcoat. Muttering an incantation, he cast a warming charm on the girl's heavy, brick-red, woolen coat, which looked to be a size too big for her.
"Thank you," she commented and fished a yellow knit cap out of a pocket, pulling it down over her pink ears.
"We'd best get a move on, lass ... the hot seats will soon be taken!" he said, quickly taking up her hand again and, without properly looking, stepped back into the lane of foot traffic and ran smack into a tall man wearing a dark purple overcoat. Marcus blinked once in recognition and smiled.
"Professor Dumbledore! Fancy meetin' yeh here! How has the world been treatin' yeh?" he asked, thrusting his free hand out and surprising Albus. While studying the young man's face, Albus searched his memory. The fellow looked terribly familiar: thick, black hair, vivid green eyes, an aristocratic nose, and he sported a very rich Scottish brogue. After staring for a moment, Albus broke into an apologetic smile and took the extended hand, shaking it firmly.
"Dear me ... forgive an old man for his failing memory. You look familiar, but I can't seem to place you." With that comment, Albus glanced down at the small girl holding the man's hand, catching her gaze, and winked at her.
Marcus let out a sharp guffaw.
"Old man my arse! Ye'll be kickin' the heather up when I'm long in the tooth," he replied, jovial and loud. "It's Marcus, sir ... Marcus McGonagall ... graduated three years back? I was in yer House. Couldn't get away with even a nip to the kitchens after curfew yeh slept like a cat!"
The dawn of recognition washed over Albus. Of course he knew this boisterous young man, his former student, and now understood the recognition. Marcus could pass as a male version of Albus' protégée...Minerva McGonagall...they looked so alike. He was slightly ashamed that he had forgotten a recent resident Gryffindor, and Minerva's brother to boot. Without breaking composure, Albus turned his attention to the child by Marcus' side.
"This must be Amelia." Albus bent down and reached for her tiny, mittened hand, giving it a gentle kiss. "I've heard a great deal about you, little one. Your aunt told me that you're quite serious about your music. The violin, is it?" Albus paused as a shy smile crept over Amelia's face and she nodded. "I, in fact, supplied the wrapping paper for the Christmas gift she bought you." He paused, smiling. "Imagine my surprise when I looked in the box and saw, not a kaleidoscope or box of sweets, or even a magical toothbrush, but an enchanted bow! Did you like the wrappings? I'm afraid I didn't have much to choose from, and your aunt settled on something rather drab: owls carrying yule wreaths. You must accept my apology that I didn't have something more suitable for a lady of your age."
Amelia nodded again to his question but said nothing. The wizard towering above her reminded her of a young version of Father Christmas. Though his beard had only a few strands of silver, and he was far too thin for a true St. Nick, the twinkle of his eyes and the grin on his mouth were benevolently magical. She imagined him with a huge sack over his shoulder and bending down to give her the largest candy cane she'd ever seen. Amelia looked up at the professor and giggled softly.
"Yes sir, since my daddy said I couldn't have my own owl. Your wrappings were lovely, and Gran said I could keep it! She had Daddy cut out a section for my room!" she explained, and Albus straightened up and chuckled.
"No owl for Christmas? Well, my dear, I am quite pleased that the wrappings suited you so well." He paused, stroking his chin, then remembered the true reason they were all standing in the middle of the busy street. "I take it you two are heading to the stadium to watch Gryffindor play against Ravenclaw?" Albus asked, turning back toward the rise of the hill and reaching down to take Amelia's free hand.
"Oh, aye, we are at that. This'll be Amelia's first game. She's got two aunts playin' fer Gryffindor, so she's a wee bit excited." Marcus replied and winked at his niece, following Dumbledore's action and resuming their stride up the hill on either side of the tiny child. They walked slowly, giving Amelia's short legs plenty of time to keep up.
"I'm hoping to see most of the game; however, I'm expecting an owl any time about a Ministry meeting perhaps I'll be fortunate, and the game will be short," Albus said and paused, glancing at Marcus. "Your sister tells me you're working at St. Mungo's?" he inquired.
"Aye, that I am. A Mediwizard at the moment, but working on my apprenticeship fer Healer I'm expectin' that to take another four years or so. No rush, o'course."
"Ah, I must have gotten you confused with your brother. I thought he was the one with the ambition to become a Healer and that you worked with your mother at the apothecary." Albus silently scolded himself for his rudeness in forgetting so much of what he had learned recently of the McGonagall family. This was not normal. His memory was usually incredibly accurate.
Perhaps Galatea was right. I might be working too much.
"Nay, Professor, yer gettin' Mathew and myself confused though yeh got some bits right. We both work with Mum she assists with the apothecary but its me Grandfather MacGruder who runs the business. Mathew is the primary Potioneer and also manages the family greenhouses, where we grow many of our medicinal plants." As Marcus explained, Albus nodded and listened, carefully directing the young McGonagalls through the throngs of people ascending to the Quidditch pitch.
"Mum's got her fingers in nearly all the family ventures, though she don't do much with the sheep." Marcus gave a light chuckle. "She says she has enough o' cleaning up after the infirm, she don't want to clean up after cattle. Not tha' I can blame ‛er." He paused and winked. "So the sheep are Da's domain, though Mathew helps some...as well as me uncles, Da's brothers. The McGonagall family has been farmin' sheep for near a century, yeh see."
Edging around a tree, Albus led them out of Hogsmeade proper and onto Hogwarts grounds, by-passing more than half the crowd that was previously in front of them by using a well-placed Teleportation spell. The magic was so smooth and seamless that Marcus was completely unaware of the significant distance they had just crossed. Amelia blinked a few times, looking around suspiciously at the trees as her uncle continued describing his apprenticeship, oblivious to the sudden change.
"Mum's me mentor at St. Mungo's. Yeh likely know she's one o' the three senior Healers in hospital. Specializes in reproductive health and pediatrics. But the hospital dun get all of her time o'course, she's got her private practice few days a week mostly pregnancies and tha' sorta thing, though folk come from all round to our wee Lairg to see Mum both Muggle an Magical." Marcus paused while they navigated through a few trees as Albus led them off the beaten path on what may have been a shortcut. "I'm hopin', within the next few years, I'll be studyin' under Healer Sinclair, who leads research at St. Mungo's. His specialties be in microbiology and magical ailments, specifically curses, as well as envenomation by both magical and non-magical beasts."
Albus grinned, looking over at him as they wound their way through the last of the trees. "I see. Seems your need for excitement has extended into your professional career. I had hoped you'd have left that here, at Hogwarts." Albus gave him a knowing smile, eyes twinkling.
Marcus coughed, perhaps to end the subject of conversation, or just to keep Amelia from hearing more, and glanced at the professor. Quickly tilting his head down toward his niece, Albus understood immediately, that Marcus didn't wish to discuss any of his former exciting ideas, endeavors or consequences in the company of such young ears. Albus chuckled softly and gave him a reassuring pat on the shoulder, nodding.
Dumbledore paused as they emerged adjacent to the northern bleachers, letting a large group of bustling students go ahead of them, and gently pulled Amelia out of the way of traffic.
"I was under the impression that your father was a minister. Has he retired to sheep farming?"
"Oh nay, he's still runs the kirk." Marcus chuckled. "Da won't leave the ministry until death takes him, and maybe not even then!" Another brash guffaw, and Marcus continued. "But the McGonagalls always had sheep in Lairg. We're actually one of the oldest families in Sutherland. I'm sure yeh know that Lairg be the location of the largest annual sheep auction in Britain," Marcus responded as they began to ascend the stairs into the Gryffindor section of bleachers.
"Ah, no, actually, I didn't," remarked Albus, feeling a bit bewildered at his lack of Scottish farming knowledge.
Amelia remained quiet as her uncle and the professor discussed Marcus' medical interests and the history of her family. In truth, little of the topic interested her, and most of it flat out confused her. Instead, her attention was focused on where they had been walking not even a minute before, quite a ways down the hill, in Hogsmeade. She couldn't quite decide how they had crossed such a distance in just a few strides, and her six-year-old mind pondered the possibilities of magic.
Marcus rattled on about McGonagall sheep husbandry, while Albus, listening attentively, led them to a section of empty seats next to some of Hogwarts' faculty. Marcus raised Amelia up and seated her on his lap, giving her an excellent view of the Quidditch pitch.
"Unless you'd prefer to sit with the students, you're welcome to sit in the faculty section as my guests," Albus explained, nodding to an approaching plump woman who wore a thick, yellow, woolen cap and cloak. Albus scooted closer to Marcus and Amelia to make more room on the bench seat.
"Galatea, join us! We just got here as well," Albus exclaimed, obviously expecting his colleague's arrival.
"Oh? Did you warm my seat?" she laughed, then looked over at Marcus and Amelia and smiled. "I see you've brought us company, Albus! Grand!"
"Professor Merrythought, allow me to introduce Marcus and Amelia McGonagall, special guests of mine, to my delighted surprise." As the yellow-clad woman sat down on the right side of Dumbledore, she leaned around and smiled toward the McGonagall pair.
"Well, of course I recognize my former student, Albus. I'm not that old ... yet." She gave a wide smile to Amelia. "Though I've not yet had the pleasure of meeting your daughter, Marcus." She extended her hand, and Marcus took it, giving it a friendly shake.
"My niece, Professor, my niece," he laughed. "I ain't been that busy! And good seein' you likewise. Aye, Amelia is my elder brother's wee-un; I just cart her around some." With that, Marcus poked Amelia in the ribs, eliciting a peal of giggles from the little girl. Both professors laughed at the pair's antics. Once the giggles died down, Marcus motioned toward the professor to his right.
"Amelia, this is Professor Merrythought. She'll be teachin' yeh how to protect yerself from curses in a few years. For my O.W.L. examination, this woman put all of us 5th years on this very pitch and forced us to fight off dragons and vampires while gargling butterbeer." Amelia gasped in shock at her uncle's words. "And we were only allowed to wield pumpkins and cabbages in our defense!" Amelia's blue eyes went as wide as saucers, staring over at Professor Merrythought.
"Oh for ..." Galatea snorted. "Marcus McGonagall, you should be ashamed of yourself! Filling that sweet child's head with such nonsense!" Turning her attention to the impressionable youngster, Professor Merrythought continued. "Miss McGonagall, don't you listen to your uncle. I did no such thing! Trust me, your O.W.L.s will take place inside a classroom, with only your quill, inkwell and parchment to contend with. No dragons. No undead." Glaring at Marcus, Merrythought didn't catch the amused expression on her Gryffindor colleague's face. "Besides, I'm teaching Charms these days, not Defense."
Laughing to himself, Marcus nodded as Amelia turned around to look at her uncle, unconsciously questioning him on these two very different histories of his earlier schooling. He only then realized he had never properly introduced Professor Dumbledore to his niece.
Ever the curious one, Amelia piped up as if hearing her uncle's thoughts.
"And what does he teach?" she asked, reaching over and tugging on Albus' sleeve.
"Professor Dumbledore teaches Transfiguration. Yeh probably don't remember him, but he was at your aunt's competition last year. Her mentor, in fact."
"Aunt Minerva's ... what?" She squinted up at the bearded man, trying to remember.
"A mentor ... that's a person who takes special interest and time in someone's learnin'. Much like yer gran mentors me at hospital. Professor Dumbledore teaches folk to change things into different things, like when Aunt Minerva transformed yer dress at Christmas: the one yeh hated?"
Amelia smiled shyly up at Dumbledore, and Albus tried to remember if Minerva had said her niece was five or six years old. Leaning toward his colleague, he laced his fingers together and stretched, causing the knuckles to crack.
"Galatea, are you fearful of rodents?" Albus asked, evoking an odd look from Professor Merrythought.
"No, Albus. Why on earth would you ask me that?" She eyed him warily before waving her wand and casting a warming charm on the bench. Musing at her reaction, Albus also withdrew his wand.
"Well, our young guest here informs me that she had hoped to receive her own personal owl for Christmas, you see, and I thought I might be able to fulfill that wish. A belated gift of sorts." As Albus spoke, Amelia's attention was ensnared, and she watched him with wide, wondering eyes.
"Father Christmas, are we today?" Galatea muttered, causing Albus to grin. "Albus, you could always purchase the child an actual owl..." but she was cut off as Albus began to wave his wand, casting spells, and Professor Merrythought gave up trying to talk him out of whatever elaborate plan he had already set in motion.
"Accio wild male mouse," Albus said, and within several seconds, a small, brown mouse had flown to his gloved and outstretched hand. Albus tapped it on the head gently, causing it to lie motionless. As if sensing what Amelia was thinking, he turned to her. "Not dead, my dear, just asleep. Makes the Transfiguration much easier, you see."
Professor Merrythought smirked and shook her head, watching him work as more students and faculty climbed into nearby seats. Amelia's eyes were intense as she watched, enraptured with Dumbledore's wand movements. Marcus' attention, however, was focused across the field, completely ignorant as to what was going on right next to him.
Uttering words in Latin that Amelia couldn't understand, Albus Transfigured the sleeping mouse into a small Tawny Owl and then cast several incantations over the newly formed bird before rousing the animal from slumber. The bird stumbled, then flipped upright in the wizard's large hand, and finally flapped its wings and took perch upon Albus' knee.
Amelia gasped in amazement, turning her uncle's attention back toward the professor.
"Oi! Yeh din have ta fetch Amelia an owl, Professor!" Marcus exclaimed.
Albus tucked his wand away and gently felt the bird's mid-section, then extended a wing, inspecting the animal for signs of deformity. Running his gloved fingers through the thick plumage and ruffling the poor creature's feathers quite thoroughly, Dumbledore at last decided the owl was properly proportioned, and brushed down the upset feathers.
"Actually, Mr. McGonagall ... I'm not giving her an owl, but rather, a Transfigured mouse, which now has the permanent form of an owl." He smiled, looking at Amelia, and pushed his hand up under the talons of the bewildered owl, encouraging the creature to climb onto the offered perch.
"Amelia, this owl is rather special, as it will only recognize you, well ... and myself, as its family. I tried to imprint you and your uncle upon him; however, since I semi-created him, I can't separate myself from his, now magical, resonance. At any rate, he might not be quite as bright as a normal owl, or live nearly as long; however, he will be very loyal to you. You should be able to teach him all the standard tricks a witch's owl can perform...with plenty of persistence and kindness, of course." Hastily, Albus added an idea. "Although you may want to avoid feeding him mice." With a wink, Dumbledore handed the bird to the young girl, who wasn't quite sure how to handle such an animal.
Amelia's eyes were huge as she stretched her tiny arm out to allow the owl to climb upon it, staring at the beautiful raptor. Instead of the typical dark brown Tawnies she was used to, this owl was much whiter, and had dark brown accents on the feathers around his head. The owl seemed far larger standing on her arm than it had on the professor's, and Professor Merrythought laughed warmly.
"Perhaps, Miss McGonagall, you could release your new owl to the Hogwarts Owlery until the game is over. Most owls tend to become frightened during such matches, due to all the players flitting about on brooms he'll be quite safe if you send him up to the castle. We even have special treats for the birds who bring us mail!" She wiggled her eyebrows at the bright-eyed youngster, which made Amelia giggle. "I'm sure he'll be safe there until you're ready to fetch him."
A bewildered Amelia sat, still perched on her uncle's lap, right arm raised nearly over her head with a similarly bewildered Tawny Owl teetering back and forth on her tiny limb. Marcus deftly reached out to steady Amelia's arm and received a swift nip from the owl, who proceed to squawk and hiss at him. Though Marcus jerked his hand back quickly, he wasn't dextrous enough to avoid the bite and prevent his sheepskin gloves from being torn.
"Hey! Bad owl! Bad!" Marcus fumed as the bird lunged around Amelia's head toward his hand.
Professor Dumbledore sighed and muttered a few choice words in French. Before more mayhem could ensue, Albus reached over with both hands, plucking the bird off Amelia's arm and held its talons firm.
"I didn't realize you were training attack owls, Albus... a new experiment? Should I be worried?" Professor Merrythought teased. An aggravated Albus Dumbledore turned toward the plump witch on his right and tutted.
"Yes, in fact, I'm polishing up a legion of American horned owls to set loose on cheeky Hufflepuff witches," he retorted.
Professor Merrythought raised her eyebrows in surprise.
"Well, in that case, I shall have to shield the dormitories and set a guard cat at every window." Satisfied with her equally sardonic response, she resumed her gaze over the pitch, a smug grin fixed on her face. As Amelia and Marcus watched, one with wide-eyed concern, the the other glaring angrily at the winged-beast, Albus uttered several incantations over the rogue owl. Satisfied with his adjustments, Professor Dumbledore turned to the concerned little girl on his left.
"Your new friend should find life less intimidating now. I think he was simply alarmed by all the drastic changes and strange company he awoke to. Now, before he can understand and obey basic commands, you will have to give him a name inform him what his name will be, I mean. This is part of the magical bond he will have with you." Albus didn't think the youngster's eyes could get any wider until he mentioned the magical bond with her new pet. She nearly jumped off her uncle's lap onto the bench seat below her, which was thankfully empty, and squealed.
"Uncle Marcus! What should I name him?" Amelia exclaimed, her voice filled with excitement. As her uncle opened his mouth to answer, Amelia interrupted and answered her own question. "Oh! I want to name him after the professor! Owl, your name is "Professor"!" Turning her attention toward Dumbledore, she asked hesitantly. "Can I name him after you, Professor?"
Professor Merrythought hadn't seen Albus Dumbledore blush in a very long time, and she chuckled under her breath as her colleague turned pink.
"It would be an honor, my dear," Albus replied softly.
Professor Merrythought, turning toward Amelia, then briefly explained how to send the bird to the Owlery. Albus, Marcus and Galatea watched as the youngest McGonagall followed the instructions with immaculate detail, sending the owl, teetering on new wings, toward the castle. They all watched, Albus a bit nervously, as the owl got caught in a wind gust and blown off course, only to right itself and soar toward the highest of the Hogwarts towers.
Amelia squealed. "My own owl! Thank you Mr. Professor!" She jumped off her uncle's lap and threw her arms around a very surprised Professor Dumbledore, kissing him on the cheek. Albus felt a blush start and knew he'd have to endure his colleague's teasing, quickly deciding it was worth it. Albus returned the little one's embrace and then released her, looking down at the huge smile encompassing Amelia's face. Albus chuckled, his belly feeling quite warm.
"You're welcome, Miss McGonagall. It was my pleasure."
Professor Merrythought grinned and leaned in close to Albus so that her whisper couldn't be overheard. "I haven't seen you blush this much since that little girl's aunt surprised you, this past Christmas, with a scrimshaw beard comb."
Galatea's voice was intentionally soft, and the combined effect of her warm breath against Albus' ear and the reminder of Minerva's gift caused his blush to deepen. To cover his embarrassment, Dumbledore silently conjured moisture to accumulate in the air around them, creating sleet in the biting winds and forcing a similar blush onto Professor Merrythought's cheeks.
"Unpleasant weather for a Quidditch match, wouldn't you say?" Albus was pleased when he turned toward his Hufflepuff colleague and noticed the color rising against her skin. Galatea shivered in response to the sudden onslaught of icy shards.
"Well, pickles! I don't remember the weather forecast calling for sleet!" she exclaimed.
A loud whistle rang out as players began emerging onto the field, crimson-clad from the left, royal blue from the right. A squelch flared in the air as the commentator announced the beginning of the game.
"Today's match, Ravenclaw versus Gryffindor! Captains Aaron Ollivander, for Ravenclaw, and Minerva McGonagall, for Gryffindor, take the field. The Quaffle is thrown into the air... and MacGruder takes the Quaffle! Gryffindor has the ball!" the young man's voice rang out over the pitch, carrying in every direction.
With that, the game began and the stands around the odd quartet erupted in cheers. Albus suddenly remembered his over-cloak was inappropriately colored, and Transfigured it from purple into crimson and gold.
"MacGruder passes to McGonagall ... Schwartz blasts the Bludger .... Oooh that was close! And the Bludger is coming back around at McGonagall..."
As the commentator trailed off, Albus heard a company of droning bagpipes, accompanied by a brigade of snare drums, generate from the far end of the pitch. The music grew louder as he watched Minerva and Sara round the far goalposts, followed closely by the Ravenclaw Chasers. Roland McCreedy, the third of the Gryffindor Chasers, flew up and joined his teammates in formation as they, ahead of the Ravenclaw team, zoomed toward the Gryffindor bleachers.
As the three crimson-clad Chasers advanced toward their goalposts, Albus recognized the melody growing loud as "Scotland the Brave". Marcus stood up as his cousin and sister approached their section of bleachers, nearly taking the Quaffle out of bounds and giving Ravenclaw a free goal shot. Marcus started flailing his arms wildly, motioning the Gryffindor team back. Minerva managed a backwards pass to her cousin before she reached the foul line, passing the Quaffle over her head on instinct. Sara caught the ball and turned sharply, taking the Ravenclaw Keeper by surprise. Marcus let out a roaring cheer followed by a shrill squeal from Amelia.
"McGonagall has the Quaffle and is about to ... she's out of bou... no! She makes a backwards pass to MacGruder ... who scores on Ollivander! Ten points to Gryffindor!"
The roar of bagpipes was almost deafening in Albus' ears as Minerva overshot the foul line and turned behind their section of stands. As she flew over him on her returning pass, she dropped something into Amelia's lap and raced back across the field, narrowly dodging a Bludger, and sidled up against Feng Chang, the 6th-year Ravenclaw Seeker. Chang sped up quickly as Minerva approached and shot high above the pitch. Clandallin, seeing his captain's interest in the other Seeker, followed suit and saw an approving nod from Minerva as he followed Chang.
Amelia's squeal was lost in the cheering of Gryffindor fans, but her expression displayed surprised joy. Albus watched as she opened a tiny parcel wrapped in gold parchment. A finger puppet of a lion's head, in Gryffindor colors, emerged, and when the child donned the yarn-made toy, it became animated, opening its mouth in a tiny roar. Amelia smiled and showed her uncle, who laughed.
As the game progressed, the Ravenclaw Chasers made several attempts to score and found Keeper Moody an impassable obstacle. Twice, Albus was sure that Ravenclaw would succeed in scoring, but Moody always managed to reach the appropriate hoop in time to block the shots. Dumbledore was quietly impressed with the single-minded resilience that Moody displayed in his position. Alastor's tenacity and reflexes had grown admirably since the previous year, and just as the idea formed in his mind that Moody may have a promising career in Magical Law Enforcement, Professor Merrythought leaned over and shouted over the crowd.
"With reflexes like that, Mr. Moody would make an excellent candidate for the Auror Department, Albus. You should talk to him."
"I'm not sure now is the best time to be joining the MLE, Galatea, with this war looming," he commented. Merrythought cast a noise-softening charm in the air around herself to muffle the acoustic chaos so that she could better focus on what Albus was saying.
"While I too hate the idea of thrusting our students onto the battlefield, it may just be that this younger generation is what makes the difference between a free wizarding world and one ruled by a lunatic. I don't think Muggle Europe would have ever expected Hitler to rise to power so quickly. The parallels can't be ignored, Albus."
Dumbledore understood clearly she was alluding to Grindelwald. Albus had hoped the Quidditch match would be a pleasant distraction from his worries of late; however, he could not begrudge his colleague her concern. Galatea knew more about his recent activities than most, due largely to her involvement with the Auror Department years earlier and her continued influence in Muggle/magical communication between the different law enforcement departments of Great Britain. However, she was also one of his closest friends, and one of the very few he confided in. Dumbledore knew she was worried, not just for himself, but for the entire continent. He also detected some aggravation in her tone, knowing this was due to his vague answers to recent questions she had about the most prevalent developments in the Ministry.
"No, we can't, that is true. Speaking of which, did you remember that I am expected at a Ministry function this afternoon? Would you, or perhaps Reginald, look in on Gryffindor this evening? I doubt I'll be back before dinner." Galatea tutted at his response, disappointed with her inability to get Dumbledore to discuss further matters concerning the war and how he was involved.
"Of course I will, Albus," she remarked and cast a Finite on her muffling charm, understanding that their conversation was at an end.
Albus remembered something and turned toward Merrythought.
"Ah, my dear, I nearly forgot. Miss McGonagall will need access to my office for some study materials ... I'll leave a note on my desk with the associated tomes, would you grant her access? She is welcome to remain there as long as she requires, as the necessary materials cannot leave my rooms."
Professor Merrythought nodded in understanding just before the stands once again erupted as Gryffindor scored. Chaser McGonagall brought the score up to Gryffindor thirty, Ravenclaw zero, right before a tiny Scops owl swooped overhead and landed on Albus' knee. The bird looked extremely put out at having to navigate through the chaos of zooming broomsticks. Dumbledore unwrapped the note tied to the little bird's leg and tucked it in the inside breast pocket of his coat.
"I'm afraid that's my cue. Thank you, Galatea." He nodded to the witch before turning to the McGonagalls. "Mr. McGonagall, a pleasure meeting with you again. Miss McGonagall, a real treat meeting you at last." He smiled down at the rosy-cheeked child before rising from his seat. "If you have any problems or questions about ‛Professor,' ask your uncle or father to help you write me a letter." He gently patted Amelia on the shoulder.
Marcus reached out a hand to his former professor, shaking it firmly.
"Grand to see yeh again, Professor Dumbledore. Sorry yeh canna enjoy the rest of the game," Marcus half yelled over the din of the activity. Albus nodded but said nothing else and made his way to the exit of the bleachers. Amelia, anxious to get off her uncle's lap, climbed onto the seat that Dumbledore had just evacuated and stood so she could better see over the crowd.
The Gryffindor Chasers dominated the field and carried the Quaffle twice as often as the Ravenclaw team. McCreedy managed to score two goal shots by the time MacGruder and McGonagall had each scored at least half a dozen. Ravenclaw hadn't managed to score once, and their Seeker, Feng Chang, was desperately searching the sky for the Snitch, knowing they were quickly running out of time to gain the upper hand. Young Clandallin had also been widely circling the field, trying not to harass Chang. However, when the Ravenclaw Seeker took a sharp dive toward the ground, Darwin knew he'd spotted the Snitch and dove after him.
Chang was leading Clandallin by at least ten feet and was only a few seconds away from snatching the Snitch out of the air as the ball zoomed mere inches above the frosted turf of the pitch. Clandallin urged his old broom forward, but the decades-old model, one of the school's stock, just couldn't produce as much speed as the newer brooms that most of the players rode. Try as he might, he couldn't advance on Chang and hoped the Snitch would turn sharply, which would give Clandallin an advantage in pursuit, as he was far enough back to maneuver correctly. Darwin made the mistake of looking up as McCreedy made a dive to catch the Quaffle, missing his chance at the Snitch when it took a sharp left, nearly sending Chang headlong into the bleachers.
Damn it, Darwin ... you idiot! You just lost the game! he muttered to himself.
Roland McCreedy pulled out of the dive, catching the Quaffle by the tips of his fingers, and, just before plowing feet-first into the sod, managed to toss it high toward McGonagall, who was fast approaching. Relieved that Minerva caught the pass, Roland let himself tumble forward, where he flipped feet-over-head, and landed firmly on his backside.
Chang was gaining on the Snitch, which had slowed some when it changed directions, and Clandallin watched as the Ravenclaw Seeker pawed the air in front of him, reaching desperately for the ball. Darwin wished, more strongly than ever, that his parents had gotten him a new broom for Christmas instead of the magical castle-building set he had begged for.
MacGruder and McGonagall swerved in and around the Ravenclaw Beaters, dodging Bludgers and bats alike as the team tried everything in their power to stop the high-scoring pair. Minerva passed the Quaffle to her cousin, pulled up and launched forward, hoping to confuse Ollivander at the goalposts. Before Sara was overcome by two Ravenclaw Beaters, who flanked her on either side, she re-passed to Minerva, who rolled the pass into the left hoop, taking Ollivander completely by surprise.
"McGonagall scores for Gryffindor! It's 160 to zero and... oh! Chang has caught the Snitch! Ravenclaw has caught the Snitch, but it's not enough to gain the lead and the game is over! Gryffindor 160 and Ravenclaw 150! Gryffindor wins!"
The Gryffindor section of bleachers erupted in cacophonous cheers. Marcus and Amelia were among the loudest.
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Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
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Thank you for reading! Merry Christmas.
Ahh, who can blame Moody for being angry. Though I do understand why Minerva decided not to tell him everything. I can well imagine what Riddle did to make her that scared. Huh. *smh*
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
You will have to translate 'smh' ... I don't think I'm familiar with that language.
OH yeah! I can relate to Moody here ... smug Minerva and keeping secrets and ... you have to admit, she does act a bit uppity ... *shrugs* women ...
Response from Stefdarlin (Reviewer)
*smh* means shaking my head. I had to ask my husband what it meant when I kept seeing it on facebook. I suppose I was showing my age there, lol.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hrm .... I usually ask my teenage daughter these things ... and yes, I know what you mean about age ... I be aaancient! I not even know texting lingo! Egads!
<--is what I came up with for dear Alastor. They need a *facepalm* icon, lol. I like the way Albus was excited over Minerva's wee note, lol. That was very true to character and cute. =o) I also agree with Minerva that Nick is acting a bit strange. *Shudder* On my way to the next chapter.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Wow! You're on marathon reading tonight!
I know! Facepalm smiley for Alastor ... can you imagine? Insert foot, bite down ... yeesh!
Time to hide under the table and pray for an earth quake, me thinks.
Aww... at least the last bit made me want to say that. =o) Otherwise, I am totally wondering why Minerva didn't want to inform her parents? That seems a bit odd. Tom needs a bit of his own medicine, I think. Grrr!Albus was quite the gentleman. And I loved the way she said her father rationalized her mum's magic. =o)Nice chapter.Cheers,Stef
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Thank you!
This chapter's idea is what spawned the whole story idea, well actually the little Celtic song.
Glad you enjoyed it, and hopefully soon, Minerva will be able to explain why she wants to keep this event so private.
Of course Albus is a gentleman! *nods*
Hmm, interesting start. I am thinking Horace either knows more than he is letting on, or he is hiding something. With all that Dumbledore pointed out of Minerva's character, it is a wonder that Slughorn wouldn't try to collect her. But then, I doubt she would let him.Tom got what he deserved as far as I am concerned. I feel bad for Minerva, but I am glad Albus is going to explain, and he is in her corner. YAY! I may take a bit to review the next chapter as I need to get my next in the queue. But it will be my next break. =o)
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hey! Thanks for dropping a review for my yarn and glad you enjoyed it - and while I can't answer questions as for why certain folk are doing certain things, it will all come out in the wash, as they say.
Wow, Riddle is showing his true colors here, and they ain't purty ones!I'm glad that Alastor had some grit, but it's a pity that TR was so nasty. Why is he not expelled?Anyway, I loved Merrythought in this chapter. I know she's a secondary character to the others, but I think she's my favorite so far here. Not that I don't love the others, too -- and you know my affection for Minerva & Albus (especially when they're together) -- but I really like the way that you've developed Merrythought's character, especially since she was hardly more than a name in canon. Alumno was an interesting character, too, and it's nice to see a mediwitch getting some time, and having a lot of spunk, as well. I can scarcely wait to find out what Minerva does, and how she manages to help Alastor. Of course, I will be patient, or try to be! (And who am I to talk about getting new chapters out -- I don't think I've updated any of my WIPs in months, after all!)¡Esperando pacientemente -- y con entusiasmo! (I love languages!)
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Wooo Hoooo! I had actually forgotten about our dear characcters - so glad you reminded me of their existance!I'm glad you enjoy Merrythought - she's fun and will figure in the story well into the future - hopefully, as is Madam Alumno - as well as her spice - hehe.I know - I really feel bad for Alastor here - and you will see soon why Riddle isn't expelled - or at least, I hope it will seem plausible why he wasn't expelled - you'll have to let me know if its too weak or not.I seriously need to get back to fleshing out Lioness.Thanks so much for all your help and your reviews!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
And I'm not entirely sure if I'm tickled that you really love Merrythought, or if I'm worried that your favorites aren't Albus and Minerva - so I guess I'll just be glad you like our Galatea.
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I think that Riddle needs a really, really, really strong dose of alum. Like, it might clean him out a bit. Nah, that probably wouldn't help. But it would be fun!
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
Just be tickled that I like Galatea! I mean, I was prepared to love Albus & Minerva, and I do, so it's just a wonderful extra to get another great character there, and one that you're making your own, more or less.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Woo Hoo!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Wooo Hoooo! I had actually forgotten about our dear characcters - so glad you reminded me of their existance!I'm glad you enjoy Merrythought - she's fun and will figure in the story well into the future - hopefully, as is Madam Alumno - as well as her spice - hehe.I know - I really feel bad for Alastor here - and you will see soon why Riddle isn't expelled - or at least, I hope it will seem plausible why he wasn't expelled - you'll have to let me know if its too weak or not.I seriously need to get back to fleshing out Lioness.Thanks so much for all your help and your reviews!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
And I'm not entirely sure if I'm tickled that you really love Merrythought, or if I'm worried that your favorites aren't Albus and Minerva - so I guess I'll just be glad you like our Galatea.
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I think that Riddle needs a really, really, really strong dose of alum. Like, it might clean him out a bit. Nah, that probably wouldn't help. But it would be fun!
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
Just be tickled that I like Galatea! I mean, I was prepared to love Albus & Minerva, and I do, so it's just a wonderful extra to get another great character there, and one that you're making your own, more or less.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Woo Hoo!
Buwahahaha! An attack owl! hee!I enjoyed the bits of humor throughout this chapter very much, and I liked the perspective we have in this chapter. It was great to meet some of Minerva's family, and I enjoyed the Quidditch match. However, even with the humor in the chapter, and the excitement of the Quidditch match, we see that the seriousness of the war impinges on Hogwarts' daily life -- or at least on Dumbledore's life.I enjoyed seeing Galatea again. I like your depiction of her. I hope we see more of her!I'm really liking this version of Minerva's youth and coming-of-age. I look forward to more!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Coming from you, that's quite a compliment! Thank you, Madam! *bows*
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
Well, as you might guess, I do have a bit of appreciation for Minerva McGonagall stories! And I really do love seeing her older brother and young Amelia here. It gives some depth to her background. It seems she has a neat family.BTW, how do you like writing about Quidditch? I know you've written a bit with Quidditch in previous chapters, but I think (if memory serves me!) that this is the first game we've seen. I find it kind of a challenge to write Quidditch matches, though I think that the little bit I've done has come out okay. I liked yours here. Did you have fun writing it, or was it torture, or something in between?
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
I'm so glad you liked Marcus and Amelia *grins* and I'm sure the irony isn't lost on you. *winks* Marcus is going to be a fun character to write, I think, and Amelia will be a challenge, being that she's a little Motzart.You know, I enjoyed writing the Quidditch match - it reminded me of my baseball years and how quick everything happens - sometimes everything slows down as the adrenaline pumps and its amazing how much action happens in just a few short seconds. I hope I was able to describe the action of the match in a believable way - as well as keeping it entertaining and not too long winded.I've always felt that fast action sports, team sports especially, teach people how to react quickly and build confidence in their decisions - I think sports will make most people more decisive - make it easier for them to make a decision in that split second when so many people would balk - and that in turn can help them in combat situations - should they be thrust into such events.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
*coughs* Mozart (my bad)
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I thought it its timing was good -- enjoyable, didn't drag, but was detailed enough to envision what was happening. A pity that Albus had to leave before the end!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
I know! He missed some amazing saves by Alastor and some serious broom zooming by Sara and Minerva! Poor guy!I'm glad the pace seemed good to you - I was happy with the match, over all, I felt it fit well into the chapter and didn't overshadow the conversation that was taking place in the stands - which, of course, was the main focus of the chapter.
A very promissing start! The setup is very much as I imagine it. Yes, these two would definitely get into a fight!I had a discussion once that M.McG can have been so distant to Ginny (in ChoS) because she was sexually attacked by the same wizard in her own youth.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hrm.... well... my tae on Minerva and Tom's relationship, or what ever you wish to call it, time in school - is not from canon - its purely made up - but I could easily see Tom Riddle being a predator in his school days - we already know he was from Dumbledore's memories of him when he was only 10 or 11 - so... its no stretch to see him going after others - and being that he's a recruiter - I think he'd have a special interest in someone like Minerva - she's incredibly powerful - and for either want to dominate her or gain her loyalty, I think he'd be interested.
I reviewed this on another site, but I just wanted to say I'm glad to see the update here (at last). Dumbledore is quite a charmer here (as is Amelia), and I loved their interaction. I really enjoyed meeting Minerva's relatives, and the relationship between Albus and Galatea is great too. It made me smile when he conjured the sleet to hide his embarrassment.Here's hoping for some more Albus/Minerva interaction soon!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
I kinda like the sleet too - and I'm glad you don't mind my Snarky Dumbledore - as you can probably detect, he's a bit stressed out and a bit mouthy... though Galatea can give it back just as much, no worries about that.Very glad you enjoyed the other McGonagalls - I plan to include them quite a bit in the future, along with a few more I haven't introduced yet.Ah - hold your horses for Albus/Minerva interaction - at least the way I'm guessing you mean it - and I hope you aren't dissapointed with me over all - remember, I did write the plot of the story as Minerva's life. Yes I get defensive when I get worried...
Response from dsky (Reviewer)
I don't (necessarily) mean that kind of interaction. I just enjoy the way you write them getting to know each other!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Awww! Thank you!Well - Chapter 6 and 7 should have plenty of interaction - me thinks.
I'm so glad to see the update here on TPP!I love the Quidditch match, and especially meeting Minerva's brother--so different from her!--and Amelia. The intereaction between the child and Albus is lovely.The relationship between Albus and Merrythough is nice, too--the readers senses some history there, and of course, it's intriguing.Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
YAY! I kinda like Marcus - got a bit of a soft spot for the big goof.
fun background of the McGonagall Clan - and a teensy bit of Albus and Minerva
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Glad you enjoyed that!
I love this chapter. You give us a bit more about Minerva--her talent and power, as well as her no-nonsense attitude ("How foolish of Williams to allow his personal feelings to get in the way of Gryffindor’s success!") and of course, the relationship with Alastor.The bit with Sir Nicholas is wonderful--I love little moments like this that let us glimpse a bit more of the minor characters as well.She certainly surprised Albus, didn't she?
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oh, she'll continue to surprise Albus ... *grins* and herself!Glad you enjoyed Minerva as well as Alastor and Sir Nick! We'll be seeing more of all three, or four, of them!
I think your portrayal of a young Alastor is "spot-on". Can't believe he said "you slept with Dumbledore". Conversation between Sir Nicholas and Minerva was fun and informative as well as original. This chapter was another great building block in Minerva and Albus' relationship. Thanks.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hey! I'm so glad you like my rendition of young Alastor! Aye! He surprised me too - can you imagine someone saying that to you about your favorite teacher? YEESH! Talk about no manners!Glad you liked Sir Nicholas here, as well as Minerva! Thank you so much for the review!
I love the animated phoenix origami, and the spell that goes with it. It's fun to show off subtly for someone who appreciates it! And it seems that Alastor, as much as he may like her, doesn't really appreciate it. But then, 'subtle' and 'Alastor Moody' don't really go together, do they? Interesting that he and Minerva used to be a couple, although Minerva, at least doesn't appear to have been that emotionally attached. I wonder if Alastor is as unconcerned as he appears to be -- from his reaction the night before, possibly not, but since he doesn't seem to have a rival, he can afford to play it cool.'You slept with Dumbledore?' HA! Good non-reaction from Albus, and good for Minerva, showing her Gryffindor courage by looking him in the eye. So Minerva progresses toward her animagus training, and she and Dumbledore continue to get to know each other on a more personal level.I like Minerva's thoughts on the way to breakfast, we learn a lot about her without it feeling like an infodump. Interesting interaction with Sir Nicholas too. I like your Merrythought. You can tell she cares about her students, and is more interested in substance than flash.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
*grins wide*Well you just made my morning! Ahhh - lets see - yes Alastor Moody and subtle do not mix, at all... in any way, anywhere... you will be seeing a lot more of Alastor as the story progresses, so I hope you feel he stays in character - but you're right on many accounts - which is fairly observant of you so early in the story - though, my Minerva isn't exactly open to her own feelings, let alone shares them with many folks.I'm glad you enjoyed my little origami! I love origami! *snickers* I don't make too many sculptures that sing, but well, its fun to imagine!Glad you enjoy Albus' reaction to Alastor *grins* I don't want to spoil the surprise, but... naaaaaaa, I'll keep my mouth shut on that, more fun for you to see things unfold (smirks at her own origami pun) and very glad you enjoyed my non-info-dump via Sir Nicholas and the Quidditch team issues as well as Merrythought - she's a canon character I'm going to have a lot of fun developing - and I quite like her as well.Thanks so much for reviewing!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
OH! I forgot to add, chapter 4 is in the queue!
Response from dsky (Reviewer)
"Glad you enjoy Albus' reaction to Alastor *grins* I don't want to spoil the surprise, but... naaaaaaa, I'll keep my mouth shut" aarrrgh -- tease!
"OH! I forgot to add, chapter 4 is in the queue!"
I really enjoyed Minerva in this chapter especially. And her conversation with Sir Nick was really funny. I loved her speculation about whether or not ghosts would flirt! haha!I am very much liking Galatea Merrythought. She's my kinda witch! And, as always, it was great to see Dumbledore!Very nice chapter to move the story forward! (And funny to see teenaged Alastor again, being a bit of an annoyance -- and embarrassing himself!)
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oh Ho! Yes, a teenage Alastor is kind of funny to write - he's a mix of a few things, and plenty of teenage, male, nonsense - glad you like my Merrythought - keep an eye on her, she's going places, or so you might say - and its always wonderful to write McGonagall and Dumbledore - anywhere, anyhow, any place!Glad you're enjoying the story!
Excellent way to start a Friday. I'm so happy that a new chapter was uploaded. woo hoo.I had to grin when Albus overheard Minerva and Alastor's conversation, especially when Alastor was being so rude. Served him right for feeling uncomfortable after that. haha.Looking forward to the next update and to see how the ADMM progresses!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Woo Hoo! It finally updated! Glad you liked the chappie - and glad you liked Alastor's karma - poor guy, I kinda feel sorry for him sometimes.Aye - progress comes but *whistles innocently* who ever said there was going to be any ADMM in this? *chuckles* I can imagine it was a certain Ravenclaw buddy of mine... might have let slip the eventual direction of this story - but all I'm going to say is... BE PATIENT! We've got a long way to go.
Lovely 'getting to know each other' chapter. Nice and long, and worth the wait -- although I wouldn't mind slightly shorter chapters if the wait was also shorter!How thoughtful of him to offer her privacy by making her invisible, and nice to see that even though she doesn't want to see her friends right now, they (or at least one of them) are ready to stand up for her against Riddle. In the prefects bath -- is the hourglass locket a timeturner? Has she had it long?I really enjoyed the interaction between Albus and Minerva, especially the teasing when Minerva relaxed. It's interesting that their backgrounds aren't all that different--but why would he think her father was a mediwizard? I liked Fawkes' appearance too. Does he have (or is he developing) a soft spot for Minerva, or is he there solely because Albus is concerned? The end was sweet too, when he tucked her in and watched her sleep.Why is Minerva so adamant about NOT letting her family know about the incident? I could understand if she would prefer to tell them privately and in-person, but she apparently doesn't want them to know that anything happened at all.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Ohh delicious questions!Lets see - okay - the chapter was long in the queue and had to be revised twice - my bad - we will get better. The third chapter is in queue and the fourth is nearly finished so I don't anticipate you having to wait long due to me, but the queue is moving slowly.Glad you enjoyed the chapter! *grins* Makes me a happy writer!You will be seeing much, much more of Alastor as the story progresses, so I'm glad you appreciate his concern.Is that hourglass a timeturner? Oooh... perhaps! *winks* You will learn of that later.Nope, their backgrounds are oddly similar and why did Dumbledore think her father was a mediwizard? Well, more of that will come up later - but the short answer is, he didn't realize her father was Muggle and since her mother's family is so strongly bent in the medical field, he assumed her father was as well. More about the MacGruders and McGonagalls as we continue, I promise.Ahh, Fawkes - well, the best way to answer this is like this. Fawkes is attuned to Albus completely - so Fawkes ends up caring about those that Albus cares about though I'm sure the bird can develop his own relationships, but those few people that Albus cares for greatly end up being important to Fawkes.And, the biggest concern, no doubt - why does Minerva not wish to talk about this incident with her family? I can't tell you that without spoiling the story later, but it will be revealed, I promise. And she does have a very, very good reason. I hope you find the answer later is worth the wait.Thank you so much for reading!
Response from dsky (Reviewer)
I'm really just kidding about the wait. It's not like you're getting paid for this -- and even if you were, you can't put creativity on a time clock. Like I said, it was well worth it. I'll take quality over quantity any day, and this chapter had both.As for the questions, I will just wait (patiently!) for the answers.
Yea! a nice long chapter. Loved the "intimacy" between Albus and Minerva. Albus did the right thing letting her stay in his office and telling the students to give her room. He provided the perfect atmosphere for her to start to recover. Funny that he doesn't realize it was his presence and actions that calmed her, not the tea. Another very enjoyable chapter. Thank you.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oh ho! I'm glad you liked the length of this one - the poor admin was pulling her hair out due to the length - glad it was worth it.Ah, but Albus, with all his infinate wisdom and brilliance, sometimes can't see what's right in front of him. True the tea helped, as did Fawkes, but the real comfort was, indeed, as you say, Professor Dumbledore.This chapter was a pleasure to write, though difficult in spots. The idea of Dumbledore listening to that song in his office was the spark that started this whole fic - so I'm glad others are enjoying, becuase I'm enjoying writing it.Thank you so much for your review!
I was glad to see the chapter posted! It was a nice introduction to Minerva and Albus's relationship, and fun to see young Minerva enjoying herself in Professor Dumbledore's company, despite her recent trauma. You can see the comfort in their relationship already.I loved the music in the chapter, both Fawkes's phoenix song and the lovely lullaby and the magical visual effects it created.I look forward to seeing more of Albus & Minerva's growing relationship!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oooh! Glad you liked the music - it was that actual song that initiated the entire story - that lullaby, I was listening to one day and could see - my image of Dumbledore sitting behind his desk, singing along and tapping his foot and I was overcome with security and peace, and of course, love, but you know, I can't look at Dumbledore and not get all mushy - but, that was the whole instigator behind this entire story - and I'm glad that the music moved you.I did have a lot of fun with Fawkes here. I find he's often overlooked as a 'pet' and its nice to give him some character.
This was certainly an emotional chapter for me for lots of reasons.I am still incredibly angry at Riddle for attacking Minerva and Slughorn for letting the little snot get away with it ... with only a slap on the wrist. The Headmaster isn't much better and certainly has no spine t all. I've said all that to say this ... you've done a fantastic job of portraying your characters since they inspire such deep emotions.The interactions and characterizations between Albus and Minerva were incredibly sweet and very in keeping with their characters. It's sad that Minerva feels the need to hide the information from her parents and to feel ashamed of what happened, but I suppose it's something she has to work through on her own, with Albus' help.Lastly, my favorite part was the bit with Fawkes and his song for Minerva. I could easily visualize the situation and the mood his song created. I think there was a bit of bonding going on with Faskes and Minerva ... very sweet!Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Awwwwwww! You make me smile! I'm glad the characters create such emotion, I do want to do that, and feel similar to what you are feeling - though I must admit, I think I feel a bit better since I know the out-comb - but of course I do! I'm writing it!I enjoyed writing Fawkes in here, that was not something I had originally planned and it worked very well, and helped to introduce an overlooked character who is often quiet and in the background. And yes, I think he and Minerva will be seeing more of eachother. And I very much enjoyed showing the development of the trust between teacher/Dumbledore and student/McGonagall - because well, that's where it all began, after all!Thank you so much for your review - the third chapter is in the queue and the fourth is being written!
Woot!I love the interaction between Albus and Minerva in this chapter--the slowly growing friendship and intimacy between them is intriguing and very much IC.I also love how you've introduced Fawkes and his empathetic qualities; he feels like a character rather than just a "sidekick." Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Awww! Thank you! Fawkes is just so cool! You have to love a bird that can burst into flame, sing the blues away and delivers letters, all without making a big mess! Oh and healing all toxins is quite the benefit! Hope you'll like the direction!
Very nice start to the story and I have to say that I am very upset with Armando Dippet. Never have been a fan of Slughorn so I can't say his actions surprise me all that much. I am incredibly disappointed that Minerva didn't do more to Tom Riddle, haha. He's a nasty piece of work.I am looking forward to reading more of the story so I hope your Muse cooperates and lets you write quickly!!!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
The second chapter is in the que *nods* and the Muse is screaming and jumping up and down on my keyboard! There will be much, much more...Aye, I would have liked more to happen to Riddle but the story isn't over yet.... *winks*Anyway, I hope you enjoyed the begining, sorry about Armando... he's a bit daft today - or something, but, I do have plans for everyone! Not to worry!This next chapter should help you to feel better... it certainly does Minerva.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Chapter 3 is in the works... the muse is dancing! Just letting you know, the que is very full lately and it is taking quite a while for these fics to make it through the editing and admission process - but I am not slacking or abandoning you all! *crosses heart* Thanks again for your review and enjoying my yarn!
GRRRRRR! I hate Tom Riddle! Well, I can't say that's anything new, but here, I really, really hate him! And he deserved all he got and more! Dippet's such a . . . he needs to grow a backbone, certainly. I'm very glad that Dumbledore was such a strong voice advocating for Minerva! She felt her breath catch and turned to look up at him, seeing the look of regret in his eyes. She understood, for the first time that evening since the whole scenario began, that someone was, indeed, in her corner. And that made all the difference.Of course. Completely. And she will always be in Albus's corner now, too. I can see the mutual loyalty and trust building right here. Very promising beginning to the story! I am looking forward to seeing how it proceeds!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Riddle is....... a very icky living thing... aye! loyalty is indeed.... contagious! Ah, well... Dippet may have a few surprises later on... backbones - you know... surprising as I always am, they don't seem to be as common as most think... glad you liked the start! WOO HOO! Hopefully I can do these two justice in YOUR epic eyes! *nods*OH, and that stupid typo at the very begining... yeah.... i'm stupid. Fixing maybe?
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I still find typos in chapters of fics that were proofread, beta'd, and validated by mods, years later, and often after I have reread the chapter myself several times. It just happens!I do hope he gets a little backbone! And I am also wondering what Sluggy's nervous about, 'cause he definitely seems nervous and defensive here.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Sluggy? Defensive? Nawwwwwwwwwww - *grins*
Nice beginning to this story. The way the other professors dismiss Albus' implication is distressingly realisitic. Can't wait to read the rest.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Why thank you ma'am! I do hope it sparks an interest... yes... the bit written about the other professors dissmissals is written from experience.... very sad but it is so common.