Ghosts and Folded Parchment
The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness
Chapter 3 of 9
FishyMinerva contemplates a difficult decision regarding the Gryffindor Quidditch team. She discusses a few ideas with her Head of House.
These characters belong to J.K. Rowling. I appreciate the opportunity to borrow them from time to time. My deepest thanks to the very generous and gracious MMADfan and Squibstress for their inspiration, advice, patience and time.
In this semi-AU, Professor Merrythought is, at this time, the Charms instructor.
Chapter 3: Ghosts and Folded Parchment
February 1943, Hogwarts Castle
Minerva blinked her eyes several times and sat up, forgetting where she was until she recognized the ticking of the antique clock that hung on the wall across from the Transfigured couch. She groaned, feeling foolish for falling asleep in her professor's office. Why hadn't he woken me? And what time is it? Glancing at the window and then up at the clock, in the dim light of the candelabra, she could see that it was early, still dark outside, only half past five.
She swung her feet over the side of the couch and her bladder screamed. Muttering to herself about falling asleep in the first place, Minerva was thankful that there was a small office loo and hurried inside. After relieving herself, she stood by the sink and grasped the bar of soap. Much like the soap in the Prefects' bath, this bar was also in the shape of a Celtic knot. It smelled quite strong once she worked up a thick lather: cinnamon, clove, and bay rum, which she thought was oddly familiar.
After returning to the office, she began gathering up her belongings and noticed the note atop her Potions book. Donning her reading spectacles, she unfolded the note and read:
Miss McGonagall,
I hope you do not mind that I did not wake you, but you looked far too peaceful in your slumber, and I was loath to disturb you. I have notified Gibber, the house-elf that served us dinner, to aid you should you need anything simply call him.
I do wish to speak to you in regard to your request last week about the Animagus apprenticeship, though that is not an urgent matter.
I hope your day goes well. I will be in my office this evening after dinner, and you are welcome to stop by should you need anything, though I am sure I will see you in morning class.
Sincerely,
Professor Albus Dumbledore
Although she still felt foolish, even childish, for falling asleep on her professor's couch, he didn't seem bothered by it. She guessed there were far worse things other students had done in the past, and she decided not to give much energy to her embarrassment. Tucking the note into her Potions book, she stuffed everything back into her normal-sized book bag and laid it on the couch, looking around the room. She had wanted to browse her professor's small library the night before and wondered if he would mind much if she glanced over some of his books. She decided it wouldn't hurt to look and walked around his desk.
She gasped a few times, recognizing some of the tomes as those she had never been able to find in the libraries at school or in Hogsmeade, or even at Flourish and Blotts. Many of Professor Dumbledore's books were out of print and quite a few were old, centuries old. One in particular captured her interest: The History of Animagi of the Past Millennium by Cedric McGregor. Tentatively, she laid her index finger along the top of the spine, contemplating drawing it out. Curiosity got the better of her, and she withdrew the book carefully and, cradling it gently, opened it to the title page. Printed in 1806! Her stomach fluttered with excitement as she turned the pages with great care, looking over the table of contents.
Every chapter title was the name of a person; each one was, no doubt, an Animagus registered over the past thousand years. She saw listed forty-six chapters and wondered momentarily if this was a list of British Animagi or if the book included other nationalities. Forty-six registered Animagi for the entire world for a full thousand years sure seemed like a small number. Perhaps the art was as difficult as Professor Dumbledore had warned her. Minerva decided it didn't matter how difficult the study was. She knew she'd regret it if she never tried, and decided that, no matter how grueling the practice became, she'd make a determined effort to succeed.
Feeling somewhat guilty for snooping when she had not been given permission, she replaced the book and looked over the desk for some blank parchment. Upon finding a sheet, she used her professor's large pheasant quill and wrote out a short note. After signing her name, she had an idea and grinned; folding the parchment in a peculiar shape, she tapped it with her wand, muttered an incantation, and laid it in the center of his desk.
Returning to the couch for her possessions, she noticed the blanket had been Transfigured to match the couch, and she smiled before folding it up neatly and draping it over the back. After picking up her book sack and making sure she had everything she came with, she slipped out of the office and quietly padded to the Fat Lady's portrait.
The Gryffindor common room was silent and dark, and she made her way up the stairs to her dorm room as quietly as possible. As early as it was, she doubted any of her Housemates would be up, as she was generally the earliest riser. She quickly dressed in a sweater and heavy wool skirt in response to the chilly February weather, then donned her common school robes. In the girls' lavatory, she continued getting ready for her day before heading back down to the common room to study a bit before her patrol rounds.
At six a.m., Minerva headed out the portrait hole for morning rounds as she did every morning. Preferring to get her obligatory prefect duties accomplished at the beginning of the day, she had signed up for first rounds at the start of the year. Though spare time wasn't something she had in excess, she preferred to relax in the evenings when she could. This evening, being a Friday, would likely find Minerva busy, as Gryffindor had Quidditch practice in the afternoon and a game against Ravenclaw on Saturday. As Gryffindor Quidditch captain, it was her responsibility to make sure they were ready, so she resigned herself to the idea of having little time of her own until Sunday.
Their Seeker, a seventh-year named Claymont Williams, had recently broken up with his girlfriend, Minerva's cousin, Sara MacGruder, and had been despondent. He had been so surly and preoccupied at their last practice on Wednesday that Minerva had asked him if he would like to take some time off, allowing their third-year reserve Seeker to take over. Williams hadn't given her a real answer, but if his attitude and performance didn't improve by this afternoon, she'd have to replace him with Darwin Clandallin, a short but stout young man with ginger hair. She had little patience for what she perceived as melodramatic teenage angst, and the team shouldn't have to suffer because Williams had lost interest. Sara, while also on the team, seemed quite relieved to be rid of Williams, at least romantically, and had not lost any of her Quidditch gusto. Minerva decided not to dwell on it any longer. If Williams was going to wallow in his grief, he could do it in the stands.
Minerva had broken off her relationship with Alastor Moody only a month prior, and she could not have cared less if he remained on the team or not. She had no qualms about continuing to work with him. Well, that wasn't entirely true; he was an excellent Keeper. She did suppose if he had quit Quidditch over their break up, she'd consider that extremely unfortunate. Gryffindor had an excellent team this year and a real shot at the Quidditch Cup, and as it was her first year as captain, she wanted even more desperately to pound all competition into the dirt.
How foolish of Williams to allow his personal feelings to get in the way of Gryffindor's success!
Even so, Alastor didn't take the breakup as anything earth-shattering, nor did she. She shrugged and decided she wasn't likely to understand Williams' emotional state, but regardless, as captain, she would have to make the final decision about the Seeker, and she would choose what was best for the team.
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Minerva's rounds were uneventful, and she found only a sparse few students up and moving already. She was walking down the last two flights of stairs to the Great Hall for breakfast when a bright voice spoke to her from the outside edge of the banister.
"Good morning, Miss McGonagall!" exclaimed Sir Nicholas in a cheerful voice as he floated forward, mid-air, alongside her. Minerva was somewhat surprised and paused in her steps before finding her brisk stride again.
"Good morning, Sir Nicholas. You're up and about early," she commented. Not that ghosts slept, did they?
The ghost smiled pleasantly and continued to float at her side. "Ah, this is true. I have found in the last few decades I've been missing far too many dawns. Shame really, to have the extended earthly pleasures that I have such as viewing the weather patterns and not take them, don't you think?"
Minerva didn't know what to think of his response, never having been that social with the castle ghosts in the first place. She wondered to herself if ghosts actually did still enjoy any earthly pleasures; it seemed doubtful, but then, why would they have remained as ghosts? There must be some benefit. She decided she'd ask one day, but she was certain it wouldn't be a welcome subject, even for Sir Nicholas, who was usually quite friendly.
"Oh I quite agree. The Scottish sunrise isn't one to miss!" Minerva responded but didn't add that during the winter months, as Scotland was so far north and got so few hours of daylight, that dawn wasn't coming for another hour and forty minutes. "Nor are the sunsets." She grinned at the ghost, glancing at him as he floated through the air, wondering just what this old Gryffindor was up to.
"Indeed! Sunsets are even more beautiful, especially over the Quidditch pitch! Perhaps I should take one in with you, our team captain, this afternoon!" He beamed at her as they made their way down to the first floor and onward to the Great Hall. If Minerva didn't know better, she'd have thought he was flirting with her. Do ghosts flirt with the living? This is most unusual.
"As much as I'd enjoy that, I'm afraid that sunset will come long before my last class of the day and that our practice will have to be held under the lights, after nightfall, as is usual at half past four in the afternoon in February." Minerva shivered a bit in the frigid hallway before opening the heavy doors to the Great Hall and being hit with a pleasant blast of warm air. Sir Nicholas followed her, but instead of moving through the open doorway, he glided through the door and popped out on the other side.
"Oh my, I had completely forgotten about the early onset of nightfall during winter. Mayhap I will take in the sunset and remain in the stands for team practice," he continued as he followed her to the Gryffindor table. "We do have an excellent shot at the Quidditch Cup this year! The Bloody Baron had become quite overbearing last year, and I daresay, he's been far more pleasant than usual. Word is, you're to thank, Captain." He saluted her and continued to grin as he floated by. He stopped and hung in the center of the table, standing up to his midsection in a large tray of sliced fruit.
Minerva poured a cup of tea and scooped up a serving of haggis, took some toast and selected some sliced oranges from the tray under Sir Nicholas.
"You could remain in the stands and lead the cheering section!" She wasn't sure how well her teammates would take it, having a ghost cheering them on, but perhaps he could be inspirational? Still, this was most curious. She'd seen and talked to Sir Nicholas more in the last twenty-four hours than she had in all her years at Hogwarts. The only ghost that seemed to pay her more attention was Peeves, unfortunately.
Sir Nicholas smiled and saluted, still standing in the middle of the fruit tray. "Sir Nicholas de Mimsy-Porpington at your service, Captain McGonagall! I will serve the House of Godric Gryffindor with pride and honor! Of this, you have my word!" He made a flamboyant bow as he finished his statement, sweeping his arm out and through Minerva's plate and tea cup as he bent low. She couldn't help but giggle at his gesture and watched as he glided up to the High Table toward Professor Merrythought and the Headmaster. Minerva was surprised that no other professors were yet present.
A few more students entered the hall; however, Minerva was the first seated for breakfast, as usual. She opened her Charms book and began reviewing a chapter that she'd already read but had not yet been assigned, feeling fairly confident on the material, and ate her breakfast.
Alastor Moody, his hair still wet and slicked back from his morning shower, spotted Minerva sitting alone at the Gryffindor table and walked toward her, taking a seat to her right. She was focused intently on a book in front of her. Before saying anything, he heaped several fried eggs, strips of bacon, bangers, and slices of toast onto his plate.
Minerva didn't have to look up to know who had sat down beside her. The familiar smell of generic soap and the abrupt movements, in addition to his selection of all the greasiest breakfast foods, told her it was Alastor Moody. He had been repeating this habit of perching next to her during breakfast for the past two years.
"Where were you last night? Waited up, in the common room, until one in the morning." Alastor mumbled around a mouthful of sausage. Minerva turned to look at him and poured herself another cup of tea.
"Fell asleep in Professor Dumbledore's office," she answered quietly, still quite embarrassed about it.
"You slept with Dumbledore?" Alastor retorted far louder than Minerva would have hoped or approved. Reflexively, she elbowed him hard in the chest and spilled her tea, only then seeing a familiar figure walking toward them. She felt the color rise from her chest to her face instantly and couldn't even bring herself to immediately reply to her companion's ridiculous question. Tucking her chin into her chest, she tried to hide her face as Professor Dumbledore's shadow fell on Alastor. Minerva cocked her head sideways and could have sworn she heard the sound of a fiddle playing some jovial Irish jig. She tried to focus on the music but lost the melody in a crackling buzz that she quickly tuned out.
"Mr. Moody, Miss McGonagall. I trust everything is well?" Professor Dumbledore grasped Alastor's shoulder, giving him a not-so-gentle squeeze. Alastor had the sudden horrible realization that they had been overheard by their professor, and he stiffened, turning reluctantly to look up into the older man's bearded face. Albus shot him a warning glance as he looked down before releasing Alastor's shoulder. The young Keeper gulped abruptly, swallowing his half-chewed mouthful of sausage, and coughed, trying to recover from the shock.
"Fine ... Professor," he responded, though his words betrayed him, his discomfort obvious.
Minerva closed her eyes and desperately wished she could be anywhere but there at that moment. Summoning courage from where she had no idea she looked up briefly, past Alastor, into her professor's concerned eyes.
"I'm quite well, Professor, despite my house-mate's obnoxious comments." Minerva caught a glimpse of Professor Dumbledore's reaction to her words before returning to stare at her teacup. Dumbledore hadn't expected Minerva to be so brazen in her scolding of the young man, and he couldn't help but chuckle inwardly. Moody paled considerably at her words.
Professor Dumbledore, satisfied with Miss McGonagall's admonishment, and making the young man aware that he, himself, had overheard the comment, walked past the pair and sat down next to Minerva, his elbow leaning casually against the table. Alastor dug into his food with gusto, averting his eyes from the man to his far left while Minerva, between the two, turned on the bench seat to face her professor.
"I got your note this morning, Miss McGonagall, and there's no reason to be concerned. You did have a particularly difficult evening, after all." Dumbledore paused, glancing past Minerva to the young man at her right, considering how much he should say in his presence. Alastor Moody seemed completely focused on his heaping breakfast plate, not daring to look up.
Albus grinned while remembering something, his eyes sparkling, and he turned back to Minerva. "What was the charm you used on the note, by the way? I don't think I've ever seen anything quite like that."
Minerva returned his grin, unable to hide her pride as she remembered the incantation she had cast on the note. Taking a sip of her tea, she noticed Alastor had stopped chewing, as if holding his breath and waiting for her to answer. She was quite pleased with her classmate's obvious discomfort, and while he pretended, though poorly, not to be paying attention, she knew he was.
"Caulis pellis animatae phoenix, sir," she answered, watching her professor over the rim of her mug, curious if he recognized the decorative charm or her manipulation of it. Albus repeated her words quietly, mumbling to himself and thought back through some mental list of spells, possibly trying to remember where he had heard or read of the spell group before.
"You made that up," Dumbledore declared, looking at Minerva with joyous surprise, and as she nodded her head in answer, he laughed openly. "I've heard of Caulis pellis animatae before, but never in regard to a phoenix! And the musical accompaniment!" He was completely delighted and couldn't contain his enthusiasm. "You'll have to teach me that!"
Minerva laughed, quite proud she could impress her professor with something so trivial and silly. "Of course, sir, but it isn't difficult. Whenever you have some time, I'd be glad to show you." She smiled up at him.
A very confused Alastor Moody grumbled inwardly as Minerva and their Transfiguration professor sat enthusiastically discussing some obscure spell of which he had no knowledge and would not even venture to guess at. What in hell are they talking about, anyway? And couldn't they discuss this marvelous idea somewhere else so I can eat in peace? Phoenixes ... really ... The realization occurred to Alastor that he wouldn't feel nearly as foolish if his professor hadn't overheard his comment about Minerva sleeping with him, which, of course, made him feel even worse. His breakfast didn't seem nearly as appetizing anymore. Not wishing to be obviously rude nor to call attention to himself, he robotically continued to eat as more students filed into the hall.
Professor Dumbledore asked Minerva to find him in his office after Quidditch practice to discuss a few matters and excused himself to join his colleagues at the High Table. After taking his customary seat between the Headmaster and Professor Merrythought, and greeting those present, he selected his standard breakfast foods of eggs, toast, and berries. While sampling a large strawberry, an unusual treat for the end of winter, he took a few moments to remember a pleasant surprise earlier that morning.
Albus Dumbledore had opened the secret door that connected his private rooms with his office, his hair and beard still wet from his morning shower, and yawned. Something wasn't right. The candelabra nearest his desk had been burning. I never leave candles burning overnight! He had then caught sight of the newly Transfigured couch, and the previous evening's events came back to him. Of course, Miss McGonagall fell asleep here, and I didn't wish her to wake in the dark not knowing where she was. Obviously she was already up and gone.
He had waved his hand toward the sconces by his desk, sparking them all into a bright glow as he moved to sit down in his chair. He had been tired and hadn't been getting enough sleep in the past weeks, and Albus had hoped that the coming weekend would be uneventful. As he sat there contemplating his fatigue and the reasons behind it, he had noticed a folded slip of parchment in the shape of a bird sitting in the center of his desktop.
Cocking his head to the side, he then reached for it, and as his fingers closed on a wing, the bird had burst from his hand. Fluttering into the air and emitting red sparks, the parchment had unfolded itself mid-air, and a snippet of the Irish lullaby An Paistin Fionn lilted softly through the room. As the violin and guitar had finished the short stanza, the note had come to rest, unfolded, between his hands. Albus blinked a few times and had been completely astonished, then drew his half-moon spectacles out of the inner breast pocket of his robes, donned them and read.
Professor Dumbledore,
I cannot thank you enough for your kindness last night, nor can I express my embarrassment for falling asleep in your office! I must beg your pardon; I had no intention of taking such advantage of your hospitality. I am terribly sorry and hope I did not inconvenience you in any way.
As you likely know, Gryffindor has Quidditch practice this afternoon directly following afternoon classes, though I would like to take you up on your offer and stop by afterward, as I wish not only to discuss the Animagus apprenticeship, but also to request the opportunity to take a few early N.E.W.T.s this year, if that is at all possible.
Thank you again, Professor, for everything.
Minerva D. M. McGonagall
Professor Merrythought tapped Albus on the shoulder, breaking him out of reverie, and he turned to look at her.
"My apologies for woolgathering, Galatea, what did you say?" Albus pinched the bridge of his nose, pushing his spectacles up a bit, and tried to clear his thoughts. The plump witch tutted at him, giving him a gentle pat on the shoulder.
"Albus ... pardon me for being so forward, but you're looking quite worn ... and don't fuss ... but I'm worried!" she admonished. "Have you talked to the Headmaster about what we discussed?" The older woman poured herself and Professor Dumbledore cups of tea and looked up at him with concern.
Albus sighed reluctantly and added a few spoons of sugar and some milk to his tea, avoiding her gaze. "No ... I haven't."
The Charms instructor grumbled, "Albus, I don't mind picking up a few of your classes ... at the very least, until your business with this war is over."
Though Albus did not discuss his activities aiding the Allied forces with the advancement of the war waging across Europe, most of the staff at Hogwarts knew, minimally, that he had been enlisted by the British Ministry of Magic. Some even guessed correctly that he was also advising the Muggle British military. Dumbledore knew his colleague was understandably concerned, and he regretted being responsible for her worry. It was logical to assume he'd be away from the castle more often as the war progressed, and he should make arrangements to cover his classes beforehand.
Hoping to reassure her, Albus reached over and gently patted her arm. "Thank you, Galatea. If it gets to be too much, I'll let Armando know." He gave a sideward glance at the Headmaster to his left, who appeared to be in an animated discussion about wand movement with the Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher, Reginald MacFarlane.
Professor Merrythought huffed gently and retorted. "Not before I do, Albus! I'm serious. If this gets any worse, I'll speak to the Headmaster myself." As she spoke, she looked out over the Gryffindor table, spotting Minerva. "I saw you speaking to Miss McGonagall earlier how is she?"
Albus followed his colleague's gaze toward Minerva, who was tucking a book into her book sack, preparing to leave. "She seems to be handling herself well." Not wishing to speak too freely with the Headmaster sitting next to him, he lowered his voice. "I fear her trust in Hogwarts has been shaken, unfortunately."
"Undoubtedly. I can't imagine it wouldn't be," Merrythought responded, mildly disgusted.
"I spoke to her last evening, explaining the Headmaster's decision, assuring her that we believed her." With that he gave a subtle nod to Professor Merrythought, indicating his lack of desire to speak further on the subject.
Galatea Merrythought lowered her voice and leaned toward the Deputy Headmaster. "Let her know she can come to me if she has any further problems, won't you? I'm not too pleased with the situation myself."
Dumbledore's eyes softened and he offered her a small smile. "Thank you, Galatea, I will."
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please send me notice when you post another chapt!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
If you follow the story, or favorite it, I think on this site, you will get an automatic alert to your email when its updated.
Thank you for reading! Merry Christmas.
Ahh, who can blame Moody for being angry. Though I do understand why Minerva decided not to tell him everything. I can well imagine what Riddle did to make her that scared. Huh. *smh*
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
You will have to translate 'smh' ... I don't think I'm familiar with that language.
OH yeah! I can relate to Moody here ... smug Minerva and keeping secrets and ... you have to admit, she does act a bit uppity ... *shrugs* women ...
Response from Stefdarlin (Reviewer)
*smh* means shaking my head. I had to ask my husband what it meant when I kept seeing it on facebook. I suppose I was showing my age there, lol.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hrm .... I usually ask my teenage daughter these things ... and yes, I know what you mean about age ... I be aaancient! I not even know texting lingo! Egads!
<--is what I came up with for dear Alastor. They need a *facepalm* icon, lol. I like the way Albus was excited over Minerva's wee note, lol. That was very true to character and cute. =o) I also agree with Minerva that Nick is acting a bit strange. *Shudder* On my way to the next chapter.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Wow! You're on marathon reading tonight!
I know! Facepalm smiley for Alastor ... can you imagine? Insert foot, bite down ... yeesh!
Time to hide under the table and pray for an earth quake, me thinks.
Aww... at least the last bit made me want to say that. =o) Otherwise, I am totally wondering why Minerva didn't want to inform her parents? That seems a bit odd. Tom needs a bit of his own medicine, I think. Grrr!Albus was quite the gentleman. And I loved the way she said her father rationalized her mum's magic. =o)Nice chapter.Cheers,Stef
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Thank you!
This chapter's idea is what spawned the whole story idea, well actually the little Celtic song.
Glad you enjoyed it, and hopefully soon, Minerva will be able to explain why she wants to keep this event so private.
Of course Albus is a gentleman! *nods*
Hmm, interesting start. I am thinking Horace either knows more than he is letting on, or he is hiding something. With all that Dumbledore pointed out of Minerva's character, it is a wonder that Slughorn wouldn't try to collect her. But then, I doubt she would let him.Tom got what he deserved as far as I am concerned. I feel bad for Minerva, but I am glad Albus is going to explain, and he is in her corner. YAY! I may take a bit to review the next chapter as I need to get my next in the queue. But it will be my next break. =o)
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hey! Thanks for dropping a review for my yarn and glad you enjoyed it - and while I can't answer questions as for why certain folk are doing certain things, it will all come out in the wash, as they say.
Wow, Riddle is showing his true colors here, and they ain't purty ones!I'm glad that Alastor had some grit, but it's a pity that TR was so nasty. Why is he not expelled?Anyway, I loved Merrythought in this chapter. I know she's a secondary character to the others, but I think she's my favorite so far here. Not that I don't love the others, too -- and you know my affection for Minerva & Albus (especially when they're together) -- but I really like the way that you've developed Merrythought's character, especially since she was hardly more than a name in canon. Alumno was an interesting character, too, and it's nice to see a mediwitch getting some time, and having a lot of spunk, as well. I can scarcely wait to find out what Minerva does, and how she manages to help Alastor. Of course, I will be patient, or try to be! (And who am I to talk about getting new chapters out -- I don't think I've updated any of my WIPs in months, after all!)¡Esperando pacientemente -- y con entusiasmo! (I love languages!)
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Wooo Hoooo! I had actually forgotten about our dear characcters - so glad you reminded me of their existance!I'm glad you enjoy Merrythought - she's fun and will figure in the story well into the future - hopefully, as is Madam Alumno - as well as her spice - hehe.I know - I really feel bad for Alastor here - and you will see soon why Riddle isn't expelled - or at least, I hope it will seem plausible why he wasn't expelled - you'll have to let me know if its too weak or not.I seriously need to get back to fleshing out Lioness.Thanks so much for all your help and your reviews!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
And I'm not entirely sure if I'm tickled that you really love Merrythought, or if I'm worried that your favorites aren't Albus and Minerva - so I guess I'll just be glad you like our Galatea.
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I think that Riddle needs a really, really, really strong dose of alum. Like, it might clean him out a bit. Nah, that probably wouldn't help. But it would be fun!
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
Just be tickled that I like Galatea! I mean, I was prepared to love Albus & Minerva, and I do, so it's just a wonderful extra to get another great character there, and one that you're making your own, more or less.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Woo Hoo!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Wooo Hoooo! I had actually forgotten about our dear characcters - so glad you reminded me of their existance!I'm glad you enjoy Merrythought - she's fun and will figure in the story well into the future - hopefully, as is Madam Alumno - as well as her spice - hehe.I know - I really feel bad for Alastor here - and you will see soon why Riddle isn't expelled - or at least, I hope it will seem plausible why he wasn't expelled - you'll have to let me know if its too weak or not.I seriously need to get back to fleshing out Lioness.Thanks so much for all your help and your reviews!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
And I'm not entirely sure if I'm tickled that you really love Merrythought, or if I'm worried that your favorites aren't Albus and Minerva - so I guess I'll just be glad you like our Galatea.
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I think that Riddle needs a really, really, really strong dose of alum. Like, it might clean him out a bit. Nah, that probably wouldn't help. But it would be fun!
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
Just be tickled that I like Galatea! I mean, I was prepared to love Albus & Minerva, and I do, so it's just a wonderful extra to get another great character there, and one that you're making your own, more or less.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Woo Hoo!
Buwahahaha! An attack owl! hee!I enjoyed the bits of humor throughout this chapter very much, and I liked the perspective we have in this chapter. It was great to meet some of Minerva's family, and I enjoyed the Quidditch match. However, even with the humor in the chapter, and the excitement of the Quidditch match, we see that the seriousness of the war impinges on Hogwarts' daily life -- or at least on Dumbledore's life.I enjoyed seeing Galatea again. I like your depiction of her. I hope we see more of her!I'm really liking this version of Minerva's youth and coming-of-age. I look forward to more!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Coming from you, that's quite a compliment! Thank you, Madam! *bows*
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
Well, as you might guess, I do have a bit of appreciation for Minerva McGonagall stories! And I really do love seeing her older brother and young Amelia here. It gives some depth to her background. It seems she has a neat family.BTW, how do you like writing about Quidditch? I know you've written a bit with Quidditch in previous chapters, but I think (if memory serves me!) that this is the first game we've seen. I find it kind of a challenge to write Quidditch matches, though I think that the little bit I've done has come out okay. I liked yours here. Did you have fun writing it, or was it torture, or something in between?
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
I'm so glad you liked Marcus and Amelia *grins* and I'm sure the irony isn't lost on you. *winks* Marcus is going to be a fun character to write, I think, and Amelia will be a challenge, being that she's a little Motzart.You know, I enjoyed writing the Quidditch match - it reminded me of my baseball years and how quick everything happens - sometimes everything slows down as the adrenaline pumps and its amazing how much action happens in just a few short seconds. I hope I was able to describe the action of the match in a believable way - as well as keeping it entertaining and not too long winded.I've always felt that fast action sports, team sports especially, teach people how to react quickly and build confidence in their decisions - I think sports will make most people more decisive - make it easier for them to make a decision in that split second when so many people would balk - and that in turn can help them in combat situations - should they be thrust into such events.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
*coughs* Mozart (my bad)
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I thought it its timing was good -- enjoyable, didn't drag, but was detailed enough to envision what was happening. A pity that Albus had to leave before the end!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
I know! He missed some amazing saves by Alastor and some serious broom zooming by Sara and Minerva! Poor guy!I'm glad the pace seemed good to you - I was happy with the match, over all, I felt it fit well into the chapter and didn't overshadow the conversation that was taking place in the stands - which, of course, was the main focus of the chapter.
A very promissing start! The setup is very much as I imagine it. Yes, these two would definitely get into a fight!I had a discussion once that M.McG can have been so distant to Ginny (in ChoS) because she was sexually attacked by the same wizard in her own youth.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hrm.... well... my tae on Minerva and Tom's relationship, or what ever you wish to call it, time in school - is not from canon - its purely made up - but I could easily see Tom Riddle being a predator in his school days - we already know he was from Dumbledore's memories of him when he was only 10 or 11 - so... its no stretch to see him going after others - and being that he's a recruiter - I think he'd have a special interest in someone like Minerva - she's incredibly powerful - and for either want to dominate her or gain her loyalty, I think he'd be interested.
I reviewed this on another site, but I just wanted to say I'm glad to see the update here (at last). Dumbledore is quite a charmer here (as is Amelia), and I loved their interaction. I really enjoyed meeting Minerva's relatives, and the relationship between Albus and Galatea is great too. It made me smile when he conjured the sleet to hide his embarrassment.Here's hoping for some more Albus/Minerva interaction soon!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
I kinda like the sleet too - and I'm glad you don't mind my Snarky Dumbledore - as you can probably detect, he's a bit stressed out and a bit mouthy... though Galatea can give it back just as much, no worries about that.Very glad you enjoyed the other McGonagalls - I plan to include them quite a bit in the future, along with a few more I haven't introduced yet.Ah - hold your horses for Albus/Minerva interaction - at least the way I'm guessing you mean it - and I hope you aren't dissapointed with me over all - remember, I did write the plot of the story as Minerva's life. Yes I get defensive when I get worried...
Response from dsky (Reviewer)
I don't (necessarily) mean that kind of interaction. I just enjoy the way you write them getting to know each other!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Awww! Thank you!Well - Chapter 6 and 7 should have plenty of interaction - me thinks.
I'm so glad to see the update here on TPP!I love the Quidditch match, and especially meeting Minerva's brother--so different from her!--and Amelia. The intereaction between the child and Albus is lovely.The relationship between Albus and Merrythough is nice, too--the readers senses some history there, and of course, it's intriguing.Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
YAY! I kinda like Marcus - got a bit of a soft spot for the big goof.
fun background of the McGonagall Clan - and a teensy bit of Albus and Minerva
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Glad you enjoyed that!
I love this chapter. You give us a bit more about Minerva--her talent and power, as well as her no-nonsense attitude ("How foolish of Williams to allow his personal feelings to get in the way of Gryffindor’s success!") and of course, the relationship with Alastor.The bit with Sir Nicholas is wonderful--I love little moments like this that let us glimpse a bit more of the minor characters as well.She certainly surprised Albus, didn't she?
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oh, she'll continue to surprise Albus ... *grins* and herself!Glad you enjoyed Minerva as well as Alastor and Sir Nick! We'll be seeing more of all three, or four, of them!
I think your portrayal of a young Alastor is "spot-on". Can't believe he said "you slept with Dumbledore". Conversation between Sir Nicholas and Minerva was fun and informative as well as original. This chapter was another great building block in Minerva and Albus' relationship. Thanks.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hey! I'm so glad you like my rendition of young Alastor! Aye! He surprised me too - can you imagine someone saying that to you about your favorite teacher? YEESH! Talk about no manners!Glad you liked Sir Nicholas here, as well as Minerva! Thank you so much for the review!
I love the animated phoenix origami, and the spell that goes with it. It's fun to show off subtly for someone who appreciates it! And it seems that Alastor, as much as he may like her, doesn't really appreciate it. But then, 'subtle' and 'Alastor Moody' don't really go together, do they? Interesting that he and Minerva used to be a couple, although Minerva, at least doesn't appear to have been that emotionally attached. I wonder if Alastor is as unconcerned as he appears to be -- from his reaction the night before, possibly not, but since he doesn't seem to have a rival, he can afford to play it cool.'You slept with Dumbledore?' HA! Good non-reaction from Albus, and good for Minerva, showing her Gryffindor courage by looking him in the eye. So Minerva progresses toward her animagus training, and she and Dumbledore continue to get to know each other on a more personal level.I like Minerva's thoughts on the way to breakfast, we learn a lot about her without it feeling like an infodump. Interesting interaction with Sir Nicholas too. I like your Merrythought. You can tell she cares about her students, and is more interested in substance than flash.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
*grins wide*Well you just made my morning! Ahhh - lets see - yes Alastor Moody and subtle do not mix, at all... in any way, anywhere... you will be seeing a lot more of Alastor as the story progresses, so I hope you feel he stays in character - but you're right on many accounts - which is fairly observant of you so early in the story - though, my Minerva isn't exactly open to her own feelings, let alone shares them with many folks.I'm glad you enjoyed my little origami! I love origami! *snickers* I don't make too many sculptures that sing, but well, its fun to imagine!Glad you enjoy Albus' reaction to Alastor *grins* I don't want to spoil the surprise, but... naaaaaaa, I'll keep my mouth shut on that, more fun for you to see things unfold (smirks at her own origami pun) and very glad you enjoyed my non-info-dump via Sir Nicholas and the Quidditch team issues as well as Merrythought - she's a canon character I'm going to have a lot of fun developing - and I quite like her as well.Thanks so much for reviewing!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
OH! I forgot to add, chapter 4 is in the queue!
Response from dsky (Reviewer)
"Glad you enjoy Albus' reaction to Alastor *grins* I don't want to spoil the surprise, but... naaaaaaa, I'll keep my mouth shut" aarrrgh -- tease!
"OH! I forgot to add, chapter 4 is in the queue!"
I really enjoyed Minerva in this chapter especially. And her conversation with Sir Nick was really funny. I loved her speculation about whether or not ghosts would flirt! haha!I am very much liking Galatea Merrythought. She's my kinda witch! And, as always, it was great to see Dumbledore!Very nice chapter to move the story forward! (And funny to see teenaged Alastor again, being a bit of an annoyance -- and embarrassing himself!)
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oh Ho! Yes, a teenage Alastor is kind of funny to write - he's a mix of a few things, and plenty of teenage, male, nonsense - glad you like my Merrythought - keep an eye on her, she's going places, or so you might say - and its always wonderful to write McGonagall and Dumbledore - anywhere, anyhow, any place!Glad you're enjoying the story!
Excellent way to start a Friday. I'm so happy that a new chapter was uploaded. woo hoo.I had to grin when Albus overheard Minerva and Alastor's conversation, especially when Alastor was being so rude. Served him right for feeling uncomfortable after that. haha.Looking forward to the next update and to see how the ADMM progresses!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Woo Hoo! It finally updated! Glad you liked the chappie - and glad you liked Alastor's karma - poor guy, I kinda feel sorry for him sometimes.Aye - progress comes but *whistles innocently* who ever said there was going to be any ADMM in this? *chuckles* I can imagine it was a certain Ravenclaw buddy of mine... might have let slip the eventual direction of this story - but all I'm going to say is... BE PATIENT! We've got a long way to go.
Lovely 'getting to know each other' chapter. Nice and long, and worth the wait -- although I wouldn't mind slightly shorter chapters if the wait was also shorter!How thoughtful of him to offer her privacy by making her invisible, and nice to see that even though she doesn't want to see her friends right now, they (or at least one of them) are ready to stand up for her against Riddle. In the prefects bath -- is the hourglass locket a timeturner? Has she had it long?I really enjoyed the interaction between Albus and Minerva, especially the teasing when Minerva relaxed. It's interesting that their backgrounds aren't all that different--but why would he think her father was a mediwizard? I liked Fawkes' appearance too. Does he have (or is he developing) a soft spot for Minerva, or is he there solely because Albus is concerned? The end was sweet too, when he tucked her in and watched her sleep.Why is Minerva so adamant about NOT letting her family know about the incident? I could understand if she would prefer to tell them privately and in-person, but she apparently doesn't want them to know that anything happened at all.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Ohh delicious questions!Lets see - okay - the chapter was long in the queue and had to be revised twice - my bad - we will get better. The third chapter is in queue and the fourth is nearly finished so I don't anticipate you having to wait long due to me, but the queue is moving slowly.Glad you enjoyed the chapter! *grins* Makes me a happy writer!You will be seeing much, much more of Alastor as the story progresses, so I'm glad you appreciate his concern.Is that hourglass a timeturner? Oooh... perhaps! *winks* You will learn of that later.Nope, their backgrounds are oddly similar and why did Dumbledore think her father was a mediwizard? Well, more of that will come up later - but the short answer is, he didn't realize her father was Muggle and since her mother's family is so strongly bent in the medical field, he assumed her father was as well. More about the MacGruders and McGonagalls as we continue, I promise.Ahh, Fawkes - well, the best way to answer this is like this. Fawkes is attuned to Albus completely - so Fawkes ends up caring about those that Albus cares about though I'm sure the bird can develop his own relationships, but those few people that Albus cares for greatly end up being important to Fawkes.And, the biggest concern, no doubt - why does Minerva not wish to talk about this incident with her family? I can't tell you that without spoiling the story later, but it will be revealed, I promise. And she does have a very, very good reason. I hope you find the answer later is worth the wait.Thank you so much for reading!
Response from dsky (Reviewer)
I'm really just kidding about the wait. It's not like you're getting paid for this -- and even if you were, you can't put creativity on a time clock. Like I said, it was well worth it. I'll take quality over quantity any day, and this chapter had both.As for the questions, I will just wait (patiently!) for the answers.
Yea! a nice long chapter. Loved the "intimacy" between Albus and Minerva. Albus did the right thing letting her stay in his office and telling the students to give her room. He provided the perfect atmosphere for her to start to recover. Funny that he doesn't realize it was his presence and actions that calmed her, not the tea. Another very enjoyable chapter. Thank you.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oh ho! I'm glad you liked the length of this one - the poor admin was pulling her hair out due to the length - glad it was worth it.Ah, but Albus, with all his infinate wisdom and brilliance, sometimes can't see what's right in front of him. True the tea helped, as did Fawkes, but the real comfort was, indeed, as you say, Professor Dumbledore.This chapter was a pleasure to write, though difficult in spots. The idea of Dumbledore listening to that song in his office was the spark that started this whole fic - so I'm glad others are enjoying, becuase I'm enjoying writing it.Thank you so much for your review!
I was glad to see the chapter posted! It was a nice introduction to Minerva and Albus's relationship, and fun to see young Minerva enjoying herself in Professor Dumbledore's company, despite her recent trauma. You can see the comfort in their relationship already.I loved the music in the chapter, both Fawkes's phoenix song and the lovely lullaby and the magical visual effects it created.I look forward to seeing more of Albus & Minerva's growing relationship!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oooh! Glad you liked the music - it was that actual song that initiated the entire story - that lullaby, I was listening to one day and could see - my image of Dumbledore sitting behind his desk, singing along and tapping his foot and I was overcome with security and peace, and of course, love, but you know, I can't look at Dumbledore and not get all mushy - but, that was the whole instigator behind this entire story - and I'm glad that the music moved you.I did have a lot of fun with Fawkes here. I find he's often overlooked as a 'pet' and its nice to give him some character.
This was certainly an emotional chapter for me for lots of reasons.I am still incredibly angry at Riddle for attacking Minerva and Slughorn for letting the little snot get away with it ... with only a slap on the wrist. The Headmaster isn't much better and certainly has no spine t all. I've said all that to say this ... you've done a fantastic job of portraying your characters since they inspire such deep emotions.The interactions and characterizations between Albus and Minerva were incredibly sweet and very in keeping with their characters. It's sad that Minerva feels the need to hide the information from her parents and to feel ashamed of what happened, but I suppose it's something she has to work through on her own, with Albus' help.Lastly, my favorite part was the bit with Fawkes and his song for Minerva. I could easily visualize the situation and the mood his song created. I think there was a bit of bonding going on with Faskes and Minerva ... very sweet!Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Awwwwwww! You make me smile! I'm glad the characters create such emotion, I do want to do that, and feel similar to what you are feeling - though I must admit, I think I feel a bit better since I know the out-comb - but of course I do! I'm writing it!I enjoyed writing Fawkes in here, that was not something I had originally planned and it worked very well, and helped to introduce an overlooked character who is often quiet and in the background. And yes, I think he and Minerva will be seeing more of eachother. And I very much enjoyed showing the development of the trust between teacher/Dumbledore and student/McGonagall - because well, that's where it all began, after all!Thank you so much for your review - the third chapter is in the queue and the fourth is being written!
Woot!I love the interaction between Albus and Minerva in this chapter--the slowly growing friendship and intimacy between them is intriguing and very much IC.I also love how you've introduced Fawkes and his empathetic qualities; he feels like a character rather than just a "sidekick." Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Awww! Thank you! Fawkes is just so cool! You have to love a bird that can burst into flame, sing the blues away and delivers letters, all without making a big mess! Oh and healing all toxins is quite the benefit! Hope you'll like the direction!
Very nice start to the story and I have to say that I am very upset with Armando Dippet. Never have been a fan of Slughorn so I can't say his actions surprise me all that much. I am incredibly disappointed that Minerva didn't do more to Tom Riddle, haha. He's a nasty piece of work.I am looking forward to reading more of the story so I hope your Muse cooperates and lets you write quickly!!!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
The second chapter is in the que *nods* and the Muse is screaming and jumping up and down on my keyboard! There will be much, much more...Aye, I would have liked more to happen to Riddle but the story isn't over yet.... *winks*Anyway, I hope you enjoyed the begining, sorry about Armando... he's a bit daft today - or something, but, I do have plans for everyone! Not to worry!This next chapter should help you to feel better... it certainly does Minerva.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Chapter 3 is in the works... the muse is dancing! Just letting you know, the que is very full lately and it is taking quite a while for these fics to make it through the editing and admission process - but I am not slacking or abandoning you all! *crosses heart* Thanks again for your review and enjoying my yarn!
GRRRRRR! I hate Tom Riddle! Well, I can't say that's anything new, but here, I really, really hate him! And he deserved all he got and more! Dippet's such a . . . he needs to grow a backbone, certainly. I'm very glad that Dumbledore was such a strong voice advocating for Minerva! She felt her breath catch and turned to look up at him, seeing the look of regret in his eyes. She understood, for the first time that evening since the whole scenario began, that someone was, indeed, in her corner. And that made all the difference.Of course. Completely. And she will always be in Albus's corner now, too. I can see the mutual loyalty and trust building right here. Very promising beginning to the story! I am looking forward to seeing how it proceeds!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Riddle is....... a very icky living thing... aye! loyalty is indeed.... contagious! Ah, well... Dippet may have a few surprises later on... backbones - you know... surprising as I always am, they don't seem to be as common as most think... glad you liked the start! WOO HOO! Hopefully I can do these two justice in YOUR epic eyes! *nods*OH, and that stupid typo at the very begining... yeah.... i'm stupid. Fixing maybe?
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I still find typos in chapters of fics that were proofread, beta'd, and validated by mods, years later, and often after I have reread the chapter myself several times. It just happens!I do hope he gets a little backbone! And I am also wondering what Sluggy's nervous about, 'cause he definitely seems nervous and defensive here.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Sluggy? Defensive? Nawwwwwwwwwww - *grins*
Nice beginning to this story. The way the other professors dismiss Albus' implication is distressingly realisitic. Can't wait to read the rest.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Why thank you ma'am! I do hope it sparks an interest... yes... the bit written about the other professors dissmissals is written from experience.... very sad but it is so common.