The Hospital-Wing
The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness
Chapter 7 of 9
FishyChapter seven
Alastor Moody and Tom Riddle are admitted to the hospital wing. Professors Dippet and Merrythought discuss recent events.
These characters belong to J.K. Rowling. I appreciate the opportunity to borrow them from time to time. My deepest thanks to the very generous and gracious MMADfan and Squibstress for their inspiration, advice, patience and time. In this semi-AU, Professor Merrythought is, at this time, the Charms instructor.
Ten points (to your professed house) to the first person who can point out (in this chapter) my nod toward MMADfan's Regarding a Misunderstanding.
Transformation of a Scottish Lioness
Chapter 7
The Hospital-wing
Galatea Merrythought had just explained the incident she'd seen involving Tom Riddle and Alastor Moody to Professor Dippet in the Headmaster's office and was quietly waiting for his response. Armando sat in in the oversized oak chair at his desk, alternating holding his ornate pipe in his hand or between his teeth while contemplating her words, saying nothing. After a few minutes, Professor Merrythought could no longer contain her contempt.
"Armando, you simply have to look at this directly." Her voice changed from her typical analytical teaching style to a more insistent delivery. "Whatever Mr. Riddle cast upon Mr. Moody was not a simple hex. The boy was not breathing by the time I had arrived, and he was very near losing consciousness. I dare say Mr. Moody might have died had I not been walking down the path at that very moment." Her voice was urgent, and she pressed her advantage by placing both of her hands on his desk, and despite her short stature, leaned over, pushing herself into the Headmaster's personal space.
Armando Dippet reacted as she expected, pulling back and taking on a defensive posture.
"Galatea, are you implying that Mr. Riddle intended to kill Mr. Moody?" He wouldn't meet her eyes, and instead looked down at the ivory-and-cherry wood pipe he held in his hands. Professor Merrythought, taking the not-so-subtle hint from the Headmaster that she was approaching his boundary line, returned to a casual stance but did not alter her penetrating stare.
"I think it's a possibility you should consider."
The Headmaster did not expect that answer. Armando stood up and slammed his pipe down on his desk, startling the former Defense professor.
"Galatea, you are not at the Aurors' office here! Do you understand? We don't have murderers at Hogwarts! These are children!" He was now shouting. Galatea blinked a few times, startled by his outburst. An idea popped into her mind as clear as glass. Dippet was afraid of the possibility that the previous year's death was not due to an Acromantula. Now that she could smell his concern, she would not be quieted, not in a field she knew so well.
"We did last year," she reminded him.
Silence followed her rebuttal. Armando's bluster was taken out of him, and he fell back into his chair, deflated, his pipe forgotten.
"Galatea, you simply cannot look for, and expect to find, dark witches and wizards around every corner. I thought we discussed this when you came back to teaching full-time! You are no longer the crusader." Now he looked up at her, his honey-brown eyes tired and pleading. His words, and his gentle gaze, gave her pause, and she second-guessed herself.
Maybe I am looking for demons where there are none, she thought.
Without pondering any longer, she removed Mr. Riddle's wand from her robes and set it upon the desk.
"Then let us put it to rest and see exactly what he did cast? Go back oh four spells?" she requested, and as the Headmaster raised his wand, a loud knock came at the door. Armando paused and nodded to Galatea, who trotted over to the door and opened it a crack, and after a quiet murmur, allowed Miss McGonagall inside. As the Headmaster opened his mouth, probably to ask why Professor Merrythought would invite a student into the office at such a delicate moment, Galatea spoke up as she and Minerva crossed the room.
"Miss McGonagall has hospital-wing duty today, and Madam Alumno needs to know the spell that Mr. Riddle used on her patient, Mr. Moody. Evidently, he is still blind and his breathing is not improving," Professor Merythought explained to a bewildered-looking Headmaster.
"Ah! My apologies, Miss McGonagall, I had completely forgotten you were working on your medical internship in our hospital wing. Right then." Without any more hesitation, Professor Dippet cast the incantation over the wand to reveal the last four spells its owner had cast. Minerva politely requested a sheet of parchment and quill so she could record the offending incantation exactly.
Four spells, written in fiery yellow lettering, hovered over the wand that lay on the desk, each spell listed according to the order they were cast. The first spell, being the last that was cast, was one that puzzled each of the witnesses: a spell that conjured pepper juice and sprayed it forth, or at least, that was what Professor Merrythought explained as her best guess, as the spell was nothing that either of the learned professors had ever heard of:
Expecto Fervens Piper.
"I recognize this one" Minerva interjected, pointing to the second listed spell. "Tom used that to conjure a rose during a brief discussion. Alastor must have ... been behind me."
Subsisto Crocus Rose.
The third spell, from what Minerva could guess, was some sort of binding spell, or rather, something that enforced a promise:
Spondeo Silentium Factum.
The fourth spell was a Hogwarts-banned copying spell, which seemed odd to Minerva, as it caused ill effects to the intended copy as well as set off alarms at the school. The two professors glanced at each other, somewhat bewildered, and Minerva guessed their reaction was due to that last, odd spell:
Effingo Litterae Exigo.
Armando looked across the desk at Professor Merrythought, silently urging her to dismiss Miss McGonagall as their student finished scribbling down the incantations. Galatea gave a brief nod to her colleague.
"Miss McGonagall, if Madam Alumno has any difficulty understanding the intent of the offending spell, let her know that it basically casts a spray of pepper juice. Hot peppers, at that. Best get that information to her quickly," Galatea offered, patting Minerva on the back and urging her to return to the hospital wing.
Minerva suddenly looked down to the seated Headmaster, then again toward her Charms professor and gasped. Armando was the first to question her concern.
"Is something wrong, Miss McGonagall? Besides the obvious, I mean?" he questioned.
"Alastor is allergic to peppers!" Minerva almost shouted. "And he's been embarrassed about it as long as I've known him. He has been adamant about keeping this, well, what I thought was a minor problem, under strict confidence. The only reason I know about it is due to a visit several years ago when his family had supper with ours." Her initial shock turned to irritation as Minerva began to understand just how close her friend might have come to death and likely all due to pride.
"Well that explains a lot," Galatea replied as she and Armando exchanged concerned looks.
"I doubt Carmen thought to use an anti-inflammatory charm on his eyes if she had no knowledge of the allergy ... or the obscure spell, for that matter," Merrythought added as Minerva finished writing the last spell and replaced Professor Dippet's quill on his desk.
With parchment in hand, Minerva thanked them both and dashed out the door. The Headmaster cleared the air of the fiery lettering and picked up Riddle's wand, rolling it through his fingers. He felt the intensity of his colleague's eyes upon him.
"I dearly hope, Galatea, dearly hope, you are not going to suggest that Mr. Riddle knew of this allergy, and intentionally tried to murder young Moody."
Professor Merrythought sighed. Now that she knew about the allergy, Mr. Moody's physical reaction to the hex made sense, however, she was fairly sure nothing was listed in Moody's health files especially if what Miss McGonagall said about the secrecy of the information were true.
Part of the registration process of new students to Hogwarts was listing all permanent ailments, disabilities and allergies, and she couldn't remember ever hearing anything about a pepper allergy in all the years she'd been teaching. Nut, animal, grass and tree allergies were fairly common at Hogwarts, and as thus, the instructors used far fewer offending ingredients while teaching, or at least they tried. Rodents seemed to be the worst aggravator, which sometimes caused a few students to have the sniffles or break out in a rash. It would be unlikely that Mr. Moody notified faculty of this particular allergy, and thus, less likely that Mr. Riddle would be aware of it.
"No, it would seem that Riddle really would have had no opportunity to learn of this allergy, at least not here at the school, and as secret as Alastor has kept it, quite doubtful Riddle would have discovered it, even accidentally." She sighed and sat down heavily in one of the plush chairs that faced Dippet's huge desk.
"It still doesn't excuse Riddle for pulling a wand in the first place, when fists could have sufficed," she continued, her former bravado evaporating, as she knew Riddle was not actually breaking any rules, since Moody attacked first, and minus Moody's allergy it would have been a fairly harmless spell.
"I'd prefer they not even use fists ... barbaric really," Dippet said and rose from his desk. He moved around the front, facing toward his Charms colleague, and leaned back on edge of the desktop. As if his large size wasn't enough to dwarf the short woman, he leaned forward, closing the distance between them.
"Dare I surmise that we are in agreement, my Head of Hufflepuff, and favored student so many years ago?" He chuckled as she looked up at him and saw that she did, indeed, agree with him, and she wasn't one bit pleased about it. He moved forward and stood beside her, facing the long window that overlooked the lake, placing his right hand on her shoulder.
"Don't try to butter me up with your flattery, Armando..."
"But you were my favorite student I was teased relentlessly by my colleagues about my bias."
"Pish, Armando. Likely only because they were jealous that they were not winning such a coveted position as the Deputy Head's pet, who they likely saw as being in line for Deputy when you became Headmaster. They simply couldn't understand how a woman could possibly achieve a position anywhere else, in academia that is, besides library work or the medical field and everyone knew I had no interest in that." Armando tried to speak but Galatea cut him off, continuing her good-humored rant. "Naturally, they assumed I'd stay here, where I already had an ace you and I would soar to ridiculous heights, not on my own merits and qualifications, mind you, but upon your high opinion only." As she said this, she sank lower and lower in the chair, and Armando moved around behind her and began to rub her shoulders and neck, figuring they were stiff, as they often were.
The Headmaster joined in the cheeky exchange.
"Oh no, not Galatea Merrythought, prefect of Hufflepuff for two years and Hogwarts' Head Girl. No! She was a pioneer, you see. She had her sights set much higher and managed quite well on her own, I might add, to secure the first female Auror position in a department that had been fraught with trouble ever since its inception as a Muggle LE and MLE liaison in fact. I remember the uproar over that by the Victorian hold-outs, just how unfitting that would be for a ‛woman of her breeding'." He paused, chuckling softly as he dug his thumbs into a particularly nasty muscle doing a great impression of an iron beam. Merrythought hung her head low, stretching the muscles he was loosening, and began to relax. Uncharacteristically, she didn't rise to the bait and chastise her employer for his cheek, but remained silent, as she was simply too tired to debate further.
"You know, Thea, I was never more proud of you than I was at that moment when you took that job and told the newspapers ... What was it you said? Oh! I remember, ‛to find something more scandalous to write about, such as the mating rituals of merpeople', or you were going to insist on royalties over the amount of ink they were wasting arguing back and forth about an issue that was really none of their business. Not their business, unless, of course, they were one of the lucky few whose life you saved when some cuckolded husband finally discovered his wife's Daily Prophet journalist lover in their marriage bed'."
Galatea's shoulders began to shake, and Armando paused momentarily, until he heard her sharp, barking laughter.
"That shut them up," Dippet mused.
"I cannot believe you still remember that word for word ... what is it? ... 45 years later?" she said, rising up out of her seat and extending her arms, stretching her shoulders. "Armando, much as I absolutely love that, I always worry its going to get back to your wife, and she's going to assume we're up to deceitful shenanigans."
Armando crossed the room to a small bar and took out a bottle of some sort of whiskey and two tumblers. Galatea shook her head "no," making him put back one of the glasses. Pouring himself a marginal amount, he sat down on a sofa set off from his desk in a visiting area of the office, where they could sit and talk, less as colleagues and more as friends.
"Thea, I think I have told you at least a dozen times, Eleanor is not a jealous woman, nor looks for, nor expects to find, such dark and painful affairs, because there simply are none. I rub your shoulders because you can't do it yourself and the pain is significant. Can people not aid others simply because we do not wish our friends to be in pain?" He leaned back on the couch and sipped his liquor.
Galatea remained standing, letting her head swing round several times and took time to stretch her shoulders and upper back. To his question, she said nothing. She was quite sure if Chadwick, her husband, walked in on such a situation, that he would see one of those dark, painful things, even though there certainly was no such thing.
However, Chad rarely visited the castle during term ... and I am far too old to be worrying about something so adolescent, for Heaven's sake! Chad couldn't care less, and selfish fantasies of rival lovers is positively ridiculous for a grandmother, she chided herself.
Merrythought crossed to the large window and stood looking out, only a few feet from where Armando was laid out on the couch.
"We still need to bring this to Horace's attention, you realize. That forbidden copying spell could get Riddle expelled, not to mention the havoc it would cause if he's somehow figured out how to manipulate it so the wards don't recognize it. And that Riddle can find a great deal of trouble using magic against students outside of a duel, especially when the other student is not armed with a wand." She paused, thinking. "In fact, I think we need to write up a new list of approved defensive spells and make them mandatory if they must defend themselves with magic, they are to use X,Y, or Z format, which may help with avoiding near-disasters like the one I stumbled upon earlier."
Armando, tired and feeling the effect of his whiskey, had lain out completely on the couch, his eyes closed, and sighed deeply.
"I know. I know. I just want a few ticks to relax my eyes and think, and then ... well, then we'll find Horace. I'd appreciate it if you stayed to explain the situation to him, as you were the one who found the boys. Oh, and of course, how the spell affected Mr. Moody. We also need to decide upon a course of action for Mr. Moody's discipline, perhaps if only to spare Albus one more duty upon his return."
Galatea wanted to nod and agree with him about Riddle. She was tired, and she knew Dippet had to be exhausted after working with Dumbledore to sort out all this Ministry business with the Polish Muggle conflict over the last few fortnights. She really did not want to be contrary. But Miss McGonagall's face would not fade from her mind. Merrythought had to know her boss' ... no her friend's ... reasoning for not punishing Riddle more appropriately for what seemed, by all logic, to be an intentional sexual assault.
Although she intended to approach the subject cautiously, she was unable to avoid her characteristic Auror behavior, launching headlong into the fray.
"Armando, why did you let Riddle off so lightly for his altercation with Miss McGonagall?" The Headmaster's sigh was audible before she had even finished her question.
"Must we discuss this now?" he asked, already knowing the answer.
"Do you wish to keep my trust?" she responded, also knowing the answer.
Headmaster Dippet inhaled deeply before replying to her, but kept his eyes closed and rested his drink on his large belly.
"As you know, young Mr. Riddle is an orphan..."
"Oh Armando! You can not be se..."
"Galatea, do you want my answer or not?"
Merrythought sighed and remained silent.
"Mr. Riddle has no family. None. He is a wizard who was formerly raised in the Muggle world, with no family of any kind and no prospects to speak of. Not even a home he can return to after he finishes here at Hogwarts. If he were expelled, his prospects in the wizarding world would be greatly diminished..."
"That still doesn't excuse him for..."
"Are you going to let me finish or continue to cut me off?" Dippet asked coolly, opening one eye and looking across at his reddening Charms instructor. Again, Merrythought quieted, breaking eye contact and gazing out the window.
"Should Tom be expelled, his life in the wizarding world would likely be ruined, and as he has no family ... well, I'm sure you can deduce what that could do to a young man." He floated his tumbler over to an end table and struggled to sit up on the sofa, looking much less rested than he had before he lay down.
"On the other hand, what Tom did was wrong, yes, I fully recognize that. Did he take advantage of Miss McGonagall? Of course he did. Is there more to the story than either of them is telling? Likely. Were they enjoying a tryst out there in the woods when the activities became a little too much for the girl? Most likely. Should Tom have used magic to subdue her? Of course not!" And now he leaned forward to stand and resumed his position by Hufflepuff's Head of House, joining her in gazing at the Black Lake.
"What I decided, as far as punishment for Riddle, certainly does not follow the rules of Hogwarts to the letter. I decided not to punish the boy as he probably should have been because of the dire consequences that would have come of it." Armando looked down at Galatea for a moment and saw contempt in her taut expression.
"Miss McGonagall did not deserve this," Merrythought said non-combatively.
"Of course not. But look at the young lady's position, if you will. Miss McGonagall comes from an influential and moderately wealthy family..."
"I hardly consider the minister of a small kirk to be considered influential," snorted Merrythought, speaking about Morgan McGonagall, Minerva's father.
"No, but her mother is one of the most respected Healers in the country, and the MacGruders, her mother's side of the family, are well connected. Despite that, Miss McGonagall is, arguably, one of the most brilliant students I've ever met and atop all of that is Albus' pride and joy. She has quite the insurance that Mr. Riddle lacks."
Galatea wasn't satisfied with his justifications, and Armando knew it. He sighed and placed his hand on her shoulder again, hoping to remind her that he was not an unkind man. Hoping to show her that he deeply cared for his students, and his professors.
"Thea, I honestly thought, in this case, despite what Miss McGonagall deserved, that the full disciplinary action would cause Tom's life to unravel and could very well result in disaster for the boy. Don't forget that Minerva dished out, although unintentionally, some justice of her own for his actions. I doubt he'll ever forget that. He seemed, when I talked to him, to feel shame for his behavior. I believe he knows he did something horrible." He hoped Merrythought would, if not agree with his decision, at least accept it for what it was.
"Miss McGonagall has lost trust in Hogwarts, Armando. She has lost trust in us." It was Galatea's turn to look up at him with pleading eyes, a tactic she'd picked up from Dippet himself.
"I was afraid of that. Truly, I was. I don't, however, know how to avoid it without destroying Tom's life." He looked down at her again and squeezed her shoulder.
"I think we should overlook Mr. Moody's actions against Riddle. I think he's suffered enough." Galatea said.
"Moody is a prefect we can't have barbaric prefects."
"So is Mr. Riddle." She reminded him, but continued. "If this behavior trend continues, then I will agree with you. I ask that you let this infraction against Alastor go."
Dippet shrugged and nodded.
"Seems we all have our favorites, don't we?" Dippet responded and gave her shoulder a gentle squeeze, indicating his understanding.
Galatea had to resign herself to the fact that the Riddle disagreement was not an argument she was going to win. While it did not sit well with her, for many reasons, she had to admit to herself that part of her agreed with the Headmaster. Still, something about Tom Riddle unnerved her. She wasn't convinced that the boy was remorseful for what he had done. She was also unconvinced that Tom was at all sorry for what he had done to Alastor. In fact, when she had come upon the boys earlier, she had had the feeling that Tom was actually proud of himself.
"We should inform Horace of the situation before Riddle is released from the hospital wing," she said as she rose from her seat.
"Agreed. What is the Potions elf's name, do you know?" he asked, heading toward his desk and rifling through a drawer, looking for the house-elf assignment sheet.
"Peter, of all things."
"Peter?" Armando blinked. "Never heard of an elf named Peter." He shrugged and called the elf, who Apparated into the Headmaster's office within seconds and was sent to request the Potions master's presence.
The elf was gone only twenty seconds before returning, his hands behind his back.
"Peter returns, sir, but Master Slughorn has explosion with students. Master Slughorn can't be coming to see Master Headmaster right now. They is taking him to hospital wing for care him and some students also."
"Great Scott! Is he hurt? How many students were involved?" Armando nearly shouted, grabbed his over robe, left his tumbler on an end table and hurried out the office door, Galatea following in his wake. Peter, the elf, had no time to answer before they bustled off, and snapped his fingers to Disapparate back to the Potions lab. He had a right mess to set straight. Careless wizards ... not respecting magics. A wonder more don't end up blowing off arms and legs, Peter thought to himself as he began to scrub down the tables and chairs.
Tom Riddle had arrived in the hospital wing while Minerva was in the Headmaster's office and was being fussed over by Madam Alumno. Minerva returned, purposefully ignoring Tom, and made her way to Alastor's bedside, casting unnecessary diagnostic spells to give the appearance of looking busy.
"Such handsome boy, Tom, why you to be fighting too much?" the mediwitch admonished in her broken English as she set to correcting Tom's nose with a snap. Tom winced.
"Why, so I can see more of you, of course." He gave his Healer a cavalier grin, eliciting the hint of a flush from the woman while she cleaned his face and robes of blood.
"Ridículo," she responded and allowed the young man to return to his House.
Minerva then explained the nature of the hex cast upon Alastor, whereupon Madam Alumno spent another twenty minutes trying to regulate the young man's breathing and decrease the swelling in his eyes, to no avail. Despite the mediwitch's vast medical expertise, Alastor had to be admitted to St. Mungo's.
Minerva had hardly finished aiding a hospital orderly with Levitating Mr. Moody through the Floo before the doors to the hospital wing burst open and two house-elves Levitated Professor Slughorn in on a stretcher. Six students and two more house-elves followed suit. Chaos erupted briefly before Madam Alumno could address the situation.
Minerva's first concern was for the injured professor, who had scorched clothing and burns on his abdomen and was wide-eyed in fear, gasping for breath. Madam Alumno rushed over to a Hufflepuff boy whose arm was badly burnt. An olive-green elf with a bulbous nose explained that a potion containing pine tar and lye had exploded while Professor Slughorn was giving a make-up exam for a group of fourth-years, and that the professor took the brunt of the explosion. Minerva immediately cast a diagnostic spell over her professor, recognizing significant lung damage, and Accioed an oxygen mask from the cupboard.
It was an hour before the last of the students was tended to and another two hours for the appropriate paperwork to be filled out on Alastor's mystery allergy, the charred professor and the injured students. The evening meal was long over, and Minerva was quite thankful to be relieved for the night. Professor Slughorn and two Slytherin students had to be admitted to St. Mungo's for toxic-fume inhalation and second-degree burns. The remaining students were kept in the hospital wing for overnight observation for possible residual inhalation problems. Needless to say, the St. Mungo's hospital staff was a bit alarmed by so many admissions from Hogwarts for one evening.
Tired and hungry, Minerva passed through the empty Great Hall and ventured down into the kitchens, hoping to procure some leftovers. After finding a young, cooperative elf who put together a take-away tray with various food items, Minerva decided to take advantage of Professor Dumbledore's offer to use his office for study. It was nearly half past eight o'clock before she reached her Head of House's office door, uttered the password given to her and Transfigured a wooden chair into a simple table. Her spell work was off, another indication of her fatigue, but she didn't much care, so long as the table would hold the food. She could Transfigure it back fairly easily.
She practically inhaled her lukewarm bowl of potato-and-ham soup, sliced peaches (a treat from an exchange student from a U.S. state called Georgia), sliced bread and butter, and tea. The ticking and whirring of various instruments created a soothing white noise, and she eagerly selected the tome she had been hoping to read on the British Animagi history, and ate her dinner.
She summoned Gibber, the elf that had served them the evening she ate dinner with her professor, who obediently popped in and startled Minerva with his promptness.
"Is Miss well?" Gibber asked with wide eyes, possibly confusing her surprised state with fear or maybe even illness. Minerva felt utterly foolish.
"Oh, yes. You startled me, is all." When she said this, Gibber opened his mouth, and Minerva worried that her statement would sound like she was displeased and that he might suddenly start harming himself as punishment, so she cut him off.
"What I mean, really, is that you were so prompt with your arrival after I called you, and I was impressed by the high level of devotion you must have for Professor Dumbledore." She breathed easier now that she saw the elf was standing a bit taller with his little chest puffed out and his ears held straight.
"Gibber has served Master Dumbledore since before Master Dumbledore resided in Gryffindor Tower since he first came for meetings with Master Dippet and Mistress Merrythought. Gibber was laundry worker before Master Dumbledore comes, but Master Dumbledore sees Gibber and picks Gibber for personal elf. Gibber is proud for Master Dumbledore is..." and here the middle aged, blue elf smiled shyly, "...a great wizard of much power and many works to perform, and not only in castle, but many call him for working magics and advisement from all the where." He waved his arms wide for emphasis. "Gibber is almost overcome with pride when Master picks Gibber to serve. Gibber is most fortunate house-elf to have such a master." His little blue face now took on a more purple hue, no doubt from his blushing pride.
"How may Gibber serve Master Dumbledore's Miss?" he asked tentatively, rolling his feet and standing upon his toes in anticipation. Minerva found him utterly adorable but didn't want to insult the elf by doting on him. She couldn't help but grin.
"Gibber, I would like a pot of chamomile tea, a small pitcher of milk and a small bowl of sugar, with one teaspoon and one tea mug ... oh, one of your sturdier tea mugs the larger brown-and-blue ones with the hefty handles? Do you know what I speak of?" Minerva tried to demonstrate the size of the mug she had in mind with her hands, as she hated some of the daintier tea things that many English used.
Gibber nodded with a smile. "Those mugs in back of the kitchens, closest to gardens. Gardeners prefer them. Gibber fetches you nice, solid mug that makes Miss happy. Yes." And with a gentle pop, the elf was gone, along with her empty dinner dishes and tray.
Now that she had eaten and was no longer completely exhausted, she felt her magic strengthen and Transfigured the table back into its original form and went to make the room more inviting by raising up a small fire in the grate and lighting sconces. She lay down on the sofa, donned her reading glasses and stretched out, preparing to read, when she realized something was missing.
Of course! Music! Dumbledore wouldn't mind if I opened his music box, would he? she wondered, looking over at the small wooden box that sat on the bookshelves behind his desk. She really couldn't see that being something intensely private, not when he had shared it with her a few nights ago. As usual, her curiosity got the better of her, and she slipped behind his desk and gently opened the box. Instantly, Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata began filling the room with a relaxing, sometimes haunting, but mostly deeply reaching, melody that couldn't help but elicit emotion. The volume was perfect loud enough to be heard over the whirring and spinning gadgets in the room, but soft enough to put someone to sleep.
Lying back down on the couch, she found herself completely at ease, in perfect comfort, and sat there, doing nothing, thinking nothing, for several moments, just to enjoy the serenity of it all.
When Gibber returned with the tea ... with the larger, heavy mug, as per her request ... he found that the Miss was fast asleep on the sofa, listening to piano music the elf simply called "sleep music". Gibber decided to lay her tea things on the small end table by her head with a note to call him should she need it warmed or wanted some cakes or scones later. He had actually brought her a tray of one of his favorite biscuits, even though she had not requested anything to eat. But Ginger Newts were perfect with tea on a cold night, and he felt that Master Dumbledore would be pleased that Gibber extended such consideration for his special student.
Before the elf left, he toned the fire down a bit, as it could easily overheat the room, and put out the sconces over Minerva's head so that she could rest easier without light shining in her face. He left one sconce burning on the far side of Albus' desk. Between the small fire in the grate and the sconce on the wall, he felt there was plenty of illumination in the room, and he hoped she would not wake bewildered at her surroundings. Lastly, he removed her reading spectacles, so she could not roll over and break them, and taking a napkin from the tea set, he Transfigured it into a glasses case and slipped them inside and placed them on top of her book. Gibber wanted to keep the noise level down, so instead of popping out, he left the conventional way, through the front door, and carefully closed and locked it behind him, knowing that the Miss had the password to open it if she needed.
Gibber hoped Master Dumbledore would be pleased at how he cared for her, even if she never did get to enjoy the fruits of his labor.
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please send me notice when you post another chapt!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
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Thank you for reading! Merry Christmas.
Ahh, who can blame Moody for being angry. Though I do understand why Minerva decided not to tell him everything. I can well imagine what Riddle did to make her that scared. Huh. *smh*
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
You will have to translate 'smh' ... I don't think I'm familiar with that language.
OH yeah! I can relate to Moody here ... smug Minerva and keeping secrets and ... you have to admit, she does act a bit uppity ... *shrugs* women ...
Response from Stefdarlin (Reviewer)
*smh* means shaking my head. I had to ask my husband what it meant when I kept seeing it on facebook. I suppose I was showing my age there, lol.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hrm .... I usually ask my teenage daughter these things ... and yes, I know what you mean about age ... I be aaancient! I not even know texting lingo! Egads!
<--is what I came up with for dear Alastor. They need a *facepalm* icon, lol. I like the way Albus was excited over Minerva's wee note, lol. That was very true to character and cute. =o) I also agree with Minerva that Nick is acting a bit strange. *Shudder* On my way to the next chapter.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Wow! You're on marathon reading tonight!
I know! Facepalm smiley for Alastor ... can you imagine? Insert foot, bite down ... yeesh!
Time to hide under the table and pray for an earth quake, me thinks.
Aww... at least the last bit made me want to say that. =o) Otherwise, I am totally wondering why Minerva didn't want to inform her parents? That seems a bit odd. Tom needs a bit of his own medicine, I think. Grrr!Albus was quite the gentleman. And I loved the way she said her father rationalized her mum's magic. =o)Nice chapter.Cheers,Stef
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Thank you!
This chapter's idea is what spawned the whole story idea, well actually the little Celtic song.
Glad you enjoyed it, and hopefully soon, Minerva will be able to explain why she wants to keep this event so private.
Of course Albus is a gentleman! *nods*
Hmm, interesting start. I am thinking Horace either knows more than he is letting on, or he is hiding something. With all that Dumbledore pointed out of Minerva's character, it is a wonder that Slughorn wouldn't try to collect her. But then, I doubt she would let him.Tom got what he deserved as far as I am concerned. I feel bad for Minerva, but I am glad Albus is going to explain, and he is in her corner. YAY! I may take a bit to review the next chapter as I need to get my next in the queue. But it will be my next break. =o)
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hey! Thanks for dropping a review for my yarn and glad you enjoyed it - and while I can't answer questions as for why certain folk are doing certain things, it will all come out in the wash, as they say.
Wow, Riddle is showing his true colors here, and they ain't purty ones!I'm glad that Alastor had some grit, but it's a pity that TR was so nasty. Why is he not expelled?Anyway, I loved Merrythought in this chapter. I know she's a secondary character to the others, but I think she's my favorite so far here. Not that I don't love the others, too -- and you know my affection for Minerva & Albus (especially when they're together) -- but I really like the way that you've developed Merrythought's character, especially since she was hardly more than a name in canon. Alumno was an interesting character, too, and it's nice to see a mediwitch getting some time, and having a lot of spunk, as well. I can scarcely wait to find out what Minerva does, and how she manages to help Alastor. Of course, I will be patient, or try to be! (And who am I to talk about getting new chapters out -- I don't think I've updated any of my WIPs in months, after all!)¡Esperando pacientemente -- y con entusiasmo! (I love languages!)
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Wooo Hoooo! I had actually forgotten about our dear characcters - so glad you reminded me of their existance!I'm glad you enjoy Merrythought - she's fun and will figure in the story well into the future - hopefully, as is Madam Alumno - as well as her spice - hehe.I know - I really feel bad for Alastor here - and you will see soon why Riddle isn't expelled - or at least, I hope it will seem plausible why he wasn't expelled - you'll have to let me know if its too weak or not.I seriously need to get back to fleshing out Lioness.Thanks so much for all your help and your reviews!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
And I'm not entirely sure if I'm tickled that you really love Merrythought, or if I'm worried that your favorites aren't Albus and Minerva - so I guess I'll just be glad you like our Galatea.
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I think that Riddle needs a really, really, really strong dose of alum. Like, it might clean him out a bit. Nah, that probably wouldn't help. But it would be fun!
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
Just be tickled that I like Galatea! I mean, I was prepared to love Albus & Minerva, and I do, so it's just a wonderful extra to get another great character there, and one that you're making your own, more or less.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Woo Hoo!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Wooo Hoooo! I had actually forgotten about our dear characcters - so glad you reminded me of their existance!I'm glad you enjoy Merrythought - she's fun and will figure in the story well into the future - hopefully, as is Madam Alumno - as well as her spice - hehe.I know - I really feel bad for Alastor here - and you will see soon why Riddle isn't expelled - or at least, I hope it will seem plausible why he wasn't expelled - you'll have to let me know if its too weak or not.I seriously need to get back to fleshing out Lioness.Thanks so much for all your help and your reviews!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
And I'm not entirely sure if I'm tickled that you really love Merrythought, or if I'm worried that your favorites aren't Albus and Minerva - so I guess I'll just be glad you like our Galatea.
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I think that Riddle needs a really, really, really strong dose of alum. Like, it might clean him out a bit. Nah, that probably wouldn't help. But it would be fun!
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
Just be tickled that I like Galatea! I mean, I was prepared to love Albus & Minerva, and I do, so it's just a wonderful extra to get another great character there, and one that you're making your own, more or less.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Woo Hoo!
Buwahahaha! An attack owl! hee!I enjoyed the bits of humor throughout this chapter very much, and I liked the perspective we have in this chapter. It was great to meet some of Minerva's family, and I enjoyed the Quidditch match. However, even with the humor in the chapter, and the excitement of the Quidditch match, we see that the seriousness of the war impinges on Hogwarts' daily life -- or at least on Dumbledore's life.I enjoyed seeing Galatea again. I like your depiction of her. I hope we see more of her!I'm really liking this version of Minerva's youth and coming-of-age. I look forward to more!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Coming from you, that's quite a compliment! Thank you, Madam! *bows*
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
Well, as you might guess, I do have a bit of appreciation for Minerva McGonagall stories! And I really do love seeing her older brother and young Amelia here. It gives some depth to her background. It seems she has a neat family.BTW, how do you like writing about Quidditch? I know you've written a bit with Quidditch in previous chapters, but I think (if memory serves me!) that this is the first game we've seen. I find it kind of a challenge to write Quidditch matches, though I think that the little bit I've done has come out okay. I liked yours here. Did you have fun writing it, or was it torture, or something in between?
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
I'm so glad you liked Marcus and Amelia *grins* and I'm sure the irony isn't lost on you. *winks* Marcus is going to be a fun character to write, I think, and Amelia will be a challenge, being that she's a little Motzart.You know, I enjoyed writing the Quidditch match - it reminded me of my baseball years and how quick everything happens - sometimes everything slows down as the adrenaline pumps and its amazing how much action happens in just a few short seconds. I hope I was able to describe the action of the match in a believable way - as well as keeping it entertaining and not too long winded.I've always felt that fast action sports, team sports especially, teach people how to react quickly and build confidence in their decisions - I think sports will make most people more decisive - make it easier for them to make a decision in that split second when so many people would balk - and that in turn can help them in combat situations - should they be thrust into such events.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
*coughs* Mozart (my bad)
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I thought it its timing was good -- enjoyable, didn't drag, but was detailed enough to envision what was happening. A pity that Albus had to leave before the end!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
I know! He missed some amazing saves by Alastor and some serious broom zooming by Sara and Minerva! Poor guy!I'm glad the pace seemed good to you - I was happy with the match, over all, I felt it fit well into the chapter and didn't overshadow the conversation that was taking place in the stands - which, of course, was the main focus of the chapter.
A very promissing start! The setup is very much as I imagine it. Yes, these two would definitely get into a fight!I had a discussion once that M.McG can have been so distant to Ginny (in ChoS) because she was sexually attacked by the same wizard in her own youth.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hrm.... well... my tae on Minerva and Tom's relationship, or what ever you wish to call it, time in school - is not from canon - its purely made up - but I could easily see Tom Riddle being a predator in his school days - we already know he was from Dumbledore's memories of him when he was only 10 or 11 - so... its no stretch to see him going after others - and being that he's a recruiter - I think he'd have a special interest in someone like Minerva - she's incredibly powerful - and for either want to dominate her or gain her loyalty, I think he'd be interested.
I reviewed this on another site, but I just wanted to say I'm glad to see the update here (at last). Dumbledore is quite a charmer here (as is Amelia), and I loved their interaction. I really enjoyed meeting Minerva's relatives, and the relationship between Albus and Galatea is great too. It made me smile when he conjured the sleet to hide his embarrassment.Here's hoping for some more Albus/Minerva interaction soon!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
I kinda like the sleet too - and I'm glad you don't mind my Snarky Dumbledore - as you can probably detect, he's a bit stressed out and a bit mouthy... though Galatea can give it back just as much, no worries about that.Very glad you enjoyed the other McGonagalls - I plan to include them quite a bit in the future, along with a few more I haven't introduced yet.Ah - hold your horses for Albus/Minerva interaction - at least the way I'm guessing you mean it - and I hope you aren't dissapointed with me over all - remember, I did write the plot of the story as Minerva's life. Yes I get defensive when I get worried...
Response from dsky (Reviewer)
I don't (necessarily) mean that kind of interaction. I just enjoy the way you write them getting to know each other!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Awww! Thank you!Well - Chapter 6 and 7 should have plenty of interaction - me thinks.
I'm so glad to see the update here on TPP!I love the Quidditch match, and especially meeting Minerva's brother--so different from her!--and Amelia. The intereaction between the child and Albus is lovely.The relationship between Albus and Merrythough is nice, too--the readers senses some history there, and of course, it's intriguing.Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
YAY! I kinda like Marcus - got a bit of a soft spot for the big goof.
fun background of the McGonagall Clan - and a teensy bit of Albus and Minerva
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Glad you enjoyed that!
I love this chapter. You give us a bit more about Minerva--her talent and power, as well as her no-nonsense attitude ("How foolish of Williams to allow his personal feelings to get in the way of Gryffindor’s success!") and of course, the relationship with Alastor.The bit with Sir Nicholas is wonderful--I love little moments like this that let us glimpse a bit more of the minor characters as well.She certainly surprised Albus, didn't she?
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oh, she'll continue to surprise Albus ... *grins* and herself!Glad you enjoyed Minerva as well as Alastor and Sir Nick! We'll be seeing more of all three, or four, of them!
I think your portrayal of a young Alastor is "spot-on". Can't believe he said "you slept with Dumbledore". Conversation between Sir Nicholas and Minerva was fun and informative as well as original. This chapter was another great building block in Minerva and Albus' relationship. Thanks.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hey! I'm so glad you like my rendition of young Alastor! Aye! He surprised me too - can you imagine someone saying that to you about your favorite teacher? YEESH! Talk about no manners!Glad you liked Sir Nicholas here, as well as Minerva! Thank you so much for the review!
I love the animated phoenix origami, and the spell that goes with it. It's fun to show off subtly for someone who appreciates it! And it seems that Alastor, as much as he may like her, doesn't really appreciate it. But then, 'subtle' and 'Alastor Moody' don't really go together, do they? Interesting that he and Minerva used to be a couple, although Minerva, at least doesn't appear to have been that emotionally attached. I wonder if Alastor is as unconcerned as he appears to be -- from his reaction the night before, possibly not, but since he doesn't seem to have a rival, he can afford to play it cool.'You slept with Dumbledore?' HA! Good non-reaction from Albus, and good for Minerva, showing her Gryffindor courage by looking him in the eye. So Minerva progresses toward her animagus training, and she and Dumbledore continue to get to know each other on a more personal level.I like Minerva's thoughts on the way to breakfast, we learn a lot about her without it feeling like an infodump. Interesting interaction with Sir Nicholas too. I like your Merrythought. You can tell she cares about her students, and is more interested in substance than flash.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
*grins wide*Well you just made my morning! Ahhh - lets see - yes Alastor Moody and subtle do not mix, at all... in any way, anywhere... you will be seeing a lot more of Alastor as the story progresses, so I hope you feel he stays in character - but you're right on many accounts - which is fairly observant of you so early in the story - though, my Minerva isn't exactly open to her own feelings, let alone shares them with many folks.I'm glad you enjoyed my little origami! I love origami! *snickers* I don't make too many sculptures that sing, but well, its fun to imagine!Glad you enjoy Albus' reaction to Alastor *grins* I don't want to spoil the surprise, but... naaaaaaa, I'll keep my mouth shut on that, more fun for you to see things unfold (smirks at her own origami pun) and very glad you enjoyed my non-info-dump via Sir Nicholas and the Quidditch team issues as well as Merrythought - she's a canon character I'm going to have a lot of fun developing - and I quite like her as well.Thanks so much for reviewing!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
OH! I forgot to add, chapter 4 is in the queue!
Response from dsky (Reviewer)
"Glad you enjoy Albus' reaction to Alastor *grins* I don't want to spoil the surprise, but... naaaaaaa, I'll keep my mouth shut" aarrrgh -- tease!
"OH! I forgot to add, chapter 4 is in the queue!"
I really enjoyed Minerva in this chapter especially. And her conversation with Sir Nick was really funny. I loved her speculation about whether or not ghosts would flirt! haha!I am very much liking Galatea Merrythought. She's my kinda witch! And, as always, it was great to see Dumbledore!Very nice chapter to move the story forward! (And funny to see teenaged Alastor again, being a bit of an annoyance -- and embarrassing himself!)
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oh Ho! Yes, a teenage Alastor is kind of funny to write - he's a mix of a few things, and plenty of teenage, male, nonsense - glad you like my Merrythought - keep an eye on her, she's going places, or so you might say - and its always wonderful to write McGonagall and Dumbledore - anywhere, anyhow, any place!Glad you're enjoying the story!
Excellent way to start a Friday. I'm so happy that a new chapter was uploaded. woo hoo.I had to grin when Albus overheard Minerva and Alastor's conversation, especially when Alastor was being so rude. Served him right for feeling uncomfortable after that. haha.Looking forward to the next update and to see how the ADMM progresses!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Woo Hoo! It finally updated! Glad you liked the chappie - and glad you liked Alastor's karma - poor guy, I kinda feel sorry for him sometimes.Aye - progress comes but *whistles innocently* who ever said there was going to be any ADMM in this? *chuckles* I can imagine it was a certain Ravenclaw buddy of mine... might have let slip the eventual direction of this story - but all I'm going to say is... BE PATIENT! We've got a long way to go.
Lovely 'getting to know each other' chapter. Nice and long, and worth the wait -- although I wouldn't mind slightly shorter chapters if the wait was also shorter!How thoughtful of him to offer her privacy by making her invisible, and nice to see that even though she doesn't want to see her friends right now, they (or at least one of them) are ready to stand up for her against Riddle. In the prefects bath -- is the hourglass locket a timeturner? Has she had it long?I really enjoyed the interaction between Albus and Minerva, especially the teasing when Minerva relaxed. It's interesting that their backgrounds aren't all that different--but why would he think her father was a mediwizard? I liked Fawkes' appearance too. Does he have (or is he developing) a soft spot for Minerva, or is he there solely because Albus is concerned? The end was sweet too, when he tucked her in and watched her sleep.Why is Minerva so adamant about NOT letting her family know about the incident? I could understand if she would prefer to tell them privately and in-person, but she apparently doesn't want them to know that anything happened at all.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Ohh delicious questions!Lets see - okay - the chapter was long in the queue and had to be revised twice - my bad - we will get better. The third chapter is in queue and the fourth is nearly finished so I don't anticipate you having to wait long due to me, but the queue is moving slowly.Glad you enjoyed the chapter! *grins* Makes me a happy writer!You will be seeing much, much more of Alastor as the story progresses, so I'm glad you appreciate his concern.Is that hourglass a timeturner? Oooh... perhaps! *winks* You will learn of that later.Nope, their backgrounds are oddly similar and why did Dumbledore think her father was a mediwizard? Well, more of that will come up later - but the short answer is, he didn't realize her father was Muggle and since her mother's family is so strongly bent in the medical field, he assumed her father was as well. More about the MacGruders and McGonagalls as we continue, I promise.Ahh, Fawkes - well, the best way to answer this is like this. Fawkes is attuned to Albus completely - so Fawkes ends up caring about those that Albus cares about though I'm sure the bird can develop his own relationships, but those few people that Albus cares for greatly end up being important to Fawkes.And, the biggest concern, no doubt - why does Minerva not wish to talk about this incident with her family? I can't tell you that without spoiling the story later, but it will be revealed, I promise. And she does have a very, very good reason. I hope you find the answer later is worth the wait.Thank you so much for reading!
Response from dsky (Reviewer)
I'm really just kidding about the wait. It's not like you're getting paid for this -- and even if you were, you can't put creativity on a time clock. Like I said, it was well worth it. I'll take quality over quantity any day, and this chapter had both.As for the questions, I will just wait (patiently!) for the answers.
Yea! a nice long chapter. Loved the "intimacy" between Albus and Minerva. Albus did the right thing letting her stay in his office and telling the students to give her room. He provided the perfect atmosphere for her to start to recover. Funny that he doesn't realize it was his presence and actions that calmed her, not the tea. Another very enjoyable chapter. Thank you.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oh ho! I'm glad you liked the length of this one - the poor admin was pulling her hair out due to the length - glad it was worth it.Ah, but Albus, with all his infinate wisdom and brilliance, sometimes can't see what's right in front of him. True the tea helped, as did Fawkes, but the real comfort was, indeed, as you say, Professor Dumbledore.This chapter was a pleasure to write, though difficult in spots. The idea of Dumbledore listening to that song in his office was the spark that started this whole fic - so I'm glad others are enjoying, becuase I'm enjoying writing it.Thank you so much for your review!
I was glad to see the chapter posted! It was a nice introduction to Minerva and Albus's relationship, and fun to see young Minerva enjoying herself in Professor Dumbledore's company, despite her recent trauma. You can see the comfort in their relationship already.I loved the music in the chapter, both Fawkes's phoenix song and the lovely lullaby and the magical visual effects it created.I look forward to seeing more of Albus & Minerva's growing relationship!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oooh! Glad you liked the music - it was that actual song that initiated the entire story - that lullaby, I was listening to one day and could see - my image of Dumbledore sitting behind his desk, singing along and tapping his foot and I was overcome with security and peace, and of course, love, but you know, I can't look at Dumbledore and not get all mushy - but, that was the whole instigator behind this entire story - and I'm glad that the music moved you.I did have a lot of fun with Fawkes here. I find he's often overlooked as a 'pet' and its nice to give him some character.
This was certainly an emotional chapter for me for lots of reasons.I am still incredibly angry at Riddle for attacking Minerva and Slughorn for letting the little snot get away with it ... with only a slap on the wrist. The Headmaster isn't much better and certainly has no spine t all. I've said all that to say this ... you've done a fantastic job of portraying your characters since they inspire such deep emotions.The interactions and characterizations between Albus and Minerva were incredibly sweet and very in keeping with their characters. It's sad that Minerva feels the need to hide the information from her parents and to feel ashamed of what happened, but I suppose it's something she has to work through on her own, with Albus' help.Lastly, my favorite part was the bit with Fawkes and his song for Minerva. I could easily visualize the situation and the mood his song created. I think there was a bit of bonding going on with Faskes and Minerva ... very sweet!Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Awwwwwww! You make me smile! I'm glad the characters create such emotion, I do want to do that, and feel similar to what you are feeling - though I must admit, I think I feel a bit better since I know the out-comb - but of course I do! I'm writing it!I enjoyed writing Fawkes in here, that was not something I had originally planned and it worked very well, and helped to introduce an overlooked character who is often quiet and in the background. And yes, I think he and Minerva will be seeing more of eachother. And I very much enjoyed showing the development of the trust between teacher/Dumbledore and student/McGonagall - because well, that's where it all began, after all!Thank you so much for your review - the third chapter is in the queue and the fourth is being written!
Woot!I love the interaction between Albus and Minerva in this chapter--the slowly growing friendship and intimacy between them is intriguing and very much IC.I also love how you've introduced Fawkes and his empathetic qualities; he feels like a character rather than just a "sidekick." Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Awww! Thank you! Fawkes is just so cool! You have to love a bird that can burst into flame, sing the blues away and delivers letters, all without making a big mess! Oh and healing all toxins is quite the benefit! Hope you'll like the direction!
Very nice start to the story and I have to say that I am very upset with Armando Dippet. Never have been a fan of Slughorn so I can't say his actions surprise me all that much. I am incredibly disappointed that Minerva didn't do more to Tom Riddle, haha. He's a nasty piece of work.I am looking forward to reading more of the story so I hope your Muse cooperates and lets you write quickly!!!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
The second chapter is in the que *nods* and the Muse is screaming and jumping up and down on my keyboard! There will be much, much more...Aye, I would have liked more to happen to Riddle but the story isn't over yet.... *winks*Anyway, I hope you enjoyed the begining, sorry about Armando... he's a bit daft today - or something, but, I do have plans for everyone! Not to worry!This next chapter should help you to feel better... it certainly does Minerva.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Chapter 3 is in the works... the muse is dancing! Just letting you know, the que is very full lately and it is taking quite a while for these fics to make it through the editing and admission process - but I am not slacking or abandoning you all! *crosses heart* Thanks again for your review and enjoying my yarn!
GRRRRRR! I hate Tom Riddle! Well, I can't say that's anything new, but here, I really, really hate him! And he deserved all he got and more! Dippet's such a . . . he needs to grow a backbone, certainly. I'm very glad that Dumbledore was such a strong voice advocating for Minerva! She felt her breath catch and turned to look up at him, seeing the look of regret in his eyes. She understood, for the first time that evening since the whole scenario began, that someone was, indeed, in her corner. And that made all the difference.Of course. Completely. And she will always be in Albus's corner now, too. I can see the mutual loyalty and trust building right here. Very promising beginning to the story! I am looking forward to seeing how it proceeds!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Riddle is....... a very icky living thing... aye! loyalty is indeed.... contagious! Ah, well... Dippet may have a few surprises later on... backbones - you know... surprising as I always am, they don't seem to be as common as most think... glad you liked the start! WOO HOO! Hopefully I can do these two justice in YOUR epic eyes! *nods*OH, and that stupid typo at the very begining... yeah.... i'm stupid. Fixing maybe?
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I still find typos in chapters of fics that were proofread, beta'd, and validated by mods, years later, and often after I have reread the chapter myself several times. It just happens!I do hope he gets a little backbone! And I am also wondering what Sluggy's nervous about, 'cause he definitely seems nervous and defensive here.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Sluggy? Defensive? Nawwwwwwwwwww - *grins*
Nice beginning to this story. The way the other professors dismiss Albus' implication is distressingly realisitic. Can't wait to read the rest.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Why thank you ma'am! I do hope it sparks an interest... yes... the bit written about the other professors dissmissals is written from experience.... very sad but it is so common.