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The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness
Fishy40 Reviews | 5.48/10 (40 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
This is my interpretation of who Minerva McGonagall is and how her life's experiences shaped her; taking place between her last two years as a student of Hogwarts to the end of the second wizarding war.
Chapter one - Minerva McGonagall is in her sixth year and practices dueling with a fifth year Tom Riddle with unexpected results. She finds support from her Head of House, Albus Dumbledore.
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Fishy
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Middle aged, single mother, published author of nonfiction, avid HP fan, reformed pessimist and closet romantic. I live in a swamp.
Favorite HP categoriees - Hogwarts Castle, Weasley's Wheezes and anything not revolving around glorifying the darkness.
Favorite characters: Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall, Alastor Moody, Hermione Granger, Rubeus Hagrid, Horace Slughorn, Aberforth Dumbledore, Molly and Arthur Weasley, Ronald and Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood, Tonks.
According to this Hogwarts Sorting Hat Personality Test I have been sorted thus: Gryffindor
98% Gryffindor
92% Hufflepuff
81% Ravenclaw
51% Slytherin
I've been informed that my patronus is a wolverine, which is such a relief as I thought for sure it was a toad.
Currently recovering from surgery.
http://www.personalitylab.org/tests/ccq_hogwarts.htm
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Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
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Thank you for reading! Merry Christmas.
Ahh, who can blame Moody for being angry. Though I do understand why Minerva decided not to tell him everything. I can well imagine what Riddle did to make her that scared. Huh. *smh*
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
You will have to translate 'smh' ... I don't think I'm familiar with that language.
OH yeah! I can relate to Moody here ... smug Minerva and keeping secrets and ... you have to admit, she does act a bit uppity ... *shrugs* women ...
Response from Stefdarlin (Reviewer)
*smh* means shaking my head. I had to ask my husband what it meant when I kept seeing it on facebook. I suppose I was showing my age there, lol.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hrm .... I usually ask my teenage daughter these things ... and yes, I know what you mean about age ... I be aaancient! I not even know texting lingo! Egads!
<--is what I came up with for dear Alastor. They need a *facepalm* icon, lol. I like the way Albus was excited over Minerva's wee note, lol. That was very true to character and cute. =o) I also agree with Minerva that Nick is acting a bit strange. *Shudder* On my way to the next chapter.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Wow! You're on marathon reading tonight!
I know! Facepalm smiley for Alastor ... can you imagine? Insert foot, bite down ... yeesh!
Time to hide under the table and pray for an earth quake, me thinks.
Aww... at least the last bit made me want to say that. =o) Otherwise, I am totally wondering why Minerva didn't want to inform her parents? That seems a bit odd. Tom needs a bit of his own medicine, I think. Grrr!Albus was quite the gentleman. And I loved the way she said her father rationalized her mum's magic. =o)Nice chapter.Cheers,Stef
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Thank you!
This chapter's idea is what spawned the whole story idea, well actually the little Celtic song.
Glad you enjoyed it, and hopefully soon, Minerva will be able to explain why she wants to keep this event so private.
Of course Albus is a gentleman! *nods*
Hmm, interesting start. I am thinking Horace either knows more than he is letting on, or he is hiding something. With all that Dumbledore pointed out of Minerva's character, it is a wonder that Slughorn wouldn't try to collect her. But then, I doubt she would let him.Tom got what he deserved as far as I am concerned. I feel bad for Minerva, but I am glad Albus is going to explain, and he is in her corner. YAY! I may take a bit to review the next chapter as I need to get my next in the queue. But it will be my next break. =o)
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hey! Thanks for dropping a review for my yarn and glad you enjoyed it - and while I can't answer questions as for why certain folk are doing certain things, it will all come out in the wash, as they say.
Wow, Riddle is showing his true colors here, and they ain't purty ones!I'm glad that Alastor had some grit, but it's a pity that TR was so nasty. Why is he not expelled?Anyway, I loved Merrythought in this chapter. I know she's a secondary character to the others, but I think she's my favorite so far here. Not that I don't love the others, too -- and you know my affection for Minerva & Albus (especially when they're together) -- but I really like the way that you've developed Merrythought's character, especially since she was hardly more than a name in canon. Alumno was an interesting character, too, and it's nice to see a mediwitch getting some time, and having a lot of spunk, as well. I can scarcely wait to find out what Minerva does, and how she manages to help Alastor. Of course, I will be patient, or try to be! (And who am I to talk about getting new chapters out -- I don't think I've updated any of my WIPs in months, after all!)¡Esperando pacientemente -- y con entusiasmo! (I love languages!)
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Wooo Hoooo! I had actually forgotten about our dear characcters - so glad you reminded me of their existance!I'm glad you enjoy Merrythought - she's fun and will figure in the story well into the future - hopefully, as is Madam Alumno - as well as her spice - hehe.I know - I really feel bad for Alastor here - and you will see soon why Riddle isn't expelled - or at least, I hope it will seem plausible why he wasn't expelled - you'll have to let me know if its too weak or not.I seriously need to get back to fleshing out Lioness.Thanks so much for all your help and your reviews!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
And I'm not entirely sure if I'm tickled that you really love Merrythought, or if I'm worried that your favorites aren't Albus and Minerva - so I guess I'll just be glad you like our Galatea.
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I think that Riddle needs a really, really, really strong dose of alum. Like, it might clean him out a bit. Nah, that probably wouldn't help. But it would be fun!
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
Just be tickled that I like Galatea! I mean, I was prepared to love Albus & Minerva, and I do, so it's just a wonderful extra to get another great character there, and one that you're making your own, more or less.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Woo Hoo!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Wooo Hoooo! I had actually forgotten about our dear characcters - so glad you reminded me of their existance!I'm glad you enjoy Merrythought - she's fun and will figure in the story well into the future - hopefully, as is Madam Alumno - as well as her spice - hehe.I know - I really feel bad for Alastor here - and you will see soon why Riddle isn't expelled - or at least, I hope it will seem plausible why he wasn't expelled - you'll have to let me know if its too weak or not.I seriously need to get back to fleshing out Lioness.Thanks so much for all your help and your reviews!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
And I'm not entirely sure if I'm tickled that you really love Merrythought, or if I'm worried that your favorites aren't Albus and Minerva - so I guess I'll just be glad you like our Galatea.
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I think that Riddle needs a really, really, really strong dose of alum. Like, it might clean him out a bit. Nah, that probably wouldn't help. But it would be fun!
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
Just be tickled that I like Galatea! I mean, I was prepared to love Albus & Minerva, and I do, so it's just a wonderful extra to get another great character there, and one that you're making your own, more or less.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Woo Hoo!
Buwahahaha! An attack owl! hee!I enjoyed the bits of humor throughout this chapter very much, and I liked the perspective we have in this chapter. It was great to meet some of Minerva's family, and I enjoyed the Quidditch match. However, even with the humor in the chapter, and the excitement of the Quidditch match, we see that the seriousness of the war impinges on Hogwarts' daily life -- or at least on Dumbledore's life.I enjoyed seeing Galatea again. I like your depiction of her. I hope we see more of her!I'm really liking this version of Minerva's youth and coming-of-age. I look forward to more!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Coming from you, that's quite a compliment! Thank you, Madam! *bows*
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
Well, as you might guess, I do have a bit of appreciation for Minerva McGonagall stories! And I really do love seeing her older brother and young Amelia here. It gives some depth to her background. It seems she has a neat family.BTW, how do you like writing about Quidditch? I know you've written a bit with Quidditch in previous chapters, but I think (if memory serves me!) that this is the first game we've seen. I find it kind of a challenge to write Quidditch matches, though I think that the little bit I've done has come out okay. I liked yours here. Did you have fun writing it, or was it torture, or something in between?
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
I'm so glad you liked Marcus and Amelia *grins* and I'm sure the irony isn't lost on you. *winks* Marcus is going to be a fun character to write, I think, and Amelia will be a challenge, being that she's a little Motzart.You know, I enjoyed writing the Quidditch match - it reminded me of my baseball years and how quick everything happens - sometimes everything slows down as the adrenaline pumps and its amazing how much action happens in just a few short seconds. I hope I was able to describe the action of the match in a believable way - as well as keeping it entertaining and not too long winded.I've always felt that fast action sports, team sports especially, teach people how to react quickly and build confidence in their decisions - I think sports will make most people more decisive - make it easier for them to make a decision in that split second when so many people would balk - and that in turn can help them in combat situations - should they be thrust into such events.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
*coughs* Mozart (my bad)
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I thought it its timing was good -- enjoyable, didn't drag, but was detailed enough to envision what was happening. A pity that Albus had to leave before the end!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
I know! He missed some amazing saves by Alastor and some serious broom zooming by Sara and Minerva! Poor guy!I'm glad the pace seemed good to you - I was happy with the match, over all, I felt it fit well into the chapter and didn't overshadow the conversation that was taking place in the stands - which, of course, was the main focus of the chapter.
A very promissing start! The setup is very much as I imagine it. Yes, these two would definitely get into a fight!I had a discussion once that M.McG can have been so distant to Ginny (in ChoS) because she was sexually attacked by the same wizard in her own youth.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hrm.... well... my tae on Minerva and Tom's relationship, or what ever you wish to call it, time in school - is not from canon - its purely made up - but I could easily see Tom Riddle being a predator in his school days - we already know he was from Dumbledore's memories of him when he was only 10 or 11 - so... its no stretch to see him going after others - and being that he's a recruiter - I think he'd have a special interest in someone like Minerva - she's incredibly powerful - and for either want to dominate her or gain her loyalty, I think he'd be interested.
I reviewed this on another site, but I just wanted to say I'm glad to see the update here (at last). Dumbledore is quite a charmer here (as is Amelia), and I loved their interaction. I really enjoyed meeting Minerva's relatives, and the relationship between Albus and Galatea is great too. It made me smile when he conjured the sleet to hide his embarrassment.Here's hoping for some more Albus/Minerva interaction soon!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
I kinda like the sleet too - and I'm glad you don't mind my Snarky Dumbledore - as you can probably detect, he's a bit stressed out and a bit mouthy... though Galatea can give it back just as much, no worries about that.Very glad you enjoyed the other McGonagalls - I plan to include them quite a bit in the future, along with a few more I haven't introduced yet.Ah - hold your horses for Albus/Minerva interaction - at least the way I'm guessing you mean it - and I hope you aren't dissapointed with me over all - remember, I did write the plot of the story as Minerva's life. Yes I get defensive when I get worried...
Response from dsky (Reviewer)
I don't (necessarily) mean that kind of interaction. I just enjoy the way you write them getting to know each other!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Awww! Thank you!Well - Chapter 6 and 7 should have plenty of interaction - me thinks.
I'm so glad to see the update here on TPP!I love the Quidditch match, and especially meeting Minerva's brother--so different from her!--and Amelia. The intereaction between the child and Albus is lovely.The relationship between Albus and Merrythough is nice, too--the readers senses some history there, and of course, it's intriguing.Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
YAY! I kinda like Marcus - got a bit of a soft spot for the big goof.
fun background of the McGonagall Clan - and a teensy bit of Albus and Minerva
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Glad you enjoyed that!
I love this chapter. You give us a bit more about Minerva--her talent and power, as well as her no-nonsense attitude ("How foolish of Williams to allow his personal feelings to get in the way of Gryffindor’s success!") and of course, the relationship with Alastor.The bit with Sir Nicholas is wonderful--I love little moments like this that let us glimpse a bit more of the minor characters as well.She certainly surprised Albus, didn't she?
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oh, she'll continue to surprise Albus ... *grins* and herself!Glad you enjoyed Minerva as well as Alastor and Sir Nick! We'll be seeing more of all three, or four, of them!
I think your portrayal of a young Alastor is "spot-on". Can't believe he said "you slept with Dumbledore". Conversation between Sir Nicholas and Minerva was fun and informative as well as original. This chapter was another great building block in Minerva and Albus' relationship. Thanks.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Hey! I'm so glad you like my rendition of young Alastor! Aye! He surprised me too - can you imagine someone saying that to you about your favorite teacher? YEESH! Talk about no manners!Glad you liked Sir Nicholas here, as well as Minerva! Thank you so much for the review!
I love the animated phoenix origami, and the spell that goes with it. It's fun to show off subtly for someone who appreciates it! And it seems that Alastor, as much as he may like her, doesn't really appreciate it. But then, 'subtle' and 'Alastor Moody' don't really go together, do they? Interesting that he and Minerva used to be a couple, although Minerva, at least doesn't appear to have been that emotionally attached. I wonder if Alastor is as unconcerned as he appears to be -- from his reaction the night before, possibly not, but since he doesn't seem to have a rival, he can afford to play it cool.'You slept with Dumbledore?' HA! Good non-reaction from Albus, and good for Minerva, showing her Gryffindor courage by looking him in the eye. So Minerva progresses toward her animagus training, and she and Dumbledore continue to get to know each other on a more personal level.I like Minerva's thoughts on the way to breakfast, we learn a lot about her without it feeling like an infodump. Interesting interaction with Sir Nicholas too. I like your Merrythought. You can tell she cares about her students, and is more interested in substance than flash.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
*grins wide*Well you just made my morning! Ahhh - lets see - yes Alastor Moody and subtle do not mix, at all... in any way, anywhere... you will be seeing a lot more of Alastor as the story progresses, so I hope you feel he stays in character - but you're right on many accounts - which is fairly observant of you so early in the story - though, my Minerva isn't exactly open to her own feelings, let alone shares them with many folks.I'm glad you enjoyed my little origami! I love origami! *snickers* I don't make too many sculptures that sing, but well, its fun to imagine!Glad you enjoy Albus' reaction to Alastor *grins* I don't want to spoil the surprise, but... naaaaaaa, I'll keep my mouth shut on that, more fun for you to see things unfold (smirks at her own origami pun) and very glad you enjoyed my non-info-dump via Sir Nicholas and the Quidditch team issues as well as Merrythought - she's a canon character I'm going to have a lot of fun developing - and I quite like her as well.Thanks so much for reviewing!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
OH! I forgot to add, chapter 4 is in the queue!
Response from dsky (Reviewer)
"Glad you enjoy Albus' reaction to Alastor *grins* I don't want to spoil the surprise, but... naaaaaaa, I'll keep my mouth shut" aarrrgh -- tease!
"OH! I forgot to add, chapter 4 is in the queue!"
I really enjoyed Minerva in this chapter especially. And her conversation with Sir Nick was really funny. I loved her speculation about whether or not ghosts would flirt! haha!I am very much liking Galatea Merrythought. She's my kinda witch! And, as always, it was great to see Dumbledore!Very nice chapter to move the story forward! (And funny to see teenaged Alastor again, being a bit of an annoyance -- and embarrassing himself!)
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oh Ho! Yes, a teenage Alastor is kind of funny to write - he's a mix of a few things, and plenty of teenage, male, nonsense - glad you like my Merrythought - keep an eye on her, she's going places, or so you might say - and its always wonderful to write McGonagall and Dumbledore - anywhere, anyhow, any place!Glad you're enjoying the story!
Excellent way to start a Friday. I'm so happy that a new chapter was uploaded. woo hoo.I had to grin when Albus overheard Minerva and Alastor's conversation, especially when Alastor was being so rude. Served him right for feeling uncomfortable after that. haha.Looking forward to the next update and to see how the ADMM progresses!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Woo Hoo! It finally updated! Glad you liked the chappie - and glad you liked Alastor's karma - poor guy, I kinda feel sorry for him sometimes.Aye - progress comes but *whistles innocently* who ever said there was going to be any ADMM in this? *chuckles* I can imagine it was a certain Ravenclaw buddy of mine... might have let slip the eventual direction of this story - but all I'm going to say is... BE PATIENT! We've got a long way to go.
Lovely 'getting to know each other' chapter. Nice and long, and worth the wait -- although I wouldn't mind slightly shorter chapters if the wait was also shorter!How thoughtful of him to offer her privacy by making her invisible, and nice to see that even though she doesn't want to see her friends right now, they (or at least one of them) are ready to stand up for her against Riddle. In the prefects bath -- is the hourglass locket a timeturner? Has she had it long?I really enjoyed the interaction between Albus and Minerva, especially the teasing when Minerva relaxed. It's interesting that their backgrounds aren't all that different--but why would he think her father was a mediwizard? I liked Fawkes' appearance too. Does he have (or is he developing) a soft spot for Minerva, or is he there solely because Albus is concerned? The end was sweet too, when he tucked her in and watched her sleep.Why is Minerva so adamant about NOT letting her family know about the incident? I could understand if she would prefer to tell them privately and in-person, but she apparently doesn't want them to know that anything happened at all.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Ohh delicious questions!Lets see - okay - the chapter was long in the queue and had to be revised twice - my bad - we will get better. The third chapter is in queue and the fourth is nearly finished so I don't anticipate you having to wait long due to me, but the queue is moving slowly.Glad you enjoyed the chapter! *grins* Makes me a happy writer!You will be seeing much, much more of Alastor as the story progresses, so I'm glad you appreciate his concern.Is that hourglass a timeturner? Oooh... perhaps! *winks* You will learn of that later.Nope, their backgrounds are oddly similar and why did Dumbledore think her father was a mediwizard? Well, more of that will come up later - but the short answer is, he didn't realize her father was Muggle and since her mother's family is so strongly bent in the medical field, he assumed her father was as well. More about the MacGruders and McGonagalls as we continue, I promise.Ahh, Fawkes - well, the best way to answer this is like this. Fawkes is attuned to Albus completely - so Fawkes ends up caring about those that Albus cares about though I'm sure the bird can develop his own relationships, but those few people that Albus cares for greatly end up being important to Fawkes.And, the biggest concern, no doubt - why does Minerva not wish to talk about this incident with her family? I can't tell you that without spoiling the story later, but it will be revealed, I promise. And she does have a very, very good reason. I hope you find the answer later is worth the wait.Thank you so much for reading!
Response from dsky (Reviewer)
I'm really just kidding about the wait. It's not like you're getting paid for this -- and even if you were, you can't put creativity on a time clock. Like I said, it was well worth it. I'll take quality over quantity any day, and this chapter had both.As for the questions, I will just wait (patiently!) for the answers.
Yea! a nice long chapter. Loved the "intimacy" between Albus and Minerva. Albus did the right thing letting her stay in his office and telling the students to give her room. He provided the perfect atmosphere for her to start to recover. Funny that he doesn't realize it was his presence and actions that calmed her, not the tea. Another very enjoyable chapter. Thank you.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oh ho! I'm glad you liked the length of this one - the poor admin was pulling her hair out due to the length - glad it was worth it.Ah, but Albus, with all his infinate wisdom and brilliance, sometimes can't see what's right in front of him. True the tea helped, as did Fawkes, but the real comfort was, indeed, as you say, Professor Dumbledore.This chapter was a pleasure to write, though difficult in spots. The idea of Dumbledore listening to that song in his office was the spark that started this whole fic - so I'm glad others are enjoying, becuase I'm enjoying writing it.Thank you so much for your review!
I was glad to see the chapter posted! It was a nice introduction to Minerva and Albus's relationship, and fun to see young Minerva enjoying herself in Professor Dumbledore's company, despite her recent trauma. You can see the comfort in their relationship already.I loved the music in the chapter, both Fawkes's phoenix song and the lovely lullaby and the magical visual effects it created.I look forward to seeing more of Albus & Minerva's growing relationship!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Oooh! Glad you liked the music - it was that actual song that initiated the entire story - that lullaby, I was listening to one day and could see - my image of Dumbledore sitting behind his desk, singing along and tapping his foot and I was overcome with security and peace, and of course, love, but you know, I can't look at Dumbledore and not get all mushy - but, that was the whole instigator behind this entire story - and I'm glad that the music moved you.I did have a lot of fun with Fawkes here. I find he's often overlooked as a 'pet' and its nice to give him some character.
This was certainly an emotional chapter for me for lots of reasons.I am still incredibly angry at Riddle for attacking Minerva and Slughorn for letting the little snot get away with it ... with only a slap on the wrist. The Headmaster isn't much better and certainly has no spine t all. I've said all that to say this ... you've done a fantastic job of portraying your characters since they inspire such deep emotions.The interactions and characterizations between Albus and Minerva were incredibly sweet and very in keeping with their characters. It's sad that Minerva feels the need to hide the information from her parents and to feel ashamed of what happened, but I suppose it's something she has to work through on her own, with Albus' help.Lastly, my favorite part was the bit with Fawkes and his song for Minerva. I could easily visualize the situation and the mood his song created. I think there was a bit of bonding going on with Faskes and Minerva ... very sweet!Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Awwwwwww! You make me smile! I'm glad the characters create such emotion, I do want to do that, and feel similar to what you are feeling - though I must admit, I think I feel a bit better since I know the out-comb - but of course I do! I'm writing it!I enjoyed writing Fawkes in here, that was not something I had originally planned and it worked very well, and helped to introduce an overlooked character who is often quiet and in the background. And yes, I think he and Minerva will be seeing more of eachother. And I very much enjoyed showing the development of the trust between teacher/Dumbledore and student/McGonagall - because well, that's where it all began, after all!Thank you so much for your review - the third chapter is in the queue and the fourth is being written!
Woot!I love the interaction between Albus and Minerva in this chapter--the slowly growing friendship and intimacy between them is intriguing and very much IC.I also love how you've introduced Fawkes and his empathetic qualities; he feels like a character rather than just a "sidekick." Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Awww! Thank you! Fawkes is just so cool! You have to love a bird that can burst into flame, sing the blues away and delivers letters, all without making a big mess! Oh and healing all toxins is quite the benefit! Hope you'll like the direction!
Very nice start to the story and I have to say that I am very upset with Armando Dippet. Never have been a fan of Slughorn so I can't say his actions surprise me all that much. I am incredibly disappointed that Minerva didn't do more to Tom Riddle, haha. He's a nasty piece of work.I am looking forward to reading more of the story so I hope your Muse cooperates and lets you write quickly!!!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
The second chapter is in the que *nods* and the Muse is screaming and jumping up and down on my keyboard! There will be much, much more...Aye, I would have liked more to happen to Riddle but the story isn't over yet.... *winks*Anyway, I hope you enjoyed the begining, sorry about Armando... he's a bit daft today - or something, but, I do have plans for everyone! Not to worry!This next chapter should help you to feel better... it certainly does Minerva.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Chapter 3 is in the works... the muse is dancing! Just letting you know, the que is very full lately and it is taking quite a while for these fics to make it through the editing and admission process - but I am not slacking or abandoning you all! *crosses heart* Thanks again for your review and enjoying my yarn!
GRRRRRR! I hate Tom Riddle! Well, I can't say that's anything new, but here, I really, really hate him! And he deserved all he got and more! Dippet's such a . . . he needs to grow a backbone, certainly. I'm very glad that Dumbledore was such a strong voice advocating for Minerva! She felt her breath catch and turned to look up at him, seeing the look of regret in his eyes. She understood, for the first time that evening since the whole scenario began, that someone was, indeed, in her corner. And that made all the difference.Of course. Completely. And she will always be in Albus's corner now, too. I can see the mutual loyalty and trust building right here. Very promising beginning to the story! I am looking forward to seeing how it proceeds!
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Riddle is....... a very icky living thing... aye! loyalty is indeed.... contagious! Ah, well... Dippet may have a few surprises later on... backbones - you know... surprising as I always am, they don't seem to be as common as most think... glad you liked the start! WOO HOO! Hopefully I can do these two justice in YOUR epic eyes! *nods*OH, and that stupid typo at the very begining... yeah.... i'm stupid. Fixing maybe?
Response from MMADfan (Reviewer)
I still find typos in chapters of fics that were proofread, beta'd, and validated by mods, years later, and often after I have reread the chapter myself several times. It just happens!I do hope he gets a little backbone! And I am also wondering what Sluggy's nervous about, 'cause he definitely seems nervous and defensive here.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Sluggy? Defensive? Nawwwwwwwwwww - *grins*
Nice beginning to this story. The way the other professors dismiss Albus' implication is distressingly realisitic. Can't wait to read the rest.
Response from Fishy (Author of The Transformation of a Scottish Lioness)
Why thank you ma'am! I do hope it sparks an interest... yes... the bit written about the other professors dissmissals is written from experience.... very sad but it is so common.