Target
linlawless88 Reviews | 6.9/10 (88 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
When Hermione's safety is threatened by a suspected traitor amongst the Order of the Phoenix, Snape is forced to protect her. As they work together to flush out the traitor and win the war, a new understanding begins to develop.
A response to the long-ago HP Chapter Challenge; HBP and DH ignored (except for the challenge sentences included!).
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linlawless
Member Since 2010 | 34 Stories | Favorited by 194 | 139 Reviews Written | 1,164 Review Responses
I'm a forty-something American woman who is addicted to the SSHG pairing, relatively new to this fandom. I'm also considering starting some original fiction soon...
Check out the story I co-wrote with Remarkable -- it's called "Hidden Attractions" and (as soon as it's through the queue) it's archived under the penname remarkable_linlawless.
For those who are interested, I've got two WIPs at my website (which I will eventually post here, but not until I have a complete draft). It's easy and free to join the website, so I hope you'll visit!
I am honored that my story, Witchy Woman, has been selected as a featured story for September 2010. Better yet, this honor came with the very awesome banner at the top of this post!
Here's a couple of banners my friend Atuliel made for the two WIPs at my website:
Reviews for Target
Great start indeed...Can't wait to read more of it...Will you be updating regularly? I sure hope so coz this really looks promising.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Great start indeed...Can't wait to read more of it...Will you be updating regularly? I sure hope so coz this really looks promising.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
I will definitely be updating regularly -- I have a complete draft, and it's really more a matter of how backed up the queue is than anything else at this point (the admins are very busy, as you might imagine, so it can take several days after I post for a chapter to move through the queue). Thanks for reviewing!
Great start, so glad I was on the TPP home page looking for something to read and found this. Can't wait to read more.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thanks so much! More will be coming soon!
Cool. This is going to be a fun read.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thanks! I hope it continues to please!
cool start! thanks and smoochies
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thank you, and smoochies back! 
I happen to enjoy fluff, and this was a great ending!
*sigh* i just love happy endings. great story. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Me, too! Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
What an ending- loved it completely. Great fic...
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thank you very much! I greatly appreciate all the reviews along the way, and I'm glad you enjoyed it all the way!
Wonderful chapter and a very intriguing way to kill Nagani and Voldemort.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Very glad you enjoyed it, and glad the plot to kill the baddies worked for you! (It's tough to think of ways to do it that haven't been done to death already!) Thanks for reviewing!
Great chapter - It was a pleasure to read....
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
Another great chapter. The story sucks you right in and you just want to read more.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Yay! I love when my stories suck people in and make them want to keep reading! Thanks for commenting!
Really great chapter - I dont think Severus or Hermione knows the extent of their true feelings- It provides a great build up.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thank you very much! Yes, they are both slightly clueless at the moment -- or maybe it's denial ...
Good set-up of how Severus is discovering some gentle feelings for Hermione. I enjoy a lead in like this because it makes the story believable.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thank you! I'm glad the pace and plotting is believable (I'm always tempted to rush it ...)
Great composition - a fascinating storyline.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Glad you're continuing to enjoy it!
Fantastic chapter... this is turning out to be a great read.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
I'm glad it continues to please!
Another excellent chapter- very well written and great material. I cannot wait to see what happens to Hermione.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thank you! I'm glad you're 'hooked!'
Interesting first chapter and very well written. I cannot wait to see what comes next.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thank you! I appreciate the review!
aww, i really liked your story. :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thank you very much! I appreciate you letting me know!
Hooray for happily ever afters! I'm so glad they got their happy ending. I was going to tell him that most men bring flowers to commence courting, not patents, but she seemed thrilled, so I'll just let it go, LOL. I thought the back and forth, "it would be awkward to call you professor," conversation was fun, but thank goodness they were in public or I could see neither of them wanting to have to last word and this getting out of hand. Who am I kidding? I would have loved to see that scene! Very nice work on this chapter and the story as a whole.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Hehehe, I figured she'd be impressed by something totally unconventional, and he'd be out of practice with conventional courting techniques (plus I had to figure out how to work that quote in! ). Hehehe, I can imagine that getting out of hand really fast -- too bad JKR didn't write another book, with a sentence that lent itself to lemons! 
Thanks for all the detailed reviews! I'm glad you liked the story.
I hate to see this truly charming story end, thank you for sharing it. I just love when Severus and Hermione get their "happily ever after"
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for all the reviews along the way. "Happily ever after" is my favorite ending for this pair ...
What a wonderful plan to rid the wizarding world of the Dark Lord. I love the end of this chapter.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Oh, glad you liked it! I wanted to do something I hadn't seen before, and this is what came out. Glad the end of the chapter worked for you, too! Thanks for reviewing!
Wow, love their beating around the bush. They unfortunately need to because of their situations. Poor Ron. Hope the bludger wasn't cursed.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Yeah, they're kind of stuck dancing around each other, hinting without hinting. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Lovely. I like how their relationship is developing.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)
I can't wait until Hermione and Snape finally get together, they clearly have feelings for each other and just need to take the next step, and I hope it's soon.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Hehehe, well, with only a few more chapters, it won't take *too* long! ;) Thanks for reviewing!
brilliant! faboo update. thanks and smoochies
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thanks! Glad you're still enjoying! Thanks and smoochies back!