Happily Ever After
Chapter 10 of 10
linlawlessAt the Leaving Feast, Severus has a surprise for Hermione.
ReviewedA/N: I hope you enjoy this final installment. Thanks to everyone who has reviewed – and if you haven't, this is your last chance to let me know what you thought!
BTW, I moved Gilbert Wimple from the (canon) Committee on Experimental Charms to the (non-canon) Committee on Experimental Potions. It made sense to me that they would have one …
I sometimes think "fluff" should be available as a warning. Since it's not, consider yourself warned here: this chapter gets pretty fluffy. But perhaps the chapter title is warning enough?
Chapter 10: Happily Ever After
Two weeks after the fall of Voldemort, Hermione sat between Ron and Harry at the Leaving Feast, talking happily about what they had planned for the summer and beyond.
Harry and Ron had both earned tryouts with the Chudley Cannons and were planning to spend the summer ensuring they were in top form for those. Hermione was rather glad that they weren't rushing right into their long-term plans to become Aurors – if anyone deserved to enjoy life, Harry and Ron did. So much of their childhoods had been consumed with battling evil that she was glad they were going to have some fun for a while as they eased their way into adulthood.
Hermione would stay at Hogwarts to complete the writeup of her mastery projects and – hopefully – to explore the possibility of a true relationship with Snape. She wondered if the boys realized she was in love with the man they used to hate. She decided not to mention it just now, figuring it would be better to wait and see how things developed. Besides, she doubted they'd condemn her for it, considering that they actually rather liked Snape themselves now. They never spoke ill of him anymore, and they had defended him strenuously in the aftermath of Voldemort's demise, when Aurors were arresting anyone who was even suspected of being a Death Eater. Several Aurors had tried to arrest Snape, too, arguing that he clearly had the Dark Mark and had been present at the end, and therefore he should be imprisoned until he could be tried. Between Harry, Ron, and Dumbledore, however, they had backed down. The Minister of Magic had even issued a press release identifying him as one of the behind-the-scenes heroes of the “skirmish” between good and evil; furthermore, they were planning a ceremony to honor him, along with Harry, Ron, and Hermione, with Orders of Merlin, first class.
Given all that, Hermione was reasonably sure her friends would accept her feelings for the man. After all, they trusted Snape with their lives; how could they not trust him with her heart? Still, she really thought she ought to have that discussion she had been hoping to have with Snape himself before she started telling all her friends she was planning to spend her future with the man if he would have her.
She resolved to enjoy the remainder of the Leaving Feast and take things one day at a time with Snape.
As the Leaving Feast was ending, Severus approached Hermione, who had found her parents. They were newly returned from America, and Hermione looked very happy to be with them. Severus almost hated to pull her away, but he felt he had been waiting so long already that he simply couldn't contain his impatience any longer.
Despite their unspoken understanding, he found himself nervous now that the time to speak openly had arrived. He had little practice expressing his more positive feelings, and even less history of happy outcomes when he had tried.
Fortunately, he could ease into it, as he had a surprise for Hermione.
When he drew near, Hermione smiled brightly at him, her eyes hopeful and her cheeks pink. Severus felt his own cheeks grow warm; to cover his discomfort, he asked, “May I speak with you privately?”
“Of course,” Hermione quickly agreed, excusing herself from her parents. He led her into a quiet alcove, away from the crowds. She said, “There's so much I want to say to you.”
He couldn't help smiling at her eagerness, which boosted his confidence and helped him relax. He said, “And I to you, but business first.” He handed her the letter he had received that morning, and watched her face as she read it.
To: Hermione Granger, in care of her representative, Professor Severus Snape, at the Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry
The Department of Magical Intellectual Property is pleased to grant patent number POT75389 for your “Cruciatus Prophylactic Potion.” The list of ingredients you provided shall be kept confidential, as it is the Department's view that witches and wizards who see the list might get ideas. While we agree that this potion is a major advance in the defense against the Unforgivable Curses, we do not wish to tempt people to cast such curses by widely marketing protection against it.
Thank you for submitting your patent to the Ministry.
Sincerely,
Gilbert Wimple
Committee on Experimental Potions
Looking up at Severus, Hermione asked incredulously, “You got me a patent?”
He smiled and replied, “You earned it.” He shrugged. “Since you had your NEWTs to finish, I submitted it for you. I hope you don't mind.”
“No, of course not. Thank you.” She paused and took a breath. Releasing it, she said, “But I'd rather talk about us.”
He felt his lips turn up ever so slightly. “So would I, actually. I wonder if I might be permitted to escort you to dinner tomorrow evening?”
Hermione smiled widely. “I would love to have dinner with you, Severus. I assume I may call you Severus now?”
“Of course,” Severus replied, feeling himself smile slightly in response. “It would feel rather odd, I think, courting a woman who didn't address me by my given name …”
Hermione's smile grew even wider. “It would,” she agreed. “However, I was thinking more that it would be awkward to call you 'Professor' just before doing this …” She stretched up on her toes and brushed his lips lightly with hers, then rocked back, apparently to gauge his reaction.
He felt his smile grow, until even someone standing several feet away might have noticed it. “It would, indeed, though perhaps not quite as uncomfortable as calling me 'Professor' just before I did this …” He leaned over and proceeded to snog her as thoroughly as he could manage while fully clothed and in public.
When at last he stepped back, he was pleased to see that she looked thoroughly bemused and delightfully mussed. After a moment, she said, “You know, Severus, I've been waiting so very long to spend time with you on a more personal level. Why does it seem like one more day is just too long to bear?”
He laughed outright, the feeling unfamiliar, but welcome nonetheless. “Tonight, then? And, perhaps, tomorrow also, and the day after that, and so on, for the rest of our lives?”
Hermione smiled again, looking delighted. “Severus, I believe this is the beginning of our happily ever after.”
Severus stared at her for a moment, still smiling, though he was slightly bemused at the almost-forgotten feelings of happiness that were surging through him. He decided on a novel way to handle his discomfort – he kissed her again. He didn't tell her that he didn't believe in happily ever after, because suddenly, here with her – and with the Dark Lord truly, finally gone – for the first time in twenty years, he did.
“Yes, Hermione,” he said, “I do believe it is …”
Quote from QA: "It is the Department's view that witches and wizards who see the list 'might get ideas.'"
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Things are working out so well! Must be trouble on the horizon ...
But I want them to be cozy with one another! *pouts at his "let's be proper" attitude*
Yikes, Percy was giving me the creeps here. I,too feel better with Snape there.
I like the way you worked in this quote. And the idea of bad boy Percy, lol.
Sounds like her summer might not turn out to be all that bad after all.
Seems like I read this before, but I don't recall what happens. I'm looking forward to finding out what is in store for these two.
Love the spin you put on the quotes -- especially the positive spin on the final one. :)
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Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciate the review! :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciate the review! :)
EXCELLENT!!!!!!
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thank you very much -- I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thank you very much -- I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Your story is the first one I've read in this challenge!
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Wow, cool! I hope you liked it. Some of the other ones were good, so you should think about checking them out, too! Thanks for commenting!
Ah, I wondered why you'd chosen that particular sentence...given that Hermione was by then well aware that Sirius was loyal to the Order.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Well, it's more like the challenge chose the sentence, and I had to come up with a plausible way to work with it. This was, not surprisingly, one of the more difficult ones! Thanks for commenting!
I like happily ever after's.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Me, too! Thanks for commenting!
Glad they finally get some time to explore their feelings.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Yep, me, too! Thanks for commenting!
Percy is such a creep, the whole Weasley family has now been put to shame because of his actions.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Yes, poor Percy had to be the villain in this one. Maybe I'll write another story in which he's on the right side ... Thanks for commenting!
wow! that was a brilliant solution! thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Thank you! Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
I didn't read this story before, but if this had been the last chapter with everything packed in, I can see how one would feel rushed. Good thinking breaking it up. I am anxious to see what is next.I kind of like the dynamic fo the four of them working together. And I am in the very small minority of folks who actually like Ron, so I was pleased to see him treated well here.Imperius Nagini? Sounds like a good plan to me.And Severus and Hermione can finally have a relationship out in the open. Hopefully the boys know him well enough now to be ok with it. Looking forward to more.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Yeah, it felt rushed to me the old way, too, but I didn't even think about Beedle the Bard when I was originally writing it, and I wanted to stick to the challenge rules. Fortunately, the BB quote fit right in.It's funny, I don't dislike Ron, mostly -- although I really don't like him paired with Hermione, and he has his moments of being an utter prat (but then, so do Harry, Hermione, and Severus). I do think he's smarter than most people give him credit for.The last chapter should be posted in a few days, once I'm done tweaking it.Thanks for reviewing!
Yay. What a great idea, imperiousing the snake. Finally the right person got the fang treatment. LOL. Loved the kiss at the end.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Hehehe, I'm glad you liked Voldie's end. I was trying to come up with something original. Severus and Hermione deserved a good kiss after the day they had, don't you think? Thanks for reviewing!
So glad she wasn't hurt at all! Was worried about that.
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Glad you liked it, and can breathe a sigh of relief! Thanks for commenting!
Good old Ron! :)
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Hehe, I love when he accidentally comes up with something brilliant. Thanks for commenting!
Well, that went rather well. Just goes to show that the best solution is often the simplest one. Now Severus and Hermione are free to explore their relationship.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Yes, it did go well, didn't it? Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!
this is fun. I like this type of challenge.
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Hehe, it was fun to write! Thanks for reviewing!
Percy really has NO idea of how boring he is. :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
LOL, so true! Thanks for commenting! :)