Fancy me, Fancy you
Chapter 5 of 10
linlawlessAs summer ends, Hermione wishes for more time working with Severus, while Severus tries to suppress his increasingly unprofessional interest in Hermione.
ReviewedA/N: Concepts and characters are still JKR's, much as I wish it were otherwise. ;)
Chapter 5 – Fancy me, Fancy you
Hermione was in the Potions laboratory one afternoon in late August, where she and Snape were putting the finishing touches on her experimental potion. He said, “I believe that's it, Miss Granger, until it ages the two months your calculations indicated.”
“Yes, I suppose it is,” she agreed. They began bottling the potion. It would age in a dark cupboard, sealed in single-dose bottles. They worked in silence for a few minutes.
It was disconcerting for Hermione to find that she was reluctant to leave, knowing she had no reason to come back until well after classes had begun. Of course, she would be taking NEWT level Potions, but she suspected that the easy working relationship they had developed over the summer might disappear in the presence of other students. It would have to, really, if Snape was to maintain his cover.
Another thought occurred to her suddenly. “Sir,” she ventured, “how will we test the potion, once it has aged sufficiently?”
He glanced at her. “How do you suggest?”
“Well, I don't know,” she said reluctantly, half expecting him to make a sarcastic comment about something the know-it-all didn't know. “I suppose we'll need permission from the Ministry …”
“Yes,” Snape said, once again forgoing the easy opportunity to insult her. “Although, as Hogwarts already has permission to use Cruciatus for demonstration purposes in Defense class, perhaps we should just vaguely mention that we are experimenting with possible defenses without specifically mentioning this potion.”
“All right,” Hermione said thoughtfully. “If you'd rather the Ministry didn't know …”
“The Dark Lord has spies in the Ministry. I'd prefer that they not find out for as long as we can avoid it – having a defensive potion that they don't know about could be a major advantage when the Final Battle commences.”
“Point taken,” Hermione said, and smiled at him. He stared at her for what seemed ages, and as had been happening frequently in recent weeks, she found she couldn't look away from his black eyes. Her heart seemed to skip a beat, then resume in a rapid tattoo that she was certain he must be able to hear. After an eternity, he cleared his throat and looked away.
“We'll most likely need to borrow one of Hagrid's creatures to test the potion on,” he said abruptly.
“Do you think he'll let us?” Hermione asked.
“If it's put to him properly, he probably will,” Snape replied. “I'll see if the Headmaster will discuss it with him.”
“All right.”
Hermione watched him as he began clearing up their work area. After a moment, she asked, “Are there any more potions to be brewed for the infirmary?”
“A few,” Snape said. “You needn't concern yourself with them. You have completed your independent study, and you may as well enjoy what's left of the summer.”
“That's all right, I don't mind helping,” Hermione said hastily. When he looked at her skeptically, she shrugged, “I'll get bored if I don't have anything to keep me occupied.”
“Don't you usually read ahead the entire year's worth of textbooks each summer?” he asked dryly. “You must feel dreadfully behind.”
She stared at him, shocked. Was he teasing her? She daren't ask, as he would probably only deny it anyway. “Oh, I'm nearly finished with that already,” she admitted, feeling a flush creep into her cheeks. “I owl-ordered the books weeks ago, and I've been reading them in the mornings ever since I finished the Arithmancy portion of the project last month."
Snape rolled his eyes. “Of course you have. Silly me.”
Hermione barely restrained the question on the tip of her tongue. Sir, are you flirting with me? Instead, she asked, “So, shall I assist you with the remaining potions?”
“If you must,” Snape replied, but his tone was rather more pleased than not. She smiled at him as he added, “Come by after breakfast. We'll have an early start and you can finish off the year's syllabi in the afternoon.”
After Miss Granger left the laboratory, Snape let out a relieved breath and headed into his office. He was definitely getting too comfortable with the girl.
Well, comfortable wasn't really the right word, exactly, he thought, shifting uneasily in his chair. Informal, perhaps, would be a better word for it. The problem was, he was having trouble remembering that she was a student – his student. She simply wasn't annoying him the way she once had, or the way most students still did.
In fact, he was increasingly finding her company pleasant. Her conversation was intelligent, her mind stimulating, her thought processes fascinating. Not that he would ever admit that out loud. He was barely willing to admit it silently, to himself.
And he certainly couldn't acknowledge that he was finding it increasingly difficult to ignore the fact that she was an attractive, adult female …
That, of course, was dangerous – for both of them. He couldn't afford to slip and be pleasant, or even neutral, to her in front of any of the other students, once they returned, unless he wanted to undermine years of work and decades of sacrifice by blowing his position in the Dark Lord's Inner Circle.
He glanced at the magical window, which was charmed to show the fields and greenhouses that were on this side of the building just one floor up. It was still only mid-afternoon, so he could work for a few hours on his plan for the lessons Dumbledore had asked him to teach Potter this year. Sighing, he pulled it out, not wanting to think about how unpleasant that chore would be.
Hours later, he glanced up again at the magical window, setting the lesson plan aside. Sunlight had crept halfway across the room while he had been working on it, and he could now hear distant sounds of movement from the dormitories above. He was confused for a moment, before he realized that it must be dinnertime; the house-elves likely had assumed he had gone to the Great Hall and were taking the opportunity to begin getting the Slytherin dormitories sorted for the upcoming term. They did so each year around this time, and after all these years, they knew better than to do anything so close to his office during his usual working hours.
Pushing the lesson plans aside, he headed to the Great Hall. He ruthlessly suppressed the anticipation that tried to surge up at the thought that he might see Miss Granger, and she might smile at him. He could not afford to think of that now. Going soft would certainly get him killed.
Quote from OP: "Sunlight had crept halfway across the room while he had been working on it, and he could now hear distant sounds of movement from the dormitories above."
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Things are working out so well! Must be trouble on the horizon ...
But I want them to be cozy with one another! *pouts at his "let's be proper" attitude*
Yikes, Percy was giving me the creeps here. I,too feel better with Snape there.
I like the way you worked in this quote. And the idea of bad boy Percy, lol.
Sounds like her summer might not turn out to be all that bad after all.
Seems like I read this before, but I don't recall what happens. I'm looking forward to finding out what is in store for these two.
Love the spin you put on the quotes -- especially the positive spin on the final one. :)
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Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciate the review! :)
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Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciate the review! :)
EXCELLENT!!!!!!
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Thank you very much -- I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
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Thank you very much -- I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Your story is the first one I've read in this challenge!
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Wow, cool! I hope you liked it. Some of the other ones were good, so you should think about checking them out, too! Thanks for commenting!
Ah, I wondered why you'd chosen that particular sentence...given that Hermione was by then well aware that Sirius was loyal to the Order.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Well, it's more like the challenge chose the sentence, and I had to come up with a plausible way to work with it. This was, not surprisingly, one of the more difficult ones! Thanks for commenting!
I like happily ever after's.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Me, too! Thanks for commenting!
Glad they finally get some time to explore their feelings.
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Yep, me, too! Thanks for commenting!
Percy is such a creep, the whole Weasley family has now been put to shame because of his actions.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Yes, poor Percy had to be the villain in this one. Maybe I'll write another story in which he's on the right side ... Thanks for commenting!
wow! that was a brilliant solution! thanks and mucho smoochies
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Thank you! Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
I didn't read this story before, but if this had been the last chapter with everything packed in, I can see how one would feel rushed. Good thinking breaking it up. I am anxious to see what is next.I kind of like the dynamic fo the four of them working together. And I am in the very small minority of folks who actually like Ron, so I was pleased to see him treated well here.Imperius Nagini? Sounds like a good plan to me.And Severus and Hermione can finally have a relationship out in the open. Hopefully the boys know him well enough now to be ok with it. Looking forward to more.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Yeah, it felt rushed to me the old way, too, but I didn't even think about Beedle the Bard when I was originally writing it, and I wanted to stick to the challenge rules. Fortunately, the BB quote fit right in.It's funny, I don't dislike Ron, mostly -- although I really don't like him paired with Hermione, and he has his moments of being an utter prat (but then, so do Harry, Hermione, and Severus). I do think he's smarter than most people give him credit for.The last chapter should be posted in a few days, once I'm done tweaking it.Thanks for reviewing!
Yay. What a great idea, imperiousing the snake. Finally the right person got the fang treatment. LOL. Loved the kiss at the end.
Response from linlawless (Author of Target)
Hehehe, I'm glad you liked Voldie's end. I was trying to come up with something original. Severus and Hermione deserved a good kiss after the day they had, don't you think? Thanks for reviewing!
So glad she wasn't hurt at all! Was worried about that.
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Glad you liked it, and can breathe a sigh of relief! Thanks for commenting!
Good old Ron! :)
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Hehe, I love when he accidentally comes up with something brilliant. Thanks for commenting!
Well, that went rather well. Just goes to show that the best solution is often the simplest one. Now Severus and Hermione are free to explore their relationship.
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Yes, it did go well, didn't it? Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!
this is fun. I like this type of challenge.
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Hehe, it was fun to write! Thanks for reviewing!
Percy really has NO idea of how boring he is. :)
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LOL, so true! Thanks for commenting! :)