Chapter 10 - The Knife's Edge
Chapter 10 of 29
star_girlLife does not always turn out the way we want it to. Ten years after the Battle of Hogwarts, Severus Snape, thought by everyone to be dead, is living out his days in solitude on the edge of the wizarding world. Ginny Potter, meanwhile, is juggling a high-profile career, three small children, a Kneazle and a workaholic husband. A family crisis within the Potter household unwittingly brings Snape out of hiding and his and Ginny's lives are changed forever, with both of them ultimately offered a second chance for happiness. This story is mostly canon compliant but discounts the epilogue in Deathly Hallows.
ReviewedChapter 10 The Knife's Edge
The hundreds of Christmas shoppers who hurried their way daily through the crowds of London's busy Oxford Street were usually too preoccupied with buying bargains or gazing at the twinkling Christmas decorations to pay much attention to a rather strange, dilapidated red-brick department store that was squeezed between two of the rather more fashionable kind of shops. It was named Purge and Dowse Ltd, and what was strange about the store was that it appeared to be always "under renovation" and never seemed to be open. Also, the dummy in the window had been wearing the same outfit for the last few decades. But neither the city workers nor the thousands of tourists who visited this part of central London over the years had noticed this peculiarity. In fact, no Muggles had noticed anything at all odd. Only witches and wizards knew that this shabby-looking shop was actually the front entrance to St. Mungo's Hospital for Magical Maladies and Injuries and a few words spoken to the mannequin would gain them entry.
Harry Potter had been to St. Mungo's several times before, both visiting patients and as an expectant parent. He'd always associated visits to the hospital therefore with a feeling of great anxiety; even the excitement of impending fatherhood was laced with apprehension and concern. But none of the tension of his previous visits had compared to the wretched, sleepless night he'd just spent in the Quarantine Holding Area, waiting for news of Al, his youngest son.
His wife Ginny, who had vented her rage at him in a tirade so fierce it could have shamed a Chimaera, had sat huddled in one corner whilst adamantly refusing to look at him. She'd not spoken a word to him since then, even when he'd asked if she wanted a cup of tea from the meagre refreshment trolley that had been provided. She'd merely shaken her head, her lips pursed into a thin line and her jaw set, still avoiding eye contact. Harry, wary of provoking her anger once more, had chosen to sit on the opposite side of the room. Now and then he'd glance at the pathetic tinsel-clad clock and back at his furious wife, but neither was giving him any solace. Time seemed to be going so slowly, he'd been convinced the hands on the clock had actually moved backwards at one point. The snakes of dread in his stomach and the old rickety chair he'd been sitting on added further to his discomfort.
The room's only other occupant, an old woman who'd had her nose stuck in one of Lockhart's awful tomes, had been escorted from the waiting area hours ago. She'd apparently been given the all-clear. Harry couldn't help but grimace at the irony; Lockhart himself was a permanent resident of St. Mungo's, having his mind irrevocably damaged due to the backfiring Memory Charm he'd tried to use on Harry and Ron in the Chamber of Secrets. Nonetheless, this hadn't appeared to halt his muse and despite never fully recovering, he had published many more books since his incarceration in hospital. Harry supposed he should feel in some way responsible for Lockhart's malady, but as far as he was concerned, he'd deserved everything he'd got.
Eventually, after fidgeting and pacing for what had felt like days but which had only really been a few hours, a Healer dressed in lime green robes appeared, looking grave. Harry immediately got up from his chair and crossed the room to join his wife's side.
'Mr and Mrs Potter,' the Healer began slowly, clasping his hands in front of his stomach. 'There is no easy way to say this, I'm afraid. Albus has been diagnosed with Augurey Flu, but as yet he is failing to respond to treatment.'
Harry's insides suddenly turned icy cold. He felt as if there was a Dementor in the room, sucking all of the joy out of him. His heart began to race as he processed what the Healer had just said.
'Not responding to treatment? Why?' Ginny voiced the question first. She was still resolutely not looking at her husband, and only the slight waver in her voice revealed how upset she was at the news.
The Healer sighed. 'I'm afraid we're not really sure. Your son is the first child to contract Augurey Flu, so we have no basis for comparison. Our medicines are regulated and adapted for children, but the potion does not seem to be working. We've already exceeded the highest dose, and Albus hasn't responded to the treatment. We risk an overdose if we try using it again.'
Ginny shook her head in disbelief as Harry gripped on tightly to the armrest of his chair.
'So what happens now?' asked Harry, eventually finding his voice.
'Well, we are in the process of conducting more tests. Albus may have contracted a new, more virulent strain of Augurey Flu, which could be why he is not responding to conventional treatment.'
'And if he has?' Harry fired back.
'Then we will try to amend the potion accordingly,' the Healer replied calmly. 'However, we are against the clock with this. Flu can cause all kinds of problems, from respiratory failure and pneumonia to dehydration and kidney failure. These can be fatal. The longer Albus goes untreated, the more danger he'll be in.'
Ginny looked as though she'd been slapped in the face at this news.
'How long before things get dangerous?' Harry asked quietly.
'Again, it's difficult to say,' replied the Healer. 'The incubation period for Augurey Flu is much quicker than standard flu; within twenty-four hours, as opposed to two days or more. Therefore, from what we have seen, the illness itself is accelerated. In normal flu, pneumonia and other complications can develop around five days after the first initial symptoms in adults. But as Albus is only a child and this is Augurey Flu, we would estimate that complications could arise within two or three days.'
Ginny at last looked from the Healer to Harry for a few moments, and then back again. 'You will be able to get him better, won't you?' she asked, her voice not much more than a whisper.
'We're doing everything we can, Mrs Potter,' the Healer answered gently. 'He's in the best place.'
'When can I see him?' Ginny continued quietly. Not being able to be by her little boy's bedside when he was suffering had given her a physical ache. Being away from him was a kind of pain she had never known before.
The Healer breathed deeply through his nose. 'I understand how hard this is for you, Mrs Potter. You will be able to see Al once he has responded to treatment and is recuperating. It would put you and your husband at risk if we let you see him before that time. I do hope you understand.' He paused, giving a tense sort of smile. 'And how are you both feeling? Have you had any flu-like symptoms?'
Harry and Ginny shook their heads.
'Good. Well, as a precautionary measure, you should both take this Vaccination Potion.' The Healer pulled two little phials of clear, light-blue liquid from his robes and passed them to Ginny and Harry. As they both uncorked the phials and drank the potions, the Healer looked around, taking in the makeshift and unfriendly room. 'We can at least make things a little more comfortable for you in here whilst we undertake some more tests on your son.'
He withdrew his wand and Transfigured some of the rickety old chairs into huge squashy sofas, each one easily big enough to curl up and sleep in. Another flick of his wand saw sandwiches, croissants, and a fresh pot of tea appear on the refreshment trolley.
'Well, I must be getting back now,' the Healer said briskly, stowing his wand back inside his robes. 'I will be down to see you with any news as soon as I have it. And if there's anything else you need, do not hesitate to ask the Welcome Witch.'
Harry and Ginny thanked the Healer sincerely and were lost in their thoughts for some moments after he'd left.
'He'll be alright, Gin,' Harry murmured, as much to convince himself as his wife.
Ginny looked back at her husband properly for the first time since he'd arrived at the hospital. 'How do you know?' she asked, her voice hoarse with repressed emotion.
'I just know,' he replied firmly. He reached for Ginny's hand, and this time she did not pull away. He squeezed it gently, stroking her fingers with his thumb. The chestnut eyes found the green, and they held each other's gaze for the first time in many long, long hours. They would get through this, Harry thought. They would get through this together.
Suddenly, a blinding flash of light issued from one of the far windows, making both Harry and Ginny shield their eyes. Harry was about to reach for his wand when he realised the light was actually the unmistakable smoky form of a Patronus, racing towards him. As the glowing white shape grew closer, Harry recognized it immediately: it was a small dog, a Jack Russell Terrier. The Patronus belonged to none other than his best friend, Ron.
The little dog opened its mouth and in Ron's voice, said: 'It's Montenegro. We've trapped the suspect. We need back-up.'
Harry looked back at Ginny and saw the unasked question within her eyes. He'd been working too hard to let the Montenegro suspect just slip away now he was within reach. If they nailed him, he would provide them with leads for many other cases. And yet his son was critically ill, here in this very hospital. He needed to be here for his family. Harry shifted in his seat, torn between his two responsibilities, knowing that every second he delayed answering the Patronus was a delay to the biggest case of his life. Then, his decision made, he pulled out his wand in order to cast his reply.
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Latest 25 Reviews for A Second Chance For Happiness
167 Reviews | 8.14/10 Average
I LOVED this pairing, dear! The adultery thing did bother me a bit initially, tbh, but the realistic and aesthetic portrayal of things was a great help! Thanks for the roller-coaster ride which ended on a happy note for everyone, especially Severus! I solemnly swear to be a loyal (if somewhat inconsistent) reader of your fics!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
THANK YOU so much for taking the time to both read and review. I know the adultery theme isn't to everyone's taste, but I was hoping that by showing unhappiness on both sides that it lead to an understanding of WHY adultery might happen, rather than glorify it. And it had to be adultery if I wanted to remain as canon as possible. I am so glad that you enjoyed this story and stuck with it til the end, your reviews have put a big smile on my face :)
Engaging chapter. Btw... BOSTON BRAHMIN???!!!! Hehe... I am a Brahmin girl and have a cousin staying in Boston. Gotta pay more attention to her accent during her next visit to India!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Sending much love to India :)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Loads of love (and greetings! Yes, it's the festive season here :) ) in return, dear!
Hey! I did NOT notice the rearrangement of letters back then, though the choice of pseudonym certainly intrigued me (I mean, Nobel and all, LOL!) *hurries back to reading*
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
I'm glad it was a surprise :)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
You are indeed a product of your House! :P
Stack up more Polyjuice, Severus! :P
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Oh, he's going to have to make a whole barrel full! :p
I must confess that the quill is quite *pause, looks for the appropriate word* extraordinary!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Tricksy!
*jaw hits floor hard* Polyjuice??!!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Classic eh?
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
'Classic' would be an understatement!
Ah. He steps in. Finally!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Finally :)
Albus. Severus. Potter. Yes, that does sound bit of an oxymoron, doesn't it? :P
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
It's not the best of names is it? :p
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Most certainly not. The mere idea of 'Severus' beside 'Potter' sounds scary!
As a newly graduated doctor, I loved your description of the hospital scene! Very poignant, yet very realistic!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you, that's a huge compliment :)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Trust me, it's as hard for the doctor as it is for the mother. I found the Paediatrics (especially the Sick Newborn Care Unit) posting to be one of the toughest phase of my internship days... Watching so many children suffer (and even die) while you are forced to keep cool proved genuinely tough for me. So I can understand Ginny's pain, even if it is to a very tiny extent. ;(
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Trust me, it's as hard for the doctor as it is for the mother. I found the Paediatrics (especially the Sick Newborn Care Unit) posting to be one of the toughest phases of my internship days... Watching so many children suffer (and even die) while you are forced to keep cool proved genuinely tough for me. So I can understand Ginny's pain, even if it is to a very tiny extent. ;(
'Churning out offspring'... Like mother, like daughter! Thanks for the rec... I'm thoroughly intrigued!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Oooh you found this one! I'm so pleased you were intrigued!
Nice pseudonym! *HUGE GRIN*
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
*Bows*
Hooray for a happy ending! I think you did a nice job staying close to canon. I am a huge SS/HG shipper, but I will agree that the fandom is saturated with that pairing. It is nice to read something different every once in awhile. I don't believe you glorified adultery at all. Yes, Ginny's affair felt exciting, but I suspect that is the case in real life, or people wouldn't do it so often. It happens in the real world, why not in fic? I think you've done quite a nice job here.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you for your kind comments, I'm flattered that you took time out of your usual ship to read this and thrilled that you enjoyed it. Thank you.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you for your kind comments, I'm flattered that you took time out of your usual ship to read this and thrilled that you enjoyed it. Thank you.
I love that Harry and Ginny are amicable and even happier and more family oriented than before. I do hope that Snape is able to come out from hiding. Maybe it is nice and peaceful in his seclusion, but it will be hard on Ginny, I think, to not be able to be totally upfront about her relationship to others. I do like his solution so they can live together, yet not.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Glad you're enjoying how this is turning out. Thanks for leaving a note.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Glad you're enjoying how this is turning out. Thanks for leaving a note.
THank you for the happily ever after! Lovely
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank YOU, for reading and reviewing :)
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank YOU, for reading and reviewing :)
I wondered what that would be like adjusting to seeing Severus and not Alfric when they are in bed. Im glad you touched on that. Made things feel all the more realistic.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you, I'm glad it seemed plausible for you.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you, I'm glad it seemed plausible for you.
ACK I cannot beleive the personal questions the warlock asked! So prying. What would have happened if he would not have agreed to terminate the marriage? Goodness. I was on pins and needles the whole time!!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Yes, divorce is not made easy for either party! I think all three of them were relieved to get it over with.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Yes, divorce is not made easy for either party! I think all three of them were relieved to get it over with.
I almost dont want to read about the divorce. They have just admitted their love and now its going to get ugly and torrid in court. Nooooooo
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Sadly, it's the price they have to pay :(
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Sadly, it's the price they have to pay :(
Very good chapter. I hope this wasn't the end. I'm glad the divorce is done. I have liked this story a lot though in JKR's version I think Harry and Ginny would never end up here. She loved him since he was a child and family was always a deeo desire for him. But never the less i really love your take on this story. Iv'e only read one other SS/GW story and they have both been excellent. I look forward to more.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you for continuing to read. No, this is not the end, although there aren't many chapters left. I hope you'll enjoy how the story concludes. Thank you for your support even though this isn't your usual ship and the plot isn't quite what you'd expect - it means a lot to know you are still reading and enjoying it even though it's not to your usual taste.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you for continuing to read. No, this is not the end, although there aren't many chapters left. I hope you'll enjoy how the story concludes. Thank you for your support even though this isn't your usual ship and the plot isn't quite what you'd expect - it means a lot to know you are still reading and enjoying it even though it's not to your usual taste.
A very compelling drama! I am looking forward to how it all unfolds!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you very much!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you very much!
I am so relieved that things went okay, but it was so sad. I mean, there was no way I wanted Harry and Ginny to stay together, but it just finally felt so real, all of them there in one place, admitting that things would never work out. I think Harry is being very mature about all of this, and I hope that the title of the story goes for him as well. I was hoping for an interaction between he and Snape, only because I wonder if they would be civil or have a shouting match or what. Thanks for a new chapter so quickly. I hope there aren't too many bumps in the road as everyone puts their lives back together.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you! All I can say for now is trust me; I've already written the epilogue so I know how things turn out. I just need to get from here to there (and hopefully it won't take too long!) Thanks again for your support.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you! All I can say for now is trust me; I've already written the epilogue so I know how things turn out. I just need to get from here to there (and hopefully it won't take too long!) Thanks again for your support.
Oh, there is so much anger and resentment at the moment, and rightfully so, but at least Harry had the decency to let Snape off the hook.I will be quite interested to see how she breaks the news to him, and how he takes it. Hey, at least it gives them a reason to talk again.This makes me wonder, what happens if the second person in the affair doesn't show up in court? Or is there some way of making them appear? Doesn't matter, really, just wondering if he didn't have the option to just not show up. And would they then not be able to divorce?
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Oh yes, the next chapter is a humdinger! well, they woudn't be able to divorce if both parties didn't show up. It's a wizarding formality designed to prevent promiscuity ;)
Did that mean that she, Ginny Potter, was actually in love with and pining for Severus Snape? Yes yes YES it does! Dump Harry, grab the kids and move in. YIppeeeee!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Again, thank you for your support! *hugs*
I do hope that after Ginny calms down and has a chance to think on what he said she will give him another chance. ((sniffle))
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
All will be revealed, my dear :)
Lovely, poignant insight into the human condition as always and as always leaving us poor readers longing for more - update asap! Pretty please? They are all in such pain, blame, guilt and conflict - love it! Of course, I'm partial to Sev, how much more can he take? We know how *extreme* he can get sometimes... please hope he gets some relief... for better or worse, it seems Ginny holds that power...again, can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thanks for all your support nag, it means a lot :)
Ginny has some serious thinking to do. Well, more than she already has, anyway. Snape, while he is miserable, at least has no doubt in his mind what he wants. If she could see how much he is suffering, I wonder if it would make her decision easier or harder? I do hope she chooses to give him another chance. But what a thing to wrap her head around: being in love with Severus Snape.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thanks for continuing to read. I hope you'll like where this goes.