Chapter 3 – The Hermit
Chapter 3 of 29
star_girlLife does not always turn out the way we want it to. Ten years after the Battle of Hogwarts, Severus Snape, thought by everyone to be dead, is living out his days in solitude on the edge of the wizarding world. Ginny Potter, meanwhile, is juggling a high-profile career, three small children, a Kneazle and a workaholic husband. A family crisis within the Potter household unwittingly brings Snape out of hiding and his and Ginny's lives are changed forever, with both of them ultimately offered a second chance for happiness. This story is mostly canon compliant but discounts the epilogue in Deathly Hallows.
ReviewedChapter 3 The Hermit
The bright, Cornish morning sunshine flooded through the small, dirty windows of an otherwise cosy-looking cottage. All was quiet except for the faint susurration of the sea in the distance and the odd repetitive cry of the gulls that wheeled and soared overhead. There was no roar of cars or chatter of people. The only sounds that ever punctured the air around here were the sounds of nature. And that was exactly the way Severus Snape liked it.
He was now sitting in his favourite armchair, nursing a steaming cup of Earl Grey. To anyone who had known him in his former life, he looked pretty much as he always had: stern, with penetrating black eyes and jet black hair that hung in curtains around his pale face. He was still lean and still moved with a quick, graceful gait. The only thing that looked different about him was that he now bore an angry-looking, gnarled scar on one side of his neck, a scar that he kept hidden with his trademark high-collared shirts.
It had been over ten years since he'd got that scar, and as ugly as it was, Snape found he could live with it quite happily. After all, he had never been a vain man. And the circumstances in which he got the scar had, perversely, led to his escape. Because Severus Snape had always planned to escape the life he had been dealt, once his obligations to Lily and defeating Voldemort were completed. It just so happened that the incident with the snake actually saved him the trouble from faking his own death.
He had been planning his exit from the Wizarding world for many years and had begun to do so in earnest once his Mark had begun to burn again and he had realised Voldemort was growing stronger. He had drawn up his will so that, if he died, all the money from his Gringotts account would be left to a false name in a Muggle bank account. He'd even bought the cottage, in an isolated part of Cornwall, in which he could disappear once Voldemort was finally brought down.
Being rescued by the house-elf therefore wasn't just a life-saver; it had given him the perfect alibi for escape. He could not return to Spinner's End, of course; too many people, Death Eaters and colleagues alike, knew of its location. Apart from a few books and trinkets he wished he'd had the time to salvage, he didn't miss the old place much. It was filled with bad childhood memories and loneliness. Whereas with the Cornish cottage, Snape felt that he finally had something of his own which was not tainted by baggage and he could start afresh. The sea air and the remoteness of the location all helped to soothe his troubled soul.
Snape realised just how lucky he had been to have survived the snake attack, however. The injury to his neck had narrowly missed his main artery and through a sheer miracle had not punctured his oesophagus; otherwise he would have choked to death on his own blood. His vocal chords were also, mercifully, undamaged. He had, however, lost a great deal of blood, but it had been the venom from the viper that had posed the greatest danger of all. It was so deadly and immobilising, even if he'd had a bezoar on him, he could not have moved to use it. If the elf had waited even another minute or two, he would have surely died.
The elf had done well, though, in administering the potions. The anti-venom had started to work almost immediately, and the Blood-Replenishing Potions rejuvenated his tired body quickly. When he had come to, he had found himself still on the floor of the Shack in darkness, with the elf's large, orb-like eyes staring down at him. His neck had felt both sore and itchy, as the dittany set to work in knitting together his ripped flesh.
It had taken Snape a few moments to piece together what had happened; all the while the chaotic sounds of battle echoed around him. He had thought through his options and realised that if he had been left for dead, he could use the situation to his advantage and flee. Who would care about the traitorous former headmaster anyway? Most people would believe the Dark Lord himself had disposed of his dead body.
Grateful to find that he had still got the use of his voice, he had commanded the frightened elf to Apparate with him to his Cornish cottage, despite her protestations. The elf had had no choice but to comply, however, and after making sure the empty potion phials were retrieved, they had departed without further argument.
The elf had stood trembling in the middle of the lounge as the still blood-soaked Snape had lit a fire in the hearth and then collapsed in the arm chair. He had needed to think quickly about the future and how he was going to survive. His will would be sorted by the state. He would be able to live modestly from all the Galleons he had squirreled away over the years. And he'd already packed the pantry full with food, held fresh under a stasis charm, enough to last him at least a month, as well as a wardrobe full of clothes and some potion equipment and ingredients. What he had needed now was to make sure his new haven was kept a secret, with a spell stronger than the perfunctory measures he had taken so far. He had needed some way to make it untraceable. Unplottable, even.
Thanking once again his luck, his Slytherin cunning and his sharp wits, Snape had forced the elf to participate in a Fidelius charm in order to make the cottage Unplottable in much the same way the Order headquarters had once been. Once the charm had been completed, with his remaining energy he had cast a Disillusionment charm on himself before modifying the elf's memory. The elf, who had been clearly confused about her surroundings, had Disapparated immediately from the cottage, leaving Snape finally alone.
And his plan had worked. No-one had found him due to his inspired use of the Fidelius charm, and the Prophet had reported that he was amongst the fallen in the war. And no-one had even tried to contact him. Until, one year to the day after the Battle of Hogwarts, he had received a letter from Minerva McGonagall. He had been both surprised and annoyed that she had not simply assumed like everyone else that he had died. But Minerva had always been a stubborn witch, and she didn't give up too easily. And so he had received a letter from her every year since.
At least through her letters, he'd found out that it was she who had sent the elf. He had presumed it was Potter, but he hadn't dwelled on it too much. Why would he? He'd left that world behind him.
Snape now spent his days in solitude, either working on his own personal potions projects, reading, fishing, cooking, or studying. He was, more or less, happy. A quick glamour charm and some plain, dark Muggle clothing allowed him to wander into the village to withdraw money and buy groceries. Very occasionally, he might stop at the pub for a snifter of whiskey. But apart from those limited snippets of interaction with other people, Snape was essentially a hermit.
It was not often that he felt lonely, however. He was used to his own company and there were very few people, if any, whom he considered to be friends or whose company he wanted to be in. But he did want to keep up with the events that were going on in the Wizarding world, regardless of his absence. And for that reason, he had taken out subscriptions to both Potioneer Magazine and The Daily Prophet, using an alias.
Snape knew he'd never go back to living amongst wizards ever again. He did not want any supposed glory from his part in the war from Potter-fans or any comeback from pro-Voldemort supporters who had escaped doing time in Azkaban. He would certainly face a trial himself and could be put in Azkaban for Dumbledore's murder, no matter how necessary it had been for their plan to succeed. He was not going to risk incarceration when he had been incarcerated for the majority of his adult life by two masters.
He saw what had happened at Lucius Malfoy's trial through the reports in The Prophet. Of course, the slippery git would have got off with a few well-placed bribes thrown here and there, riding on the back of his wife's bravery during the battle. But Snape himself was convinced he would never have such luck. No matter who defended him or what witnesses were called to the stand, his record spoke for itself: a supposedly "reformed" Death Eater, let off once from the testimony of Albus Dumbledore, who then went on to kill the only person who had trusted him and who had, by all intents and purposes, been on Voldemort's side. Murder was murder, no matter what the circumstances. Even for the "greater good", he thought to himself with a curled lip. Harry Potter had tried defending him in the press, but Snape knew that the majority of people would be against him.
The scraping and tapping at the front window disturbed Snape from his reverie. After placing his cup of still-steaming Earl Grey down on the coffee table, he rose quickly, crossed the room and pushed open the tiny, dusty window. Two large, yellow eyes stared back at him, and Snape could not help but give a small smile. Just as he had expected, it was the delivery owl from The Daily Prophet; the same owl that had delivered his paper for the last two weeks in succession, in fact. He took the paper from the little owl's beak and pushed the window open yet further, inviting the owl to come in.
With a grateful hoot, the owl fluttered inside on to the window sill, where Snape always left a cup of water and leftover scraps from his breakfast for the occasion. This time, the owl was treated to some bacon rind, which she hastily devoured, and then took a long drink from the water Snape had provided. Once the owl was satiated, she ruffled her feathers and hopped back on to the outside ledge of the open window, allowing Snape to stroke the soft plumage of her head for a few moments before she took flight. He watched the owl soar up into the sky and away over the cliff tops before closing the window and returning to the comfort of his arm chair to settle down and read.
TRUNK-LOAD OF ILLICIT WANDS SEIZED IN MONTENEGRO, the headline announced on the front page. Snape frowned. Voldemort had spent much time in Albania over the years and had gained some influence in that part of Europe. Over the last couple of years, various Dark artefacts had been confiscated from the surrounding areas, and he wondered if it was part of a bigger picture somehow.
Still frowning, Snape turned the paper over to sports pages, wanting to catch up on the Quidditch news before sinking his teeth into what looked to be a very interesting front-page story indeed. Shaking the paper straight, he began to read.
AMAZING ARROWS SILENCE WASPS' BUZZ
It was near-perfect Quidditch conditions on Tuesday night for the match that everyone had been talking about since the start of the season: Lincolnshire's plucky Appleby Arrows seeking revenge for their last thrashing at the hands of long-term rivals, Dorset's mighty Wimbourne Wasps, writes Ginevra Potter, Senior Quidditch Correspondent.
The Arrows certainly looked relaxed with the advantage of playing at home, and the sell-out crowd was positively charged with expectation on what turned out to be a bright, crisp November evening.
After a shaky start and an early onslaught of goals by Wasps' rising star, Chaser Felicity Luckett, the Arrows soon settled into their stride and matched the Wasps goal for goal. The frantic pace showed that the Arrows have indeed upped their game since last season, undoubtedly bolstered by the Galleons invested by their new sponsors, the energy drink Avada Colada. New signings this season for the Arrows, Beater Marshall Mitchell and Chaser Ariane Smallwood, really began to show their worth after Mitchell's sterling defence against a volley of Bludgers from the Wasps almost threatened to interrupt the rally of goals. Some quick thinking and even quicker flying from Smallwood ensured the Arrows stayed on track.
A heart-stopping moment at around thirty minutes into the game saw Wasps' Seeker, Cho Chang, perform the Wronski Feint, but Arrows Seeker, Jono Abbott, impressively remained on his broom throughout. Shortly after, an accidental Bumph by Wasps' Beater Riley O'Reilly, currently on loan from the Ballycastle Bats, resulted in a penalty for the Arrows, easily taken by Luckett.
The match concluded after just under an hour's play, with Arrows Seeker Abbott turning out some spectacular flying, stealing the Snitch from under a frustrated Chang's nose, leaving the final score at 170-250. Arrows fought bravely for a well-deserved victory, and all eyes must surely be on the return fixture at home to Wasps next Spring. The competition for the cup is certainly hotting up, and the Arrows have proved that, if their luck holds, they are certainly one to watch this season.
Snape gave a faint snort, his lip curling involuntarily as he stared at the slow-motion picture of the two Seekers replaying the dramatic Wronski Feint. He still found it hard to believe that Ginevra Potter, the youngest of the Weasley clan he'd taught at Hogwarts, was the new Senior Quidditch Correspondent for The Daily Prophet. The girl was still in her twenties, for Merlin's sake! Admittedly, she'd had a short but nonetheless dazzling career as Chaser for the Holyhead Harpies and had been captained for England a handful of times. But still, in his eyes, it seemed wrong somehow that someone so young could be called "senior" at anything.
Of course, he thought sourly, lip curling even more, once she had agreed to start churning out offspring, sired by her tedious and now thankfully less famous husband, there was no way she could maintain the physically demanding role of a Quidditch player. It seemed to Snape that Ginevra Potter took after her mother in her eagerness to squeeze out filthy, mewling urchins. Three before the age of thirty. What a waste.
Oh yes. Snape knew about the Potters' children. He knew about their wedding, too. He might be living away from the Wizarding world but, thanks to The Daily Prophet, he could keep up to date with everything that was going on, including births, marriages and deaths. Potioneer Magazine indulged his hobby, but The Prophet was like a life-line to him, his only link to the world he'd left behind. The Daily Prophet had become his substitute for real human contact. The Prophet, however, was soon to play a far bigger role in Snape's life than he ever imagined, and the hermit life he had enjoyed over the past decade would never be the same again.
Snape, blissfully unaware of the events to come, sipped at his tea and continued to read in peaceful solitude.
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Latest 25 Reviews for A Second Chance For Happiness
167 Reviews | 8.14/10 Average
I LOVED this pairing, dear! The adultery thing did bother me a bit initially, tbh, but the realistic and aesthetic portrayal of things was a great help! Thanks for the roller-coaster ride which ended on a happy note for everyone, especially Severus! I solemnly swear to be a loyal (if somewhat inconsistent) reader of your fics!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
THANK YOU so much for taking the time to both read and review. I know the adultery theme isn't to everyone's taste, but I was hoping that by showing unhappiness on both sides that it lead to an understanding of WHY adultery might happen, rather than glorify it. And it had to be adultery if I wanted to remain as canon as possible. I am so glad that you enjoyed this story and stuck with it til the end, your reviews have put a big smile on my face :)
Engaging chapter. Btw... BOSTON BRAHMIN???!!!! Hehe... I am a Brahmin girl and have a cousin staying in Boston. Gotta pay more attention to her accent during her next visit to India!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Sending much love to India :)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Loads of love (and greetings! Yes, it's the festive season here :) ) in return, dear!
Hey! I did NOT notice the rearrangement of letters back then, though the choice of pseudonym certainly intrigued me (I mean, Nobel and all, LOL!) *hurries back to reading*
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
I'm glad it was a surprise :)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
You are indeed a product of your House! :P
Stack up more Polyjuice, Severus! :P
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Oh, he's going to have to make a whole barrel full! :p
I must confess that the quill is quite *pause, looks for the appropriate word* extraordinary!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Tricksy!
*jaw hits floor hard* Polyjuice??!!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Classic eh?
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
'Classic' would be an understatement!
Ah. He steps in. Finally!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Finally :)
Albus. Severus. Potter. Yes, that does sound bit of an oxymoron, doesn't it? :P
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
It's not the best of names is it? :p
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Most certainly not. The mere idea of 'Severus' beside 'Potter' sounds scary!
As a newly graduated doctor, I loved your description of the hospital scene! Very poignant, yet very realistic!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you, that's a huge compliment :)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Trust me, it's as hard for the doctor as it is for the mother. I found the Paediatrics (especially the Sick Newborn Care Unit) posting to be one of the toughest phase of my internship days... Watching so many children suffer (and even die) while you are forced to keep cool proved genuinely tough for me. So I can understand Ginny's pain, even if it is to a very tiny extent. ;(
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Trust me, it's as hard for the doctor as it is for the mother. I found the Paediatrics (especially the Sick Newborn Care Unit) posting to be one of the toughest phases of my internship days... Watching so many children suffer (and even die) while you are forced to keep cool proved genuinely tough for me. So I can understand Ginny's pain, even if it is to a very tiny extent. ;(
'Churning out offspring'... Like mother, like daughter! Thanks for the rec... I'm thoroughly intrigued!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Oooh you found this one! I'm so pleased you were intrigued!
Nice pseudonym! *HUGE GRIN*
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
*Bows*
Hooray for a happy ending! I think you did a nice job staying close to canon. I am a huge SS/HG shipper, but I will agree that the fandom is saturated with that pairing. It is nice to read something different every once in awhile. I don't believe you glorified adultery at all. Yes, Ginny's affair felt exciting, but I suspect that is the case in real life, or people wouldn't do it so often. It happens in the real world, why not in fic? I think you've done quite a nice job here.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you for your kind comments, I'm flattered that you took time out of your usual ship to read this and thrilled that you enjoyed it. Thank you.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you for your kind comments, I'm flattered that you took time out of your usual ship to read this and thrilled that you enjoyed it. Thank you.
I love that Harry and Ginny are amicable and even happier and more family oriented than before. I do hope that Snape is able to come out from hiding. Maybe it is nice and peaceful in his seclusion, but it will be hard on Ginny, I think, to not be able to be totally upfront about her relationship to others. I do like his solution so they can live together, yet not.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Glad you're enjoying how this is turning out. Thanks for leaving a note.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Glad you're enjoying how this is turning out. Thanks for leaving a note.
THank you for the happily ever after! Lovely
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank YOU, for reading and reviewing :)
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank YOU, for reading and reviewing :)
I wondered what that would be like adjusting to seeing Severus and not Alfric when they are in bed. Im glad you touched on that. Made things feel all the more realistic.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you, I'm glad it seemed plausible for you.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you, I'm glad it seemed plausible for you.
ACK I cannot beleive the personal questions the warlock asked! So prying. What would have happened if he would not have agreed to terminate the marriage? Goodness. I was on pins and needles the whole time!!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Yes, divorce is not made easy for either party! I think all three of them were relieved to get it over with.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Yes, divorce is not made easy for either party! I think all three of them were relieved to get it over with.
I almost dont want to read about the divorce. They have just admitted their love and now its going to get ugly and torrid in court. Nooooooo
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Sadly, it's the price they have to pay :(
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Sadly, it's the price they have to pay :(
Very good chapter. I hope this wasn't the end. I'm glad the divorce is done. I have liked this story a lot though in JKR's version I think Harry and Ginny would never end up here. She loved him since he was a child and family was always a deeo desire for him. But never the less i really love your take on this story. Iv'e only read one other SS/GW story and they have both been excellent. I look forward to more.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you for continuing to read. No, this is not the end, although there aren't many chapters left. I hope you'll enjoy how the story concludes. Thank you for your support even though this isn't your usual ship and the plot isn't quite what you'd expect - it means a lot to know you are still reading and enjoying it even though it's not to your usual taste.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you for continuing to read. No, this is not the end, although there aren't many chapters left. I hope you'll enjoy how the story concludes. Thank you for your support even though this isn't your usual ship and the plot isn't quite what you'd expect - it means a lot to know you are still reading and enjoying it even though it's not to your usual taste.
A very compelling drama! I am looking forward to how it all unfolds!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you very much!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you very much!
I am so relieved that things went okay, but it was so sad. I mean, there was no way I wanted Harry and Ginny to stay together, but it just finally felt so real, all of them there in one place, admitting that things would never work out. I think Harry is being very mature about all of this, and I hope that the title of the story goes for him as well. I was hoping for an interaction between he and Snape, only because I wonder if they would be civil or have a shouting match or what. Thanks for a new chapter so quickly. I hope there aren't too many bumps in the road as everyone puts their lives back together.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you! All I can say for now is trust me; I've already written the epilogue so I know how things turn out. I just need to get from here to there (and hopefully it won't take too long!) Thanks again for your support.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thank you! All I can say for now is trust me; I've already written the epilogue so I know how things turn out. I just need to get from here to there (and hopefully it won't take too long!) Thanks again for your support.
Oh, there is so much anger and resentment at the moment, and rightfully so, but at least Harry had the decency to let Snape off the hook.I will be quite interested to see how she breaks the news to him, and how he takes it. Hey, at least it gives them a reason to talk again.This makes me wonder, what happens if the second person in the affair doesn't show up in court? Or is there some way of making them appear? Doesn't matter, really, just wondering if he didn't have the option to just not show up. And would they then not be able to divorce?
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Oh yes, the next chapter is a humdinger! well, they woudn't be able to divorce if both parties didn't show up. It's a wizarding formality designed to prevent promiscuity ;)
Did that mean that she, Ginny Potter, was actually in love with and pining for Severus Snape? Yes yes YES it does! Dump Harry, grab the kids and move in. YIppeeeee!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Again, thank you for your support! *hugs*
I do hope that after Ginny calms down and has a chance to think on what he said she will give him another chance. ((sniffle))
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
All will be revealed, my dear :)
Lovely, poignant insight into the human condition as always and as always leaving us poor readers longing for more - update asap! Pretty please? They are all in such pain, blame, guilt and conflict - love it! Of course, I'm partial to Sev, how much more can he take? We know how *extreme* he can get sometimes... please hope he gets some relief... for better or worse, it seems Ginny holds that power...again, can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thanks for all your support nag, it means a lot :)
Ginny has some serious thinking to do. Well, more than she already has, anyway. Snape, while he is miserable, at least has no doubt in his mind what he wants. If she could see how much he is suffering, I wonder if it would make her decision easier or harder? I do hope she chooses to give him another chance. But what a thing to wrap her head around: being in love with Severus Snape.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Second Chance For Happiness)
Thanks for continuing to read. I hope you'll like where this goes.