As someone who has been there I can completely connect to Hermione. Of course I am fortunate to have a husband who stood by me instead of being the insensitve creep as seen in  this version of Ron. To not be able to bear a child when you want one so badly does sometimes seem like the end of the world. In the end adoption was the most wonderful solution ever and filled my heart a thousand times full. I hope somehow Hermione in your story finds a way to her family as well.

Poor Hermione,  I hope that Ron gets what's coming to him.

Yeah, well, she is better off without him.  I hope she realizes it sooner rather than later.  Update soon so I don't worry about her too much :)

Yikes. A very dark Ron, and sudden too. Disconcerting to say the least. Good writing, but Ron's sudden outburst was jarring. No history of violence- just suddenly this raw hatred?

Could you please serve me Rons head on a platter? I want to shove his broom up where  the sun don't shine, neuter him with a blunt fork and then hex him with painful boils that would never dissapear. I am at the same time happy that their relatioship is over, Hermione don't need that scumbag and though it hurts she is better of seeing his true face. She shouldn't be surprised if the redheadded prat had already cheated on her and was just looking for a way out to be with his brainless doting Lavender. I am totally hooked and I am very much looking forward for the next update:-))

very good so far.  I am intrigued.  This means I will keep reading. 

Poor Hermione, I feel terrible for what she has had to go through. I would really love to give Ron a  good thrashing for the way he treated her. Lavender deserves that jerk, she always just a dumb bint anyways. I really love this story and I look forward to reading more. Five stars plus more.