Until the Stroke of Twelve
Chapter 8 of 14
Grace has VictoryThe Prince came to meet her, and took her by the hand and danced with her, and he refused to stand up with any one else, so that he might not be obliged to let go her hand; and when any one came to claim it he answered, “She is my partner.” (Grimm)
ReviewedCHAPTER EIGHT
Until the Stroke of Twelve
"Hey Sally-Anne!"
For a moment I couldn't see Terry in the crowd because Stephen was cutting across him. Then Terry was grinning down at me, his square chin crushing the high collar of his grass-green dress-robe.
"You're here," he said. "So much for all the strange gossip about you!"
I smiled back at him. "Of course I'm here," I said. "I'm sure the gossip would make a great work of fiction. Are you having a good Christmas?"
We were still talking about how Terry's family celebrated Christmas (it turned out that his parents weren't Christians and they were highly bemused by his churchgoing) when Professor McGonagall called us into the Great Hall. Terry. I followed Megan and Wayne, who were apparently together after all, to a small table.
"Sally-Anne Perks!" There was nothing subtle about Cecilia's screech. "Sally-Anne, what are you doing here?"
Cecilia was draped in jade-green silk. Madam Black's pearls were wrapped three times around her throat, and her dark curls were cascading out of something silvery. She was leaning against Theodore Nott, a stringy boy who kept his hands in his pockets.
Terry replied easily. "Sally-Anne is favouring me with her company for the evening. What are you doing here, Cecilia?"
She ignored him. "Sally-Anne, you've just backed yourself into the world's smallest corner! Mummy told you not to come tonight."
I felt Terry's voice nuzzling my ear. The words sounded like, "Answer not a fool according to his folly..."
I laughed for no reason. "Cecilia, we're going to sit down now," I said. "Have fun with Theodore!" Somehow, that seemed a hollow thing to say, because Nott looked thoroughly bored by the whole exchange. I glanced their way again as I took the seat next to Megan, and Nott still looked bored; I wondered why he had invited Cecilia. Michael Corner sat down next to Terry and introduced his partner, an eccentric-looking blonde, and the Yule Ball had begun!
To my left, Megan and Wayne were whispering together in Welsh like lovers. Perhaps she liked him more than she was admitting. I hoped so, because he couldn't tear his eyes away from her. Next to them, Longbottom was apologising to a redhead. Michael was staring at Longbottom's partner as if his eyes would pop out of his head, and Michael's partner did not seem at all concerned about that; she was watching them as if they were actors on a theatre stage. Opposite me sat Tracey Davies, a sulky, curly-haired Slytherin, who was apparently Zacharias's dance-partner.
"Are you a good dancer?" she asked the blonde.
"No, dancing isn't really my thing. I trip over my own feet."
"Yet you bothered to turn up!" snorted Tracey. "Didn't anyone tell you the point of a ball?"
Ignoring this rudeness, the blonde serenely replied, "I've been looking forward to the company."
"So have I!" chimed in the redhead, smiling broadly at Longbottom. "But I love dancing too."
I exchanged a grin with Megan. I knew she couldn't wait to be let loose on the dance floor and nor could I.
But when the feast was cleared away, and a waltz finally soared out of the cello, we still couldn't dance, because the champions had to open the ball. My feet were tapping against their will as the four champions and their partners swayed across the hall (Harry Potter looked very uncomfortable). Terry winked at me and I blushed; I hadn't meant to be so obvious about my impatience. But why had we come to a ball, if not to dance?
The teachers followed the champions onto the floor (I was so glad that I wasn't dancing with Karkaroff or Snape!), and we were watching them for three long minutes before the exchange students from Beauxbatons and Durmstrang began to stand up. I hoped Terry would stand up next, and Wayne was trying to pull Megan onto the floor almost before the music changed, but before we could move, the floor was flooded with sixth- and seventh-years.
"Skank!" remarked Wayne to Michael. "Everryone is now equal, is it? Who did claim that?"
"This is us, Tracey!" shouted Zacharias.
Wayne and Megan followed them into the waltz. A crowd of our classmates swirled past. Terry stood up and held out his hand. As I took it, there was a final crash on the drums, and the music stopped!
The dancers clapped. The Weird Sisters began to play again.
Terry did not falter. "All right there is a time to dance! It's a jive."
I nodded, hoping that Aunt Odette's crystal shoes were strongly charmed, as the Weird Sisters accelerated their beat. "Jive," I whispered, almost mesmerised and then almost thrown off-balance as one foot lurched backwards. Terry's hand was strong around mine, so I let my other foot tap, then the first again... Then it hit me. The spell was working! The crystal shoes really did know the dance.
I relaxed as Terry swung me under his arm. The less I thought about it, the more forcefully the shoes bounced over the flagstones, and the less I tried to give the shoes any help, the more easily Terry and I were spinning after them. I dared to focus my eyes and found I was staring into Terry's. He looked surprised by the speed at which he was throwing himself towards me and then kicking away, but a happy flush was driving through his cheek as we twisted into an impossible position and then sprang away again. We whirled breathlessly between two Slytherin couples and all-but cartwheeled over a table before Orsino Thruston's cymbal sang a glass-shattering crash and the music abruptly halted.
My head was spinning and Terry's eyes were sparkling. "You're good at this! I'm amazed I kept up. Are you sure you've never had lessons?"
I was still gasping for breath. "Not me. It's my shoes a Christmas present." I lifted the hem of the blue-grey dress-robe to show him. "They have a dance-charm. I'm not sure how it works."
"Wow! The charm certainly works and apparently for your partner too. I didn't have to think about anything except keeping hold of your hand. Here we go they're starting up again." He grabbed my hand as Thruston rolled out a steady rhythm.
"Foxtrot," I said, recognising a piece I played on the piano.
The crystal shoes immediately swept across the floor even before Gideon Crumb's bagpipes picked up the melody. Step step trot-trot step step and-turn I relaxed in Terry's grasp, trusting that it didn't matter whether or not we knew the dance, because my shoes would carry both of us on the rhythm of the bagpipes. Terry's arms were around me in a ballroom hold, closer than the dance needed us to be, and I no longer noticed what our feet were doing because I couldn't look away from his brilliant blue eyes.
"You must have been practising!" I told him.
"No, I've never done it before apart from a couple of last-minute lessons with Madam Hooch. It's all coming from your shoes."
I glanced around the hall as Blaise Zabini and Daphne Greengrass sailed past us flawlessly, but they weren't speaking. I noticed that Geoffrey Hooper and Emma Spinks were staring into each other's eyes as they swayed on the spot, but that barely counted as dancing. William Stebbins and Sylvia Fawcett were executing the foxtrot moves with a determined correctness, but their only conversation seemed to be giggled apologies for their mistakes.
"Yes, it must be the shoes," I conceded. "Not many other people are managing to combine smooth dancing with meaningful conversation."
"Or perhaps they've nothing meaningful to say."
When the music stopped, we were lucky enough to finish up next to the refreshments table. Terry collected two glasses of fruit punch. Behind him, Theodore Nott ostentatiously asked for two tanks of mulled mead and passed one of them on to Cecilia without looking at her.
"That was impressive dancing, Perks," he said, yawning. "Would you like to dance the next one with me? Boot will agree to a partner-swap, I'm sure."
Cecilia's mouth dropped open, but Terry spoke before she could voice a protest.
"If I have a choice, I'd rather be faithful to my own partner. Sally-Anne promised to spend the evening with me."
I slid my hand through Terry's arm, feeling a little sorry for Cecilia.
"Possessive, are we?" asked Nott.
"Yes," said Terry and I together. I glanced sideways at him, suppressing a giggle, but he would not meet my eye until we were well clear of Nott and Cecilia. Music was rippling out of Herman Wintringham's lute, and soon we were galloping around the hall.
It was becoming a game. Terry and I didn't have to think about what we were doing, yet we seemed to be turning at double everyone else's speed. I waved at Megan and Wayne as they passed, but they didn't see us; they were panting to keep up with the rhythm.
"Oh, look at your friend Michael! I think he's enjoying himself!"
Michael Corner was staring into the eyes of Ron Weasley's sister, looking completely smitten. Terry swung me over a misplaced chair as if I were as light and limp as a rag doll did those crystal shoes make me weightless too? and then we swirled past a surprised Hannah and Ernie before we had time to recognise them. One couple who did seem to be fitting some conversation between elegant dancing was Justin and Susan.
"Justin must have had dancing lessons," I said. "He makes it look easy."
"But Anthony now, he's about my standard." Terry swung me almost down to a backbend and then caught me on the other side. "My standard when there are no magic shoes, I mean."
Morag MacDougal suppressed a wince as a happy Stephen, hopping like an excited puppy, stomped on her toe, and the dance was over.
"Oh, sorry, Morag! I'm not knowing why I "
"You're a good dancer, Sally-Anne," said Morag, ignoring him. "Where did you learn?"
"Yes, you're good," Stephen echoed. "Will you dance one with me? Perhaps I can pick up a few tips from you."
"Not tonight," said Terry. "Tonight Sally-Anne is my partner." He waited until Stephen had pulled Morag off to the refreshments before asking, "You didn't want to dance with Cornfoot, did you?"
"No! Not unless it would be doing a favour to Morag. But she really doesn't seem to mind about the foot-stamping. Morag's like that with Stephen." Everyone knew that Morag and Stephen, who were first cousins, had nothing whatever in common, yet they loved one another with the fierce devotion of Highland clansmen. It was Morag's life-work to keep Stephen out of trouble, and Stephen's life-game never to notice that any kind of trouble existed.
The next dance was a progressive, so for a couple of turns I did end up sacrificing my toes to Stephen's feet (the crystal shoes blocked out most of the sensation). After twenty minutes of being skilfully turned by Justin, firmly held by Ernie, wonderingly followed by Anthony Goldstein, exuberantly swirled by Dean Thomas, enthusiastically clapped by Seamus Finnigan, experimentally stroked by Zabini, experimentally poked by Crabbe, and greasily breathed over by Pucey, I couldn't wait to run back to Terry. My stepsister Ursula, festooned in a low-cut emerald velvet, grabbed possessively at Pucey and kissed him in full public view. I took no notice of whatever she was saying to him, or of the boys who were shouting across the hall to each other.
"So much for being faithful!" said Terry. "Come on, it's a schottische next. This might be my only chance ever to dance one properly!"
We were having so much fun dancing the schottische that at first I didn't notice who was standing behind Terry. I barely registered that he shrugged off a tap on his shoulder. Only at a second, more insistent tap did we pause our dancing to look up at Pucey.
"May I cut in here?" he asked.
"Sorry," said Terry. "You'll have to wait your turn and ask like a gentleman."
Pucey did his best to take a gentlemanly tone. "I should particularly like to dance with Miss Perks now." He held out his hand. "I'm sure Sally-Anne does not mind."
My head was shaking before I knew what I was doing. I did mind and I didn't really care if it was rude to say so, since I was fairly sure that Pucey didn't even like me. What was his game? Before I could frame my objection, Terry's arm was around my waist.
"Nice try, Pucey," said Terry. "But Sally-Anne is my partner for the night. I'm not giving anyone else a turn." When Pucey did not move, Terry and I walked away.
As soon as we found a spare space, Ursula stepped into it. "You're Queen of the Midden tonight, Sally-Anne Perks," she said. "You even feel you can afford to brush off the Puceys."
"If that was brushing off, then Adrian Pucey brushed off the Boots first," I said.
"Ha!" Ursula cawed mirthlessly, and her eyes narrowed with anger. "There are no Boots. But there are Puceys, and you have offended them! Whatever will Mummy say when she hears what scuts you prefer?"
"Yes, I do prefer my own partner," I said. "Why did you want me to dance with yours anyway?"
Ursula's cheeks became even redder, but she did not reply.
"Anyway, we want to dance," said Terry. He took my hand and swept me back into the first clearing among the dancers.
Most couples were dancing happily without worrying about other people's business. Eddie Carmichael was dipping a pink-faced Sophie, and Mandy Brocklehurst's hair was flying loose as Robert Rivers swung her.
"You can tell that Sally-Anne's had dancing lessons," said someone behind me, but I never looked back to find out who.
The crystal shoes led us through a dreamy minuet and a breathtaking gavotte before I gasped, "I really must take a rest now!"
"Don't you want to try the bourée? It's said to be the most difficult dance of all."
"Hush, don't say the name of the dance out loud, or the magic shoes might not give us a choice!"
"You could always take them off." Terry handed me a Butterbeer and we sat down to watch the brave dancers who wanted to attempt the bourée.
The girl on the next chair suddenly jumped up with a furious scowl on her face: it was Ursula. "Come on, Adrian!" she hissed to Pucey. "We're dancing!"
"Was there a pin on Ursula's chair?" asked Terry.
"No, it was because of me. She doesn't like me, remember? She's angry that I even turned up tonight."
"And that you snubbed her partner by refusing to dance with him," Terry remembered. "Why would your stepsister's boyfriend leave her to ask you?"
"I don't know if he's a real boyfriend." I considered for a moment. "They certainly seemed to be cooking up something together. I think Ursula might have told him to ask me. But if I had danced with Pucey, Ursula would have complained that I'd stolen her escort."
"Now she'll just have to complain that you dance with Muggle-born riffraff."
"But if I'd come to this ball with a pure-blood, then I'd have been in trouble for reducing the pool of eligible bachelors available to the pure-blood girls."
"Some people are never satisfied," Terry agreed. "Your family does seem to be taking this ball very seriously. Did I miss something? I thought this dance was just for fun."
"I think Ursula's friends see it as their first step into polite society, so they have to be seen with a prestigious partner."
"What do witches and wizards do," asked Terry, "when they don't want to enter polite society?"
I laughed. "Grow up normal, I expect! Work for a living. What do you want to be when you leave Hogwarts?"
"A healer or potioneer perhaps a spellcrafter. Any career that makes the world a better place. What about you?"
"I'd like to do something that makes people comfortable at home. Write cookery books or sell children's clothes or design furniture... No, there's no money in that. If you want to work in furniture or spellcrafting in lots of trades, really you have to know someone who's already in the business. They give all the jobs to their friends' children."
Terry looked disconcerted for a minute, then he laughed. "I have a lot to learn about wizarding society. How do Muggle-borns usually get jobs?"
"By brain-power. They earn Ministry positions or set up their own businesses. If they can't do either of those, they find menial jobs in the large firms in Spencer's or Woolman's or Cloaca Harington."
We spent so long discussing the workings of wizarding society and the difference that it might or might not make to know the right people that we nearly missed the call for a Conga. William Stebbins was pulling Sylvia Fawcett into line while Seamus Finnegan and Lavender Brown raced straight past us, and the musicians repeated, "Come on, everyone Conga!"
Terry put his hands on my hips, and I put mine on Michael Corner's. At the front of the line, Professor Dumbledore kicked up his heels, while Professor Flitwick clung to his robes, his feet completely missing the floor. The crystal shoes began to shuffle, then to kick an instant ahead of the beat, and Harold Dingle yelled.
"They raise their voices and shout for joy," Terry whispered in my ear. "Wait for the dominoes to topple."
When the Conga collapsed, Blaise Zabini was hovering near me.
"You are a charming dancer, Miss Perks," he said. "Have you forgotten that you originally promised to go to this ball with me? Come, make up for lost time and give me this final dance."
Terry and I looked at each other with suppressed smiles. I took Terry's arm, wondering if there was any point in even replying. Then a furious Daphne Greengrass marched up and seized Zabini's shoulders. A scowl crossed his face, but he hastily wiped it.
"You're popular tonight!" Terry whispered, taking me in a ballroom hold. "Is this dance a Strathspey?"
"Perhaps Aunt Odette put a popularity spell on the shoes," I said. "We're lucky that this is a Strathspey, or we'd be dancing the wrong steps by now."
"No, it isn't the shoes. You always were... er... the best sort of person!"
"So were you," I replied automatically.
As we floated away on the wafts of the Strathspey, I wondered what it would be like to be all grown up and married to someone like Terry. For a moment, I understood why some of the older girls had already decided whom they were going to marry. It made sense of why my stepsisters were taking this ball so seriously, even though I couldn't imagine why anyone would want to marry Nott or Pucey. But Terry... There would be lots and lots of girls who wanted to marry Terry...
The music faded away at the slow tolling of a clock. It was midnight, and the Yule Ball was over. We stopped dancing, and most people seemed to be clapping. Terry was smiling at me, his eyes still dancing. On the final stroke of twelve, a cold breeze whistled through my bare shoulders.
Bare?
Terry's face was startled, and as I glanced down, I saw that my skirt was orange.
The beautiful blue-grey robes had vanished. My pumpkin-gold skirt was once again knee-length at the front, calf-length at the back. The sleeves had disappeared. There was only the sleeveless bodice's halter-neck...
... The indecently low-cut bodice. It wasn't really a neckline at all, just a split bodice.
No wonder Terry was shocked. I might as well be standing there naked! I wanted to run, but my feet were rooted to the floor.
"Accio!" Terry's soothing voice was penetrating my embarrassment, and a tablecloth from the punch table sailed through the air. "Here, wrap this around yourself. Those corridors are chilly. Was that costume really all charm-work?"
I nodded as I draped the punch-stained tablecloth over my shoulders.
"I'm impressed! That was a stunning constellation of charms, and it looked so real. I don't know why the other girls wasted their worldly mammon on dress-robes tonight a few charms would have scrubbed up the school uniforms to Twilfitt standards."
I had to laugh at that. I couldn't imagine dancing in the school merino; I would stew in my own perspiration. Whereas now I was shivering...
The hall was emptying around us. The Weird Sisters were packing away their instruments; only a few students were brash enough to try to prolong the ball artificially. Blaise Zabini was marching straight past us without glancing left or right, but his shoulder gave mine a hard shove as he passed, and I stumbled. Terry caught me.
"Anything wrong, Zabini?" asked Terry for Zabini had stopped a few paces ahead and was glowering at us.
"Go to Hell."
"Can't," said Terry cheerily. "I've already been assigned elsewhere. Can we help you with anything?"
Zabini's reply was so rude that I didn't properly understand it; but Terry steered me across the deserted hall, looking even more embarrassed than I had been when my dress-robe charms broke, so I didn't ask about it. I let him take me into the Entrance Hall as far as the Hufflepuff door, where we both stopped, a little uncertainly. My heart was beating and for a moment I was shy of Terry.
"Good night," I said, recovering my manners. "I've had a wonderful time. Thank you so much for being my partner."
"Thank you for being mine. It was a good party."
"Yes, it was. Do you think they'll hold another one next year?"
He shrugged. "If not, we'll just have to find ourselves a school-holidays ball. Good night!" He tapped my arm lightly and disappeared up the main staircase. I opened the Hufflepuff door, savouring his words as I tripped down to the cellars. Another ball! Next year! Even if we had to look for one! I might not have found the right dormitory if my friends' voices had not been echoing beyond the barrel-top door.
"So do tell us, Susan," Megan was saying. "Did Justin kiss you?"
"Of course not; we only went as friends. But we had a lovely time together! Megan, do you want to tell us about Wayne? Did he kiss you?"
"He did try to," said Megan meaningfully, "but I did take it on the cheek. Hannah..."
As I opened the door, Hannah, Susan, Megan and Sophie were half-undressed and combing out each other's hair. Hannah was blushing and gave a tell-tale nod.
"But, goodness, I can't have been thinking! We have to share lessons together next term... I hope we'll still be friends! Sophie, did you... Did Eddie...?"
We never found out whether Eddie had kissed Sophie, because at that moment, they all saw that I had entered. Instead of replying to Hannah, Sophie asked, "Sally-Anne, why are you wearing a tablecloth?"
"Oh." I slid it off, to reveal the pumpkin-gold cocktail dress.
Susan groaned. "It's my fault. I'm sorry! I was thinking so hard about the charm needing to last until midnight that I ended up making one that lasted only until midnight."
"It's all right. Terry thought it was a really good charm."
"Oooh, Terry," said Megan. "So tell us. Did he kiss you?"
"Sally-Anne!" interrupted Sophie. "Yer've lost a shoe. Why 'as only one of them glass shoes survived midnight?"
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13 Reviews | 5.15/10 Average
This has been a really cute story. Thank you for the enjoyment.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
You're welcome! Thank you for writing in. GhV
A different twist than I expected. I thought you might bring her and Terry back together, but apparently not. That rather spoils the ball and prince metaphor, but oh well. How did a fresh Hogwarts graduate manage to buy and set up her own shop? A little implausible. An enjoyable read in general, good work.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Dear HJS,I did warn you about that twist! I decided that Terry and Sally-Anne were fundamentally incompatible, so the "triumph of love" with which a Cinderella story must end was moral and not romantic.Sally-Anne didn't get her own shop until she was 21. Sorry if I didn't write that clearly. But she spent the two years after she left Hogwarts mixing potions part-time at home and networking with Muggle retailers. It took her the whole of that time to accumulate enough capital to set up her own shop, and then it was a very small one - she didn't employ an assistant until she had her first baby. But she always ran at a modest profit, and she did indeed "make people more comfortable at home".Thanks for reading and for writing in,GhV
Response from HermioneJeanSnape (Reviewer)
I didn't mean Sally-Anne's shop, I meant Megan's. Terry did seem a bit too stiff and self-righteous for her. He was quite obnoxious.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Ah, Megan... Well, there wasn't room to tell her story here. She receives a little financial back-up from her brother Emrys, who is both a big earner and a big spender. She later marries a wizard a few years older than herself (a Welshman, of course) and he has savings. Her business in fact grows larger than Sally-Anne's because Megan's personality is better suited to tough business decisions.Yes, Terry is somewhat "stiff", because he has secrets to keep, i.e. the D.A., and Sally-Anne has no way of knowing that. An older man might manage to be more tactful about the whole business, but Terry isn't. (If he had been, there wouldn't have been any story!)In fact, I meant Sally-Anne to be the more self-righteous of the two, but of course the reader hears her point of view, while Terry's isn't stated. Before chapter 13, Sally-Anne has no concept of grace so she doesn't at all understand Terry's confidence, which isn't based in himself. Once she stops trying to justify her own actions (loses the self-righteous attitude), Terry is out of the story, so we still don't hear his point of view. That was a deliberate authorial decision, because I didn't want to use a work of light fiction as a vehicle of proselytisation.Some readers would have liked to see Terry and Sally-Anne reconciled romantically, but given their extreme youth, I thought they would both do better to find new partners. For the record, Terry marries a Muggle doctor.
What is Blaise up to? Is this his new bet? Or does he like Sally Anne? Neat story.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Two interesting guesses - but, no, Blaise's sole motivation is to annoy Cecilia. He knew all along who owned the shoe, but he was hoarding it in case it came in useful to him. In terms of Cinderella parallels, Blaise is a kind of Anti-Prince.
This is an interesting perspective on the reaction of the wizarding public to the possible return of Voldemort.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Thank you. I'm sure I wouldn't want to believe it...
A friend who is a divorce attorney always says you can't count on people to be reaonable when it comes to kids or money. I've enjoyed this.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Thank you. You can't count on Cressida to be reasonable, full stop.
Cloaca Harington! you really have a gift for the names!
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Congratulations on understanding the joke.
wow, WHAT a cinderella story...beetles mixed with spiders...
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Perhaps easier than ashes mixed with cinders? But still a very spiteful move from the Wicked Stepmother.
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
I never heard the ashes mixed with cinders bit! the version I know has lentils mixed with millet. cinders would HURT!
Syrinx Greengrass...what a name! clever :)god, I feel so bad for Sally-Anne. I can only hope that at some point she can stand up for herself!
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Sally-Anne is very much like her mother, who hasn't exactly excelled in assertiveness. You know how the plot of this story has to go: Cinderella waits around to be rescued. But I might just change the ending!I credited Daphne Greengrass with three sisters, all of them named after nymphs from Greek mythology. Of course, JKR knows best, and the third sister is actually "Astoria". But there isn't much to my "Syrinx" OC - she's just an older and bossier Daphne.
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
I just like the name Syrinx. It reminds me of the flute piece by that name. I don't mind if Sally-Anne waits around to be rescued. But in the original Cinderella (or what I think of as the original) the stepfamily ends up a little bit maimed, and cinderella still invites them to the wedding but they refuse to go. I would kind of want Sally-Anne to draw the line somewhere. I mean, she kind of is being abused. can't she do something about that once she reaches her majority? and what about her father? I feel like there ought to be some sort of resolution with him, because Sally-Anne IS so loyal (what a hufflepuff!) but her dad doesn't respond in kind.
Hufflepuffs make lovely fairy godmothers.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Thank you! There is no fairy godmother in the Grimms' version of the story, only birds who magically produce clothes. But the Hufflepuff girls are indeed behaving rather like Perrault's Fairy.
This is an interesting idea. Here they are in the same class as Harry Potter and all these things are happening but stuff is happening in their lives as well. Everyone has their own problems. There is a world outside of Gryffindor tower.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Thanks for writing in,
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
. Interesting readers in the word outside Gryffindor Tower can be a challenge - so thank you for taking the time to read.
wow. I love your story--I often wonder about the characters like Sally-Anne who aren't really seen much in canon. and private family life isn't really discussed either. you navigate all the questions I have with such panache--like, how exactly do you do the laundry in a magical household, and stuff. the only thing is--I don't entirely understand why no one can afford to annoy Cressida. what am I missing? I recognized the name Runcorn, but what hold does Cressida have over the Perks family?
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Thanks for writing in, mock turtle (I love your user-name!). JKR does give us a few brilliant glimpses of Mrs Weasley cookiing & etc., but she leaevs us to imagine most of it. I just put in the laundry details as padding; I'm flattered that you found them interesting. Cressida is one of these people who always gets her own way by sheer force of personality. After Flavian had an affair with her, he thought (because he's lazy) it would be less trouble to marry her than to dump her. Cressida is somewhat insecure (you know what her first husband was like, and she received little real support from her parents) so she asserts herself by being spiteful to weaker people. Muggles like Raymond are helpless; Julia cannot appeal to the law because she has no money; and children have few real rights anywhere when their abusers are their own parents. So Cressida is supreme for now, but the tables could be turned as the children grow up.
I really liked your story; it was interesting and new in a lot of ways. I feel kind of let down by the last chapter, though. I know it's a "happily ever after" part, but chapter 13 has so much life, so much emotion! It's really hard to go from reading that to chapter 14, where you tell us just what happened, tie everything up neatly. There's no action, no dialogue, no scene really. I was actually kind of confused at the end of the last chapter as to why sally-anne was going to spend what would have been her 6th year at home with her mother. was it just to save money? why did 6th year become the breaking point? I feel like everything that happens in this final chapter ought to have been played out over the course of several chapters! It's just, the tone of this final chapter is very different than all the ones that came before it, and I don't understand why you chose to do it that way.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Dear mock turtle,Thank you for your loyal reviewing throughout this story. Perhaps I should have labelled that final chapter as "epilogue"? I felt that all the real action finished at the end of chapter 13, when Sally-Anne faced reality. All the basic conflicts (family dysfunctions, political duty, moral and spiritual issues, romance) were played out in the Hogwarts chapel. And I'm so pleased that you appreciated the "life" of that chapter!Sally-Anne stayed at home in 1996-7 because it seemed the best way to fight Voldemort. (Remember, there's no D.A. in HPB - the only really important event is the relationship between Harry and Dumbledore.) You also need to understand British education laws - you CAN'T leave school before the end of fifth year, but sixth and seventh year are entirely optional, and around 70% of Muggles make the choice to leave at that point (with the O.W.L.s safely in hand). Wizards seem to be under more pressure to stay on for the full seven years, but leaving once they have their O.W.L.s in hand must still be an appealing option in some cases. In Sally-Anne's case, yes, her mother's financial situation was one reason, but not the most important one.I'm very flattered that you wanted more chapters, but Sally-Anne aged 16-22 would have made a rather dull story because the dramatic conflict for those years just wasn't in my head.
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
Dear GhV,Thanks for your explanation of British education laws...you're right, I know next to nothing about them. I'm from California :) I guess I don't know how much wizarding school would parallel the muggle school code, but for the purpose of your story it's great. (I get really hung up on the details, like, how DO wizards learn math? especially ones who don't go to muggle school? so many wizards are so clueless about muggles that not many of them seem to go to muggle school. also, you put music lessons into your story, which made me happy). Really? 70% of people leave school when they're 15? I guess I don't know what the percentage is in America but the consensus here is that you will not amount to much if you don't go on to University so the statistics don't really get talked about much...if you drop out of high school it's kind of considered a failure. At least in my community. (I mean, I think a lot of people still do leave high school before they get their diploma, it's just that your options are very limited. Oftentimes you can't even really support yourself.)I think the particular things I wanted you to write more about after the end of ch 14 were Sally-Anne's final year at Hogwarts when she was forced to go back (had she finished coming to terms with terry ignoring her? what was it like to be a hufflepuff in the school during that year? it seemed like a lot of drama!) and Christopher and Jeremy, the stepbrothers, b/c Jeremy married a girl from hogwarts (I suppose that's a separate story but I want to know how their romance went. It's different, I think, than Seamus's parents' story b/c he knows she's a witch when he marries her).I think it's really interesting that there is a whole religious side to your story. I have often wondered (since there was such an outcry against harry potter from the religious fundamentalists in america) what it would be like to discover that you are a muggle-born witch or wizard in a highly religious family. what kind of personal struggle would that be? and were witches and wizards ever particularly christian, considering the historical witch burnings? your version in Hearthlinks is a fascinating one.
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Dear MT,I hope the Petulant Poetess will overlook it if we use her forum board to continue this rather complex discussion. You do ask such good questions!Regarding the parallels between Hogwarts and the British Muggle system: They are so strong that they must be deliberate. JKR was openly and obviously describing and parodying the 1970s system under which she was educated. I was also born in 1965, so I recognised it instantly.Most people are 16 by the end of fifth year. (Harry, having a July birthday, is still 15, but 5/6 of his classmates are already 16 when they take their O.W.L.s.) Sixteen is the minimum school leaving age in Britain - anyone who tries to drop out before then is inviting the police and the social workers around to their home. The O.W.L.s (which Muggles called the Ordinary Levels back in the 1970s, but which are now called the G.C.S.E.s) are effectively the school leaving certificate. Students who leave school with the G.C.S.E. are able to take an apprenticeship, secretarial course, etc.Universities in Britain were traditionally only for the "academic" types. In the 1970s, the government paid your fees; as long as your Advanced Levels (N.E.W.T.s) were good enough, you could enter a university at age 18 and emerge with your Honours degree three years later. But now there is the push to give more and more students the tertiary opportunity - fully 30% - the government only loans the fees. There is talk that standards have lowered in order to accommodate students of lower ability, but I don't know whether that is true or whether students and lecturers have simply been forced to work harder.Regarding wizards learning maths, I think the short answer is - they don't. Obviously they have had seven years of primary education before they started Hogwarts, and I imagine wizards are supposed to bring their children to the same standard as the Muggle state schools. But I think most wizards can only do maths at the same level as a Muggle 11-year-old. Even Arithmancy doesn't seem to require a much higher standard than that - and the majority of wizards struggle with this subject.I think the 1997-8 year at Hogwarts would be a great story, and many fanfic writers have attempted it, but the whole theme just seemed too grandiose for me to begin. Sally-Anne had accepted by then that Terry was not the man for her, and her commitment was to defeating Voldemort without being sidetracked by boyfriends. (What Americans call "dating" doesn't really happen in Britain.)Jeremy's future wife, Mary Fenwick, features in my series The Moon-Cursers, especially the final volume, The Banebrewer. She probably would make a very interesting subject for a romance, but I'm afraid I haven't thought ahead to the details. I just think that a lot of Wizard/Muggle marriages involve the Muggle sibling of a Muggle-born, because meeting your sibling's friends is a natural way to find your spouse.One of these days, I will finish writing the story of Seamus's parents, but I encountered a creative block just when I reached the honeymoon - we were about 24 hours from the Great Reveal, and I completely blanked out!Regarding the "religious side"... Well, you couldn't find a more blatant, in-your-face-obvious Christ-figure than Harry Potter himself. As a matter of literary style, JKR couldn't write convincingly about her symbolic Christ-hero in a book where some of her characters also talked about Christianity as a separate force - either of historic interest or as a spiritual factor. So she just didn't tell us about the specific religious beliefs of individual characters. It's fairly clear, of course, that Harry himself, whose mind we read, has none. However, I infer from what little she has said that wizards have exactly the same religions and non-religions as Muggles.It's interesting that you raise the dilemma of the Muggle-born religious in this column, because that's exactly the situation of Terry Boot. Although his parents are ordinary English Agnostics, he was a childhood convert to Christianity. I have always assumed that the problem of magic would be bigger for angry, book-burning Fundamentalists (of whom we have hardly any in Britain) than it would be for the young wizard himself. Terry knows intuitively that his mysterious powers have nothing to do with nature-worship. They are more like an alternative technology - much as electricity would have looked like witchcraft in the Middle Ages. It's clear that the Hogwarts version of magic has nothing to do with religion, especially not with Pantheism; real neo-Pagans claim to have cringed at the way the Hogwarts staff so crudely break the Pagan ethical codes and ignore spirituality.There were no witch-burnings in Britain - we only hanged the filthy Quislings who appeared to have sold out to Satan! And only in periods of social chaos when a scapegoat was needed. The Catholic Church published a formal report to the effect that witches did not exist as early as the twelfth century. Despite this, until the year 1700, almost every society in the world periodically persecuted witches, including Animistic societies. While this doesn't excuse the Christians, it does highlight that the conflict was not a specifically Christian one. In JKR's world, no real witches were ever caught, so I think they would have stood on the sidelines, weeping (or laughing) at Muggle stupidity. Wizards knew that, while safe, they were the real targets, and they also knew that evil wizards really might have been responsible for some of the social disasters, so I think they would have understood the Muggle fear of the supernatural. I don't know whether they would have blamed their society's religious beliefs for the persecution, given that the wizards themselves probably shared whatever was the dominant belief. A great deal depends on the amount of diversity permitted by a given culture and on the level of education of the individual wizard.I've probably confused more than I've clarified, but that was the kind of thinking that underpinned Hearthlinks. Thanks for your support,GhV
This was enjoyable and interesting, and a bit of a twist on the Cinderella story, adding witchcraft. You make stepmothers sound awful!!The story is good at exploring the interlinking between magical and muggle, and also at giving a wider view of the Hogwarts population than Harry does in the books.I think Sally-Anne was a bit harsh on herself (as was Terry) for feeling that she was selfish for putting her family first and not feeling up to fighting Voldemort. She is only 15,and she puts in an amazing amount of hard work to try and keep them together. Yes, she does it because she loves them and wants a happy family. But the reasons she gives as selfish motivations are basically the same as Harry has for fighting Voldemort. I liked your Christian twist, because though it doesn't fit into the books and isn't relevant to Harry, I personally know that my beliefs got me through my teenage years and its nice to see how it can be dealt with alongside magic (despite claims that HP is evil!) I didn't think Terry's attitude was very Christian however; he just began to ignore her and that was it, without even letting her understand why, but again, I suppose that can be attributed to age.I also enjoy that this follows the UK school system. I usually find myself getting irritated at an over-americanisation of Hogwarts, when in the books JKR is clearly basing the magical on the UK muggle!One query though, you mention S Capper as if we've met him already in the story but I can't find him - have I missed something?
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
Dear
Response from Grace has Victory (Author of Hearthlinks)
,I'm so flattered that anyone is still reading this story! There isn't much to be said for Cressida as stepmother, is there? I hope I showed Julia as a more reasonable one, and of course you shouldn't take Cecilia's perception of the second Mrs Runcorn as objective.I think Sally-Anne was by far a better person than her father or stepmother for trying so valiantly to hold her family together. But it really wasn't her job to fix her parents' mistakes, and her "family first" attitude had very quickly become "family only". The truth was, her family didn't need her time while the D.A. did. Everyone has some faults, and Sally-Anne needed to face up to hers before she could move on.What the reader knows - but Sally-Anne doesn't - is that Terry is bound by a magical contract never to mention the D.A. So he can't explain the reason he is breaking up with her, i.e. that it wasn't possible for him to be close to someone who had opted out of this dangerous secret. He botched it, of course; he ought to have given her some kind of better explanation for what he was doing, and maybe even offered her a second chance later. But he was only 15, and boys of that age aren't always tactful.Since Terry is a Muggle-born, there is more about him, his faith and his family in a forthcoming episode of Magic in my Tree.S. Capper appears only once in canon. He (or she?) is one of a number of Hogwarts students who checked out Quidditch through the Ages: you can read this name in the back of the book. I don't mention him any earlier in Hearthlinks because Sally-Anne didn't notice him during her Hogwarts years!I must confess to being irritated by fanfic Americanisations of Hogwarts as I've been a teacher as well as a student in the British system; but we mustn't be xenophobic. It's very difficult for American readers to grasp just how the British system is different because Americans haven't the first idea which questions to ask. Seven years at high school? Three terms a year? Summer holidays starting in July? No weekly percentage gradings? No graduation? Only three years to the Muggle undergraduate degree? Who would have guessed??
Response from Tilly (Reviewer)
I hadn't read any of your stories before MIMT, but I expect I'll make my way through most of them now!Yes, I agree that everyone has faults and must face up to them, however I still feel Sally was harsh on herself given her age and circumstance. Of course, as the author you have so much more backstory and this gives you a bit of a leg up on the perspective side! As a reader we can only see Sally-Anne and its easier to sympathise with her because of this. I also found her a sympathetic character because she is so quick to forgive and slow to judge. I found Terry to be quite judgemental in this story, based on his actions to Sally-Anne, so I look forward to seeing him from another perspective in MIMT. I am still inclined towards feeling that these students are children, and the level to which they are expected and encouraged to participate in war is inappropriate (at least in real life, in fiction it makes for an excellent story). I expect this also colours my judgement of Terry and Sally-Anne.As for the Americanisms, I hope its not xenophobic to be irritated! I have read many amazing fics by Americans and other nationalities which have had a good grasp of the UK education system, and fics by Brit authors which have a woeful one, so I think what really irritates me most is lack of accuracy. The American angle just jumps out however because we watch so much of their TV!Ps-thanks for the S Capper info too :)