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Faith of the Fallen
BulletTimeScully79 Reviews | 6.16/10 (79 Ratings, 0 Likes, 33 Favorites )
In a world ruled by Darkness, two souls find solace in each other.
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BulletTimeScully
Member Since 2009 | 15 Stories | Favorited by 61 | 109 Reviews Written | 284 Review Responses
There's not much to say, really. I'm a thirty year-old mother of three, married for seven years, I live in the Southeastern US, I'm a newly graduated Registered Nurse, and I'm absolutely enthralled with Severus Snape. It was my love for Alan Rickman that inititally brought me to love the character of Snape so much, and I adore everything he (Alan Rickman) has ever done, stage or screen. I've been in the fandom for around three years now, and have loved every minute of it.
Reviews for Faith of the Fallen
Interesting read! Not much for DE Hermione but if I was this story would be it, you write it well. Wasn't sure if you were still active or not but I was curious about the story title and whether this story was inspired by Goodkind's series at all? Or did you just like the title and thought it fit your story as well? Was just wondering! :-)
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Hi! Man, it's been literally years since I first posted this story (or what I managed to finish of it). It was my very first attempt at FF, and I think I got myself in over my head. :D But thank you for the review, even though it's been 88 years since I've been around! The title was inspired by Goodkind's series, yes, and I thought it was a good theme for the story. But that's where the similarities end. Hopefully one day I can find the inspiration to finish this epic, which is sitting in pieces in my laptop. Thanks so very much and I'm thrilled that you liked it!
Response from DarkenCoul (Reviewer)
Goodkind's series is my most faavorite ever so the title caught my eye. If you do ever come back to it I definitely think its a story worth finishing! :-)
What an incredible story! I know it's been 3 years but I hope you will update. I'm on pins and needles!
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
It's been SO LONG I KNOW. I literally haven't posted anything in years, and for that I apologize to the people that enjoy my stories! The Muse left one day and never came back, but I've been thinking about jumping back in. SSHG was my first FF family, and I love all of you! And I miss you! So thank you so much for the review! 'm thrilled that you liked it! I'll do my best to drag the rest of this story up out of the dusty crypts of my laptop and get it finished one day!
This story has me in tears. I feel her fury and frustration, and his sorrow and determination. You are a wonderful writer and an amazing artist. You have me hooked!
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thank you so much! I know I haven't been around much, but I haven't lost my love for these two. Hearing that you guys are still reading gives me inspiration to continue my stories.
I'm still here and I still love this story! I'll PM you on LJ. Can't wait to see what happens next. I've missed you! Hope to chat soon! <3
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
HIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!! *tackle hugs* I'm still here... although sadly, very infrequently. I haven't lost my love for these two or this story, or for you guys! I'm looking to have some free time coming up after first of the year (in the form of one day off work every week, completely to myself), so hopefully that'll let me get back into the swing of writing. Thanks so much Toby! Love you!!!
Response from Toblass (Reviewer)
Hey Scully! PM me when you start getting the sshg feels again. I miss our brainstorming sessions. Hope you are well! ~Toby
*hugs you big time* And just where the heck have you been? I thought I was the only one having a very busy and sometimes frustrating RL. I was blown away when I got an email telling me that this had been updated! Woo hoo! After their meeting with Dumbledore and Harry'n Ron, Hermione came close to a total meltdown, but I don't blame her one bit! Ron is such a loser. I'm more convinced than ever that there is a good chance he might find himself on a sticky wicket while they're in Albania. If he's lucky Severus might save his arse in the nick of time (after letting him sweat a little).I wonder which Horcrux Harry and Ron found? And how difficult it will be to destroy it... It has begun.Welcome back!Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
I know, I know... *hangs head in shame* RL has been... full, is all I can say. :) But it warms my heart to see you guys still here and reading this behemoth of a story. It's been four years now since I first started on Faith, and it may take me four more to finish it, but I will. Then it will probably get a revamp and edit, but that will come later. I'm going to have to go back and reread to remember a bit of what I had planned, but you can be sure there will be some Ron/Snape clashing! Thank you so much for the welcome back and for the review. You guys are what make it worth it! Much love!
Well now that was intriguing. I enjoyed the non-linear narrative and I was able to keep up with it, which is kudos to your writing. It's the most angst ridden fic I've read to date but all in all, a very good start and I look forward to reading more.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thank you so much! I'm very glad you weren't confused by the narrative... I truly don't intend for things to be written that way... it just sort of happens. :) There is still plenty of angst to come, so you'll get your fill, I promise. Thanks again for following!
I like her comment about being forced to hug. Too funny
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
I can just see her trembling as she has to restrain herself... hehe... Thanks for reading!
I'm sure this is a snapshot of what some families that have lost babies have gone through. You seem to have brought a realism that so few authors can do with such a tragic subject. My heart aches for all parents who have lost babies...
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thank you so much! Sorry it took so long to reply... RL and all. :) I've been hesitant about this subject all throughout the story... even though it hasn't been touched on much. I couldn't imagine losing one of my children (my husband and I have three: a son, 3 1/2 years; and two daughters, one is 5 years and the other 2 months), and I didn't know if I could do Severus and Hermione's loss -- and their subsequent emotions -- justice. I'm so glad it doesn't seem contrived; they did lose a child under extreme circumstances, and that is something that I know would break even the strongest of hearts. Thanks again and I hope you continue to enjoy things!
This was wonderful, beautiful. It was exactly the kind of thing I was looking for. *goes off to read more*Thank you. :)-Ky*with hugs*
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy things as much as I've been enjoying writing it!
This chapter made me cry =(Well written, heartbreaking ~
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thanks! I'm sorry I made you cry, but then again I'm kinda glad that the chapter made you react that way. :) It was meant to be sad and sorrowful, and I'm so glad you liked it!
Beautiful, well written <3The song matches them so perfectly-nice choice.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thank you very much! I'm extremely inspired by music, so I'm glad you thought that it fit. :)
This chapter is filled with remembered sadness and hope for the future. Since their Bonding Ceremony, Severus and Hermione have lived such emotional lives—it's has been like living on a runaway train. They were caught in a morass of competing powers, between the evil machinations of a terrible Dark Wizard and the efforts of the Light to combat this evil.
I know that what has happened in this chapter is not the complete solution to all their heart aches, but it is a good beginning for healing. There are still many problems before them, but I think they have begun to dismantle this wall that Severus had put in place between them in the hope of protecting Hermione from further harm. I know he thought it was the best thing at the time, but it only brought pain and anguish to them both.
I think they will look back on the previous night and this day's visit to the cemetery as a turning point. No matter how painful last night had started out to be, they were able to reach out to each other and speak of all the things that they could not talk about before. Visiting Aislinn's grave and speaking to her of their love for her and the sadness of her death seemed to chisel that last stone from the wall of never ending hurt.
In the Prologue we found out that they had a secret place where they could be together to cherish each other in private and away from prying eyes:
"They would meet here, and for a few precious hours, they would be together without a single thought for the outside world. No master to answer to, no looking over their shoulders for the glint of a blade in the dark, no lies, no deceit; only two souls escaping the madness, if only for a moment."
I hope they will be able to continue to meet in their secret place. And I hope that someday they will be able to defeat the Dark Lord and reclaim their lives and live their love free from the evil that now encompasses their world.
This is one helluva good chapter!Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thank you so very much Beth! Their lives have been a runaway train, something that I think Hermione was unprepared for when she first signed on. ;) They did make a small step towards rebuilding what they once had... and I think you're right that this night and the visit to the graveyard will be a huge turning point. They both want the same thing... only their anger and stubborness (and perhaps Severus' misguided sense of blind loyalty to certain omnipotent wizards...) has been keeping them apart. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. I've no doubt that they will eventually find happiness, but how long and difficult that journey will be, I don't know.Thanks again for the great review and for taking the time to read!
Excellent chapter, nasty cliffe, look forward to more soon I hope. Your very good at painitng really amazing pictures.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thanks very much! I hope you continue to enjoy things! I wish I could paint like that... the images are just photomanipulations that I made with Photoshop. I'm glad you like them though!
I love this story and do hope that you will continue with it. I am not having any trouble following the flashbacks and find that it adds to the drama of the story.Thanks
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thank you very much! I'm so glad the flashbacks aren't confusing... I was *very* worried about that aspect of the story. I sincerely hope you continue to enjoy things!Thanks for the R&R!
Very good, loved the gentle care and especially his comfession to ehr about what he might think of her or desire of her.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thanks very much! Both of those scenes were a lot of fun. I'm glad his drug-induced confession didn't come off too cheesy or OOC -- I was very worried it would.Thanks for the R&R!
I am glad that you have Severus being so torn up about his daughters death. You have given him a depth of emotion that JK did not. Poor Hermione, I could understand not wanting to reliving that kind of pain.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thanks! I've always thought that Severus was a pretty deep character, even though we don't see much of it in the books. We get a glimpse of his emotions in PoA when Sirius escapes and in DH during The Prince's Tale, but other than that he's a cold, supposedly unfeeling git.He's so closed off most of the time, but I believe he's withholding some very powerful emotions. You're very right about Hermione not wanting to relive such a tragic part of her life. Hopefully, they'll both be able to grieve and perhaps move on.Thanks again for the R&R!
This just gets better and better.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thank you very much! I hope I can keep you interested! :)
Hermione needs to learn to be more careful. Wonder who is behind her.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
She definitely does need to be more careful. You would think that she'd know better by now... *sigh* Thanks for reading!
I remember reading the prologue before but not the rest of the story. This was beautifully written. I could really feel Severus' pain. I look forward to continuing this story.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you came back to read the rest. I hope you continue to enjoy things!
Oh, man, who wouldn't lose their heart at such a confession, drug induced or not!!!
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
I'm glad you liked Sev's little confession. I was worried that it would come of too cheesy or OOC, but I think that Severus (my Sev, at least) is simply a very lonely man who is starved for affection and love, and the potion loosened his inhibitions enough to admit it. What he said definitely struck a cord with Hermione, though she doesn't realize it yet. Despite the tough exterior, Severus is a perfectly sweet man... when you nearly kill him and then drug him within an inch of his life... ;)Thanks for the R&R!
Ohhhhhh... When Severus was telling Hermione how beautiful she was that night of the Bonding Ceremony, well, let's just say I was just in heaven. For him to have told her (even under the influence of a strong pain potion) that he could easily have imagined her becoming his wife.“You were the most beautiful woman I had ever seen.” His gaze took on that faraway look again, and his voice was barely a whisper. “You have no idea, Hermione, how easy it would have been for me to stand there and imagine that instead of my apprentice, you were becoming… my wife.”Believe it, dear Hermione, your Master has admitted that he finds you very beautiful and would have you as his wife if you would have him as your husband. Even if he is under the effects of the potion, he is still lucid enough to be able to admit his true feelings.Godz, I love this chapter! Everything about it rings true from her anguished emotions of having expertly cast the Killing Curse, to Severus' admission of love... yeah, I think that was what he was saying... that he loves her and wants her to be his wife.But we all know when the sum comes up in the morning, our dour Potions master will wrap himself in his cloak of absolute self-control and he will not mention those thoughts again... for a while anyway.Be patient, Hermione, he will come around. It just might take him a while.WOW! Thank you for this fabulous chapter. Lots of hugs to you, Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
I'm glad you liked it! I was very worried that his confession would come off too cheesy or OOC. Then again, who hasn't said something when under the influence of powerful pain killers that they'd never admit otherwise... While I don't think he actually loves her yet (but he will, don't worry), I think that he sees in her the potential to be someone that he could love, someone he could spend his life with... after all, he did do a lot of thinking before he accepted her as his apprentice. The relationship that they've entered is complex, and Severus did tell Hermione to do more research into the aspects of it... maybe there are some things about being an apprentice that even a 'know-it-all' doesn't realize... Hmm... we shall see...And you're right... if he does remember what he said, he won't mention it, and I think Hermione has enough sense not to bring it up... hehe...You're welcome, and thanks for the great review as always! *hugs*
Oooooh he was offended.....ouch.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Poor Severus... he did seem a bit offended by her comment, didn't he? Thanks for the R&R!
That was intense and beautiful.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thank you very much! It was splendid fun to write that chapter... I love magical rituals. :)
That was a very intense ceremony. I can imagine in the wizarding world being Master and Apprentice would have far more meaning. :)
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Thanks! Yes indeed, it has far more meaning than even Hermione realizes... ;)
Did Voldemort know they had been lovers at this point?
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Faith of the Fallen)
Yes he did. I hope the timeline isn't too confusing. :) I'm doing my best to make the rest of the flashbacks (and there will be several) go in order... Thanks for the R&R!!