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Untouched
chivalric86 Reviews | 86 Ratings, 0 Likes, 45 Favorites )
In the night of the final battle, Snape gets hit by a curse. Lupin goes to great lengths to save the Potions master's life and sanity.
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chivalric
Member Since 2007 | 65 Stories | Favorited by 776 | 213 Reviews Written | 4,182 Review Responses
Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Untouched
Congratulations for your story!!! It isn't every day that we found a great longfic like this about Severus and Remus. Kisses =]
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Yes, I know, Snupin is not very often written, and if, the brutality is often the dominant part. I am glad you this fic despite the bitter beginning, and many thanks for reviewing!
Well despite the bad start to the first day, things are really looking up. They've both made their feelings perfectly clear, so there ought to not be much misunderstanding where that is concerned. So glad they have Hermione on their side to save the day. The whole chapter was really good, but I think what I liked most was them playing in the woods. Men never grow up... and in this case that is a good thing. Looking forward to what I hope is a happily ever after ending!
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
*lol* True, they remain little boys and begin to play as soon as they think no one is looking. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, as always. I will post the epilogue this week - only a few minor things to resolve ;-)
Wonderful, wonderful update, I loved it!!!!
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Thank you, dear!
Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you so much for the long chapter. I'm so relieve that they are happy together. I wonder what can happen next, now they've resolved many issued between them. Of course with Severus one never now.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Glad you liked it! Only the epilogue is left, which I will post this week. True, not much to resolve... only one or two minor things M-)
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Glad you liked it! Only the epilogue is left, which I will post this week. True, not much to resolve... only one or two minor things :-)
Ahh, A tender Severus. Nice to see. :)
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Was about time, don't you think?Thanks for reviewing, as always!
Wow, this was a really informative chapter. You put a little of everything into it. I love that Mooney and Severus were playing the night away and that Remus and Severus will mostly f*** next night away. Good showing of Hermione. Please update soon.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
I tried to tie up most of the loose ends in this chapter, as there is only the epilogue to post, which I will do today. As always, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Go, Hermione! I'm glad she was able to get the facts. Anyway, that was a lovely chapter. I loved when they were playing.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
I thought it was about time for a bit of tenderness after all the cruelties they had to go through. Thanks for reviewing, dear!
cruel cruel Severus to torment Lupin like this! I hope Lupin gets his own back (after they have happy hot sweaty sex of course).
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Severus needs to tell Remus he wants him too, so he doesn't feel so damned guilty! :)
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
I hope that Severus is right. But knowing him, he might not have said the whole truth. Like he likes Remus for example...
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
OMG this chapter was awesome. I am glad that Severus has gotten his head out of his ass. But you missy, to have the chapter end just when it was about to get (hopefully) (hint***hint) smutty. Oh well I guess I will just have to pray that you put us readers out of our misery and show Remus finally showing his love for Severus. Please update soon.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
oh dear...poor guys ~pats em both~
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
*g* They'll be fine, believe me.
Wow. I really think Snape is so him in this. You've managed to have him let his vulnerable side show without him really showing it. LOL. Can't really describe what I'm trying to say well. I hope you get the point. :)
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Thanks, dear! I always try to write them in character. Glad I managed it. I did get the point ;-)
Wow. Just wow. Go, Severus!
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Actually, it is Lupin's turn now ;-)
I'm so glad Remus isn't dead. I wish Severus would consider Poppy's words and realize his own feelings towards him before he did something stupid.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
I can assure you - Snape rarely does stupid things. And he already knows about his feelings towards Lupin, he only needs to figure out how to deal with the curse. Thanks for reviewing, dear!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
"Snape rarely does stupid things" Usually that's veru true. But when it comes to emotions and love he is quite clueless and scared sometimes, hence the stupid things.
Simply an amazing story. (Only took me an hour and a half to catch my breath come up with that little pearl of admiration.) Here's to all strange creatures and those of us who love them.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
*hugs you* Thanks so much for telling me this! I know TPP is not really the place for slash stories, but then, it is he archive I treasure most, so I post all my stuff here. *hugs you again*
Poppy is a very wise lady, men strange indeed.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
:-) I think every woman having dealt with men knows the truth of that sentence. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Amazing resuscitation. But he's being his old "I hate me" self. Needs a swift kick, thatone does.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Oh, no, he's not. Poppy made him think, and in the next chapter, he will find a solution for their problem ;-) Thanks for reviewing, dear!
Poppy is so compassionate and really understands Severus. Possibly the only person who does, including Severus himself. :)
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
She made him think, and she made him find a solution for their problem. Though Remus won't like the solution at all ;-) Thanks for reviewing, dear!
This was a really good twist. Not the way feeling should be revieled but when your in pain your mouth doesn't shut up. I am glad that Bella finally met her end. Look forward to the next update.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Thanks, dear! I will update soon, promise.
I always love it when Bella dies. Too bad she's done so much damage. But she did do something right. If not for her Legilimency, Remus' feelings would have never been found out. Hope he lives to talk more about them.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Don't count on the "he'll live", dear ;-) And if you know me at least a bit, you don't give too much about that warning, either. I rarely kill my main characters. Well. Sometimes I do.Next chapter should be posted within the week. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I am so happy to see the update, I was on the brink of begging for it:-)) I am glad Bellatrix is dead, and I am glad Severus now knows Remus true feelings for him. Severus migth not know how to react to this information yet, but at least he knows that he is loved. Now, they better hurry up and get to Poppy, get healed and have a long talk in front of a nice fire with something good and strong in their glasses, before they retire to the bedroom, together.And, if you have Dumbledort stumble down some stairs and hurt his bony behind, I wouldn't mind....:-)))
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Hi, hon, no one will hurt his bony behind, but someone will die. Just as a warning, dear. I'll update soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Just yesterday I was thinking of this story, so I'm very glad for the update. I think the two of them really need to talk about all this. Severus has just admit to himself his caring for Remus and it might take him a bit more time before he realized he loves him too. I hope they could get to know each other better before that to happen.OMG ! Something just struck me! Will Remus transform under the moon and what will happen considering his current condition?
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Full moon was a day ago, so no, Remus won't change again for another month. If he lives, that is. Hope that makes waiting for the next chapter a bit easier *evil grin*Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Poor Remus, tortured by Bella and his own guilt.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
It'll get worse ;-)
At least he knows, but what a horrible way to find out.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Agreed, but I think he wouldn't have said a thing under any other circumstances. Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear!