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Untouched
chivalric86 Reviews | 8.47/10 (86 Ratings, 0 Likes, 45 Favorites )
In the night of the final battle, Snape gets hit by a curse. Lupin goes to great lengths to save the Potions master's life and sanity.
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Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.
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Reviews for Untouched
Oh my. * fans self* OK, better go back to work now... ;)
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
*g* The next chapter will be less explicit, promise.
This was hot. Very hot! And I'm glad it's not the end yet.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
One more chapter and the epilogue is left. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I like that the wolf is what finally made Remus give in and that Severus was able to make his wishes and feelings known.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
I do like Lupin's wolf side, and believe he accepts it in general. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Well Remus, what do you expect from the head Slytherin himself? It might have been a bit sneaky, but I think it will do Remus good to get this over and done with so he is not constantly worried about it happening. The fear of the thing will be gone, hopefully. Severus couldn't have made his feelings any plainer about the fact that this is, indeed mutual.I don't know why, but I don't frequently read these two together. I don't actually have a good reason for that, as I do with some pairs that I avoid. But I started this because your stuff is always good, and I assumed that would be the case this time as well. I am not the least bit disappointed. They won't go into my books as a favorite couple, but you have created a nice dynamic between them and it works well here. I do hope things go well this night. They both deserve something good after their recent suffering.Oh, and I do hope that Trelawney is her normal batty self, and not actually right for once. Looking forward to more soon!
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Thanks for reading a story which is not really your cup of tea, or at least, features a couple not totally to your liking. I love those two together (although I wrote some Snucius, too, and paired Snape with the Weasley twins a few times). Nowadays, I write slash only, I must admit. The next chapter will go online tomorrow.
What a harrowing chapter! Bella really creeps me out. She is so insane that it seems there is nothing that she won't do. But I do have to credit her for revealing Lupin's feelings about things. It was totally wrong, but if we had waited for one of them to come forward, it could have taken forever. Luckily, she is now out of the picture. Whether he knows how deeply his feelings run for Lupin or not, how awful must it have been for Snape to have to see him all broken and bloody, and in pain, knowing he couldn't just jump in and remedy the situation right away. There is a lot of healing to be done now, physically and emotionally. Why do I know that all is not going to be fluffy and happy just yet?!
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
I must admit, I like her in this chapter. She is so very mad, and in the end, so very dead. Perfect combination ;-)Fluffy and happy... now, really, we are talking about Snape here!
I'm a little late getting in the game! This is really sad. It is so easy to see why Lupin reacted the way that he did, and why Snape interpreted it as he did. I don't even have a guess as to which one will break first, or how their initial confrontation will go, but with you I trust it will be spectacular. Looking forward to moving on. Of course that just means that soon I will catch up and be out of chapters :(
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
The story is finished, and I will post regularly, so hopefully, you can wait until tomorrow when the next chapter goes into queue.
This is another very well written chapter. The imagery of this chapter was very compelling and heart wrenching. It was hard reading Remus's death and then relife. I am glad that Severus realizes that he can't live without Remus. I look forward to the next chapter.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Thank you, dear. The next chapter should go into queue within the week.
"Men, strange creatures, really." Isn't that the absolute truth? Severus still doesn't see the sense in what Poppy has said. They need to stop fighting the bond.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
No yet, dear, but soon, he will. And his solution for their problem will scare the living daylight out of Remus ;-)Thanks so much for reviewing, dear!
Brilliant update, though you did scare me rather badly there for a little while. I just adore Poppys words there at the end, it is so true, men are strange creatures:-))
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
I had no intention to let him die when I began writing this chapter; it happened nevertheless, and it scared me, too. Luckily, Snape has a working brain and a big heart so he was able to save him. And yes, men are strange. Always :-)Thanks for reviewing, dear!
Oh no! I hope he finds him, and isn't too weak to outwit Bella.
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
He will find him. Concerning the outwitting part... Well, let's say Bella has a wand and some clipping tools, and Snape doesn't feel all that well :-)Thanks for reviewing! The next chapter should go into queue in about a week or so.
OMG I hope Severus will find Remus unharmed. And I hope that your RL issues are not too serious a matter. I wish you a happy new year filled with joy, happyness and a good health for you and your loved ones. Until January...
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
Hi, there! No, my RL matters are not serious. I just need to think about my beta and her RL matters, as she is busy with a thousand things and doesn't need more work on her plate than she already has. I promised not to send her new chapters on a weekly basis... Sorry for that, it's simply a necessary thing to do. As to Remus - no, too. He is not unharmed, not at all. But Snape will find him, at least. Hope that makes working a bit easyier ;-)
Response from chivalric (Author of Untouched)
P.S. Thanks for the good wishes! A happy new year to you too, and may it bring what you hope for.