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Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 Severus and Mrs Snape
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Severus and Mrs Snape

1: Awakening in the Infirmary

2: In His Rooms

3: Nocturnal discussions

4: Morning Has Broken...

5: Later....

6: Carpe Diem

7: For Whom The Bell Tolls...

8: Back Again

9: Past Again: That Will Be The Day

Severus and Mrs Snape

Shella LaRoche

124 Reviews   |   124 Ratings, 0 Likes, 47 Favorites )

Alternate Universe Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 3,772 Words 9 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

A grown up and confident Hermione accidentally travels back in time.

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Chapters (9)

Chapter 1: Awakening in the Infirmary

Chapter 2: In His Rooms

Chapter 3: Nocturnal discussions

Chapter 4: Morning Has Broken...

Chapter 5: Later....

Chapter 6: Carpe Diem

Chapter 7: For Whom The Bell Tolls...

Chapter 8: Back Again

Chapter 9: Past Again: That Will Be The Day


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Shella LaRoche

Member Since 2005  |  1 Story  |  Favorited by 9  |  6 Reviews Written  |  43 Review Responses

Reviews for Severus and Mrs Snape

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10/10

braye27

OMG! she was gone so quickly.  I love the gift she left for him.  Wouldn't it be wonderful to be able to recall one's best memories as sweet dreams when we chose to?

I hope this war will be over quickly and the Dark Lord will be no more.  I hope Severus will be able to maintain his role as a spy without suffering too much from this temporary separation from Hermione.  When they see each other again, he will also see his children for the first time.

This is such a dear story.  I can't wait to see what you have in store.
Beth

0/10

gurlimargrethe

oh, this was so sad and beatifull. It must be so awfull knowing it will so many years before he will find happiness again. Lovely story

10/10

Becky

OMGosh, Ok that did it, I am now crying too!!  Well done, very well done....Poor Severus, my heart is breaking for him....Looking forward to another chapter.....

10/10

debjunk

Oh!  So sad, but necessary, I guess! 

10/10

sinbad

I'm sure that Severus will miss Hermione, but she will be safer this way.

0/10

snapekat51

I'm wondering, would it be possible to make your chapters longer than one paragraph?  It's actually quite difficult to remember the plot of a WIP between chapter postings when not much happens during said chapters.  Thanks.

10/10

braye27

This would have to be one of the hardest things to have to face... knowing that you have a wife and children in the future, and still you will have to see and watch and teach this wife when she is a child... and not give into despair.  After Severus and Albus talked about the situation, I began to reflect that seize the day really meant seize the day each and everyday.  I'm glad that Severus will be able to spend a few days with Hermione without his teaching duties interfering with that time, but their parting will be bitter for them both.

Thanks for another great chapter!
Beth

10/10

snitchette

It would wise to Obliviate Severus of her memory. BEcause otherwise it will heart breaking to let her leave.

8/10

sevibaby

Poor Severus,  losing Hermione for so long.

8/10

sevibaby

Another informative chapter.

6/10

sevibaby

I forgot that I had started to read this before.  This chapter jogged my memory.

6/10

sevibaby

I think that this chapter was a little soon.  But that is my personnal opinion and I will still continue to read this story.

8/10

sevibaby

Well it won't be easy to get on Severus' good side.

8/10

sevibaby

I just started to read this.  The first chapter is good so far.

10/10

blue artemis

Poor Severus.  Always having to work against fate.

0/10

sunny33

Poor Sev! :)

0/10

Jinxie

Quite sad for Severus as he's not got much in his life to keep him going at present and then he's found that someone loves him and he has to return her to his future self.  Self-denial is very hard, but at least he's of the mindset to enjoy Hermione while she's still there, albeit reluctantly.

10/10

Becky

Oh my, in tears, poor Severus, having to send her back, I'm glad he told Albus, but bless his heart, he's going to be so alone...Well done, looking forward to another chapter...

0/10

kimjo2

*sigh*  that was lovely.  thanks

10/10

sinbad

What a nice chapter, sweet and romantic.

10/10

sinbad

I loved the sneaky way she got what she wanted!

Response from Shella LaRoche (Author of Severus and Mrs Snape)

Thanks for your review. I hope I can meet your expectations.Shella

0/10

kimbee73

Interesting....I wonder how he will feel knowing his younger self knows her that well as well. I can't wait to see!

Response from Shella LaRoche (Author of Severus and Mrs Snape)

Thanks for your review. I hope I can meet your expectations.Shella

10/10

Hellsvampireguardian

Haha Hermione knows who she wants and I doubt Severus has a chance of stopping her as it will only bring good things for him :)

Response from Shella LaRoche (Author of Severus and Mrs Snape)

Thanks for your review. I hope I can meet your expectations.Shella

10/10

Becky

Whoohoo....good for her!!!  Poor Severus, she has him now!!! But what will happen when she goes back to her own time, and an older more mature Severus? Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

10/10

braye27

How sweet it is!  Past, present, or future, he will never forget this night.  I like this chapter.Beth

Response from Shella LaRoche (Author of Severus and Mrs Snape)

I hope so.

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