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Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 Severus and Mrs Snape
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Severus and Mrs Snape

1: Awakening in the Infirmary

2: In His Rooms

3: Nocturnal discussions

4: Morning Has Broken...

5: Later....

6: Carpe Diem

7: For Whom The Bell Tolls...

8: Back Again

9: Past Again: That Will Be The Day

Severus and Mrs Snape

Shella LaRoche

124 Reviews   |   124 Ratings, 0 Likes, 47 Favorites )

Alternate Universe Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 3,772 Words 9 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

A grown up and confident Hermione accidentally travels back in time.

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Chapters (9)

Chapter 1: Awakening in the Infirmary

Chapter 2: In His Rooms

Chapter 3: Nocturnal discussions

Chapter 4: Morning Has Broken...

Chapter 5: Later....

Chapter 6: Carpe Diem

Chapter 7: For Whom The Bell Tolls...

Chapter 8: Back Again

Chapter 9: Past Again: That Will Be The Day


About Shella LaRoche

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Shella LaRoche

Member Since 2005  |  1 Story  |  Favorited by 9  |  6 Reviews Written  |  43 Review Responses

Reviews for Severus and Mrs Snape

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debjunk

Glad everything will be all right! 

10/10

blue artemis

Nice to know everything will be fine.

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sunny33

OK. She's back. But has she changed anything? :)

10/10

Jinxie

“Severus Snape, you bloody well know who I am!” Hermione Snape chided him.

*snigger*  Nice little filler chapter.

10/10

makaem

Very nice.

7/10

sevibaby

Please update soon.

7/10

sevibaby

Okay a shortie.  Can't wait to read the next chapter.

10/10

Becky

Ooooooooooooooo My goodness.....So she is back now, what will happen next, I can't wait to find out!

10/10

braye27

I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story.  Watching Severus come to terms with the knowledge that he has a wife and child, and another child on the way, is heartwarming.  His at first tentative acceptance that he will be married seemed to smooth the way to realizing that in the future he had a wonderful life he'd never before dared to hope for.  Seeing him come to terms with having to go back to spying to protect his family is a study in growth and determination.

Well done!
Beth

0/10

sunny33

How can he face her as a third year with that knowledge? :)

10/10

Becky

OMGosh..in tears now!! Oh thank you thank you for the update, I love this story....squeeeee!!! wonderful! can't wait for more!

10/10

Jinxie

Wow, quite a chapter for him to think about for his future!  Lovely!

10/10

luna_lovegood

I love this chapter. You can tell he is still insecure about this, but is already quickly falling for her. Love it ands can't wait for more!

10/10

snitchette

That's just so sweet. I'm sure he'll fight with all his being just to see his children and give them a peaceful future.

On another note, I receive an update mail a few days ago and was able to open the link but I didn't have the time to read it. A few hours later I tried again from another computer but I was then directed to a page where it said the chapter was not validated. Do you know what happened? Why you got validated then unvalidated? Because the chapter seems much the same to me (I had save  it on my first computer so I was able to read it before the week-end)

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MollysSister

I am impressed that a young man would recognize stretch marks for what they are. Poor young!severus has so many lonley and painful years ahead of him

10/10

MollysSister

It appears Mrs. Snape will get what she wants no matter what time she is in! LOL!

10/10

MollysSister

Well that didnt take long to turn him in to putty! Well done Mrs. Snape

10/10

MollysSister

I wonder are Severus and Hermione the same age now that she has gone back in time??

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kimjo2

great start.  thanks so much

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sunny33

At least he will have hope. :)

10/10

blue artemis

How very powerful.  She's giving him something to strive for.

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countrymouse

Hi Shella:Ver interesting story.  I'll have to be sure to recc your story to Ramos, whose stories were among the first I ever read in SS/HG fanfic.  I recognize two of her devices from "Hinge of Fate" here--the family crest with the anti-theft spell that brings the thief to the foot of Snape as the husband and heir, and the "sensitivity spell" Hermione casts on Severus' hand so he can feel his unborn child.  They're very beautiful plot-devices, but I think their similarity to Ramos' story obligates you to ask her permission to use them in yours, and to credit her before you use them.

Response from Shella LaRoche (Author of Severus and Mrs Snape)

Hi

Response from Shella LaRoche (Author of Severus and Mrs Snape)

I really admire Ramos stories, specially Hinge of fate, and if she were the only one to use sensitivity charmes and family crests or if her homepage would be still accessible, I would certainly have asked for her permission to use them. Just like I did when I started translating HoF to German.But then I would have to ask the other authors too and that would take too much time allgether. By the way - I didn't ask JKR for permission to play in her playground.... The rules of the challenge stated that credits, also for my phantastic beta SEMPRA, could not be given until voting and stories are finished.

Response from countrymouse (Reviewer)

Understood.  If you 'would' like to contact her, I have her email, as I was her beta for parts of "Unfinished Business".  It was "Hinge of Fate" that put me in touch with her, and which was one of the very first SS/HG fanfics I read, so I'm very fond of it.  As they say, imitation is the sincerest form of flattery!  I'm just sure you'd want to credit it, and will when that option is available to you, and will be glad to put you in touch with her.   Please email me at

Response from Shella LaRoche (Author of Severus and Mrs Snape)

712 at bellsouth dot net and I'll put you in touch with her, if you'd like.

10/10

Jinxie

Well now that he's had his hand in the cookie jar he'll certainly want more.  Poor guy that he'll have to wait for her for so long...  But then again how long are they going to be together before she gets sent back?

Response from Shella LaRoche (Author of Severus and Mrs Snape)

You will know soon. Thanks, Shella

10/10

Jinxie

Hmm, you can't really feel sorry for him in this chapter can you?

Response from Shella LaRoche (Author of Severus and Mrs Snape)

Won't tell you

10/10

Jinxie

Hmm, already letting her take care of him, enjoying it and considering having a wife all in shuch a short time!  He doesn't know what he's missing does he?

Response from Shella LaRoche (Author of Severus and Mrs Snape)

He will know soooooon...

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