hehehehe!

Oh the duplicitious nature of both Hermine and Severus. Roflmao!

I am a little lost, why did she want his seed and him her blood? I thought this was great, at 1st i assumed that he had a bet going that he couldnt get her into bed with someone, but not sure if that is why he needed her blood- as proof. Thanks for sharing. Kelly :)

Wonderful twist!  At first I was upset that Snape seemed to be only taking advantage of Hermione but how silly of me to underestimate her!  ;)  Very Good Indeed!

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What the heck does she want a jar of semen for? The virgins blood is understandable but... Anyway great job I liked it alot.

Sexy and funny!

OMG !!! So real !

Hillarious ^^ I can definately see why you said it was realistic. Good work!

Helloooo! I am here doing a bit of reading for a glamour quiz I am putting together. I do love this story. I like how they used eachother and none was the wiser.

very nicei like the real snape, not the fluffy bunny snape anyway ;p

hehehe - nasty! Enjoyed the story. Liked the ending. Good to see a manipulative Hermione especially since Snape was so in the dark.

Cool. Although what in the name of heaven does she want with a jar of jiz? There are so many possibilities, and none of them seem to sit right. Is there a sequel planned to this or is it just a one shot?

Very cool and clever premise! Especially liked that you wrote from Severus's perspective.

Wow. I really love this story. Snape was really believable in this story and so was Hermione after you found out she was getting something back from it. Is it possible Miss Know-It-All was breaking school rules? Gasp.

Anyway. Love the story.

i would love to have an Epi for this story... what a riot!  I would dearly love to know what they had planned for their respective "gains"...lolIt could turn out to be very funny....lol

sneaky... I like!  Now, what are they going to do with their ill-gotten gains?  Any chance of a sequel of sorts?

Really really good story, like all I've read from you, Fervesco. You managed to "incorporate" Snape so well, so reallistic, it passes perfectly to the reader the sensation of "being" him, and the end indeed surprised me, hehe! Thanks for writing this fiction, I've really enjoyed it, and am sure that many others did :)

Hahahaha.....The ending to this was pricelessIt is so funny when people don't think young girls/women are dangerous. Just because he used her doesn't  mean she didn't use right back. I will be chuckling for a while about this. Thanks write some more please. What was she going with said seed?

luv the ending. lol. sneaky sneaky! =P

Very nice twist!  I wonder what Hermione wanted his semen for, hmm?

Nicely done!  It's good to see Severus still be dishonorable at times!

Terrific story, and really well written. You captured Snape perfectly -- very true to canon character. I was expecting his "hidden agenda" but was pleasantly surprised by Hermione's. Great twist, and one which made Hermione's actions very in character also. Overall, you did a great job with meeting the challenge -- this is very believable smut, much more likely scenario than that found in most H/S stories (not that I don't enjoy those as well.  Keep 'em coming writers!)  Thanks for sharing your talent, Fervesco -- I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Now that I get to the bottom I believe I've read this before.  But it is very enjoyable the second time around.  Will there be a continuation?  Hope so.

An idea struck me reading this story.  (Hopefully I can word it properly).  Starting with a similar scenerio Snape gets Granger into bed.  Snape wakes up the next morning and its Potter or Weasley in bed beside him.  Totally freaks. 

One of the boys wanted to see what all the talk was about Snape.  Granger wanted to try the other side.  She is able to make a polyjuice that lasts longer or they pull a Mad eye Moody..    

But the reader doesn't know about the switch until the end of the story. 

Hopefully this will help your muse.

very good....

so how will the story continue?

more please! 

I understand why he may want to collect virgin blood but I'm curious about what she wanted to do with semen, particularly the one of one Severus Snape.