Interesting! I don’t quite understand why Hermione wants his seed and Severus wants her blood, but it was still a very well-written story. Great job! ~Jen

very interesting.  i liked the plotline a lot better than most virgin-hermione fics. it was definitly much more believable.  ;) ~wink~ nice job.

Sneaky, sneaky! I enjoyed it!

who faked out whom!  thanks!

I was a tiny bit worried, up until that last paragraph.  Beautifully done.

*laughs, hard*  You just KNEW Hermione was up to something, reading this; the tricky part was /what/.  Hah!