I have enjoyed rereading this story (well, except for the deaths of Lucius, Draco, Crabbe, and Goyle, when I had to cry with Pansy).  You did a marvelous job of depicting the battle between adult and adolescent feelings, and the friendships Adin formed with Gryffindors.  Luna was brilliant, your original characters were delightful, and I feel like I've had a nice long visit with friends.  Thank you for sharing your brilliance with us!  And yay for SubHub and your betas for inspiring you!

Bravo!!!!

Excellent fic, sad to see it end but loved the ending.

I really loved the ending to the story. Though Dumbledore was obviously upset, he forgave Severus and was happy for him. I like how, though Hermione and Severus get married right after graduating, they did not have any children until their mid-thirties. Most people assume that if they really love each other they will have children right away. But I definitely believe both Hermione and Severus are very career-minded and would wait until they're ready to have children.

You saved a lot of grief by not having Severus's true identity revealed. This way nobody was upset by something that really didn't affect them. As long as Severus acted like Adin, he was Adin in truth.

Thank you so much for writing the story. I loved it!

fantastic as always.  my eyes are a bit damp as i finish reading.  yay, he gets his second chance at life.  :D

Thank you very much for this lovely story! Thanks also to all the amazing people who supported you in the writing of the fic.

This is such a great love story, I enjoyed it so much. I expect I'll be reading it straight through again to enjoy it in its entirety now! Thank you for this gift.

Once again you've created a masterpiece.  Pure brilliance and the soppy old creature residing in my heart jumps for joy that you let Adin stay with Hermione.

I'm sad and happy at the same time. Sad because I didn't expected for this to end right now. Happy because he did the right choice and lived a good and fulfilling life. Well, both of them actually.

I'm so glad you have these so wonderful people as your friends who help you in the process of writing this absolutely brilliant story. Do it anytime you want. *bows deeply*

Thank you so much for this story.  It truly was heartfelt and amazing!  Much Love  ~Brena

I enjoyed this story through and through.  It even ended the way I envisioned it, with Severus choosing to remain young.  Not that there's anything wrong the the twenty year age difference in the wizarding world, but Adin is a clean slate.  He has no guilt about his bad name sullying Hermione's reputation.  Great story. 

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to end.  It was such a treat to see Severus actually befriend Harry and Ron and especially Neville, and see that they weren't beyond vile.  And I love that it was Hermione's love that saved him rather than her brain.  Simply excellent!

wow this story is wonderful and I'm so sad to see it end...BRAVO!

I loved reading the story.  I'm glad Adin decided to stay and he got the chance to redo his life.  At first I thought it would be a big cheat, but then realized it was just terrific.  Thank you for taking the time to write this for us.  Definitely a favorite of mine.  And I never mentioned it, but the use of Trent Reznor as a young Snape was great.  I know he's been used before, but I enjoy this manipulation!

Excellent, excellent, excellent,  one of my favorite stories...

awww its over? what's their son's name?

Great job!

Thanks for sharing this very enjoyable story.  I too like Adin very much and you have provided the ending I was hoping for right along.  Everyone deserves at least one second chance at life.  I look forward to your next offering, JoAnne

I love your writing. I hope you keep posting on TPP. I may join LJ someday, but I hope you still post here so I don't miss anything.

This was a wonderful story. I really didn't expect Snape to remain as Adin, but I understand the logic behind it. He so deserves a slate wiped clean, and you gave it to him.

Bravo! (or is it Bravi?)

CP

That was a very nice story -- It ended the way I hoped it would! Describing Allison and Jared's future was a nice touch.  I will miss this story, but will watch for others that you author.

Wow, that was a bit sudden, yet a perfect ending to this really wonderful story! Thank you very much for this treasure!!!

Wonderful story! Very well written.

As always, very very well written, enjoyable and memorable! Thank you!!!

Brilliant story, so sad its over.

awesome fic!